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Arpita

@unitatoxo.

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Posted: 11 years ago

#51

Originally posted by: sashaz_sis
Its 19th october...
where's the update
-___-

Just on the way

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Arpita

@unitatoxo.

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 11 years ago

#52

Originally posted by: khyati2000
di... mera update kitthe hai?
menu abhi chahiye!!!!

Sorry Sweety..

Abhi bas thodi derm mein

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Arpita

@unitatoxo.

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#53

Originally posted by: d3fannm1
looking forward to read this
please PM me when you update
Love you xx

Sure..

Thanks a ton

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Arpita

@unitatoxo.

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#54

Namaste Vaasiyo.._/|\_

Please maro mat.🤢

Poora ek week late hu 🤣

But , I had to post on Thursdays only no 😳

And today is thursday .. 😃

Look neeche for the update 😆

Are.. Haan..

Also , for further updated of my kahaaniya ..

Please add -Arpita.. To your accounts ,

as it's really difficult to PM about 230 buddies. 😆

~*Arpita Ji*~

Edited by .-Arpita-. - 11 years ago

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Arpita

@unitatoxo.

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#55

Chapter 1

Tom & Jerry.

*Correction*

..Jerry & Jerry..

~*~

24th October .

Mumbai .

Random Bus Stop.

~*~

"Will you stop staring me like that..?" I shouted at him .

God this creature..! What does he thinks of himself , gaddha . He has no idea that if any other aunty would have been here instead of a jawaan ladki like me , she would have started beating this gaddha with her chappals..

"Tumhe lagta hai ki tum itni sundar ho ki main apna time tumpar waste karunga..?" He asked.

"Accha...? To fir kya tumhe meri chocolate khaani hai..?" I replied with anger .

Trust me , chocolate ke liye koi kissi bhi had tak jaa sakta hai..

"Sir gaadi (car) theek ho chuki hai , ab hum chal sakte hai.."

"Thank god..! Chalo ab is stupid bus stop par nahi khadaa hona padega..." He paused.

"Stupid loggoon ke saath.." He continued , indicating me . I suppose.

He mouthed , "Mujhe na hi tum mein koi interest hai , and naa hi tumhare chocolate me.."

"To kya..haan? Ab tum chahte ho ki main is baat par dukhi ho ki tum mujh mein interested kyu nahi ho..? Apni shakal dekhi hai ? Meri jodhpur ki jutti bhi tumse sundar hai..!"

"Main sundar nahi handsome hu.." He replied with a wink.

"Aur ye tumhaari sabse badi galatfemi hai..!"

"Why god..! Aapne iss ladki mein dimaag kyu nahi dalla..!"

~*~

Precap - *31st October*

" Tissue ..?"

"Thanks.."

~*~

...He cupped her face with his palms , stroked her cheek and wiped away the salty water droplets hanging near her eye socket...

..This wasn't the first time they were hugging someone , but , it was the most special one..

~*~*~*~

Edited by .-Arpita-. - 11 years ago

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Prasanna

@PRASSI

Voyager

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Posted: 11 years ago

#56

It was amazing dear...!!!

Their cute nok-jhok...!!!

Amazing...!!!😃😃

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Arpita

@unitatoxo.

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#57

Originally posted by: PRASSI
It was amazing dear...!!!
Their cute nok-jhok...!!!
Amazing...!!!😃😃

So fast 😆

Thanks a lot di ..!

Means a lot to me 😊

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shubhi_taarey

@shubhi_taarey

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Posted: 11 years ago

#58

after a long w8 i finally read the first chapter it was just amazing

loved it

cant w8 for the next part and yeah plzz update on 31st only!

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Arpita

@unitatoxo.

Rocker

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Posted: 11 years ago

#59

Originally posted by: shubhi_taarey
after a long w8 i finally read the first chapter it was just amazing
loved it
cant w8 for the next part and yeah plzz update on 31st only!

Aw..

Sorry , I was busy in school ke kaam 🤢

I will try my best to update on 31st..!

And will PM you sabse pehle 😆 * If I decide to PM 😆*

Thanks a ton..!