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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: hunny1993



Have patience ... 😛
U know na ...sabar ka faal mitha hota hai 😆


I don't like meetha fal... Mujhay khattey bhi chalengey... 😉 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: hunny1993



I need some tym as my health don't permit me


OMG hunny bunny wht happened...?????
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Posted: 11 years ago
Back with the nxt part .i don't know r u enjoying the story or not ??? so plz tell me ur opinion .if u r not enjoying plz tell me ,i will happily stop it .

If u feel the story needs any kind of change ,plz inform me that too through pm or scrap .i will b happy 2 discuss about my work .thank u 😊

2Day i m going 2 post part -24.hope u will njoy it ...


Part - 24

Scene continue ...

Riya standing numbly holding unconcious arjun .

Arjun resting his head on her shoulder .still muttering "riya ,mein tumse bohot pyaar karne lagi hu .tumhe dekhe bina mein ek din v nehi reh sakti .tum meri jeene ki wajah ban chuki ho .how can i stay away 4m u ??? par riya hamari bich ek un dekhi diwar hai jo hum dono ko ek dusre se dur rehne par majbur kar deti hai .riya ,ek baar roshni ko kho chuka hu .mujhme tumhe khone ki himmat nehi hai .i can't live without u ...i can't live with ...out ...u ..."

Riya was listening all these words silently .a long tear drops fall 4m her eyes

Riya :arjun sir ,i know ap mujhse bohot pyaar karte hai .but i promise u hamari bich ki ye diwar ko hum hatakar rahenge .iss bar mein apke saath aur kuch galat nehi hone dungi .


Nxt morning ...

Sun rays fell on arjun's face .it disturbing his sleep .

He tring 2 open his eyes but he still feeling some dizzy .

His head is paining badly

Suddenly he felt he is holding someone's hand

He looked at the person & get shocked

It is riya !!!

riya is still sleeping bside him ,resting her head on his shoulder

Arjun wanted 2 remember last night incident

He had some flashes "waiter came 2 him & gave him a juice glass .he drank it & after few minutes he was feeling dizzy .after that he couldn't remember any thing"

Arjun (MV):i m sure uss waiter ne meri drink me kuch mila diya hoga .ya kisine usse milane ko kaha .par kaun ???"
aur ye riya yaha kya kar rahi hai .iss tarike se mere passs ..."

He was looking her mesmemorizedly ...her innocent face make him smile every time

He just smiled thinking about that but very soon he came out his thought & removed his hold 4m her hand

Riya can feel his act , she opened her eyes & found him stairing at her

She immediately raised her head

Riya (not looking at him & looked at down):sir ,wo ...ap kab ...uth gaye ???

Arjun (in cold voice):bas kuch der pehle jab tum meri shoulder par apna saar rakhke so tahi thi .

Hearing this she looked at him with confusing eyes

Arjun :aise kya dekh rahi ho ? meine kuch galat kaha kya ???

Riya :sir...r mein kuch samjhi nehi ??? 😕

Arjun (now in high voice):oh c'mon riya ,ye baat to mujhe kehni chahiye !!!! tum mere saath iss ek bed paar kar kya rahi ho ???? 😡

Riya :sir ,ye ap kaisi bate kar rahi hai ??? mein to bas ...

Arjun (shouted):just shut up riya !!! aur kitna girogi !!! pehle wo bet aur jab usse koi kam nehi hua to aisab ???
meri drink me alcohol milwa kar meri behoshi ka faida uthane chali ayi !!! how could u b so cheap
riya !!!! 😡

This is enough 4 riya .she couldn't hold it any more

She gave a tight slap on arjun's face

Arjun was totally shocked & numb at her sudden action 😲

Riya (shouted):bas !!! bohot bol li apne !!! 😡 kya samaj te hai ap apne apko huh !!! Jab jo maan me aye ap mujhe bol dete hai mein hamesha chup rehti hu .par aj !!! aj apne sari hadde par kar di .
Ha mujhse ek galti hue thi jo meine apko lekar sakshi k saath bet lagai thi .par ye bet meine apko pane ki umeed me nehi lagai thi balki mujhe yakin tha ap mujhse pyaar karte hai .bas yahi baat mein sabit karna chahti thi .mein to apke liye apni marte damm tak apka untezaar karne k liye tai hu par apne !!!! chi !!!apne aj meri upar ,meri pyaar ki taraf ,meri self dignity par ungli uthai jo mein daga bardash nehi karunga .
Ap janna chahte hai na mein yaha apke saath kaise ??? to suniye ...kal raat mujhe nehi pata ap nashe ki halat me kaise thi ??? ap nashe ki halat me apni sense me nehi the .uss halat me agar mein apko sabki samne le jati to apka reputation ,apka honesty par sawal uthta .isiliye meine apko piche wale guest house ki taraf le ayi .
But i m sry mujhse galti ho gayi jo meine apki bare me sochli .kya karu ...ye kambaqt dil apkke bare me sochna band nehi karti .par apne aj meri bishwas ko tod diya .tod diya mere bishwas ko ... 😭

Saying this she cryingly ran 4m there .

Arjun still stood numbly

Arjun :ye meine kya kar diya!!!! 😲 jisse pyaar karti hu usika pyaar pe sawal uthai .meine riya ko chot pouchayi !!! uss riya ko ...jisse khud se jyada meri fikar rehti hai .mein aisa soch v kaise sakti hu .kaise ...

he burst into tears 😭

Arjun (shouted):riya !!!!! Kyu tum mere karib aye ,kyu kiya tumne mujhse pyaar ,kyu .mein tumhe dukh k siva aur kuch nehi de sakti .sirf dukh hi de sakti hu .meri wajah se aj tum firse hurt ho gayi .mein kav apne apko iske liye maaf nehi karungi .kavi nehi ...


Scene shift 2 etf office ...

All r present xcpt arjun & riya

Sakshi (whispered 2 ankita):yr ye arjun & riya kaha reh gaye ??? 2 hours ho chuke hai .mujhe bohot tension ho rahi hai .kahi koi gadbad to nehi hue na ??? 😕

Ankita :relax sakshi .sab kuch thik hoga .kaho "al is well ,al is well "

Shree noticed them

Shree :hey tum dono subhe se ye kya ghusurfusur laga rakhkha hai ???

Sakshi :wo ...aisa kuch nehi shree ...i mean ...female female talk ...aha aha 😊

Suddenly rathod barked ...

Rathod :ye rawte aur riya kaha reh gayi ???? 😡 do ghante ho chuke hai office suru hue but avi tak ye dono ka koi ata pata nehi !!!! 😡

Chotu :sir ,wo dono to kal raat party me se hi gayab ho gayi thi ...

Every one pissedd their teeth & glared at chotu

Shree (whispered):chotu ,waise kya busibaat kam hai jo ye baat v bata di !!! ab to rathod sir bomb ki tarah fategi .

Rathod :what !!! wo dono party me se hi gayab hai !!! shree ,avi unn dono ko phone lagao !!!

Shree :sir ,meine already unka phone try ki .but arjun sir ka phone off hai aur riya ka phone wo utha nehi raha hai .

Suddenly arjun entered .

Shadeness easily visual in his face

Arjun came & sat silently on his seat

Rathod (barked):kaha the tum rawte ??? 😡 ghadi me time dekhi hai !!! u r 2 hours late .waise to sabko samjhate firte ho par khud samajna nehi chahte .ye office hai koi dharamsala nehi ki jab chaho ao jab chaho jao .yahi ki kuch rules ®ulations hai .oh mein to vul hi gaya tha rules & regulations se tumari dur dur tak koi rishta nehi .tumhe dekh kar juniors kya sikhega !!!! ...(bla bla bla ) 😕

Ayesha (whispered 2 liza):ye rathod sir aj itna lamba speech kyu de rahi hai????

Liza :ye baat tum keh rahi ho !!!! 😲

Rathod (continuing):ab tum bataneki kasht karogi ki tum itna der se kaha thi ??? 😡

Arjun suddenly stood on his feet & walked 2wards his cabin without uttering any word

Every one just shocked at his sudden action specially rathod bcoz this is the first time arjun didn't answer him back

Rathod (MV): ye arjun ko aj kya hua ???? something very serious !!! nehi to wo mujhe palat kar jawab jarur deti .riya v avi tak nehi ayi .kahi inn dono k andar firse ??? 😕

On the other hand ...

Sakshi (whispered 2 ankita):anki ,i m sure something wrong .mujhe to lagta hai baat banneki jagah bigad chuka hai .

Ankita was thinking something

Ankita :shree ,zara riya ki phone ko track par lagana ...

Shree nodded & started 2 track riya's phone

After few minutes ...

Shree (with shock xpression):yr riya ki phone ka location mil gaya .par ye to police headquarter ki guest house no. 5 ko indicate kar raha hai .riya waha kya karegi ??? 😲

Others members also shocked

Rathod :shree ,chotu ek kaam karna ...tum dono guest house par jao aur dekho riya waha hai ya nehi ...

Shree & chotu nodded & left

After one hour ...

Shree & chotu returned

Shree :sir !!! guest house se hume sirf riya ki phone mili hai .riya waha nehi hai 😲 infact hum uske ghar v gaye the .but waha ki land lady ne bataya ki riya kal sham party k liye nikalne k baad avi tak lauti hi nehi .

Rathod :what ???? 😲

Sakshi :to iss waqt riya kaha hogi ??? 😲

Every one get tensed ...

2 B continue ...

Precap :riya is missing ...no one can trace her

Enough 4 2day .leave ur opinion ...thank u 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
what a twist yar.. Wanna kill arjun..
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome super amez update
Loveit
Thanks for pm api
Cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
*unres*
Superb update.
OMG...
What the hell,Arjun?
Jab jee kare Riya keliye chupchup ke pyaar jatao,aur,jab mann kare usse khilona ki tarah use karke phhek dia?
Hw cud Arjun think so cheap and low abt Riya?
Arrrggghhh...
Arjun...
Will kill u.
OMG...
Riya kahaan chali gayi?
Everybody worried for her...
Please continue sooonish.
Edited by zebbie0504 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh my poor riya hope she is fine waiting for next chapter
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
love it
cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome
Arjun b Na neend men kuch our samne kuch our :p
Riya missing oh
Hope arjun dhundh le
Waiting for Ariya confessions
Thanx for pm
Update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago

Super Duper Awesome update dr...!!!!

Awww Arjun poured his heart out in front of Riya but in drunken state...!!!

OMG Arjun didn't remembered anything except that he felt diziness after drinking that drink...!!!!

Wow he was mesmerised by her beauty n a smile appered on his face after seeing her beside him...!!!!

Wht the... he accused her n held her responsible for all this...!!!! Hate Arjun as he behaved vry rudely with her n hurt her through his harsh words...!!!

Wow Riya slapped him... He deserved that for his baseless comments...!!!!!

OMG Riya was so heart broken n it's cleared frm her emotional outpour...!!!

Glad that Arjun realised his mistake but he already done the damage...!!! Loved his POV about Riya...!!!

Loved their convo about Ariya whn thy didn't reached the office especially Ankita...she is crazy...!!!!

Wow Rathod was so angry n Chotu's words made him more angry...!!!!!

OMG Rathod blasted on Arjun but he didn't reacted on that n went away frm there...unbelievable...!!!

Loved Rathod's MV about Ariya... n he is right ... Chief assey hi thodi bana hai...!!

Wow Riya is not in the guest house n not even in her home...!!!! Whr is she gone...?????

I hope Riya will be fine...!!!

Can't wait to read further...!!!

Thanks for pm dr...

Continue soon...

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