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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: aanya84

di update nahi de rahi to maine socha chola maan ko hi yaad kar liya jaaye hi is sooo 😳

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guess karo 😉
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u don't know😛😉
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Originally posted by: -indu-



u don't know😛😉


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u don't know😛😉

arey di yeh kahin sky ki baat tu nahi kerahi hai but its praff not pravz 😆
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jee rahi the main, par shayad zeena bhul gayi thi.

bad rahi thi zindagi aage ,par shayad main chalna bhul gayi thi.

duniya main rang to the, par shayad

main unhe apne aanchal main bharna bhul gayi thi.

dekhne waalo ke liye muskuarati thi main ,

par shayad khud ke liye khul kar hasna bhul gayi thi main.

hu main woh kali jo tufaan ,aandhi se khub hai ladi

jung jeet li thi maine par khilna bhul chuki thi main.

aap aaye, sang meri zindagi lauta laaye

phir se jeena aaya mujhko , sirjf hasna hi nahi

aap ne toh meri aawaz ko bhi khanak na sikh diya.

murjhane lagi thi woh kali, usko phool banaa diya.

the ,mere raste main jo kaante ,

unhe hataa kar phoolo ka bister bicha diya .

udaas si meri zindagi ko, khila hua gulshan banaa diya

(By-9n9i9s9h9u9)

Part-16

Maan returned home quite late as he had to go to office after meeting Ritika. Priya was waiting for him .Taiji Anie and Ram had taken their dinner and all were in their respective rooms.Servants too had gone . maan came down after changing his clothes and found priya waiting for him on dinning table.

Priya-maan Today you are too late.Ram told me that you went out for a long time in the evening.Why did you go back to office after that?You should have come to home directly from your meeting.

Maan-maa I had some work in office too. By the way why you are waiting for me? You shouldn't be stay hungry till late maa.

Priya-Maan ..I would haven't have to wait for you if Arpita... and she stopped

Maan didn't say anything further and asked priya-Maa bhookh lagi hai. To jaldi se khana dijiye and he didn't give any chance to priya to think further.

Priya -haan Maan .Just two minutes. And they saw geet bringing food after reheating it. She smiled to see Maan. And served the food for three.

Maan-Geet you too are waiting till now?

Geet-Hmmm..Maa ne dinner nahin kiya to main kaise karti. So we both were waiting for you.

And they had their dinner.

Priya-Maan where did you go in the evening? Your papa was saying that there wasn't any official meeting?

Maan-Haan maa. It was a personal meeting . actually I went to meet my one school friend.

Priya-kaun ?

Maan-Maa you don't know him. Actually he was in London for few years.

Priya-okey.

geet was quitely eating her food and listening to both of them. Maan was watching her and thinking- time changes a person in to an extremly opposite character.Geet-the girl who always chatted nonstop has now forgotten how to talk.Once I gave her the name of tufaan mail. par ab lagta hai jaise ye wo Geet hai hi nahin.

Dinner was finished and Geet cleared the table . Maan wanted to think on his plan to how to make Geet ready for that competition. he said to priya-maa ..actually have some more work to do. Can you make a cup of coffee for me?

Priya-Maan... It's already late.

Maan -maa please . thodi hi der lagegi.

Geet came out of the kitchen and saw priya going towards the kichen-maa do you need something?

Priya-Maan is asking for coffee so I was going to make coffee for him.

Geet-maa you go to your room. It's already very late for you. I will make coffee for him. Don't worry

She prepared the coffee and gave it to Maan

Maan-Thanks.

Geet smiled a little while nodding her head said- good night.

Maan- Good night.

Geet went to her room after wishing him goodnight.

Maan too reached his room taking the coffee in his hand.

He kept thinking on the possibility. He wanted to talk to Rahul but It was quite late so he changed his mind.

He finished the coffee and laid on his bed.But couldn't get any idea . Finally he slept.

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Next morning all were having the breakfast.Maan's phone buzzed .It was showing a message in inbox. He opened it it was from Rahul.He was asking If he was free .he wanted to talk him in private.

Maan excused himself for a minute and called Rahul

Rahul-Maan I got an idea, First we have to know about Geet's decision If she will be agree to do that or not, To know that I have asked her one friend to call her. I have told her what she has to ask ,so wait for her call.and you only listen what Geet replies to her. Her reply to her friend will decide our line of action.

Maan-You are right, If I ask her directly and she refuges then it will be an impossible task for us.lat see what she says.

Rahul-Maan Thanks a lot for all whatever you are doing for her,

Maan-If she is your sister then she is my brother's wife too.we both are related to her. So don't be formal.I think Geet's phone is ringing . I will call you later.

Maan went where geet was sanding but he didn't came in front of all as he wanted to show that he was not present there and he wanted to show himself unaware of whatever geet was talking. So he kept himself hidden behind a pillar.Geet picked her phone and said-hello.

After listening for some time she said-I m sorry Neha..I m not applying any where as I don't want to pursue my carrier. I want to live at home and I m happy for that,

Otherside-----

Geet-Neha I have decided what I m saying. Everything we want in our life can't be achieved . every dream doesn't come true. So please don't ask me again about that. Right now I have some work will talk to you later.

And she cut the call.

Ram-geet what happened. Who was there?

Geet-papa It was Neha.

Ram-What she was saying?

Geet-Wo ..she was asking me to apply in some fashion houses for the job. But I refused to her

Ram -par kyun Geet,You got too good result. So why don't you want to work?..

Geet - Papa I don't want to . that's all.papa leave this topic here itself... and she went from there

Taiji-Theek hi to kah rahi hai. Ab ghar ke bahar ja kar kya karegi. Dunia ko pata hai ki widhwa hai. Dunia aise aurton ko buri nazron se hi dekhti hai. Har koi fayda uthana chahta hai. Kab tak bachegi. Khandaan ki izzat aur neelam karegi.( she is right.what she will do out of the house.All know that she is a widow.the world can only see her with evel eyes.every one wants to take benefit. How long she will be safe.name of the house will flow through the water)

Ram-taiji. She is very talented.aap ne suna nahin ki usse ab tak ka sabse achcha result mila hai.What she will do at home sitting idle?

Taiji-par wo to khud hi kuchh nahi karna chati .tum log kyun force kar rahe ho.Ghr me saas sasur hai nanad hai dewar hai maiom hoon.hum sab ki dekhbhaal ab usko hi to karni hai.khaali kahan rahegi?(But she herself is not interested.why you are forcing her? she has MIL,FIL,BIL SIL at home. Me too is here and It's her duty to take care of all of us. When she will sit idle)

Maan grittted his teeth . He wanted to reply that bad mouthed lady but he couldn't as he was keeping himself hidden there and he didn't want to tell them that he had listened their talks.So he controlled himself and went from there.But today he knew that taiji too was a big hurdle in that dream other than Geet.She will not let do Geet anything so easily.He didn't want Geet to start her work on a bad note.He wanted it to be happened in a happy and peaceful manner.so he decided to think on the options in a relaxed mind.

He reached office.He now knew that it wasn't easy for him to convince Geet for that. He wanted her to pursue her carrier as a designer.He had seen the dresses which she prepared for her final exams and they were so beautiful.

He took out the entry form which Ritika gave him to br signed by Geet. He stareted to read the terms and conditions mentioned on the form. His eyes stuck on one point. It was telling about the theme of the competition. The theme was- bridal.

Maan kept on thinking and thinking and an idea hit him. He decided to give it a chance.

He called Rahul and told him about the reply which Geet gave to her friend.

Rahul-I know Maan. Neha informed me.She too was feeling too bad for Geet.

Maan-Rahul I have got an idea. And he explained him the idea.

Rahul-What if she still refuses?

Maan- We will do some emotional blackmailing. For the sake of our reputation she will do That's what I think.

Rahul-You can try Maan, but it will be our first as well as last chance. If it doesn't happens now it will never happen.

Maan- rahul I know but we have to take the risk.

Rahul-You are right .Go ahead. My best wishes are with you.

Maan-Thanks Rahul I need them desperately. You know the way you are supporting me I m feeling if Yash is with me.

Rahul-Come on Maan.If yash was here today then what was the need to do all this.She would have done happily what ever yash had said to her to do.

Maan- you are right Rahul. Thanks any way. Bye .

And he cut the phone

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Evening in KM

Maan returned early today. He was little doubtful about his plan but he had to do that. All were having evening tea. Maan shot a quick prayer in his mind and said-Geet I need a favor from you.

Geet-Ji kahiye kya baat hai?

Maan-Geet ek problem ho gayi hai and only you can help me now.

Priya-Maan what happened.Is something serious?

Maan-No maa.you remember,yesterday I was telling you about my friend whom I went to meet. He was talking to me in the lunch time.His sister's marriage is fixed all of a sudden. And you know marriage is in three weeks

Geet-So?

Maan-Actually problem is that the wedding season is on and she wants her dress to be designed specially for herself. She doesn't want to bye it from the market .and all designers are over booked. no one is ready to make a dress for her. She is crying since morning. Shekhar-my friend shared this problem with me and I promised him to help.

Anie-bhaiya how will you help her? By designing a dress for ? her and she laughed

Maan-bad joke Anie..I promised him that Geet will do it for her.After all he is my friend and it's her sister's wedding .So I promised him .Geet I did right na?

Geet-Maan but how can you promise your friend without asking me? Waise bhi I have decided to not to work .So I m sorry.

Maan-what? You don't want to work? But why and when did you decide it?

Ram-Maan today morning her friend called her to apply for some job but she denied and said that she is not interesting in work.She wants to stay at ome.

Maan-Oh but I was there .mere saamne to nahin kaha?

Priya-At that time you were talking some one on phone.

Maan-Oh .I m so sorry Geet I didn't know anything about your decision to not to work. Agar mujhe pata hota to main kabhi usko promise nahin karta..But you know Shekhar called me in the evening that her sister was so happy to hear that someone is ready to make her bridal dress. Now I have to call him to say sorry. Uss bechaari ka to dil hi toot jaayega. It's okey.I m too feeling bad for not fulfilling my promise to my friend.but galati to meri hi hai I should have ask you before promising him. Now I m feeling very bad for that innocent girl. Shadi hai bechaari ki.ab usko market se koi bhi random si not so good looking bridal dress khareed ke pahanni padegi. I m just going to call him to ask a sorry from him.

Geet too was now feeling bad not only for the girl but for Maan too. He promised his friend as he had full trust on her and now he will have to say sorry to him.Maan was observing Geet . he could see her thinking about something.he thought-Come on geet ..say yes or I will have to extend this drama a little more. Come on ... come on... Geet

Than he said-Excuse me.. and he dialed Shekhar's No. after few moments-hello shekhar..Yaar I m so sorry..woo I promised you to solve the problem of your sister's weding dress but wo kya hai na Geet ne mana kar diya hai. She doesn't want to do any work..He listened for some moments he again said-I know shekhar she will be heart broken, Akhir shadi ki baat hai.ek ladki kitne sapne sajaati hai..but I m helpless.and listening to his talk Geet realized that it's a dream for every girl to get married in a dreamy way.and that poor girl is not even able to get a dress for her marriage..

She called maan-Maan

and maan turned-haan

geet-Woo actually main soch rahi thi ki us ka dil toot jaayega.I will design her dress.

Maan -are you sure?

Geet-yes.

Maan informed shekhar... but to his bad luck His mobile rang and Geet's eyes widened to hear that ring and she asked-Maan what is this.? Aap to Shekhar se baat kar rahe the how can your mobile ring.That means you were not talking to him Right ? you were pretending to talk to him

Precap"OOOPS...ek jhooth ko chhupaane ke liye kitne jhooth bolne pade Maan ko and taiji's reaction???


Part-15-prev/next-part-17



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Posted: 11 years ago
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sky ?
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely update di 😃
after long a light update😉
abh maan babu ka geet kya haal banayegi yeh dikhne main bahut maza ayega
Edited by kkiddoo - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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update
rahul and maan thinking about how to convince geet
taiji bhagavan keliye chup ho jao please
arre wah maan nice plan

babaji ye kya hogaya
arre maan tum tho gaye geet tumhe nahi chodegi
phone silent par rakthe na maan
ab kya hoga
eargely waiting for next part

aap kelye


Edited by valli30 - 11 years ago

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