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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: riddzykhanmalik

Hiii jeenia...how are you...

Best option ashlok get married...
Good idea...but marriage will be happen...???
That is a big question...???
But I really like this love story going on...
I will waiting for that day when aastha and Shlok met again...
As usual...it was superb update...
Thanks for pm...


yaar i am surprised, every body is asking wie remember, i have already written their first night incidance .that gandi baat wala...
anyways thanks a lot dear
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: shaheerdiwani

Hey dear ... Wonderful updates ... Sorry didn't get around to read them before ...so far gr8 ... Keep updating 😊


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: SaiS

A Very Nice Update


You are putting a lot of effort in writing a beautiful story of Shlok and Ashta. Shlok has changed a lot and is taking good care of Ashta.

It is difficult to imagine people like Shlok will change their attitude in this manner but sometimes people change. That is the beauty of life.

Thank You for writing a nice story. I remember your FF's in previous forum. They were also Awesome.



you changed your user name????????? I was surprised when i checked your likes on every post, i thought, this may be synon...only...this one is also nice...
ya, its difficult to find a person like shlok change so much but love changes everyone...
anyways thanks a lot dear
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: geneliataarey

u r r8 v r not LIKING it...

coz v r LOVING IT!!!! šŸ˜‰
OH MAHN...!!! d way ... d concept u r unfolding thngs is A WHOLE DIFFRNT N FAB PERSPECTIVE!!!
loved d updt!!!


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: pinal01

Lovely track! Bring more on!!!!😊


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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: deepthiabhi

Iam loving the track and also imagining about Astha's tantrums as a 5 year old...

You are great and thanks for the pm and update...


Thanks a lot dear and will update by afternoon...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: abi_niki

Awesome!!! šŸ‘
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Posted: 11 years ago
Get ready for shocking surprise...but i want this to be true in any means in the show...


Part-24

I am asking for her alliance for me... marry us... Shlok said...

They all were shocked...

Shlok, are you out of senses? Avdhoot asked... we were thinking you have changed... do you still want to take her advantage? He shouted...

No uncle, I love her and this is the only truth of my life... Marry her with me and all problems will be solved. She will be my responsibility...

Avdhoot calmed a bit on listening, he signaled kalindi and ajju to move away... they two left...

Shlok, I am not saying so, but please think twice...she is like kid of five years old... its not so easy... I still request you to take your time to decide... You may regret your decision later on as we don't know till when she will be in such mental state... May be forever... she can't fulfill all your needs. You know what I mean...he spoke hesitatingly...

My only need at this time is to take care of Astha only... Shlok spoke calmly...you should talk to pandit and decide the date... that's all...

But what about your family? Avdhoot spoke...

I will handle them... Saying Shlok left the place...

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Have you gone mad with that Astha? Anjali shouted... you want to marry a girl who is completely mad...

She is not mad...shouted Shlok. She is just ill, will be fine soon...

Ok, so you want to make that ill girl Agnihotri family's daughter-in- law? She shouted again while Niranjan was standing still...

Yes, and if anybody has problem, I may leave the house... Shlok shouted...

Nahi Shlok... Easi koi baat nahi...agar tumhe koi problem nahi hai to hum tumhare sath hain beta... Niranjan tapped his shoulder... Avdhoot ji se kehna, start preparations of marriage... Niranjan smiled...

Par mujhe problem hai... Anjali shouted... Tum ghar chod ke jana chahte ho na Astha ke liye... Go ahead... Mere ghar mein us pagal ladki ke liye koi jgah nahi hai... saying Anjali left the place...

In anger Shlok went to his room, packed his bags... and was about to leave.

I think I should take blessings of baba before I leave... thinking, shlok went to his parents room...he was at the door and was about to open...

Anjali vayini, ap fir se galti kar rhi hain... Pehle ap ne puja ko khoya, ab shlok ko bhi... his uncle was shouting at Anjali...

Bhauji, ap mere mamlon mein na bolein to behtar hoga... Astha is ghar mein nahi ayegi.kabhi nahi... Chahe uski keemat kuch bhi ho...shlok bhi...

Mujhe dukh hota hai soch kar...ap vahi aurat hain jo jab is ghar mein shadi kar ke ayi thi, sab kuch badlna chahti thi, and now you yourself has changed... changed into niranjan agnihiotri...

Bhauji. Anjali shouted...

Chilane se sach nahi badal jayega vayini... Your behavior is no more different from Dada's bahvaiour...frq hai to sirf itna pehle unka gussa sab ke samne hota tha, ab unka gussa ap par aur apka sab par... Jaisa apka behavior hai, end mein ap akeli reh jayengi vayini...

To kya karun bhauji... mar jane dun Astha ko? Anjali spoke...

Shlok was shocked on listening his mother's statement...

Anjali continued... apko bhi pta hai, shadi ke liye sahib ki i han ke piche kya maksad hai...he need just Shlok for his business that's why he can't afford to let him go out of house...aur Astah? Ap bhi jante hain uska kya hoga... shadi to ho jayegi bus kch din baad hi newspapers ki head line hogi...agnihotri's mentally ill daughter-in-law feel from stairs or roof and dies in accident...no.shlok loves her a lot and I can't let sahib win everytime... Once I had to declare puja dead just to save her and Aseem.. apko bhi pta hai na, us waqt sahib Shlok ke sath Aseem ke hostel kyon gye the/ just to find out his location to send his goons to kill them...

Agar us waqt main Puja ko hamari life se na nikalti to shayad aj meri beti jinda bhi na hoti... Anjali started crying...

Vayini sambhaliye apne apko... main to bus ye chahta hun as you had lost Puja, I don't want you to loose Shlok too... kab taka p asise mar mar ke jiti rhengi? Koi to ho jo apka apna ho is ghar mein...

Nahi bhauji...main t bus chahti hun, mere bachon ki sari takleef mujh pea a jaye...par wo kahin bhi rhe, khush ho...aur sahib ke keher se bach kar apni jindagi khushi khushi bitayein... Anjali broke into tears...

Shlok opened the door immediately with the shock...no, you are telling lie...you want to prove yourself right in front of us so you are making baba wrong...

Anajli was shocked on seeing him... she wiped her tears immediately... tum? Gye nahi ab tak????

Chalaa jaunga, but first I want to know the truth... Shlok shouted...

Sach wahi hai jo tumne suna shlok... Shlok's uncle tapped his shoulder... Dada aise hi hain... unke liye har rishta unki success, unki izzat se chota hai... vayini ne hamesha har taklif khud pe li so that their children are safe...

Shlok was in denial mode , how could he believe wrong about the person whom he treated as his ideal...in anger Shlok left the place and went to study room to meet his baba... There his baba was giving money to two persons...

Baba, who are these persons?

Nothing beta, they were here for some charity...so what is your decision?

Baba, I am leaving home but can't leave Astha... Shlok declared...

Ok. Niranjan nodded his head... you may do one thing, you may shift in our institute's guest house since your ayii doesn't agree...

Ji baba...all Shlok said while leaving...

On the same day, Shlok had shifted to the guest house...

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Friend tum mujhe yhan kyon laye ho? Astha asked holding Shlok's hand...they were in a garden near her house...Astha was too happy in the garden playing on the swings and enjoying there...

Astha main tumse kuch khun? Shlok spoke..

Hum... she spoke casually...

I love you...

HAww. Astah covered her face with hands...gandi baat...chi...

Ismein gandi baat kya hai? Tum meri dost ho and I love you...shlok smiled...chalo hum dono shadi kar lete hain...

Kya? Astha was surprised...

I mean. Shlok tried to gather the spilled beans... chalo hum ghar ghar khelte hai...hum shadi shadi kehelnge.tum mujhse shadi karogi?

Ghar ghar khelna hai? Ummm... ... lekin muhjhe uske liye achi si dress bhi chahiye, dekho ajju mujhe aunti jaise kapde deti hai roz.she spoke holding her salwar suit..mujhe to wo ache wali frock chahiye.she signaled towards a girl wearing frock...

Ok, I will bring a lot frocks for you... Fir to mujhse shadi karogi...

Nahi... sirf frock nahi... use matching sandal, hairband, chocolate, toffees, chips, icecream, toys, dolls, teddies... ye sab bhi chayiye...she cuddled...

Ok baba. you will get everything, you wish...fir to shadi karogi?

ok, main tumse shadi karungi..lekin pehle mujhe ye sab leke do... She spoke hanging on his shoulders...

Ok, let's go... Saying Shlok smiled and made her sit in the car to take her to mall...

There Astha chose a number of gowns, sandals, hairbands and many more... People were looking in amazement on her behavior... But Shlok didn't bother for anything, for him, only thing mattered was...just Astha...

As they were about to leave in the parking basement ... two persons with faces covered with clothes and held Astha placing knife on her neck...Shlok was standstill on the situation while Astha was shouting badly...

Finally Shlok gathered courage and ran after them...

Hey had reached in a solitary godown. They were about to kill Astha, when Shlok reached there and beat them badly releasing Astha form them...

Finally Shlok removed their masks and was shocked to see, these two men were those whom Niranjan was giving money... He didn't need any answers now. Everything was clear to him...

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Baba ap esa kar sakte hian? I could never think in my dreams??? Shlok was shouting at his home on his baba...

Shlok. Awaaz niche rakho.itni bhi tameez nahi hai, apne baba se kaise baat karni hai? Anjali shouted at him...

No, I don't want to learn anything from you people now... I am leaving. This time forever...aur this is my last warning baba. Agar Astha ko ek khronch bhi ayi to main bhool jaunga, ap mere baba hain...

Saying he left the house forever...

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Shlok, why did you do all this? Avdhoot was asking her... you should not have left your family for Astha...

They don't deserve to be called as family...Shlok spoke with a pause. By the way which date is fixed for wedding?

Next Friday... Avdhoot spoke with a sigh...when there was a knock at the door...

Kalindi opened the door... It was Anjali on the gate...

Anjali ji ap? Kalindi was shocked...Anjali asked for the way to inside the house...

Kalindi brought her in and made her sit on sofa... Shlok looked towards her but didn't speak a single word...

She gave a key to Shlok... He looked at keys...

I came to know, Avdhoot ji is shifting to Delhi... Shlok, this is the keys of my house t Delhi...

Shlok was shocked on listening...

She nodded... My ayii baba had given me this house before their death as they wanted me to leave Sahib and live there my life...but I could never get that strength...she paused...

But I am not leaving the city... Shlok spoke...

You will have to. Anjali insisted...if you want Astha's safety... she can't live peacefully here. Now you too know this truth and it's better to accept it... Shift in Delhi with Astha and live your life happily there forgetting your past ...

After thinking for some time, Shlok nodded and held the keys from Anjali...Anjali had tears of happiness in her eyes...

When Astha came there running wearing a new gown, Shlok had given her...

Friend, ye dekho.kaisi lag rhi ha? Maine kha tha na mujhe pink frock chahiye tum fir se red le aye? She was twirling her gown as well as shouting on Shlok... Ab mujhe pink bhi le kar do...

Ok baby...I will bring pink to. Happy now? Shlok smiled...while Astha held back on seeing Anjali and moved near Shlok holding him tight... Ye aunti? She stammered a bit...

Are Astha daro nahi inse, ye tumhe kuch nahi khengi... Shlok smiled... ye meri... Ayii... Hain..he spoke hesitatingly...

Tears rolled over Anjali's face on listening Ayii form Shlok...

Ap friend ki ayii ho? Astha spoke cutely...

Nahi... main tum dono ki ayii hun... Anjali smiled caressing her face with tears and hugged her...

She removed her bangles and put into Astha's hand placing a kiss on her forehead. Astha too smiled and kissed back on her forehead...

When Shlok came forward and hugged Anjali. Both were crying with happiness... Ayii... Puja bhi thik hai. Shlok spoke...

Tum mile use? She asked wiping her tears...

Ji ayii. Saying Shlok told her everything of their meeting with Puja...they talked for long time together and shared all their long lasting pains... When Anajli gave Shlok a cheque...

Shlok was shocked...

Shlok, your baba is going to seal your accounts, this is my personal saving...

But ayii, I don't need anything, I can earn myself...

No Shlok, it will not be that easy... You are getting married now, and Astha will be completely your responsibility... Till you don't get any job, you will need money... This will help you... moreover you need to get her treated properly there in Delhi too... Just keep it for future...

A fade smile appeared on Shlok's lips and he nodded in yes...

Avdhoot ji, I think I should leave now and i wish ap log shadi Delhi mein hi karein for their safety...

Avdhoot nodded in yes... While Anjali left the place with smile...


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