Smitar's:Marrying Khushi#2 Part 17(1) Pg 110(19/11) Link to #3 on Pg 1 - Page 25

Sorry for so late comments...

Chapter 1)

I really loved the way how you described arrogant and cold.. but still he was always his Di's chote who reclaimed their heritage for her.. His emotions were described...

Poor Mohan was scared of the at the traffic from ASR's wrath.. And if Mohan had not stop over there then Arnav would have never seen his lady who was dancing with her hearts content.

Chapter 2)

Even After 3 days he couldn't forget her.. And he couldn't even select the models which were too model like but not extra ordinary like his gal from Lucknow.

And he was even having her dreams..

He accepted Anjali's idea of Indian collection on because of Khushi.. And he began imagining her in the form of his bride..

Chapter 3)

He even made Anjali to do the selection work for model and the one that are new and from middle class family only to see if he can find his Girl.. And Anjali was so damn confused and shocked with this..

He was having dreams about Khushi and him together as lovers and he wouldn't leave her just like that..

And after rejecting the models and giving the description of what type of Model he want Anjali had to be suspicious.. And when he couldn't take it.. he made the decision to go to Lucknow to take the matters in hand..

Chapter 4)

And he rejected more models after reaching Lucknow.. And was panicking to find his girl.. Whereas Anjali was fed up with him and Aman bechara so nervous..

And in the evening after rejecting more models and going out Anjali was sure that her Chote was surely in love with the Lucknowi Beautiful girl with waist length hair and Khandani.. And Aman shocked to know the news..

And Arnav was so panicking that he began searching for her on the busy roads of Lucnow..

And when they were returning to Delhi after 4 days Anjali was very sad to see her brother in misery and she knew that her brother couldn't find the girl he was searching for..

And by Luck Anjali saw the Gomti Nagar market and Arnav made sure that he'll go to do the shopping with Aman for his Sisters non ending list of items to buy..

After shopping thank god he sent Aman to keep the 2 shopping bags and went to buy Pickle for his sister.. the way you described how Arnav after buying pickle makes his way back was little haunting like.. But instead our Khushi with soft body collided with him shattering the pickle bottle that Arnav had bought for his Di..

But he was too lost after finding his Girl and took her in his embrace and left her when she tried to come out of his embrace.. And he again hold her..

While she was confused as to why he was so furious and when she saw the bottle she apologized and started her self-talk.. And she provided her name to him without even him asking for it..

She even bought him another bottle.. And she was so cute talking with her Ramu chacha..

And she was so happy to inform Arnav who was her Father and what business he does in Lucknow.. And she even introduced her own self as Jaleby bai.. And wanted to give proof that she was very famous for the same.. And then he realized that he should have kept a cooking contest and not fashion show..

Chapter 5)

When she saw the she did ask from where he was and when he wanted to make her stay she helped him to make his way out from the market..

Even after knowing his name it had no meaning to her.. She even thought that business is like some small shop where he sits and sell cloths.. And then she announced that he was a tailor.. And he was so angry with thought..

And finally she understood what kind of cloths he was talking about though he did shouted at her when she couldn't understand..

He even proposed to her to become the model for his fashion show and pay her huge salary for the same. But she disagreed with him giving the logical answers..

But he just couldn't let her go and so he dragged her to his car without caring for the threats Khushi was giving him.. When he introduced her to his Di and Aman, Anjali knew that her Chote and finally found the girl he was searching for days. But Khushi was all but complaining and muttering abuses.. but when the thought came of the food at home she allowed Arnav to take her home to be get introduced to her family..

And when she reached her home she royally ignored him and went to her house..

Chapter 6)

Anjali and Aman were really shocked knowing that Khushi was not least bit scared of Arnav and they all were welcomed by Payal inside..

While Khushi's family were anxious thinking that their Khushi must have caused some harm to the guest while Arnav nervous to ask for the permission to make Khushi his.. model...

And then when the proposal were made to make Khushi a model by Anjali Gupta family were shocked.. And Khushi was just dying to be away from the Laad governor..

And Khushi was so Happy when her family rejected the proposal saying that this will affect both the daughters of their family..

Though Anjali and Aman did feel bad for Arnav, another plan was brewing in his mind.. and he asked Khushi as a cook in his Sheesh Mahal to cook for him and his staff..

While Khushi was chanting for her Devi Maiyya's help her Babuji finalized the deal by making Khushi as a new cook of Sheesh Mahal to cook food for Arnav..

And Anjali and Aman took their pleasure in teasing Arnav to their hearts content while returning to Sheesh Mahal..

Chapter 7)

Manju singh was shocked to know from Anjali and Aman that ASR had fallen in love a Girl name Khushi and who is also a Halwai.. And they were planning to make Khushi to fall in Love with ASR in this one month..

Manju was impressed to meet the Khushi for whom ASR was head over heels fallen in love.. And she already liked her..

Manju was so very shocked when she heard the whole story of how ASR met with Khushi and made her his cook.. And she just prayed that all should be good..

And after hearing Khushi's comment regarding Arnav Manju just couldn't stop laughing..

After seeing the Mahal and voicing it as haunted to Arnav, he made sure to scare her with his own story of ghosts in the house.. And she clutched to him like his life depended on it..

While later discovering that he was just teasing her she fumed in Anger..

Chapter 8)

Buaji felt so bad for the models when Khushi told her family regarding what she have to cook for them in Sheesh Mahal..

And then at night Khushi made her plan to scar the Laad Governor the way he scared her..

And she acted the way he had told in his story but inspite of getting scared Arnav was damn happy finding Khushi at Sheesh Mahal at that time and ran after her to hold her close..

And then he demanded for a Kiss which she rejected getting scandalized.. but he made sure that she calls him Arnav instead..

Chapter 9)

Anjali was so happy giving the happy news to her family that her Chote is finally in Love and her Family were so shocked that they actually thought that they heard something wrong.. And when the realized and wanted to meet Khushi Anjali declined giving the reason that Khushi doesn't love their Chote yet..

And then Mami made sure that NK and Akash goes to Lucknow to make the further investigation..

And here in Lucknow Khushi took a Day off or the next day for her friend Preetho's Sangeet.. And telling Manju all her details about what's going to happen and so..

And Manju made sure to extract the information of Khushi's if any love Life..

And the next ASR was crazy after not seeing Khushi for whole day and then finding that she had taken leave for her Friends Sangeet.. And then he was shocked and irritated to find NK and Akash over there.. And then he was horrified knowing the reason behind their visit..

And After seeing Arnav pacing for long time Anjali suggested to introduce their brothers to Gupta family which Arnav readily agreed..

While after reaching Gupta's house the Gupta family invited them for Sangeet and Arnav got a chance to see Khushi's dance while Akash saw his future bride in the form of Payal too..

After the dance Arnav did take Khushi at the secluded room for asking the reason for her taking a leave And Arnav was so enjoying his time with her with in the background sang Mittu after revealing all Khushi's abuses regarding her Laad Governor..

Chapter 10)

While Khushi was laughing regarding the song Mittu sang Arnav took her in his arms and stayed till her laughter died she understood their close proximity.. And just like that Payal came from no where and Arnav had to leave his Khushi so that they aren't found in such a condition..

And she left with Payal to have food Leaving Arnav all by himself..

While Khushi was enjoying her food and chatting with Nk, Arnav was fuming due to Jealousy and not keeping Khushi all to himself.. And when NK left for more food, Khushi couldn't resist to advice Arnav to eat his food otherwise the host will feel bad.. And Arnav ate obediently..

Afterword's while going back the kiss on her palm was awesome, when she tried to make him stop mentioning about her as a Bhootni of Sheesh Mahal in front of her family..

Chapter 11)

While Arnav was so happy while going to his bed and thinking about his Khushi, there Khushi couldn't sleep after the kiss on her palm..

She did almost everything to avoid thinking about Arnav and when she slept she only saw him and his ways with her..

And Next day she just prayed that she wont be able to see him in Mahal.. but her prayers weren't heard by Devi Maiyya as Always and as Arnav asked her to meet him in his Study..

While he was angry and Jealous thinking that she was with Nk and therefore came in late, Khushi forgot her nervousness to reassure him.. And he soon turned into naughty Raizada asking whether she had good night sleep knowing fully well that she didn't...

Sorry for being so late.. And will be still busy till 16 of this month.. And thanks for the emails..