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Posted: 11 years ago
very gud story...
different concept...
loved it...
continue soon...
whenever u update dnt forgt to pm me yaar ...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Gudiyalovesguru

very gud story...
different concept...
loved it...
continue soon...
whenever u update dnt forgt to pm me yaar ...


thanks lot dear.. am sorry for pms, i don't send... and i update almost daily. today will be two one done and next t four pm.just wait...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jeenia123


<font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif" size="3">thanks lot dear.. am sorry for pms, i don't send... and i update almost daily. today will be two one done and next t four pm.just wait...</font>

its okie yaar...
i will check this thread by daily basis and i am very excited to read next part...
continue soon...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Gudiyalovesguru

its okie yaar...
i will check this thread by daily basis and i am very excited to read next part...
continue soon...


Thanks a lot dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago

Thanks a lot dear...
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As Promised, here is the next part... A bit longer... enjoy your weekend...


Part-18

Shlok was checking out again and again to Astha's cabin though his cabin glass... He was feeling quite uneasy on seeing Astha talking & laughing with Rahul...His fists tightened in anger when Rahul held Astha's hand and she didn't protest either... She was quite comfortable with that...

Shlok immediately called peon... Call Astha Mam. He declared...

After few minutes...

May I come in sir? Astha asked...

Come in...he spoke trying to control his anger.

Yes Sir. Astha spoke, he could feel a better relaxation in her mood today...

I wanted to discuss about the event. Finally he spoke...

Yes sir, let me call Rahul... Astha got up from seat... Shlok immediately stood up pushing her back to the seat and blocking her way to get up from chair...

Move away from me Sir... Astha spoke strongly...

Why? Just a few minutes ago, you didn't have any problem, jab... His fists tightened... jab us Rahul ne tumhara hath pakda tha...

He is my friend... Astha spoke looking into his eyes. She could feel pain, intensity as well as anger in his eyes...

Kisne haq diya tumhe Kisi aur ko chune dene ka? He shouted moving closer...

Who are you to speak in my personal matters? Astha too shouted trying to push him away but he pulled her as closer as he could...

Your personal matters are not just yours. He looked into her eyes... Take it as my first and last warning... keep yourself away from him, otherwise...he pushed her back to the chair with all his force...

Astha was afraid on his action...she had never seen such passion in Shlok... She immediately went out of the cabin...

While Shlok was thinking what had happened to him... He didn't want Astha anymore then why did it matter to him, if someone else touch her?

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It was night when Astha had invited Rahul at her home for dinner...

There was bell at the door and Astha went to the door happily for Rahul... But was shocked to see...

It was Shlok instead...

You? How dare you to come here? She shouted in anger...

Come with me, we have to go. He spoke firmly holding her arm...

Leave my hand. Astha shrugged his hand and tried to shut the door... But he placed his foot between doors... Ajju too had come on listening the noise...

You? Why are you here? Ajju asked with hatred to Shlok...

I am here to take Astha with me. Shlok spoke a bit politely...

At this hour? She will not go anywhere... Ajju spoke rudely...

She will have to. It's urgent, we have to go to new college... He declared again holding Astha's hand. Astha tried to free herself but unable to...

Kyon? Waiting for someone else? Finally Shlok spoke in frustration...

So this is the matter... Astha nodded her head...she had understood, he is here to take her away just because of Rahul and moreover she didn't want Rahul to know anything...ok, let's go...

But Astha, its eight thirty at night... how can you? And moreover Rahul must be coming...

Ajju, make him sit, I will be back soon. But this time let me go. Saying she picked her bag and mobile and left house with Shlok...It was raining heavy outside and Shlok was driving car like maniac on the roads...Half an hour had passed, they were just going from here to there...

Stop the car...Astha spoke ...Shlok didn't...

I said stop the car Shlok... Finally Astha shouted... We need to talk...

Shlok looked towards her and stopped the car in the midway...

Astha came out of car in the rain... And stood in the middle of the road looking towards Shlok...

Shlok came there and stood near her.

What do you want? Astha spoke...

Astha...Shlok gave her confusing look...

I said what do you want from me now? You took all my happiness, my life, my dignity...separated me from my parents...got me signed that bond... Made me work in your office day and night... Everything. Now what next? What is the reason of your possessiveness?

Shlok moved closer to Astha holding her from shoulders... that I too want to know Astha. Why? Why do you still matter for me? Why do I feel attracted... in spite of hating you to the core, why do I feel you to be just around me all the time? Why do I feel like killing Rahul when he touched you? Why?

Listening Astha was all in tears...she sat on the road and cried to her heart out...

Astha ... Astha please... control yourself...Shlok tried to move her away. ...Shlok caressed her a lot to control but all in vain...

After some time, A taxi came there. Astha Stopped it and went away without even looking towards Shlok...And Shlok was again driving car but this time in proper direction.to get all his answers...

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Bhayia ap yhan Achanak? Puja welcomed Shlok with smile...

Puja, I need to talk with you. I have no one else, who may help me now. I don't know what is going inside me... Shlok spoke in the moment as he reached to puja, who was there in Pune itself for some work and he knew only she can understand him...

Relax Bhayiya... is it about Astha? She asked...

Shlok looked towards her...

Astha had told me everything. She spoke lowering her eyes... bhayia you did quite wrong with her...just to satisfy your ego?

Shlok lowered his eyes. But she had insulted not only me but of baba too Puja...and that I can never tolerate...

Was it the only way bhayiya? To break an innocent heart? She loved you too much... You know... Puja looked towards Shlok...Shlok stood up from his seat and looked on other side...

She is out of your life and moreover still working for you. Now what's the problem bhayiya?

That is the problem Puja... I don't understand, I mean... I am not able to... What should I say? He looked towards Puja... Who was eager to listen...

I mean, I can't control my emotions for her... why? I hated her. I hated her from day one... every moment when I was with her, was just forced one by me. Then why? When she was with me, I never liked her. But why do I miss her so much now? Why do I want her around me always? Why do I feel something breaking inside me, when she is with someone else?Why? He punched the wall...

Puja smiled on listening and caressed his face. Simple bhayiya, first she loved you and now you love her...

Shlok looked towards her in a question...

Bus yahi problem hai bhayiya.ap jinhe forced moments mante hain, those were most beautiful moments of your life and now you wish them back in your life... but now she has gone a long away from all such things...pehle ap use harana chahte the, ab wo jeetna chahti hai... And love has lost in this win-lose relation...Puja paused looking towards Shlok who was thinking deeply about her each word.

Bhyaiya please recognize true love. She loved you deeply and I know, somewhere that love will be still alive... Go and get your love... She is the only one who can change your life...Puja spoke... Shlok paused for a moment...

Do you think, she will be back into my life? Finally Shlok asked...

Bhayiya, you have pushed her a long away, it may take time to bring her back, but she will. Because I know, you are her first and last love. No one can come between you two...

After a pause of few minutes, a smile appeared on Shlok's lips. He hugged Puja and kissed on her forehead... Thanks a lot sister. You cleared all my problems. Now no one can come between me and Astha...

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Shlok quite happily went back on the way to Astha's home... Thinking... Today I will tell Astha how much I love her... I will do anything to get her back... If necessary, I will hold her parents feet, but she will be mine, only mine

When he got a call from Astha's home...

Astha? A smile appeared on his lips...

I am on the way Astha. I need to talk... he spoke picking up the call...

But where is Astha? Ajju spoke from other side...

What? Astha has not reached home? Shlok was shocked...

Shlok, just tell me, what have you done with my daughter? Where is she? Three hours have passed, she left home. Her phone is also switched off... Ajju spoke crying...

Ajju... Shlok stammered...

Don't call me so. Bring my Astha back...Ajju cried even more while Shlok drove back to the same place, from where Astha had taken Taxi...

He drove in the direction to Astha's home from there... But as he reached midway, he found Astha's bag..

Astha. Astha. He shouted there...but no response. He started running here and there, when he saw a tea stall nearby on the road...and a man was sleeping there...he woke him up...

Bhyaiya. Bhyaia...

Kya hai? Itni raat ko kyon tang kar rhe ho?

Bhyayiya, apne kisi taxi ko dekha yhan pe? Abhi kuch der pehle, jismein se ye bag gira tha? Shlok pleaded...

Han dekhi to thi ek, ek ladki chila rhi thi usmein... wo is taraf gyi thi... the man showed him the direction...Shlok drove his car in the same direction. It was a broken link road. There he met two three persons. But no one knew anything.it was almost morning. When he found her phone broken on the road...

His heart was sinking in fear, he had never felt before...he was running here and there when he saw a taxi standing in front of an old house...

He barged in immediately...where he saw Astha was tied on the floor, her clothes were almost torn...her face was completely wounded, blood was flowing from her head, her arms, legs... as if she was lying in a pool of blood... and two men were sitting and drinking there...she was shouting badly .save me...save me...

He shouted in anger, the men turned back. He immediately removed his coat and threw on Astha...

Shlok...save me... . A fade smile appeared on Astha's lips immediately removed on seeing her own condition...after that, she almost fainted...

The men moved towards Shlok, Shlok in anger started beating them. The men were also strong enough and it was getting difficult for him to handle the two...finally, he got an iron rod and hit a man with that. That man collapsed on the floor... He hit the second man too...he fell on the floor.

Shlok left fighting with them and moved towards Astha. He immediately untied her, covered her properly with his coat... Tears were flowing through his eyes...he caressed her face. Astha. Astha...get up... I will not let you happen anything...

Astha opened her eyes slightly... Save me... She almost whispered with difficulty...

It's all my mistake. I should not have let you go in taxi...please forgive me. He kissed on her forehead...taking her into his embrace...Helped her to get up and take outside...when Astha shouted ...Aahhh...

Astha... Shlok shouted and took iron rod beating the men till they collapsed on floor...he shook Astha's body, but no response... Astha get up... He shouted... but she was lying lifeless on the floor...

He immediately took lifeless body of Astha in his arms and ran towards the taxi standing outside...

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Doctor...Patient is getting consciousness..., Nurse ran to doctor...

Doctor came and checked Astha... Her head was bandaged and a few more bandages on her body... He asked... How are you now?

I am fine doctor... she whispered slowly... ayii baba...

Doctor looked towards nurse in a bit surprise and signaled her to call...

Outside... Astha's Ayii, baba, ajju and Shlok were standing...

Patient has gained consciousness... Nurse declared... A happiness appeared on all their faces... Avdhoot looked with a pleasant smile towards Shlok.. Shlok too smile back...

Sister, can we see her? Shlok asked eagerly...

She is calling her ayii baba... She spoke... Doctor has called them...

What? She is calling her Ayii baba? Happiness appeared on kalindi's face... She held Avdhoot's hand in happiness to move, when Avdhoot looked towards Shlok...

Baba, ap jayiye, I will see her after you... Shlok said with a smile placing hand on Avdhoot's shoulder as assurance...Avdhoot tapped his hand back and went into the ICU...

Baba... Astha spoke... As they entered...

Meri bachi... kalindi hugged her slowly with tears in eyes... caressing her face...

Baba main yhan? Wo us admi ne mere sir pe... he knocked me with a rod and then I don't remember anything...how did I came here? May be Mr. Shlok ... He had come there to save me...ye sab huya bhi t usi ke karan ta... Astha spoke with a bit hate towards Shlok.

Kalindi and Avdhoot looked at each other in shock...Kalindi caressed her face... And spoke...Beta wo teen saal purani baat hai... (That is three years old matter)


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So this was weekend torture. Have Fun... Next update on Monday...Keep liking . keep commenting...

one thing i want to clear, she was not in coma...any other guesses most welcome...

Edited by jeenia123 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Next update on monday? 😲 and astha was in coma for 3 years. Oh my god 😲 but happy that she did'nt loose her memory...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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thank you dear for this lovely update!
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Originally posted by: meera.rajeev

Next update on monday? 😲 and astha was in coma for 3 years. Oh my god 😲 but happy that she did'nt loose her memory...



yaar i cleared, she was not in coma... read last line...
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Originally posted by: LECHU123

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thank you dear for this lovely update!


thanks a lot dear...

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