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Posted: 11 years ago
Author's Note

This is just to clarify ki Kriya ki entry pehle se decided thi in this FF!

Part 18 which I updated on 13th August 2013,
In that I had mentioned about a twist.
This was the twist that I had thought about back then!

It's just a coincidence ki Shakti ke wapas aane ki news ke time pe I got Kriya back in the FF.

So if anyone thinking ki because of this rumour/news I have got back Kriya, then its completely wrong!

(Scroll down for update)
Edited by sashaz_sis - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Finally updating!

Get reading. Also like and comment.



Part 26


Neha: Neha welcoming Kriya back. (hugged Kriya)

Swayam: Good to see you again.

Sharon: What's good in it?

Taani: Bhai mein aati hoon.

Kriya: Tum Swayam ki behen ho?

Sharon (couldn't stay calm any longer): Tum wapas kyun aayi ho? Aur tumhe allow kisne kiya to come in front of us?

Taani: Bhabhi meine hi Kriya ke saath kaam karne ke liye agree kiya hai.

(Kriya looked at Swayam when Taani called Sharon her bhabhi, while Swayam blushed)

Sharon: Taani tumne, why? Now handle all the problems!

Swayam: Sharon please calm down. Sabse pehle Rey kaha gaya usse dhundte hai.

Shivam: Niki gayi hai uske saath, she'll handle him. And Taani come here I want to talk something very important with you.

*With NikAnsh*

Niki: Yansh why you angry? Aur voh Kriya kaun hai? And tum Taani pe kyun gussa kar rahe the?

Rey: (Tells her everything about Kriya; how they met and became friends; and how she left him on valentine's eve.)

Niki: Uski himmat kaise hui wapas aane ki!

Rey: Taani khud usse leke aayi hai.

Niki: Taani ko pata nahi hoga.

Rey (cutting her): Taani knows everything about Kriya. Everything!

Niki: You stay calm, mein dekhti hoon why she has returned.

Niki left. Rey was thinking why Taani agreed to work with Kriya.

Rey (to himself): Mujhe pata lagana hoga ki Kriya ko Taani ne wapas kyun laya. Kahin Kriya ne usse kuch kaha aur voh hum dono.. NO. Aisa nahi ho sakta. Taani aisa nahi kar sakti! Mein usse aisa kuch bhi karne nahi dunga!

*With TaaVam*

Shivam: Tum kya kar rahi ho Taani?

Taani: Mein Kriya ki help kar rahi hoon. She wants to apologize for her past actions.

Shivam: But Rey?

Taani: What Rey?

Shivam: Kriya ko dekh kar hi vo tumpe itna gussa ho gaya tha.

Taani: Jaanti hoon Rey mujhse gussa hai aur rahenge. But fir bhi mein Kriya ki help karke rahungi!

Shivam: Tumhe pata hai tum kitni mahan ho? Always ready to help others. But kabhi kabhi apne baare mein bhi socho.

Taani: Tum ho na mere baare mein sochne ke liye. (she joked)

Kriya was passing through that way and she overheard her conversation.

Kriya (thinking): Taani is so sweet. She is ready to bears Rey's anger just to help me. I'm happy for Shivam, usse ek atchi girlfriend mili, as Taani.

Rey left from the place where he had gone. Taani and Shivam came out too. They all were moving towards the rehearsal hall when Niki spots Kriya. She barged to her. Rey, Taani and Shivam saw her angry and rushed behind her.

Niki: What the hell do you think of yourself?

Kriya: Aap mujhe jaante tak nahi fir bhi itna gussa? Kyun?

Niki: Yansh ko aise chod ke jaane ke baad tumhari himmat kaise hui wapas aane ki?

Taani: Niki, control your anger please.

Niki: Taani, tum toh kuch kaho hi mat. Tumhi leke aayi ho isse wapas!

Shivam: Niki ek baar baat toh sunn lo. (but was cut by Niki)

Niki: Mujhe kisiki koi baat nahi sunni!

Rey: Nik, chalo yahan se. (Rey came forward and picked her up and left for his home.)

Taani: Rey ne Niki ko sab bata diya. Shivam please help!

Shivam: You don't worry, sab theek ho jayega. (he left)

Kriya: Niki itni violent kyun ho gayi thi?

Taani: She is very possessive about Rey, so yeh behavior uska natural tha, aur expected bhi.

Kriya: Natural? Agar Rey nahi aate toh voh mujhe maar hi dalti!

Taani: Tum jald se jald apni problems sort out kar lo warna aur problems ho sakti hai. (Saying this she left home with Swayam.)

*At Night in Rey's room*

Rey (on phone): Taani pick up your phone. Kitni baar call karu, pick up dammit! Taani stop avoiding me and pick up you phone! [Taani doesn't pick up his calls.]

Rey (thinking): Taani ko ho kya gaya hai? Kriya ke aane ke baad ek baar bhi dhang se baat nahi ki hai. Aur ab phone bhi nahi utha rahi? Okay! Cool! Kal milna mujhe, let me see for how long you can ignore me!

*In Niki's room*

Shivam jumps in through the window.

Niki: Tum yaha kya kar rahe ho?

Shivam: Abhi bhi gussa ho?

Niki: Haan!

Shivam: Mein Taani se baat karli hai, Kriya has returned just to apologize to everyone, isiliye Taani bhi uski help kar rahi hai. (He was about to continue when a cushion hit him hard on his head.)

Niki: Subah se gayab ho, aane ke baad dhang se baat nahi ki, aur abh apni best friend ki side leke aa gaye! (Started throwing pillows on him, and he started running in her room.)

Rey heard some commotion coming from Niki's room and went to see why there was lot of noise. When he opened the door he saw Shivam holding Niki by her waist and both her hands were captured in his behind her back so that she couldn't move.

He went in and stood there folding his arms. Both Niki and Shivam saw him and immediately separated.

Then..



Think! Think!

What will be Rey's reaction?

Do comment.

(Want to read what you feel😉)

P.S.- No use of emoticons this time. Too bored to put it🥱

Edited by 2111_shweta - 7 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Reserved.

Edited.

Wow!! Kitna bada update tha -_-
Note the huge fat sarcasm, please!
Coming to the update
It was 😕🤢
Now Kria will think that Taa-Vam are a couple
I don't want it to be a confusing confusion please😆
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Rey's reaction😉😛 Waiting!!😳
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Want TR 😳😡
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I'm still angry.

Edited by Jhanvi_TaaRey - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Res/ unres
Okk so nyc update
KriyA k wajhese yeh sab hote reheta hai
Nikki great job Kriya par hamla karne k liye heehee ( no hard feelings for shaks/ kriya)
Shivam b window se chadna sikh gayA ( kya kare SHIVAM k sAale ( BIL ) NE to usme special training li hai... 😆 😆
My fav. Scene were
TAAVAM Scene where shivam says taani Mahan
Sharon telling Swayam " whats so good to see her " 😃
And nikki and shivam scene


Well about rey i think first of mood thoda kharab hone ki wajah se usse gussa aaye gA aur shivam ki band bajayega and later apni bhen ki cute si shakal dekh kar he will melt and will b happy to see them like this
Yaa phir usse apni n taani ki yaad aayegi n woh kuch nai bolega...
Edited by DlovesTaarey - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update nd kriya thought taani is shivam's galfrnd nd waiting for rey's reaction now rey vil no how swayam vil feel wen he cums 2 taani room😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
res
remind me to unres pls
exams
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Posted: 11 years ago
Res..
scrap me if i dnt unres till tomorrow..
unres ..
Rey (to himself): Mujhe pata lagana hoga ki Kriya ko Taani ne wapas kyun laya. Kahin Kriya ne usse kuch kaha aur voh hum dono..NO..aisa nahi ho sakta..Taani aisa nahi kar sakti! Mein usse aisa kuch bhi karne nahi dunga!
this line is one of my fav.. coz it had that losing feel of rey for taani ..!1

Taani: Tum ho na mere baare mein sochne ke liye..(she joked)

Kriya was passing through that way and she overheard her conversation.

this is real smthin dat can make trouble !!


Taani: She is very possessive about Rey, so yeh behavior uska natural tha, aur expected bhi.

Kriya: Natural! Agar Rey nahi aate toh voh mujhe maar hi dalti!

this was funny .. lolz..!! kriya's reaction was lamao !!

Rey (on phone): Taani pick up your phone! Kitni baar call karu, pick up dammit! Taani stop avoiding me and pick up you phone! [Taani doesn't pick up his phone]

Rey (thinking): Taani ko ho kya gaya hai! Kriya ke aane ke baad ek baar bhi dhang se baat nahi ki hai. Aur ab phone bhi nahi utha rahi! Okay! Cool! Kal milna, let me see for how long you can ignore me!

i luv it totally !! rey .. haaye !! aise boyfrenz n lover ab kyun nahi bante.. !!


He went in and stood there folding his arms. Both Niki and Shivam saw him and immediately separated.
nw possessive bhai will side kick.. or mayb shivam will tell the truth .. n rey ka raction is so important nw.. !!

luvly update !!1
thoda chota tha .. bt acha tha..
taavam frenship is so cute :)
misunderstanding n half truth is so dangerous .. !! kriya !! nw big trouble ahead.. or mayb jst bit of showin understanding b/w taarey :)
update soon nxt sweetypie :) <3
ps./ bit of warning - kaha tha na.. thoda lambu comment hoga.. n ab nxt tym lambu upadte bhi dena hoga.. 1!!!
Edited by ankita_95 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awsome update... 😊

No TAAREY scene not fair...😔

waiting for rey reaction like swayam...😉

update nxt part super soon... 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nyc updt
but tr itni dur ache nhi lagteloved d sweet nikki n shivam moment
i guess rey wil react maturely haan but thoda possessive tho banega bhai jo hai
plz updt soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
love the update
i like taani for helping kria but why she is avoiding rey
i hope kria misunderstand any about shivam n taani😕
nikki is so much hyper
like sweet nikki n shivam
i hope rey will react postively but little bit possessiveness is okay
as all he is a brother
update next part soon😊

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