ARSHI FF- THE PURSUIT-Chpt-60/5,p.118,23rd Feb.

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YOUHNA

@YOUHNA

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Posted: 11 years ago

#661

Hey!
Read some of previous chapters right now..
The Kissin' Countin' was Hillarious
Yr Suspense & Thriller ma'r da'le ga Romantism k sath aisa Suspense as a single person kese krleti ho ap?

So The Pursuit is Endin' :(
But as it say hr achi cheez end honi hoti hai

P.S please do write an Epilogue a Detail one;)

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spgpt

@spgpt

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Posted: 11 years ago

#662

Hi,
I Have been following your story right from Mirage 1 for some time now. so first of all sorry for not commenting earlier.
You are a fabulous writer, your command on both languages, your knowledge of Rajasthani customs all speak for your research. the painstaking way you have created the story & the way the relation of Arshi has developed speaks for your skills as a writer. I easpacially like the nbalnce maintained by Maan's character. Wish in the serial, they could have got writer of this calibre!!

Only one cfib though, thoda aur jaldi update kijiye na!! Suspense se marey jaa rahe he hum!!

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dsbj

@dsbj

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#663

what a cliffhanger!!!..now I have no idea and cant guess what gulabo is up to .. So both khushi and megha saw her rotating the pillar.megha followed gulabo.khushi was being caught by someone.
Deepu too saw gulabo and megha .and followed them .
Then even Meagha was too being caught by someone.lastly someone hit Deepu.there is only Arnav left..glad that Arnav aware of where khushi is atleast..i cant wait to see them all rescued. hope all are safe...
Waiting for next update eagerly.
xoxo

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Sidda

@Sidda8

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Posted: 11 years ago

#664

Anu, thanks for this thrilling update. I wonder who hit Maan and Gulabo with iron rod. Megha and Khushi are in danger. I hope Arnav and the police come to rescue soon enough.

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rini_kat

@rini_kat

Dazzler

Posted: 11 years ago

#665

nice update waiting for next update

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archmink

@archmink

Voyager

Posted: 11 years ago

#666

ooommmggg!!!! W*F!!! Aman...

he is the mole in the security?... that was very unexpected ... who would of had thought that Arnav's very trusted PA and his right hand man would sale out like that ... money talks baby... it can make anyone betray and what about khushi's dayi amma .. is she in it tooo.. cuz gulabbo had gat a very inside info of the mahal from her...

but how come shashi sing don't know about the tunnel ??

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meradil

@meradil

Navigator

Posted: 11 years ago

#667

i just read all of this in 1 go, from the beginning of mirage to chapter 60 part 1 of the pursuit.

i have no words to say how awesome this FF is.
you've woven such an intricate story and reading it unfold is an absolute pleasure!!!

I can't imagine how much thought process and work went into writing this. absolutely bowled over my friend!

thanks for all the hard work you've put into this to make it enjoyable for us as readers!!!

kudos!