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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sandhyasn

haan Priya abb sherni bann gayi hai😆...aur muje bhi lagta hai kuch jyada bol diya

update padhne par pata chalega k aakhir Priya sherni bani kyun😉 ðŸ˜†
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sandhyasn

<font color="#9900cc">skip matt karo...abb jab Ram ne itna kuch keh diya toh Priya ne bhi bol diya...she will realise what she said. don't skip...hardly 3-4 updates are left I think.</font>


Ok..will not skip..dont worry
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sandhyasn

there is only half truth..uske pehle Ram ne kuch eisa bola jiski wajah se Priya ne itna kuch bol diya...May be uske baat aapko lagega ki she is right. Actually Ram provoked her...will clear in update😊


provoked her  that is a husband wife matter y is priya giving her selfish mom to rule her y cant she say no to shipra when she says to clain of property? sh ecan na. i think priya is also like shipra.  am totally against  treating someones child as own . when she has her own kids y she has to take nandhini's care. maa ke baadh  mom's brother will have right over minor kid not  mom's sister.  nandini has grand parents to look after.  

my point is  priya is taking ram for granted.  for her rajath n nandhini is more precious than  her own blood and flesh if it is so she has to leave him n children  n let her be happy with rajath alone.  ram will forciblly marry someone to look after  kids she has no concern though. 



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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: luvbalh


provoked her  that is a husband wife matter y is priya giving her selfish mom to rule her y cant she say no to shipra when she says to clain of property? sh ecan na. i think priya is also like shipra.  am totally against  treating someones child as own . when she has her own kids y she has to take nandhini's care. maa ke baadh  mom's brother will have right over minor kid not  mom's sister.  nandini has grand parents to look after.  

my point is  priya is taking ram for granted.  for her rajath n nandhini is more precious than  her own blood and flesh if it is so she has to leave him n children  n let her be happy with rajath alone.  ram will forciblly marry someone to look after  kids she has no concern though. 



Priya don't know that shipra is behind money. Priya just wanted to be fair with everybody. yes, she did wrong, she sign the paper without clearing ti to Ram, but her first priority is her kids only but at the same time she wants that nobody will suffer because of her decision. She will realises very soon that this time she crossed her limit.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thanks for all comments😊
 
Here comes the next part
 
 

Part 22

 

Ram left the room in anger. Priya hold her tears to come out. She collected the scratch. Priya remembers her happy time with Ram and this time she can't control her tears...she cry bitterly.

 

After sometime she recollects herself. After changing she is setting her bed in cough. She lay in the cough and closed her eyes. When Ram enters, he saw Priya is sleeping in the cough. He gets angry.

 

Ram:- Yeh sab kya hai Priya...tum cough par kyun so rahi ho

Priya answer him closing her eyes:- Mein yahan teek hoon Ram. Aap bed par so jaayiye

Ram:- Priya chalo bed par so jao...

Priya:- meine kahan na Ram ...I am ok.

Ram:- But, I am not ok.

Priya(irritatingly):- Kya hai Ram...abb aapko kya problem hai...

 

Before she can complete her sentence Ram carries her in his arms. Priya gets irritated and tries to free herself from ram's clutch. But he holds her hardly. Ram placed her properly on the bed.

Ram came on top of her and said chup chap yahan leti raho...warna

 

Priya(Irritingly):- warna kya...

Ram:- warna...tumhe mein yeh bhi yaad dila dunga ki hum bed par aur kya kya karte the...

Priya:- Aap mere saat force nahi kar sakte..

Ram:- mein kya kya kar sakta hoon..tum achhe se janti ho...achha yahi hoga ki tum meri baat suno.

 

 

Saying this he came out.  

Ram:- Mein bacho ke dekhkar aata hoon...pata hai na agar uthne ki koshish ki toh...

He left the room. When he back he saw Priya is sleeping. He lay besides her. He smiles and caresses her forehead.

 

Ram said to himself "I am sorry Priya...meine tumhare saat bahut rudely baat kiya. Lekin tumhe khoke mein nahi reh sakta. Muje tumhara saat chahiye. Tumhe eisa kyun lagta hai ki inn sab mein sirf tum akeli ho. Hum milkar inn sabhi mushkilo ka saamna karenge".

He also sleeps beside her.

 

In the morning,

Priya slowly open her eyes. She saw her hand on his chest and ram is holding her hand. She remembers how every morning she found herself in ram's embraces. She came out from her thought and slowly removes her hand from him.

She went to bathroom for freshen up. In the meantime Ram also stirred for his sleep.

When she came out she left the room without looking at him.

 

After sometime Priya enter with the tea cups. Ram goes from there when Priya calls him

Priya:- Ek minute  Ram muje aapse kuch poochna hai

Ram turns and goes near him "haan poocho"

 

Priya:- yeh baat sach hai ki meine hi aapse meri pichli zindagi ke baare mein pata karne se mana kiya tha...lekin kya aap wakai mein jante the ki mein kon hoon, meri shaadi ho chuki hai ya nahi.

Ram starred at her continuously...and then asked "aaj achanak se yeh sawal kyun kiya"

 

 

Priya:- Please Ram...muje jawab dijiye kya aap yeh baat jante the

Ram:- Aur agar mein yeh kahu ki mein janta tha toh...Inn sab ka hamare zindagi se kya lena dena

Priya:- Lena dena hai Ram...kyunki agar aap janbujkar mujse yeh baat chupayi hai iska matlab yeh hua ki aapne muje dhoka diya hai..aapne muje apne parivaar walo se dur rakka hai...agar aap jante the ki meri shaadi ho chuki hai toh aap achhi tarah se yeh bhi jante the ki hamari shaadi galat hai...

 

Ram:- (Shouting) Priyaaa...

Priya:- chillayiye matt Ram...muje bhi chillana aata hai...ek baat kahu aap hamesha se kehte hai na ki aapki zindagi ne hamesha aapke saat dhoka kiya hai...aapki zindagi mein sabhi aapko chodkar chale gaye, pata hai muje kya lagta hai, aap issi layak hai, aapko ko kisi ki kushi dekhi nahi jati. Aap jalte hai. Papa sahi keh rahe the ki aapne mera istemaal kiya, aapko laga hoga ki mere baare mein poochne wala koi nahi hai, aap jo kahenge jaisa kahenge mein karti jaaungi. Aapko laga hoga ki meri yaaddash kabhi wapas nahi aane wali aur issliye jab aapko pata chala ki muje sab yaad aa gaya hai...aap mere saat natak karne lage ki aap bahut kush hai...nahi...aap darr gaye the...kahi aapki sachhayi bahar na aa jaaye...lekin yeh toh achha hua ki Vikram wahan aa gaye aur papa ne Vikram ko pehchaan liya.

                                         Mr. Ram Kapoor abb mein aapke saat ek pal bhi yahan nahi rukne wali. Mein yahan se jaa rahi hoon, apne bachho ko saat lekar. Aap rok sakte hai toh rokiye.

 

Priya moves from there when again stops her.

Ram (In angry mode):- Ek minute Priya...Inn saat saalo mein kab tumhe eisa laga ki meine tumhara istemaal kiya. Koi bhi pal...koi lamha...Bolo Priya...kab tumhe eisa laga ki mein tumhare saat dhoka kar raha hoon, ya koi zabardasti kar raha hoon. Aaj tumne bahut badi baat bol di Priya...tumne mere akelepan ka Mazak udaya hai, mein tumhe kabhi maaf nahi karunga. Kabhi nahi...tum mujse alag hona chahti ho na, toh jao mein tumhe rokunga nahi, tum jahan jana chahti ho jao, jiske saat jeena chahti ho jeo...yeh ghar, paisa property mein sab tumhare naam kar dunga. Mein aaj hi saare papers ready karwata hoon.

                                                                           Jao aur jaakar apne maa se bhi keh do..woh jo chahti hai waisa hi hoga. Le jaaye apne beti ko yahan se. Aaj ke baad tumhare zindagi mein koi Ram nahi hai...

 

Ram left the room with his heart broken. He enters his kid's room.

Ram:- Natasha bachhe taiyaar  ho gaye...

Nutz:- Nahi bhai..bas abhi taiyaar kara rahi hoon.

Ram:- tum jao mein bachho ko taiyaar karata hoon.

Pihu:- Papa...hum ghumne kab jaa rahe hai

 

Ram:- Papa ko aaj office mein thoda kaam hai...mein woh jaldi se khatam karke aata hoon. tabb tak aap aur Dhruv ready rehna, uske baad hum sab sham ko yahan se ghumne chalenge. Tumhe water park bhi jana hai na.

Pihu:- haan

 

Ram:- toh phir teek hai...ek din hum zoo jaayenge then, water park, then small picnic aur uske baad hum wapas aa jaayenge.

Pihu:- wow!!! papa I am so happy.

She jumps and kisses her dada on his cheeks.

 

Ram:- achha beta ek aur baat hai...jab hum ghumkar wapas aayenge na..uske baad papa aapko ek nayi jagah, ek naye shehar, naye logo ke beach le jayenge. Woh shehar iss shehar se bahut alag hoga. Tumhe wahan naye friends milenge, sab kuch naya hoga... tum chalogi na

Pihu:- hum kahan jaa rahe hai

 

 

Ram:- woh na yahan se bahut dur hai. hame wahan jaane ke liye flight mein jana hoga. Papa na aapko sab kuch laakar denge. Aap dono jo kahenge mein woh sab kuch laakar dunga. Lekin...agar mein aapko kabhi kuch nahi de saka toh wada karo aap humse uss cheese ke liye kabhi zidd nahi karogi.

Pihu( confusedly):- haan

 

Ram had tears in his eyes. He is controlling enough not to come out.

Pihu:-kya hua papa...aap happy nahi ho

Ram:- kuch nahi hua beta..papa pihu aur dhruv ke saat rahenge toh happy kyun nahi honge...aapke saat bua bhi rahegi...

 

Pihu:- Aur mumma???? Woh nahi chalegi hamare saat

Ram:- (don't know what to say) woh kya hai na beta...mummy ko yahi rukna padega...mummy ko yahan thoda kaam hai na...jab yahan ka kaam pura ho jaayega na toh who bhi hamare paas aa jaayegi...lekin uske liye thoda waqt lagega...

 

Pihu:- toh fir mumma ka kaam pura hone ke baad hum chalenge

Ram:- Nahi beta...tabb tak hum kaise wait kar sakte hai...aapki school bhi toh miss ho jaayegi na..aur mumma ka kaam kab khatam hoga kya pata...

 

Rams know pihu ready with next bunch of question. So he immediately said "achha abb jaldi se naaste kar lo..uske baad papa ko jaldi jaldi office ka kaam bhi finish karna hai...tabb tak aapko packing bhi toh karni hai..so fast beta...

 

On the other side,

Priya realized what she said to him in anger. She knows very well this time she crossed her limit. She knows she hurt his feeling. She cries extremely.

By then, Shipra entered

Shipra:- kya hua beta..tu itna roo kyun rahi hai. Ram ne kuch kaha kya. Mein Ram se aaj hi baat karne wali hoon...aakir kab tak hum wait karenge...hum mahine bhar yahan nahi reh sakte...

 

Priya wipes her tears.

Priya:- Iski koi zaroorat nahi hai maa...Ram alag hone ke liye agree ho gaye hai...

Shipra:- Priya..yeh..toh bahut kushi ...before she completes Natasha calls them for breakfast..

Priya:- Natasha tu chal...hum abhi aate hai...bachho ne nashta kar liya kya..

Natasha:- Nahi bhabhi kar rahe hai..bhai hai unke saat.

 

In the breakfast table,

Ram is busy with kids whereas Priya tries to speak but he is not looking at him. Ram finished his breakfast and went to his study to take some files. Priya go behind him.

Priya:- Ram..abhi meine jo kuch bhi kaha ...

 

Ram cuts her in between and said "abb jab mein tumse alag hone ka faisla le liya hai toh muje abb iss baare mein koi baat nahi sunni. Mein chahta hoon aakiri baar alag hone se pehle hum apne bachho ke saat kuch pal bitaye...bachho ke parents banker...aur itni umeed toh mein tumse rakk sakta hoon. muje office ke liye late ho raha hai...sham ko ready rehna...meine vikram ko bol diya hai..woh seedhe hame hotel mein join karenga...

 

Priya tries to stop him but he left. Priya realized what mistake she has done.

 

In the evening,

All are ready for outing. Kids are excited.

Natasha:- dhruv ,pihu chalo aap dono mere saat baithonge...

Ram:- Natasha tum mere saat baito..Priya aur bachho ke mummy ke saat baithne do..

Natasha:- nahi bhai...aap aur bhabhi saamne baithonge..mein mummy ji ke saat peeche baithungi...

Ram:- mein keh raha hoon na...

Priya:- Natasha...tumhare bhai teek keh rahe hai..mein maa ke saat baith jaaungi.

 

Ram connected the phone with car speaker and called Vikram...

Ram:- Vikram..kahan hai tu...hum sab yahan se nikal chuke hai..

Vikram:- Ram ...hum bhi nikal chuke hai...hum seedhe hotel mein milte hai...

 

Kids were excited and happy. Kids are playing and giggling, otherwise all other are maintaining silence throughout the journey. After 3-4 hours of long journey they reached the hotel. Vikram and family were already present.

 

Neha goes and hugs Priya and Nutz and said Namaste to Shipra whereas Ram with vikram.

Vikram:- chaar rooms book kar diye hai. Mere aur Neha ke liye ek room aur paas wala Rahul, Sammy aur riddi ke liye.tuje aur Priya ke liye ek room aur Natasha aur auntyji ke liye ek..

 

Ram:- ek Kaam kar Priya, Neha aur bachho ko ek room de dete hai, Nutzs aur mummyji ek room share kar lenge..Tu aur mein ek room mein rahenge aur Rahul aur bachho ko ek room.

Vikram:- ek minute...ek minute...mein aur tu ek kamre mein kyun...tuje pata hai na humne outing ka plan kyun banaya hai, taki Priya ko tere kareeb laa sake...aur abb tu keh raha hai ki hu dono room share kare...

 

Ram:- Mein yahan sirf aur sirf apne bachho ke liye aaya hoon.

Vikram:- Kya hua Yaar...Priya ke saat koi jagda hua kya...dekh Ram Pati patni ke beach jagde hote hai...iska yeh matlab nahi hai ki hum ek dusre se moo mod le...Hum yahan...

 

Vikram could say further Neha interrupts...

Neha:- Kya ho raha hai..hum kab se wait kar rahe hai...room toh book ho chuki hai na...toh abb kya problem hai

Ram:- Vikram..tuje mere saat room share karna nahi hai toh matt kar..mein ek separate room book kar leta hoon.

Saying this Ram went to reception counter...

 

Neha:- Vikram..yeh Ram kya keh raha hai...alag room kyun..

Vikram:- pata nahi...zaroor Ram aur Priya ke beach kuch hua hai...

Neha:- haan woh toh meine bhi notice kiya..Priya kaafi shanth thi...lekin jao usse rokko kahi Ram ek aur room na book kar le...

Vikram:- kuch nahi hoga...aur rooms nahi hai..usse Priya ke saat hi share karna padega...

 

Ram came back and stares at vikram angrily. Vikram smiles...

Vikram:- jaa aur Priya ke saat room share kar

Neha couldn't control and she also laughs...Ram fumes in anger and stares at both of them...

Vikram:- jaa naa..hame eise dekhkar dara matt...apni wajah se tu hamara plan kyun kharab kar raha hai...

Neha:- jaa aur apni biwi ko kasskar pakadke so jaa..Priya ka gussa apne aap tanda ho jaayega..

Ram:- Bahut badi galti ki jo meine tumhare saat bahar jaane ka plan banaya...

 

 

Precap:- I already given this precap...

 

Pihu:- papa..mumma kahan hai...bulao na...

Ram bend down and hug both of them...

Ram:- Mumma na...apne ghar gayi hai...do din mein aa jaayegi...

 

Pihu:- Papa aap hamse phir se joot bol rahe ho na...mumaa hame chodkar phir se chali gayi na...bolo na papa...

Ram:- Nahi beta...mumma kahi nahi gayi...aa jaayegi..

Dhruv:- fir mumma ne hame saat kyun nahi lekar gayi...

 

Ram:- woh kya hai na beta jab mumma bulane aayi toh aap dono so rahe the...issliye mumma ne aapko jagaya nahi...

Pihu:- nahi...aap jhoot bol rahe ho...mumma hame chodkar chali gayi...mumma hamse pyar hi nahi karti...chalo dhruv...

 

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Edited by sandhyasn - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update ðŸ˜›ðŸ˜‰
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Edited by varshathakkar - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
fantastic update as usual
hoping that mu between raya will solve soon
waiting for the next part and do pm me next time
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: varshathakkar

awesome update ðŸ˜›ðŸ˜‰

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Yaar varshu...tum eisa pics post karke...mere mooh mein paani matt lao...Itni raat ko kahi se mangwa bhi nahi sakti.
thank u😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely update...
yaar ye priya ne sb kandam kr diya😡
kya yaar kya jarurt thi etna sunane ki
aur ye ram seedhe seedhe bol nhi sakta tha ki usko nhi pata tha😡
ab yha bhi ram priya ka divorce😭
poor kids yaar esme unka kya kasoor...
ab to raya ko ek hi room share karna padega😳
kuch hoga ya nhi😆
Continue soon !!!
tthanks for pm🤗Edited by Mini1991 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: tulshan1989

fantastic update as usual
hoping that mu between raya will solve soon
waiting for the next part and do pm me next time

yes, they will clear their MU😊..arre mere PM karne se pehle aapka comment aa gaya
thanks for comment🤗.will continue soon