MJHT Season 2..Mayur SS 2/4... last chapter.. - Page 14

Originally posted by: -Meri-

so sweet update
eagerly waiting for mayur

Originally posted by: Sara92.

Lovely

Originally posted by: tasnim.

Nice update
waiting for mayur scene

Originally posted by: Dalia.

Its amazing

Originally posted by: Ayan-

This new version is really very sweet and nice

Originally posted by: dua22

wow...i dont know what to say...this is beautiful...mayur make my heart go crazy ...thank you for writing this

Originally posted by: Faria.

hmmm samajh gayi
hume jaida ignore maat karo.
tumhara AB tumhari saath life time rehenge ya nehi ye nehi pata lekin hum inshallah rehenge..LOL
trying to blackmailing u emotionally but its true.
anyway hope for the best.
i know tu 10 min main ek accchi OS likh sakti hai
so ek os likhna is nothing for u.
so EIDI tou hume milega jarur-inshallah

kyun rims???? saach kaha na maine??

Originally posted by: DhanakZ

This is just superb after so long I am reading some thing on mayur.This lovely SS just drag me back on if after one whole year thank u so much dear and keep writing. With love. GUL

Originally posted by: Bhatakti_atma

Very nice...updt soon

Originally posted by: drfizaahmed

uff woh aay humaray ff per wah wah wah bhi wah...
yeah tu kamal hogaya meray ff ki izzat bahr gai ap k shub kadam par gay
manhoos aurat shukar hai tu aai

i know sweety ur reason so donot worry abt tht phr tujhy galiyana dayna k maza kuch aur hai
thanks alot dear for liking it and loving it
oye rolay gi kya kasi baatein kerti hai ... frnd frnd hota hai bys
thanks for honuring my writing with ur words
love ya muahh

Pardon errors.. havent chk them.. rplied to u all ..pms later

The car horn made me look out the window and I can see her back..gosh I m feeling myself going weak... Feels so like a dream...

Placing the curtains back I went to the main door and hided beside it... so tht when she enter she donot see me...

Nupur: thanks samrat...

Samrat: tumhara sadu ata hi hooga... thora rest kerlo phr milay na milay..

Nupur: samrat tum teen din se meri tang khich rahy ho.. by god ek baar mayank ko anay do phr dekhti hoon mein tum ko achy sa...

Samrat: kya kero yaar itni dino baad tu ,oqa milay hai...

Nupur: aww... thanku... ab jao mein khud mange kerlo gi...

Samrat: kya zamana hai .. pani bhi nhi pocha had hai... driver samjh rekha hai mjhy...

Nupur: han tu tum ko shak hai kya.

Chapter 4

God her voice, her arguments I was smilingly standing here like an idiot.. nah not like an idiot yet like a teenage boy... with evry step I felt of her I can hear my heart beat raise... I m gona see her.. feel her.. for real.. after 3 long years...

The door opned and I can just see her hands..placing the luggage along with samrat inside.. samrat biding bye left closing the door behind.. I hided myself more in corner...

Nupur: ghar tu hum agay aay hain pati dev... ab ap bhi ajay...

I have lost the count of time, the moments.. I was just watching her.. I thought I will tease her say a lot to her.. but right now I m even feeling my voice betraying me... the havoc of emotions that is inside me is cuming on surface..

Mayank: nupur...

I just said in a whisper doubtful it was even audible or not... the small bag she had in her hand droped ...and I can feel she was controlling her heart beat to.. its feel like ages she wasn't turning around... gosh nupur pls.. I cant take it anymore... I m feeling if she will not my breath will stop any moment... and she did.. very slowly she turned and I gasp... a sharp intake of breath was needed for my brain to register she is standing right there infront of me... she is there... this moment was like the whole world... it stoped everything ..evry sense evry feeling... I was numb... I was hardly breathing.. I was afraid .. I slight movement I will wake up... Till now this moment I didn't knew I missed her her so much ... so much tht .. tht I donot know...

She glup down and clutching to her dupata tightly.. she was panting .. so was i... I want to see in her eyes... I want see myself.. my love... I want to see the feeling I feel evrytime .. evrytime I see the love in her eyes.. feeling of being loved so immensely

And then slowly she raise her eyes.. I was just looking at her fanatically.. her eyes meet mine and my feet started to move on their own accord... my eyes nevr left hers who where now tracing every feature of mine believe I m here.. I can see her lower lip tightly being nibbled she was stoping them to tremble..

And then she was in my arms.. her hands slides from the side clutching my back... And I move my hands slowly on her waist and griped her shoulder tightly... Her nails were digging in my shoulder.. and I was all taking in her fragrance... I was just crushing her in my arms .. I hide my face in her neck.. her hairs..gosh they are same soft, smell so nuprish... we didn't said a word..just pulled eachother close n closer... I felt my shoulder getting wet... and I had dropped a tear too... never knew tht this part can make me so emotionally weak... But why not ..my strength my love was away from me for so long... and when today I have her... I donot care I m weak fragile childish stupid or whtevr.. im here... engulfed in my nupurs arm..

My sadu is here... ya he is here... idiot gave me a surprised...he was already here... god I was not even dressed up properly I thought to freshen up after cuming home.. but than all this... all the facts tht I ever thought... tht I will fight with him,,, will not land in his arms... I will b cross .. all I forgot .. nothing was left in my mind... the only feeling was tht he is standing here in fornt of me... My handsum hunk was there.. standing beautiful in front of me.. and than I was there in his warmth... warmth tht I missed so much.. how much I cant even define... And than he hided himself in me... I always love this..whn he close his eyes and hide his face in my hairs..i love it.. it gives me a porud feeling of the fact tht he find peace only here.. in me... But wht shivered me was a tear droped at my neck... and I could'nt hold mine now..

It isn't like him to cry.. how much he must b broken tht he let it go today... all the time everyone was thinking abt me, my pain, my loneness my insecurities.. no body thought about him... Nobody asked him he is oky or not...How much alone he must be feeling... how difficult it must be for him to stay away like tht...i let m fingers travel in his hairs... It always clam him down.. I have tht effect ...i hold it..

It seems like ages they were in eachothers arms... but than the desire to look at eachother made them broke apart softly... he cradle her face in his hand and she borked in to tears...he shocked his head askng her to stop.. and kissed away her tears...she gasped..and he too... after ages feeling eachother so closed was like the frst time.. it felt so soothing... his touch was heavne... it made her feel he is there with him... she clutched his hand on her cheeks tightly... and let her tears flow..joining there forhead together...

Mayank: I missed you so much... he said in a whispered... words were never his campionions but today he felt his voice stucked... he traced her lip with his thumb, earning a gasp fron her... she was drowing and was loving the fact... it was really cuming back...it was really where she belongs... and than she felt like flying in air... As he let her lips feel the bliss of his love...

I was so lost in his kiss , wht u cant balme me I felt my man after 3 years... ya so I was so lost tht I didn't knew when I was swipt off my feet and when we start moving... The thud sound of door closed was when I realsed where we were heading

I m hesti ... ya so wht... I don't care wht u want to call me, despo, lustfull, hesti, I just want to love her... I want to feel her close... closetest to myself... 3 bloddy dam years I have been away from my love... u just donot get to judge me on my act... there have been time when I was away when I craved so much for just one tocuh of her... and when today I felt her hands griping me... I give a dam to everything... I just want to love her... feel her... as slowly and softly as I want to... And with evry touch I know one thing she missed me and want me as much as I do...

It was at the apex of ectasy when she pulled me closed and kissed me sharply..whipsering "miss you so much " with a such a sigh.. tht made me kissed her back with more passion...

It was silent and we were just enjoying being in eachothers arms... after long I was feeling like smiling just for nothing... and than my eyes droped on sumthing and I chukled at the fact tht how despo we have been... more on the fact that Mr mayank Sharam... the great sadu and rock solid person lost his inhibitions so quickly... god I cant just belive it.. and here cums my princess back with a glare...

Nupur: what is so funny...

I made hr look in my direction.. and her eyes went wide... the door I supposedly closed with my feet.. didn't actually got closed... and to more amzing on our desperation.. the main door of the out house was wide open...

Mayank: such set of desperate people we are na... and I smirk looking at her and she blushed... but than we spited in to laughter... Placing her back on pillow... I rushed to close the main door atleast... I seriously donot want Samrat or anyone to enter our home at this moment ...

When I came back in our room I found her looking around the room with a smile... a wide one... Oh no No... she is thinking I have done tht...

Mayank: I haven't done that... I said sheepishly and she looked at me with a frown and than shocked her head

Nupur: pata tha mjhy... Ab tum teen saal ki judai mein itna tu badal nhi saktay...

Mayank: oye hello kay matlab hai tumhara...

Nupur: yeahi k tum meri yaad mein ghar k pholo se sajado...

Mayank: mein tumhain yaad kiya k nhi yeah tum ko pholo se pata chaly ga...

I said putting my hand on my waist climbing up the bed...

Nupur: nhi mein ny kab kaha... woh tu kafi pata chal raha hai...

I smirk with her teasing ...oh... so she is playing with me...

Mayank: acha.. aur woh kasay pata chala ap ko.. detail mein samjhy nah... I leaned on her and she lowered her eyes... if things would have been normal I would have teased her to death yet... I kissed her lowered eyes softly... Wch make her look in my eyes.. and she hugged me tightly so did i...

Nupur: tum ny maa se baat ki...

Mayank: haan un ko phone aya tha... mein sab se baat kerli ... samrat se, gunjan se aur maa se bhi ... Bus ek ap se hi nhi ki abhi tak... tu kasi hai meri biwi...

Nupur: pata nhi

Mayank: oh hello... meri biwi k sath kya kiya tum ny... he moved her apart...

Nupur: kya kiya matlab

Mayank: meri biwi kaha hai ... Waps kero meri biwi ko chalo foron.. itni khamosh.. no argumental biwi . nhi thi meri...

Nupur: tu kis ny kaha tha chor k jao us k... ab asai hi kam chalo ...

Mayank: no way.. I want her back.. bus ..mjhy tu laga tha jab mein aao ga tu meray kaan paak jay ga sun sun ker.. to this he revied a slap on his arm and he chukled

Nupur: wasy socha tu mein ny bhi yeah tha ... per itna kuch hai k samjh hi nhi arha hai k kaha se shoro kero.. she pouted looking at her and he smiled..

True it is...when frst she came to knew tht he is really cuming today shilpa and her feelings were out of this world... for both of thm it was frst time he was so far away not just physically yet emotinlly to as he was hardly sharing anything... it was a feeling of shivers and numbness...

Nupur: tumhari roommate frnagi kya saara khana kha jati thi jo tum asay hoker aay ho...

Mayank: nhi nupur ab kya hai k living with her n all tht was tiring so u know.. he said as if hinting to sumthing ...

Nupur: mayank sharam tumhari thakan tu mein utarti hoon... tum per America k bhoot kuch zayda hi charha hua.. she hited him with pillow once twice and one more...

Mayank: aray baba mazak ker raha hoon... kuch ghante hoay aur atiyachar shooro...

Nupur: haan tu mein ny kitna miss kya yeah atiyachar kerna,...

Mayank: wah kya biwi.. acha batao nah yaha sab kasa hai

Nupur: mayank tum na sadu k sadu hi rehna... itni depressing batein kyun kerna hai...

Mayank: acha thik hai tu ek good news dayta hoon...

Nupur: hooo... patni ko tu suna hai pati ko good news dayty ...yaha tu pati.. mayank.. hoo...

Mayank: nupur... he glared at her joke... Nhi bata jao..

Nupur: chukling acha sorry baba bol na.. batao...

Mayank: tu suno... im planning k hum.. mumbai mein .. apna ek baraaa sa ghar lay... and for tht mein ny 4 apartments shortlist kiya hain... I want u to chose one...

Nupur: REALLY... OMG ..humara ghar... Wao mayank kitna maza aay ga nah... per ek min... tum teen saal mein itny ameer kasay hogay...

Mayank: powder sale kerta tha nah islayn (referring to drugs)

Nupur: oh pls acha mein creative level per kam kerti hon mjhy pata hai talcum powders se koi itna ameer nhi hota ...tu yeah stupid jokes maat maro... seedha seedha bolo...

He laughed out loud at her comment tht so inncocnetly...

Mayank: duniya badly gi per tum na badlna...he pich her nose..I was awarded this year us k bonus mila hai ,... Kafi savings hai waha ki... tu hojay ga n pls stoping thing all tht... Idea kasa hai

Nupur: by god idea tu kamal k hai.. mein abhi maa ko batati hon

Mayank: abhi nhi wasy tu mein ny unko bataya tha but jab hum finalize krlay ..wasy maa kab arhi hai

Nupur: kal subha yaha sab log ajay ga... amzing na

Mayank: kya amzing 3 saal k banwass k baad sirf itna sa time biwi k sath... had hai

Nupur: hay hay meray sadu... apki biwi tu ap k pass hamesha k liyan hai ..

Mayank: sach

Nupur: much.. chalo tum itni lambi flight se aay ho thori dair rest kerlo .. kuch khao ga... mein bando...

Mayank: nhi kuch nhi khao ga.. aur tum itni thaki hoi kyun lag rahi hoon... soi nhi ho kya..

Nupur: han tu excitement k maray mjhy teen din se neend hi nhi ... I m glad ur back...

Mayank: kitna ajeeb hai na.. ek min sab gayab hogaya.. thakan.. frustration. Longing sab.. asa lag raha hai khabi door hi nhi thi tum.. yaha sab ny bht sawal kiyan hongay mera ek bar bhi na anay per...

Nupur: mjhy kisis k sawalo k jawab dany ki zaroorat nhi hai ... aur na kisi ko tum se sawal pochny k haq hai... samjhy... Jis ko jo sochna hai woh sochy... Chalo ab thora rest kerlo..

Mayank: yahi raho ..khabaradar jo kahin gai...

Nupur: sochan bhi maat kahin jarahi hoon... ab tu sapny mein bhi nhi choro gi

Mayank: waha tu tum ny mjhy America mein bhi ni chora.. such nightmares I tell u by god..

Nupur: mayank... chor gin hi tum ko tu mein..

She raised her hand to hit him and he graped and pulled her to himself... turning around and cudling to her..hugging her from back...

Mayank: mein pakarta hoon na..