ARIYA SS: MERE JEEVAN SATHI PART 17 UPDATED ON PAGE NO. 40 [7-1-14]..

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Awesome concept and nice chapter.
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ha ha ha that anushka part was nice dear... update soon...

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Originally posted by: kaveriw2008
This is really really really awesome. I just love it

Bechara arjun bina shadi ke patidev ban gaya...he is so cute...

Jo usase shadi se mana kar ke bhaag gayi...usse hi help kar raha hai...

And finally arjun ko realise ho hi gaya that he is in love with riya...

Last mein jab arjun and sameer ka plan flop ho gaya OMG that one is really funny...I can imagine ariya's face...

I jus thought love to read this...awesome dear...

Thanks for the lovely comment. GLAD THAT YOU LIKED IT

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Originally posted by: devildiva21
awesome start yar..!!
lol dulha dulhan dono bhaag gye shaadi se...!!😆😆
aur gye bhi kaha ek sath lol..!!
love how arjun is taking care of riya..
finally he realized he is in love iwth her.. n is taking sam's help to charm her cool...!!
lol dono ka plan flop... ab kya hoga?😉😆
continue soon...!!

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Originally posted by: pinkerbell
superb awesome amazing full on entertainment..
pura rollar coaster ride it was...
dulha dulhan ek saath bhagg gai,
loved the way arjun took riya's responsibility
arjun loves riya n riya too..

waitng for the next part... chaldi dena...

Thank you. And aaj update karunga.

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Originally posted by: ll_megha_ll
Awesome concept and nice chapter.
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thanks and will continue soon. PM to maine kisiko nahi beja!

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Super awesome update
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Originally posted by: srividhya68
Super awesome update
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NOTE: In this part there will be Ariya Scenes in A Temple and In an Water fall. Which i have taken from Kannada Movie MUNGARU MALE.
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RECAP:
Riya starts
laughing loudly
Riya: to Ye
Anuska Tumhari
Gf hai?
Arjun: Nahi
Riya: kal uske
sath tum dinner
pe gaye the?
Arjun: Nahi
Bilkul nahi.

MERE JEEVAN SATHI PART: 2
Riya: Wo tumhara dost Sameer ne mere se aise kyun kaha ki tumhara aur Anushka ka affair chal raha hai?
Arjun: Ye wohi jaane mujhe kya pata?
Riya: Matlab tumhe kuch bhi nahi pata tha?
Arjun: Nahi Mujhe kya pata hoga?
Aur haa mai thak gaya hu. Mai fresh hoke sone jaa raha hu good night.
Riya: Khana nahi Khaoge?
Arjun: Nahi Mujhe bhook nahi hai, tum dinner karke so jao.
Riya: Ok good night. . .
Arjun starts to walk away.
Tabhi Riya Peeche se: Aur Ha ek baat kehna to bhool hi gayi Have Sweet Dreams Arjun.
Arjun shakes his head and walks away

Next Morning In Arjuns Office.
Arjun to Sam: Arre yaar boss ne ham sab ko kyu bulaya hai.
Sam: Mujhe kya pata. Ahi aata hoga tu kudh puch le.
Arjun: Pata hai to bata, ye nautanki karne ki zaroorat nahi, Tujhse to kuch puchna hi bekaar hai, ek madad manga tha.
Tumne Ek plan banaya wo utter flop ho gayi, Aur wo Anushka mujhe bhaiya banane ayi thi.
Rathore was drinking water when he heard Arjuns words he choaked the water into the conference table.
Tabhi Boss waha entry marta hai aur zor ze bol parta hai DAMN IT Rathore tumne sara conference table geela kar diya.
Boss: Rathod Apni coat utaro aur Sara pani saaf karo
Rathore: Jee Apne Kya bola ?
Boss: Sunayi Nahi Diya ya Kaan me problem hai?
Rothod: Nahi Sir Abhi saaf karta hu.
Aur Rathod Apna coat utarkar table saaf karne lagta hai.
Ye dekhkar Arjun ko hasi Aa rahi hai, aur Sameer gusse se Arjun ke tarap Goor raha hai.
Boss: Good Morning everybody. Hum yaha aaj apni nayi Product ka Design aur package ke bare me discuss karne yaha ikatte hue hai.
Sam beech me: Kounsa Product hai sir.
Boss: Baby Oil. Ek sample tumhe bhi dedu kya?
Sameer: Mujhe kyu nahi Mai baccha hu aur nahi mera koi baccha hai.
Boss: To apna muh band aur kaan khule rakho. Arjun tumhari kya raay hai.
Arjun: Sir Market me aur bhi kahi bade bade brand hai. Hume soch samajh ke kadam utana padega. Mujhe sochne ke liye ek din ka waqt deejiye sir.
Boss: Theek hai. AUR RATHORE SAAHAB APKA KYA KEHNA HAI.
Sameer: Kuch bhi to nahi.
Boss: To khade kyu ho jaake apna kaam sambhalo.

In House Arjun was in deep thinking, Riya comes there and asks whats the problem?
Arjun explains every thing to her
Riya: To aisa karo na Bottle ke uper cartoon aur animals ka pic lagni chahiye aur bottle ka hole jyaada bada hona chahiye jisse jyada oil use hoga aur jaldi se doosri bottle ki sale hogi.
Arjun: Ye sab to teek hai, lekin bottle ki hole bada hone se customer doosri product choose kar sakta hai.
Riya: Arre Jo baby oil khardte hai wo jyada tar mothers hote hai, wo na apni bachon ke sehat ke badle kuch nahi dekte nahi Prize Nahi Quantity Bus apka Quality A1 hona chahiye.
Arjun ko bhi ye plan accha lagta hai aur boss se milke project pass karwata hai, Aur Product market me successfull hoti hai aur Arjun ko promotion bhi mil jata hai.
Arjun In boss's cabin : jee sir apne bulaya.
Boss:(boss doesnt kows the reality of Arjuns Marriage) Ha ye lo tumhare honeymoon ke tour package ke tickets aur ek hafte ki chutti
Arjun: Magar sar mujhe chutti ki zaaroorat nahi hai.
Boss: No if's and buts Now you can go.
Arjun leaves from there

In House.
Arjun just enters Sadly.
Riya: Kya hua?
Arjun: Kuch nahi mera Promotion hogaya.
Riya: Tumhe to kush hona chahiye.
Arjun: Sath me ek hafte ka chutti bi di hai.
Riya: Tumhe tho aur bhi kush hona chahiye. AUR YE SAB MERI WAJAH SE HUA HAI TO MUJHE TREAT MILNA CHAHIYE.
Arjun: Tum mere dost todi na ho.
Riya: Tho dost ban jate hai naa..
Kya tum mujhse dosti karoge and forwards her hand.
Arjun immidiately accepts it and shakes hand with Riya.
Arjun: Aur ek problem hai, Ye air tickets, jo boss ne mujhe diya hai mere honeymoon ke liye.
Riya: Tumne Ye accept kaise kar liya.
Arjun: Unhe hamare baare me kuch nahi pata to mai kya karta?
Riya: Bas Bas teek hai ab isse fadke fenk do. Hum Ghoomne Zaaror Jayenge but Places mai choose karoongi.
Arjun: Jo Hukum Mere aka, lekin jab aapki Prem chopra ko pata chalega to kya hoga.
Riya: Tumhe uski chinta karne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai.
Arjun: jaise tum kaho, mujhe kya isse mujhe to ek hafte ka chutti aur hafte bhar sair maza ayega.
BG SONG PLAYING IN THE MINDS OF ARIYA
TUMHRA HU MAIN-YOUTUBE

NEXT MORNING ARIYA GETS READY FOR THEIR MINI VACATION
Wo log ghumne jaa rahe hai iss wajah se Riya Bahut kush hai.
Riya: Hum na ghumne jaa rahe is mai tho bohut excited hu aur tum?
Arjun: Pata nahi ajeeb sa lag raha hai, Sam hota to accha hota.
Riya: Sam means Sameer na, wo tumhara dost jo tumhare bare me mujhe batane aya tha?
Arjun: Ha wohi mera jigri dost.
Riya: Uski itni yaad kyun aa rahi hai, kya baat hai?
Arjun: Bas aise hi chalo chalte hai.(dono gaadi mai bait ke nikal jaate hai)
In The car
Arjun: Jaana kaha hai madam?
Riya: Madikeri ke ek mandir me jaana hai (sorry i forgot the name of the temple) mai rasta batati jaati hu tum waise waise chalate jao.
Arjun: Theek hai.
Riya: Mai Prem ke sath yaha aana chahti thi, khair koi baat nahi.
Arjun bas chup ho jata hai aur man hi man me Prem ko gaali de raha hai.
Arjun Gadi Rokte hue: Lo Aagayi hamari Manzil.
Riya: Kya?
Arjun: Mandir.
Dono Gadi se utar jate hai,
Mandir pahonchne ke liye bohut si seediya(steps) chadni hoti hai. Tabhi Arjun ki nazar waha ki logon par padta hai, waha har ladka, ladki ko bahon me utha ke upar le ja rahe hai.
Isse dekhke Arjun ko hasi aa jaati hai
Arjun: What a comedy Riya! Ye log aise kyu kar rahe hai.
Riya: ye sab na tumhari samajh ki baat nahi, is mandir ka ye speciality hai jo bhi apne chahne wale ko baho me utaakar upar jaakar bhagwan se ashirwad le to wo shaks zindagi me hamesh kush rehta hai aur zindagi me koi takleef nahi hogi.
Arjun: To mai ab samajh gaya. TUM MUJHE UPER UTHA KE LE JAAKAR ASHIRWAAD DILWANE WALI HO NA?
Riya: Tumhara dimag to thikane pe hai na? AUR MAI TUMHE KAISE UTHA PAUNGI, AUR MAI INTERESTED BHI NAHI HU.
Arjun: To ankhe bhandh karke 10 tak gino, isse bhagwanji ka kripa jaldi hoti hai.
Riya: Arjun tum bhi na kuch bhi?
Arjun: Ankhen band karo na. .
Riya closes her eyes, Arjun slowly lifts her in his arms.
Riya is too shocked to reply..
Pics from the movie

Pics are not quite clear

FLASH BACK:
RIYA KE DAD USE UTAKAR MANDIR KE SEEDI CHAD RAHE HAI, TABHI WO THAKAN KE KARAN RIYA KO NEECHE UTARKAR SEEDI MAI BHAITH JATE HAI.
Riya: Dad Aap ko kya hua? Aap theek hai na?
Dad: kya karu beta meri bhi umar ho chali hai, ab lagta hai mai ab mai tumhe mandir nahi le jaa sakunga. .
Riya:Dad aap itne salon tak mujhe mandir le gaye, ye kya kam hai, aap please dukhi mat ho.
Dad: Mai kyou dukhi honga, Maine bhagwan se ye bhi kahdiya. Agli baar jab meri beti yaha ayegi tho uska pati use mandir ke upar le ayega.
FLASH BACK ENDS

Arjun: Lo hum upar pahunch gaye. .
Riya was too shocked to reply.
Arjun use ek pathar pe baita deta hai, aur pandit ji unhe ashirward dete hai, Dono wapis aane lagte hai.
Riya thinking: Bhagwanji Ye aapne kya kardiya, Ab mai iska Matlab kya Samjhu?
Arjun And Riya Sits in the Car
RIYA JUST THINKING ABOUT THE PREVIOUS HAPPENINGS
BG SONG
Ajnabi Mujhko- Youtube

Riya Silently gadi mai baiti hai aur Arjun Bhi Chup chap hai
Arjun: Riya ab sham hone ko ayi hai, yahi kahi hotel me rukhte hai. Aur fir kal chalte hai.
Riya: Theek hai
Dono Hotel me jake apni apni rooms ke keys lekar jate hai.

Next Morning
Riya Is now feeling relaxed and feeling happy, she doesnt know why. .
She meets Arjun and finish breakfast.
Riya: To Chale
Arjun: Kaha?
Riya: MANASA amusement and Waterpark

Arjun: Hum bache thodi na hai jo ye watergames khelte firenge, Mai nahi aa raha.
Riya: Ana ho o aao nahi to car ke keys dedo
Arjun: Nahi chalo mai bhi chalta hu
Riya: chalo chalte hai
Water park me Riya khoob enjoy karti hai, Par Arjun Khamakha hi bheeg jaata hai, aur Riya bhi use bhighane ki koi mouka nahi chodti hai.
Isse Arjun apne aap ko bachane ke koshish me lag jata hai, par wo bhi Riya ke sath milke khelne lagta hai aur Khelte khelte sham ho jati hai aur wahan ka timings khatam ho jati hai. Riya aur Arjun waha se bahar aate hai.

Arjun: To aage kaha jana hai
Riya: Pata nahi
Arjun: Mai kahi le chalun?
Riya: Kahan?
Arjun: Kapu Beach chale kya?
Riya: chalo chalte hai

They Reach the Kapu Beach

Arjun aur Riya Samundar ke kinare ret me baite hai..
Riya: Tumse Kuch puchoon?
ARJUN: ha kaho
Riya: Hum dost ke haisiyat se hi is vacation pe aaye hai na?
Arjun: Ha bilkul
Riya: To phir mandir me tumne mujhe utaya kyu?
Arjun: Ek dost doosri dost ke liye itna bhi nahi kar sakta kya?
Riya: Accha jee dostiii...!
Arjun: Haan jee. . .
Aur Arjun is tareeke se Riya ke sawal ko taal jaata hai
AND THE DAY ENDS

New Day New Start:
Arjun: Aaj Kaha jaane ka plan hai?
Riya: Abbey falls
Pic of abbey falls

Arjun: To chale
Riya: Chalo.
Ariya ki car Falls ke kareeb hota hai ki waha ek Cycle repair shop hoti hai.
Riya: Roko Roko Gadi roko.
Arjun: Kyun?
Riya: Bas roko
Arjun: Kya ye repair shop wala tumhara ristedar hai?
Riya: Tumse jitna kaha jaye tum bas utna hi karo.
Arjun gadi rokta hai, Riya gadise utar jati hai.
Arjun Riya Ka wait kar raha hai, tabhi Riya ek cycle leke aati hai.
Riya: Arjun aajao cycle me baito.
Arjun: kya?
Riya: Tumhe koi baat ek hi baar me samaj nahi aata kya. Maine kaha cycle ke aage ke roll me baito.
Arjun Chup chap cycle ke aage bait jaata hai.
Aur Riya cycle chalana start karti hai.
Pic from the movie:

Arjun khushi se man hi man uchal raha hai, aur ek alag si world me jaa chuka hai,
BG song:
Ae kaash ke hum
Arjun apni dreamland me mast hai tabhi Riya cycle Break lagati hai aur Arjun wapis duniya me aata hai.
Riya falls ki taraf ishara karte hue: wo dekho

Riya: Mai bachpan se hi us paar jaana chahti thi, par kabhi nahi jaa saki, Kya tum mujhe us paar le jaoge?
Arjun ye mouka kaise chook sakta tha. .
Arjun: Ha bilkul.
Arjun Riya ko Sahara dete hue fall ke top pe le jata hai(upar ke photo me pani bhara hua hai aur kuch season me toda pani rehta hai tab upar ja sakte hai)
Riya: Mai pehli baar yaha ayi hu.
I Love You for this
These are the words which Riya Said in excitement
Arjuns Mindvoice: Anjane me hi Sahi Isne mujhe I love you bola, thank you bhagwan.
Thodi der waha enjoy karne ke bad dono Wapis aate hai.
Aur yahi pe in dono ka vacation khatma back to work

Ek hafte baad Arjun office aa raha hai
Sameer: Are mere yaar tu aagaya, Missed you so much bro and hugs.
Arjun: Itna emotional kyu ho raha hai hum dono dost hai koi behane(sisters) nahi.
Sam: Tu to aise bolega hi, tujhe nayi dost jo mili hai.
Khair chodo ye bata kuch baat bani tum dono ki beech?
Arjun narrates whole story.
Sameer: wah bhai bohut improvement hai,
Mai tho baas yahi chahta hu, tum dono aise hi aage bado Aur Wo Prem Chopra kabhi tum logon ke zindagi me na aye
Arjun: I hope so
Tabhi Peon waha pe aata hai: Arjun sir Bahar aapka koi wait kar raha hai.
Arjun: Koun?
Peon: Wo apne aap ko Prem Chopra keh raha tha.
Both Arjun and Sameer Shockingly: Kya. . . . . .? ? ?
To be continued

There may many mistakes and loopholes in the story. JUST TAKE IT AS A FICTIONAL STORY NOTHING MORE.
There will be 1 or 2 more parts.
So i wil make this as SS.
Thank you
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