FF: ADHURI KAHANI...(CH 31 : PAGE 124)- Page 46

nice update di...

Wow

nice part...

omg
so much suspence
i am loving it
superb part
excellent
Arjun is back ... its not easy to get him !!!!!
excellent writing :)

Kunchu,

There is only one word for this one, or rather two. One is superb, and the other is mesmerising.

The former needs neither justification nor amplification. The latter, well the latter, an adjective that I cannot remember ever having used before in any of my innumerable comments in this forum on ever so many FFs and OSes and SSes, is there for a specific reason.

One. You have kept up the level of menace - not only in the dark undertones in Arjun's latest message to Zaid and Naina, but even more so in what happens to that putative sleaze bag, Dr.Bhatra, in that dark, deserted godown where he is undoubtedly being made to pay for his sins, sood samet., thru what must be, literally, death by a thousand cuts.

Two. You have introduced a new, dark mystery, in the message on Shaleen's mobile that triggers an anxiety attack and leads to a blackout, as his mind is readied for Arjun to take it, and his body, over for a while. But if this take of mine is anywhere near correct, where does something as corporeal as the message come from? An avenging spirit that needs another's physical being to mete out much needed justice cannot be sending SMSes or MMSes to that person. Well, I shall wait for this puzzle to be cleared up in due course.

For now, I am luxuriating in the dark, brooding atmosphere of this, the most unusual of all your creations so far. Thank you for that, my dear.

Shyamala Aunty


Hello all... up from the jhatka? well... more on its way...
Next part of Adhuri Kahani

PART 17:

interesting very interesting .👏...🤗...continue soon 👍🏼

Awesome part

Wow...
Awesome work...
U r really an awesome writer
Will say u to publish some novels..
People will love to read those
If u r gng to do one do remain in touch
I wud b 1st one to buy.. ;)
Awesome update
Thanks for pm
Waiting for nxt
Do gv ur thoughts on my suggestion to write novels... ;)

The gud thing in all this revealations &mysteries is that Shaina is moving ahead in her new life with a positive attitude.