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Posted: 12 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: -Zina-




I've saved it. but I don't have internet connection, it's saved in my phone as well.


then upload it from a cyber cafe
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: sanah12

Read all the chapters in one go.
It was awesome, mind blowing!
Loved the way the story is progressing.
Uday shouldn't have behaved that way with manyata and now he has to suffer.
I hope manyata gets to know that uday is her prince charming not akash.
Love jai and jaggat.
They both are a cute pair.
Loved the update to the core.
Do continue asap.
Thanks for the pm.



omg hats off to your reading skill
thank you so much dear
indeed he will suffer now a lot
maybe but that can take time
i am glad you liked them
awn it was my duty

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Posted: 12 years ago
#83

Originally posted by: pia.raha

thaankss fr the double updatee!!!!!! akash is really sweett!!! j and jagat is a couple,soo lovely!!! so veeer finally knows abt her princess,bt he has to travel a long path now,bcoz he has humiliated her so much,he shouldnt have dne dat,dat was veryy bad of him,mnyata was soo much hurtt!!!!!!!! bt waitng now to see uday's lovee😊😊


indeed a life savior
they are very into themselves
yes now what goes around
comes around
he HAVE to suffer

Edited by annabh - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: panchaali


Hawww revenge!!!!😲



yes he will burn out of jealousy
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86

*****Chapter 5 *****

If life was a fairy tale then Manya definitely was the luckiest fairy princess, the previous night they enjoyed themselves a lot in the ice cream parlor feeding each other. Just in a moment it seemed Veer never existed for her, now her life belonged to Akash, she was only his and he was all hers. But only if lady luck favored her and with little help from Veer, her akash was soon going to be distanced away. That night he contacted his father and asked to call akash back home and even during holidays to send him away somewhere and also that this holiday he would spend in Devgarh. Akash had no choice but to follow the king order and go back home he did not even get time to bide his beloved bye as he had to go asap. Now next was Jia and Jaggat, but he avoided them assuming they would be too busy in themselves to keep an eyes on Manya. That morning Manya got dressed up excited about meeting her Akash but all went to vain when she reached the college and found him nowhere. Her eyes searched for him as Jaggat very disappointed informed her

Are you searching for Akash? He is not here! He went back home there was an emergency and he will come back after holidays only.

Her eyes already had the tears brimming as she asked in a voice broken with sorrow

But he did not even inform me?

Before anyone else could say Veer tried to justify his reason as he said

Probably he did not want to

But before he could continue she gave him a cold and frostily look as she said

Will you just keep that mouth shut!

Everyone stared at her as she walked past him to the class, it was or the first time she was giving him a scornful reply, but Veer had a smirk plastered to his face, as her last words gave him an awesome idea. He broke her heart as Veer and he was going to mend it being Veer only.The whole time she sat in her college being isolated wandering about the way she spoke to veer, a part of her was very proud but then again memories of akash drifted her to sadness. As the last bell rang she took out her phone and called him, many rings were discontinued and finally after many it was picked up as she asked

Akash were are you? I am missing you? You did not even tell before leaving?

I am sorry manya my family needed me

Why what happened?

Nothing I will come back and tell you for now I have to go

Ok bye take care of yourself love you

Love you more baby

She disconnected the phone just when a thunder stuck in her mind, just this morning she read in newspaper that Jaigarh industries were suffering loss at stock. She smiled to herself this was the second proof as she walked back to the locker room to keep her book, but as she opened the locker a letter with a rose fell to her feet. She picked it up and read it

Kisi ke dil mein basna bura to nahi
Kisi ko dil mein basana khata to nahi
Hain ye zamane ki nazar me bura to kiay hua
Zamane wale bhi insan hai khuda to nahi..

A smile placed in her face, it was of akash, she read further to see it asked her to come to the auditorium, her heart beat grew faster as she raced up to the auditorium, it was the most pleasant surprise he was going to give her she thought, the steps seemed too long for her but finally on reaching she caught her breath as she looked around for him but suddenly she felt a blind fold on her eyes as she heard a heavy voice near her ears that spent shiver down her nerve

Were you searching for princess?

She smiled as she replied to her assumed akash

Whom can I search for other than you baby? Btw I did not accept such a surprise from you love

She could feel his smile against her cheek and his hands trapped in her waist, she felt weak on her knees and her cheek blushed as the voice said

There are more surprise waiting for you princess

He held her hands and she followed him, they climbed the steps together as she felt wild winds hitting her body and the blind fold was dropped down into the ground as she looked around the sun almost was about to set as it orange light scattered into the sky, she looked around the greenhouse of the campus was arranged with many balloons, she loved balloons as she ran towards them and held into her hands, her eyes was filled with an excitement gleam as she turned and said to

Thank you so much akash I love you baby

But she was rooted to the ground it was not Akash it was VEER she felt herself rooted to the ground, as she felt her blood boiling how could she ever let this person touch her? Why did she misunderstand the situation? Here veer was too angry at the mention of akash name as he watched her crushing the card and throwing it on the floor; she did not ask for an explanation but just walked past him. But he was not going let her go so soon and definitely not after his ego was hurt as he pulled her arms in such a way that her body dashed with his, he grabbed her both the arms mercilessly with his nails piercing into her body as the more she struggled the mark got deeper she looked up at him and screamed

What the heck? Leave me?

He gritted his teeth as he said to her with a smirk on his face

Why just before sometime you was enjoying my touch isn't that so princess?

She struggled more but his clenches seemed stronger as she said

You are highly mistaken I thought it was MY akash so I let you touch me I knew it was you I would rather die than letting your filthy hands get on me

He bend his face in a position to kiss her but that was to scare her and it did work a lump was struck in her throat as her eyes seemed brimming with tears and he said in a heavy voice

Earlier in the morning you asked me to keep my mouth shut and that what I am trying to do my lips will be sealed but only by your lips

You are so disguising, jerk pervert , leave me

Oh really but I thought you loved me and that is what the love letter you gave to me explains isn't that so princess

She was now hurt and angry, which meant something very bad was coming his way as she corrected

First of all you have no right to call me PRINCESS only akash can do so and secondly about the letter it had been past 3 week and I am so over you and you know why coz you are that type of toy that good for playing for a certain period of time and then throwing it away, I really regret on liking you ever ok and I never loved you as you do not deserve anyone love!! No wonders no girl stick to you more than a month isn't that so you called me dumb but at least I have that much sense to identity gold from glitter and I am proud to choose akash over you and just because I am not explosive and seductive doesn't mean I am beautiful ok and lastly Veer leave my way

He looked at her blankly as she felt him loosening his grip and she walked away from him, all he could do was watch his love walking away from him with tears in his eyes as he crumbled down on the floor and said to himself

Princess all I did was as I loved you no girl ever had space in my life except for you all the other girl were just a time pass but princess I truly love you please don't say you love someone else please I really love you I accept I made fun of your love but that was because I did not know your identity is masked please give me a last chance please

He kept crying till the sun went down, after the day manyata left it was for the first time the YUVRAAJ cried his heart out as he walked dreamily back to his home wandering and smiling about the little moment of love he shared with his love though she did not accept him but he knew now that he would win her even if that meant giving up his life for her

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Edited by annabh - 12 years ago
saakhi01 thumbnail
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
Awesome chappy anni, i m glad i m d first one to comment...
Thanks for d pm
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88
Hey Anni what are you doing?

Aren't you pandal hopping???

How are you managing update in between? 😲

Thankz that you updated...😃

Have you attended Astami Pupanjali?

My anjali is done and I am still fasting upto Sandhi puja...😊


Now coming to the update..

As usual it is lovely 👏

I really loved what Manya said to Veer

He deserved it

But then when I get to know that he rejected her love because He didn't know who is she!!

In fact he rejected her because he only loved her!!!


Awwn my heart broke a bit...


But I think everything will be alright soon,,,hain na!! 😉


But Akash will be shattered...that will be really bad for him!!!


Anyway plz don't make Akash villain to make manveer together

Coz he is really cute in this story

I like him...

And Lastly


Subho Maha Astami 😃



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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
awesome chapter annesha!
loved it to the core <3
please Veer ko itna bhi mat tarpaoo :-(
does not she loves veer???
please update ASAP!!! thanxx for the pm,
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
awesome update anni
though now I feel bad fr uday

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