WOH PAL #2 || virman ss || EPILOGUE PG 13 - Page 8

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Posted: 11 years ago
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i might or might not be able to update any of my story in this week, because i have an exam next week...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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All THE BEST nainuuu šŸ‘šŸ¼ ache se likhnaaa šŸ˜‰
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Posted: 11 years ago
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best of luck for exam
if possible give this story
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Posted: 11 years ago
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ALL THE BEST FOR YOUR EXAMS
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All the best šŸ‘šŸ¼
but get back soon
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study well
All the Best fir ur exams
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All the best for Exmas Naina..!!! ache se dyaan dekar paper likhna..dont mention VirMan in ur answers..:)!
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thank u manisha 😃
By god dil khush ho gya dekhke ke kaun aaya h wish karne šŸ˜‰
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All the best for ur exams Naina (Y)
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****** EPILOGUE ******
after few months
piyali : vilat...
virat : hmm...
piyali : tumhala baby bahut slow hai... woh kab big hoga...
virat : pta nahi...
piyali : ye aalav ko mele saath khelna nahi hai kya...??
virat : wohi toh... din bhar manvi se chipka rehta hai...
piyali : alley woh koi fevicol thodi hai... aise nahi kehte...
virat : woh humari team mein hai hi nahi... trust me piya...
piyali : main toh hoon na vilat... tum tension mat lo...
virat : i know beti... par woh toh nahi hai na...
piyali : vilat hum aalav ko chocolate deke apni team mein kal lenge...
virat : par woh chocolate nahi kha paega... abhi small hai na...
piyali : toh fil juice deke...
virat : sirf milk peeta hai wo...
piyali : toh milk de aate hai... tab toh woh humali team mein aa jaega na... haan vilat... lamming done...
virat : hahaha... haan leke jaun fridge mein se milk... manvi degi tumhare ek kaan ke neeche...
piyali : kya degi...??? woh mujhe kuch nahi deti ab...
manvi : hawww... jhooth...
piyali : manvi jhoothi hai... mujhe kissey di... nahi silf apne small baby ko...
manvi : arrey wohi toh dene aai hoon... aaj ki kissey...
virat : aaj ki kissey...huh
manvi : why are you jealous mr. virat vadera...??
virat : same reason... btao reason piya...
piyali : filst kissey loz aalav ko kyun...??
virat : haan haan btao manvi...
manvi : you both have lost it... main jaa rahi hoon...
virat : darr gayi hai... iss liye jaa rahi hai...
manvi : manvi vadera kisi se nahi darti...
piyali : accha... (standing up on the bed)
manvi : haan... dekho tum dono mujhpe chado mat ab...
virat : toh fir roz first kissey meri...
piyali : nahi meri...
virat : piya meri... main pati ho uska...
piyali : main uski filst baby hoon...
manvi : aur main apni di ki first baby hoon... i am going to my di... bye...
virat : bye bye... hurr...
piyali : haan humko nahi chahie manvi apni team mein...
virat : haan... jab bore hogi na khud ayegi humare paas...
piyali : alley haan... bilkul... done...
virat : done...
after 3 years
manvi : aarav stop... cmon baby... listen to mumma...
aarav : catch me first... (4 years boy running in the garden of the house)
manvi : arrey you run so fast... think of your poor mumma...
aarav : so you lose...?? šŸ˜•
manvi : yes... 😳
aarav : okk... yeyyy i won... 😃
aarav run to manvi and kissed her cheek...
aarav : jaan ke haar gayi na... 😳
manvi : nahi toh...
aarav : jhoothi... šŸ˜† i love you mommy... ā¤ļø
manvi : mumma loves you too mela baby...
aarav : ye piya ke chachu kahan hai...?? šŸ˜›
manvi : naughty... you could have also asked where is dad... but no...
aarav : woh humari team mein nahi hai... dushman dushman hota hai...
manvi : virat ne sunn liye na toh you are gone...
aarav : mumma mujhse save kar legi... hahaha...
manvi : woh toh hai... mele baby ko koi kuch kehke dikhaye...
aarav : accha tell me na where is that chep team...
manvi : achha tell me honestly who is the real chep in that team...
aarav : dono... (clapping his hands)
virat : chep ke bacche...
aarav : ohhh shit mumma... (hiding himself behind manvi) chep...
manvi (in order to cover for her little brat) : virattt... where were you baby...??
virat : i am not going to fall in that trap honey...
manvi : which trap...??? i am just saying i was missing you soo much...
virat : accha...?? main pagal dikhta hoon tumhe...
aarav was giggling behind manvi as he loves this every now n then nok jhom of his parents...
manvi : chodo na kya useless topics leke baith gaye...
virat : mujhe kya... main toh kisi ke liye cricket kit tha par koi nahi... you both enjoy...
aarav : no no no no...
virat : ohh hii chep ke bacche...
aarav : maine kuch nahi kaha tha... mumma bol rahi thi... (running to virat)
manvi : haawww... thaali ke baigan (brinjal)...
aarav : do na mera gift... daddd...
virat : naa... you love mumma only na... ask her for the gift... i will go n buy one for my princess...
aarav : dekha... piyali didi ke liye gift aur mujhe kuch bhi nahi... mujhe nahi chahie gift... (going back to manvi..)
virat : oye... oye meri aankhon ke sitaare...
aarav : lier...
virat ran behind aarav and picked him in his arms...
virat : i love you...
aarav : i love mumma... (upset n hurt)
virat : mela baby sabse best hai... aapne kaise socha ke main mere big boy ka gift kisi aur ko dunga...
aarav : fir... fir matlab wo gift mera hai na...
virat : absolutely...
aarav : piya di ko gift nahi milega...??
virat : milega meri jaan... par pehle mere big boy ko...
aarav : i love you... lets go and open the gift...
virat : chalo...
manvi smiled at the duo as she knows how difficult its for virat to balance out his love, care n attention between piyali and aarav. both crave for him and his love.
scene shifts
aarav : woww...
virat : you like it...???
aarav : nahhh... love it...
virat admired his little bundle of boy... aarav was his dream, his wish, his everything but he... he was never able to give him the love he wanted to and thats was because giving aarav much time alwasy made piyali insecure and unhappy... but now, she understands... she knows virat loves her and nothing would change his love for her...
aarav : lets go play...
virat : you are happy na...
aarav : yes... veryyy happpy...
manvi : mujhe bhool gaye na dono...
virat : koi aur kaam nahi hai kya tumhare paas... jab dekho humari aas pass ghumti rehti ho...
manvi : kya karun main aap se bahut pyaar karti hoon na virat ji... isliye door nahi reh paati...
aarav : aur mujhse...???
virman : we love you more than anything...
aarav : but i love mumma more...
virat : mumma ka chacha... teri toh...
aarav : haan meri hi hai mumma... (showing his tongue)
virat : ye hai meri dua jo qubool ho gayi... (pointing at aarav)
manvi : next time se specifications mention kar dena jaan...
virat : haan... kya kaha...???
manvi : wohi jo tumne suna...
virat : matlab... matlab small...
manvi : no... no small baby... not now...
virat : fir ye dialogua kyun...??
manvi : meri marzi...
virat : you gave me false hope... i was over whelmed...
manvi : i will kill you if you think about another baby...
virat : arrey... ye toh koi baat nahi hui...
manvi : tum do bachon ke baap ho... do you even realise it...??
virat : abhi meri beti ke piche padh jao... amazing...
manvi : haww... woh meri bhi beti hai virat...
virat : par meri jaanu papa ki pari hogi...
aarav : ab jaanu... mera number kab ayega...
manvi : mera beta number one pe hai... aaja mera raja...
aarav hugged manvi and looked at virat but virat isnt less he also went and brought jaanvi, virman's daughter who is around 4 months old.
aarav : main big boy hoon na mumma...
manvi : yes honey... mera biggg boyy...
aarav : aur woh toh 1 year ki bhi nahi abhi...
manvi : haan...
virat : toh kya hua... hadd hai... jaanu bol do apni mumma aur mumma ke chamche ko that too love papa...
jaanvi giggled seeing virat while aarav laughed loudly...
aarav : nahi bola... chopsi... hahaha...
manvi : shh...
aarav : mumma hum neeche chalte hain...
manvi : come my baby...
virat : let them go... jaanu dad ke saath hai na... meli beti... i love you mera baccha...
scene shifts
jeevika : piyali why are you going...???
piyali : mere vilat ke paas...
jeevika : why vilat now...?? you are 8 years old...
piyali : he likes when i call him vilat aur woh meri maasi cum chachi dikh nahi rahi...
jeevika : she is with aarav... bahut tang karta hai usko... subah se meri mannu ko ghuma rha hai yahan se wahan...
piyali : dekho mere bhai ko kuch mat kaho...
jeevika : accha... mujhe maaf karo...
scene shifts
piyali saw virat talking non stop with jaanvi and she ran up to him.
piyali : vilat usko kitna pakaoge...??
virat : aa gayi shaitan ki naani...
piyali : main jaanu ke liye rose layi hoon... tumhare nahi hai...
virat : haan ab tum mujhse pyaar kahan karti ho...
piyali : jyada bhaw mat khao ab you know i love you...
virat : toh i love you too mera baccha...
piyali : vilat ye aarav aaj school kyun nahi gaya...
virat : uski mumma se puccho...
piyali : hahaha... aaj fir fight hui tum dono ki...
virat : haan thodi si... nok jhok kehte usko...
piyali : haan haan...
virat : oye teri tera competition...???
piyali : piyali viren vadera - winner of the singer competition... big round of applause...
virat : waah i am proud of you...
piyali : thank you guruji...
virat : aashirwaad hai balike...
piyali : aacha ye lo rose and now lemme go and see the little brat...
virat : okk...
scene shifts
manvi : ye kha lo na... badi maa ne cook kia hai... its fab...
aarav : rice mein fat hota hai...
manvi : my prince... my baby kha lo na...
aarav : mujhe na cricketer banna hai... i have to be fit...
manvi : aarav...
aarav : par mujhe rice aache lagte hai...
manvi : hehe... good boy...
piyali : bade mje aa rahe hai... nahi...
aarav : haan mumma apne hand se khila rahi hai mujhe... piya ko nahi...
piyali : manvi...
manvi : awww... aaja meri rani...
piyali : manvi loves me more...
aarav : no... me more...
piyali : me...
manvi : i love you equally my babies...
piyali : i love vilat more...
aarav : i love manvi... oops mumma more...

this is it... this is how is the life of virman... this is their life full of love... full of happiness... there is everything... har pal khoobsurat hai.. har din yaadgaar... koi kami nahi... bas hai toh pyaar hi pyaar... chote bade sapne... choti moti nok jhok... khatte meethe pal... aur kya chahie... aur shayad sahi mayno (in real sense) mein ise kehte hai " Zingadi Gulzaar Hai "

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the end...
but yet another beginning...

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