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Posted: 10 years ago
arey wah sonali ek dam saye poem likhi hai... really like it
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Sonali.

I was just scribbling something and came up with this poem... Umm I know its not that good yet posting it here 

Hum CID Fans 

16 saal se dekh rahe hum jo
Aaj bhi humko hain yeh Bhaata
Chahe jitney hi nuksa Nikale 
Dekhne se koi baaz naa aata

Jo udaye koi iska mazak
Toh aata hain humko ghussa
Aisa apnapan hain isse
Jaise hain yeh humare dil ka hissa

Koste hain hum unko jinhone
Avmulyankit kiya iska darja
Koshish hoti hain ki aa jaye Badlav
Sanyukta ho kar karte hain charcha

Log puchte hain, kyon dekhte ho isse
Aisa bhi kya hain Lagaav?
Jo kaaran humene diye
Woh bhi toh padte jaav

Humne kaha hum dekhte hain isse
Kyonki pasand hain humko Shivaji Satam
Chaahe thoda kirdaar se hatkar kare bartaav
Fir bhi pasand hain hume ACP Pradyuman

Hain pasand humko Aditya Shrivastav
Inhone Sr. Insp. Abhijeet, kya khoob nibhaya
Abhijeet ki har khushi, uska har dard
Kya khoob inn ke chehere par nazar aaya

Hain pasand humko Dayanad Shetty
Inhone khoob nibhaya Sr. Insp Daya
Shaktishaali sharer mein komal sa dil
har baar hain hum sab ko nazar aaya

Yeh keh paana hain mushkil ke
Hume pasand hain kirdaar ya kalakaar
Magar jude rekhna hain isske saath
yeh hain humara drudh vichaar

Chaahe ho jaaye hum buddhe!!
Ban jaayee hum nana ya nani
Fir bhi Dekhenge Hum CID
Ab apni toh hain yahi kahani!


Very Heart Touching Work SONALI...πŸ˜³πŸ‘
I think I read it Somewhere Else...πŸ˜•
Did U Post it in 1000 Epi Celebration Thread...πŸ˜•
But Reading again it also a Great Experience...πŸ˜³πŸ‘πŸ‘
Thank You so much...😳😳
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Veena..

arey wah sonali ek dam saye poem likhi hai... really like it


Thanks Veena πŸ˜³
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: gadhadada


Very Heart Touching Work SONALI...πŸ˜³πŸ‘
I think I read it Somewhere Else...πŸ˜•
Did U Post it in 1000 Epi Celebration Thread...πŸ˜•
But Reading again it also a Great Experience...πŸ˜³πŸ‘πŸ‘
Thank You so much...😳😳


Your memory is very Sharp GD πŸ˜† Yes you must have read it at my Poems Thread... I was just planning to assemble all the poems, stories and VMs in one thread so re-posted it  here... 
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely poem Sonali πŸ‘
I had read it in your other thread...!!
It was nice reading again...!! πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: neha_dna

Lovely poem Sonali πŸ‘

I had read it in your other thread...!!
It was nice reading again...!! πŸ˜ƒ


Thanks Neha... But you are yet to read my stories I am still awaiting 
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Posted: 10 years ago
I know yaar...
Will read soon...
Dont worry... I wont forget πŸ˜‰
 
Have my exams... Will read during my PLs... πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Sonali.



Angel ji Aap toh mujhe Sharminda kar rahi hain😳

😲😲 Is there really any thing to feel embarassmentπŸ˜›πŸ˜†? Your pieces of work are really praiseworthy Di and they show your talent ⭐️ ⭐️ ⭐️. But if you really don't like me to say the truth then Can I say "you are the one of worst writers I have ever read"..happy?🀣 🀣 🀣..
Thank You for editing the first post with name and index πŸ€—.Edited by ANGELICEYES - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: neha_dna

I know yaar...

Will read soon...
Dont worry... I wont forget πŸ˜‰
 
Have my exams... Will read during my PLs... πŸ˜‰


No Problem πŸ˜† I thought you forgot so just thought of reminding you πŸ˜‰
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Posted: 10 years ago

Scribbled something out of emotion... Sorry for the overdose this entire weekend... But Somehow I am not able to pass it over... May be its not that great yet thought of posting...

P.S. These are somehow Daya sir's emotions. Its a fan fiction. Just a thought 

Kabhi Tera Haath naa Choote

Dosti mein kabhi saathi ka saath naa Choote
ZIndagi mein ae dost kabhi tera haath naa Choote

Yaad hai... jab maut ki kagar par tha main...
Thama tha tumne yeh haath mera
Maut se bhi lad kar laut aaya tha main
Ke nibha saku main saath tumhara

Iss baar jab tum gire uss gehre se jharne mein
Chodakar mujhse mera yeh haath
Mansha thi tumhari bach jaye hum sab ki jaan
Par darr gaya main yeh sochkar ki choot jayega tumhara saath

Yeh saath chut jaye yeh naa chahata tha Khuda bhi
Bacha li usne tumhari jaan
Musukurata huva fir lauta mera saathi
Aur khush huva main uss Khuda ka shukar maan

Aaj bhi maangta hoon uss khuda se dua...
Ke hasta khilkhilata mera yaar rahe sada
Aur Dosti mein kabhi saathi ka saath naa Choote
ZIndagi mein ae dost kabhi tera haath naa Choote