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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: aashizin

oh gosh whats going on khushi is not aware with her own feelings whether she loved louis or not , arnav loves khushi n khushi doesn't know abt it , ramia likes arnav n payal saw them kissing 😲 well now i m eager to know what will happen next 😕😆 do continue soon manjiii 👏👏

Haha, a mess right? Time to untie the knots 😉 Will update soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thanks!

Originally posted by: Roshni_M

Read all the parts... ❤️ ❤️
Eeeks... i luv this story...
Beautifully writtn...❤️ ❤️
Update the nxt part sooon... 😊

Thank you so much!
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Posted: 12 years ago
Yes I will!

Originally posted by: broken.silence

Awesome story.. Read it all in one go.. Wonderful story it is. Loved it to the bits.. Shot Payal saw that and took it all wrong?? I really feel bad for Arnav.. Cant wait for the next update now.. Please contine soon.. And do pm me when you update next.

Thank you so much! You feel bad for Arnav? Really?

Anyway, I have things to clarify in the next update.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Barun_Gf

Okayy 😛😛

wat the heck happened in dis update i mean so much of ulta pulta happning

aahhh i cnt take it

danm u ramia and louis 🤬 🤬

seriously i feel like pulling dere hair not mine lolll 😆😆

back 2 upd8

strt was awesome mannn wowww i lovd dere cute fight fr d mvy😳😳

bt kavi woh hua hai jo main chahi hoon jo aaj hoga

agaya louis d bad man ka call 👎🏼

loll bt d awesome thing was she totally frgt abt d date😆😆

forcefullu shee kpt a smile and went to meet him😵

louis knew da ramia likes arnav

mannn and here d sis was hitting her chance on arnav

wat d f*** she doo she kissed him she misused his being alone🤬😒

just bcz of her payal is thinking wrng for arnav 😡😡😡

i dnt like louis and ramia

plss make dem go away soon😛😛

P.S soorry for late cmnting😭😭


I think it's happy time for you because it's almost the end of Louis and Ramia, it's all over.
Wait for the next update, you will understand everything!😳

Next track coming up is Arnav and Khushi love track. Finally.

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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Pearl_Oyster

Finally read all of it..
What an amazing story...!
So Khushi's yet to realise her love for my Arnie.
And and can Armaan fall for Ramia? Or he's just flirting?
So, KFC is where Khushi is going with Louis.
And why am I getting this feeling that even this trio of Ramia, Armaan and Arnav would land up there?
Whatever..
I shouldn't think much.

P.S. Sorry I am making this comment short.
But I did put a long comment on thread 1.
Do check it.
Now all I have to say now is 'Update Soon Dammit!' 😆

Thank you so much! yes, you are thinking too much!

I did check that comment and thank you for that one too!

Will update soon!
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: gayu2308

Read the entire story in one shot... and am hooked... pls update soon

Loved the way u took the story... u never let the readers know of arnavs intentions initially... even when he kissed I couldnt get arnav had feelings... that was extreamly well taken... loved kushis reactions towards a best frnd and fighting againt her emotions that it wont be the szme... very typical fight of heart n mind...

Prince of Monaco was really fairy talish... I swear I thot it wS a dream... it doesnt happen to anyone... good creativity there

Loved the way payal thot of arnav when he expressed his feeling...

Dont understan why kushi suddenly not feeling connected with the prince... she seemed to be waiting for him to come to dubai, but when he is there she isnt giving time... still a solid reason for kushi to avoid the prince is not established I suppose... may be it will come soon..

Am sure claire s paerty is going to have something like a super dooper comedy of errors (Shakespeare's)... cant wait for it...

Since its my first comment I thot I shuld point out my best liked parts in detail...

All in all 👏

Thank you so much! It means a lot. I am so happy to know what you think of the story. Well, a lot of things will be cleared in the next update.
Not exactly comedy though 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago

NOTE :

Recently, this FF has seen major twists and turns and yet another turn is to come. In between all of this, there has been a lot of confusion among the readers so I have decided to clarify a few things before moving ahead. There are some common questions I see in comments that I would like to answer for all.

Firstly, something that I've learnt after writing two FFs on ArHi is that I have to give you'll a character sketch right in the beginning. So better late than never? Khushi's CS is already there as the prologue so let's begin with Arnav.

Arnav Singh Raizada -

#He is the man who tries to distract himself with girls to avoid confessing his feelings to his love.

#He is a college stud but in reality he is scared to face the consequences of his feelings so he hides them.

#He is caring, affectionate and does everything in his power for his friends. He is funny and entertaining.

#Arnav hates hurting anyone so he is diplomatic and speaks to everyone sweetly.

#He loves his family but they stay away. He misses his family but stayed back for his lady love.

* His character depth comes from the fact that even though he loves Khushi, he never tries to acquire her or create differences between her and Louis. He always helps her and supports her even though he has to bear the pain. Arnav is also a scaredy-cat here since he cannot bring himself to say the truth, he keeps postponing his plan to say the truth, he distracts himself from reality and ends up getting hurt.

Louis Grimaldi - Plays the perfect man. He is a prince, he is understanding, considerate, loving, kind, down to earth, humble, hot and loves his family a lot. Basically fits Khushi's description perfectly.

Ramia Grimaldi - Is a softhearted girl. She is intrigued by the outside world but isn't allowed to step out. Louis is over protective about his sister and hovers too much. Ramia makes mistakes and tries to rectify them. She falls in love with every second person who is sweet to her. She doesn't understand the actual meaning of love. She is very gullible.

Some common questions :

#Is Khushi really so blind that she cannot see Arnav's love?

Ans : Remember, Khushi has been Arnav's best friend for a long time. Arnav hasn't ever told her his feelings but she is used to his behavior and all the pampering as a friend. She has always regarded Arnav as a friend. She doesn't realize when she starts loving him but is it her fault that she doesn't get a dream about Arnav's feelings?

On the other hand Louis, Ramia and Claire have never seen such friendship. They think it's more than that. Claire was very jealous of Khushi because she got more attention from Arnav. That's all.

#What is the deal with Louis and Khushi's relationship?

Ans : From Louis' end there are no issues, he wants to take things ahead but Khushi is sure and unsure at the same time. She is consciously sure that she wants to be with Khushi but subconsciously she is still unsure about him. She knows he matches his description and she is almost sure se is perfect for her but somewhere there is something stopping her and that is obviously her love for Arnav.

#Why isn't anything good happening with Arnav?

Ans : Everything good has only been happening with him till now. He made mistakes and everyone forgave him. He was ill, Khushi took care of him, he needed something everyone was there. So don't say everything bad has happened. Even now except Khushi there are so many girls who want him. Other than that, I don't think you'll should feel bad for Arnav because he could have told Khushi how he feels so many times but he chose not to, he chose to keep her above himself. His choice. So it isn't Khushi's fault that she doesn't know how he feels, its his fault.

If there are any more questions please PM me. I will try and clarify everything.

Edited by DoNotDisturb - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
I never got the privilege of being first on your update Manjari 😊 Loved both the updates!!!!
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