MG FF - Be-intaah...Mohabbat ya Junoon/th#2 added - Page 6

Created

Last reply

Replies

558

Views

102.8k

Users

101

Likes

1.7k

Frequent Posters

priya_21 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 9
Posted: 11 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: chavvi16

so its her junoon not his
that even more dangerous you know


😲😃😉
priya_21 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 9
Posted: 11 years ago
#52
priya_21 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 9
Posted: 11 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: lehr

thanks for the pm dear

lovely cs



thanks dear😃
priya_21 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 9
Posted: 11 years ago
#54


thanks dear😃
priyanshi15 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Navigator Thumbnail + 4
Posted: 11 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: impoojaverma

seems interesting

geet is d one who is obsessive for maan😲😲



thanks dear
priya_21 thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Visit Streak 180 Thumbnail + 9
Posted: 11 years ago
#56

Part 1

photo beintaah_zps0b838774.jpg

He sits jerkily due to nightmare and sweating badly in cool temperature. He wipes the sweat and sees the watch.

photo maanpareshan_zpsfee437ce.jpg

He: 5:30 A.M

He thinks about bad dream which he sees constantly past few days. Someone screaming his name, but due to the brightness he not seen face.

He: why I watch same dream again and again

And who one taking my name

.

He stands from bed and goes in gym for doing morning routine.

************

At 9:00 A.M

He: good morning daadimaa

Daadimaa : good morning maan bte

photo daadimaa_zpsa4dda2eb.jpg

(Daadimaa)

.

Maan Singh khurana, he is living happily in New York (U.S.A) from past 5 years with the family. For him, his business going perfect and family is so loving and caring... but this happiness only seen by outer world, but his inner soul really happy?

.

Supriya serve the food to him.

photo Supriya_Pilgaonkar_1_zpsdbc7207b.jpg

Maan : maa

Sb mujhe hi khilana hai kya

.

Kuch dad ko bhi khilaye

Dekhiye kitne thin hote jaa rhe hai

Mahesh : bilkul shi kh rha hai mera beta

photo mahesh-thakur_zps4c6a5605.jpg

Pr meri patni ko meri koi fikr hi nhi hai

Supriya : maan bte tumhe apne papa kaha se patle lagte hai

Mahesh : maa kuch smjhaiye apni bahu ko

Jb dekho mujhe ye gaas phoos khilati rhti hai

Savitri : beta wo jo kr rhi hai

Tumhare liye hi kr rhi hai

Mahesh : ha ... ha

Sb ek team mein jo ho

Meri team ki leader abhi hoti na toh

Mahesh stopped in mid & realize what he going to say.

.

Supriya : bs ab koi behs nhi hongi

Aapko yhi khana padenga

Bs ...

That's final

Mahesh : yes boss

Maan : papa mein chalta hu

Ek bhut important meeting hai

Mahesh : hmm

.

He passes the smile and left the place.

.

Savitri : ye sb kb tak chalenga

Supriya : pta nhi maa

.

Maan always trying to behave same in front of family, but his family know him very well.

Mahesh : wo kitni bhi koshish krle muskurane ki

Pr hum jaante hai

You are missing your life.

.

His family knows these five years not easy for him and somewhere for someone also same.

************

Maan sits in car on back seat and try to doing the work. But his heart not support to his mind. He want forget every memory related to his past but what he do? In his heart every memory of his past deeply placed.

He many time think, where he lack in relation, his love do with him like that.

No ... no ... he uses the wrong word, for her he is only a thing; she wants him at any cost... she play with him, his emotions, and he is so fool not understand her plan and trap in her plan.

He trusts her, and she breaking his trust in every path...

"I Love you Maan "

.

He closed his eyes; her smiling face came in front of him...he instantly opens the eyes.

How?

.

Why?

After happening so much, she not leaves him a single moment alone. Her face, her antics, her smile, her eyes always came in front of him every moment.

Driver: sir we reached office.

He came out from thoughts and move towards his office.

*************

At 7:30 P.M in India

In New York, someone try to enjoy the new day with new hope and other side in India, one day pass out and night came.

He : maher bte kya huya hai aapko

Maher turn the face another side.

He : aap hume nhi batayengi

Maher denied.

He : aap mujhse naraaz ho

She again denied.

He : humari princess ko kissi ne kuch kaha

She not gives answer.

He takes her in his arms and kissed on her cheek.

He : ab jaldi se bataiye kisne kya kaha hai

.

Jisne bhi humari princess ko gussa dilaya hai

.

Ase naraaz kiya hai

Hume usse pakka datenge

Maher hugged him from neck and cried silently. He caressed her hair.

He : ase nhi rote beta

He make sit on his lap and wipes her tears.

She not ready to tell him, why she cry?

He : abhi aap hume batao

Abhi : naanu

Happy Diwali Friends


Friends how's this part...

Please hit like button and do long comment.

am not able do pm regularly... so bookmark the update thread

and see this update too mg ff- jaane dil mein kbse hai tu - geet 1st day after marriage

Edited by priya_21 - 11 years ago
impoojaverma thumbnail
14th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail Networker 2 Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#57
awesome update
what is d meaning of maher???
SHRADDHA2102 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Voyager Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#58
Nice part. But i wan to read the part in whc geet being rude. Hope u hd started story from there. Anyway waiting for flashback.
Jayeeta_06 thumbnail
11th Anniversary Thumbnail Rocker Thumbnail + 2
Posted: 11 years ago
#59
awesome update...⭐️...but dint understand who is Abhi and who is that naanu...?...waiting 4 next update...😃...thanks for pm...😊...HAPPY DIWALI to u too...🥳
Edited by JayeetaGurtian - 11 years ago
chavvi16 thumbnail
13th Anniversary Thumbnail Stunner Thumbnail
Posted: 11 years ago
#60
Wait do they have kids
Does he know
Seems he is trying to forget her but can't
Hmmm that's interesting start
Seems like all is good on the outside with man
But inside nothing is working for him
Cheers for pm

Related Topics

Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: priya_21

3 years ago

MG#4 Be-intaah...Mohabbat ya Junoon/pt48/pg29- 4 april

t his story about love or madness...she loves him , want him at any cost, and he is bound with vow... due to circumstances, she get him... but...

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: priya_21

8 years ago

Th#3 Mohabbat...ki adhuri Kahani/pt 55/pg101- 10 april

Mohabbat...ki adhuri kahani Ye kahani hai do pyaar krne walo ki jo puri hoke bhi adhuri rh gyi... Phase 1st - this story is continuation of

Expand ▼
Geet - Hui Sabse Parayee Thumbnail

Posted by: priya_21

7 years ago

Dastaan E Mohabbat/pt 8/pg51/3feb

Ye kahani ek asi mohabbat krne wali ki Jisne pyaar toh kiya Par pyaar se koi umeed nhi rakhi Jisne usse sb kuch sop diya Par kbhi

Expand ▼
Top

Stay Connected with IndiaForums!

Be the first to know about the latest news, updates, and exclusive content.

Add to Home Screen!

Install this web app on your iPhone for the best experience. It's easy, just tap and then "Add to Home Screen".