MJHT Season 2..Mayur SS 2/4... last chapter.. - Page 8

Originally posted by: LuvArTi4ever

Amazing update...

This is exactly the same that I felt...

Samrat and gunjan are given all the freedom.. I just at times laughed at my father ..wao .. mayank was never given a chance and samrat who has all the reason not to trust has given a full flash not only chance but all he wants... why so unfair to him..

I so wished k Mayank bauji ko dekhaye that he is the best... And I know this will happen in ur story... luving ur story alot ❤️ Waiting for the next part... continue soon

And one more thing I just luv ur writing style 😳

Originally posted by: GauriLuvsRP

Hi Fiza

Such a beautiful update...😊

I had always loved the way of ur writing...😃

wished they could have shown this track rather than the accident one...

Gauri

Originally posted by: gopi06

awesome updt fiza
this is what i want to see in mayur story after their marriage ..understanding & trust for each other
cont soon
thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: Sara92.

awesome update

Originally posted by: ratibob007

Amazing update.

Thanks for the pm dear.

Originally posted by: shafy_MN

awesome..

awesome part..

Loved Nupur's point of respect..

I think it's now Mayank turn to shaow Bauji that he actually deserve Nupur and they both are happy with each other..and now he should accept them..as he knew how much Nupur crave for her father's love..

Originally posted by: Angle.

i really hate Nupur's Dad
but feel proud for both mayank and Nupur

Originally posted by: -Meri-

now i m waiting for mayur's meeting after 3 long years

Originally posted by: Bhatakti_atma

nice

Originally posted by: Pia-

wonderful
please do update next part soon

Originally posted by: Sara92.

felt bad for nupur
she had suffered a lot
hope this time mayur will prove that how much this marriage was successful for them

Originally posted by: shimu1

jaldi mayur ko m ulaqat karwa do

Originally posted by: kirti123

sorry for late comment
wow mayur season 2
awesome dear
both the parts were lovely hate nupurs dad
finally they will meet after 3 yrs
shilpa aunty is lovely
continue soon thanks for the pm

Originally posted by: Faria.

i sooo sorryyy yaar- i know i m very late to comment here..
dil se sorryyy

btw thank u so much fiza for writing a new version of season2 of mjht

bilkul wasie jaise hum dekhna chate the
a strong , adorable , pyaari se mayur
jin dono ko ek dusre pe varosa hai.
apni pyaar par biswas hai. jo ek dusre ko itna pyaar karte hai ki pyaar ki takat o se koi bhi jung larne k liye tayar hai., jo dur reh kar bhi paas tha

i really loved the way u built this story which us very much logical
ab mayur ko mulaqat hoga.. aur main dekhna chati hu ki nautanki nupur apni mayu ki welcome kaise karte hai..
i want to see a mature mayur lekin plz Mayu ko wo thoda sadu akdu n nupur ko wo bubbly , chulbuli present karna ..
waiting for next part

Chapter: 3

Finally I m here... closing my eyes and took a deep breath inhaling the fragrance of getting home ...

Mayank: home..

Samrat: welcum back dude...

He hited my shoulder and I turned to look at smarat.. man he is looking much more mature in this formal wear and wht specks.. OMG... chasmish k chasmish.. wah

I hugged him instantly missed all my friends there teasing , our fun.. all that.. it feels so good to have a warmth of a friend around u... it feels ur not alone anymore..

Mayank: yeah kya hua... tu tu bara shareef aur sudhara hua lag raha hai.. aur uper se chasmish tu bhi...

We laughed and shred a high five...

Samrat: kya kero yaar... pyar ny seedha kerdiya... and pyar mein tu log bnawas lay laity hain.. he pointed to mayank.. and he shocked his head... mein ny tu sirf chasma hi pehna hai..

Mayank: tu aur teri saali.. filmi k filmi hi rahna

Samrat: han aur tu aur teri saali.. sadu k sadu hi rehna...

We laughed and he took my luggage to his car..

Mayank: aray mein kerlo k yaar

Samrat: nhi nhi ap abhi abhi aay ... thora footage tu khaa... Style maar...

Mayank: teri yeah baatein I really missed them yaar...

Samrat: acha really... aur mjhy se pooch tu .. do do morena problems k sath tu mjh bichary masoom se larky ko akela chor ker chala gaya... By god meri tu halat hi karab hogi...

Mayank: laughed at him... teri morena girl masom hai ..samjha..

Samrat: acha yani tu nupur ko chalak aur problem kah rah hai.. had hai mayank tu teen sal baad aya aur yeah bol raha hai

Mayank: hogaya tu shuro woh bhi airport per hi... Tu ny paka plan ker rekha hai mjhy nupur se maar khelwany ka haina..

Samrat: han tu I missed it so much.. nupur k o woh "dekho mayank"

Aur phr tumhara " kab se dekhi tu raha hoo"..

We laughed remembering old days...and talked so much to our way back home...

Samrat: wasy tu is mature, formal look me kafi hundsum lagraha hai... acha hau college mein larkyoon ny tujhy asay nhi dekha

Mayank: han aur college ki larkyana aj tujhy asay dekhy gi tu behoosh hojay gi...

Samrat: out house mein kyun yaar aj tu tu meray ghar rah saktay hai..khabi tu mjhy kisi laiq samhja ker ..

Mayank: asai baat nhi hai samrat... bus mein jaha sab kuch chor ker gaya tha wahin se sab shoro kerna chata hoon samrat... wasy bhi ab tu kafi kuch badal gaya hai.. mjhy apartment layna hai.. jisay settle kerni hai... yaha sab set kerna hai ... nupur ajay tu us k sath pasand kerolo ga... PA kafi dekhy thy .. 4 finalize kiyan hain let see nupur k kya pasnd ata hai...

Samrat: kya baat hai Mr Sharma.. ap tu baray loog hogay hain... ab tu apki PA se appointment layna paray ga... wasy kasi hai .. hot hai kya...

Mayank: haan buht hot hai.. kuch around 50 saal ki hai bus..

Samrat: abay hat... Tu khabi nhi suhdayr.. I mean baghiray ga...

Mayank: samrat yaha sab..

Samrat: dekh mayank mein yeah tu nhi khao ga yaha sab perfect tha.. but I think aj tu yeah sab na soch .. sirf yeah soch k nupur arahi hai aur tujhy KYA KYAA.. kerna hai ..

Mayank: socho ga tu kero ga kasay...

Samrat: abay... Wah America ki hawa tu ny woh kiya jo guru samrat bhi na ker saka...

The both laughed and the reached the out house... and he smiled...

Samart: ach tu mein chalta hoon.. chasmish bhi kal aay gi tum dono se milny

Mayank: kyunm

Samrat: aray ek tu hum sab tum dono ko privacy day rahy hain...

I chukled yet I have to thank him for tht...

Mayank: thanks yaar.. kyun k sach khao tu mjhy srriouly aj koi bhi nhi chaiy around us... it has been 3 years..

Samrat: I know tujh kasa feel horaha hai... per the hard time is over.. ready hoja .. teri jhasi k rani k flight land kerny hi wali hogi.. wasy us ko mein ny bataya hai k teri flight delay hogi hai aur tu us k baad land keray ga.. surprise bhi tu koi chees hai nah..

Maaynk: chukled.. thanks...

Sanart: chal kal milty hain... take care have fun..

He took a deep breath and open the door to samrat's out house... home it is... he opned his arms stretching suddenly all the hard work and all the things he had seen in past years ..suddenly the tiredness was cuming in to him... maybe this is wht home makes u feel.. urself...

Placing his things in went into the kitchen and chuckled .. they had so many best time here.. there fights at how bad she cooks.. though she learned and was improving every day.. she hiting with the spoon...

Nupur: tum khud khana bana lo nah... mjh se shadi kyun ki bolo.. kisi bawarchan se shadi kertay nah

Mayank: chief u mean

Nupur: han wohi... dekho mayank shamra is ghar mein rahna hai tu asay hi khaoo... samjhy warna khud bany ..bulky thik hai kal se tumhi bano ga ..huh...

And than metling her with little sorry and bribing with intimacy... she was always so easily to get back.. cause she knew I love irrating her.. our fights are always wht make us what we are.. and as diya always says... "lar rahy hai isk matlab sab thik hai"...

Friends ho tu asay.. the house is perfectly clean, lunch and dinner is placed and kitchen is full of all wht we will be needing .. great.. and then I hited my head with my hand... samrat and his idea of romance.. unbelievable...

Our room is almost giving the feel of honeymoon suite.. with fragrance candles not lightened yet.. rose petals. On the floor... a red bed cover just imagine red... gross.. the wall behaving our bed being decor fully with flowers .. with words " welcum back Mr n Mrs Sharma" and there is one of very few wedding pics we have...

I love samrat for clicking this picture, when we were romancing in the college hiding from them all...

My cell ringing took my attention and I smiled so much at the name flashing...

Mayank: helo maa kasi hoo... I m back...

She chukled.. she can hear the happiness in my voice n me too... I missed her lap her hand.. her talks .. my strong support in her ...

Shilpa: haan mayu .. ur back.. mein bulkily thik hoon.. tu thik hai .. flight thik thi...

Mayank: han maa mein bulkily thik hon.. flight bhi thik thak thi... long n tiring yet ab sab thik hai.. aur ap jaldi yaha ajay bus.. Enough of apki job n all...

Shilpa: soch lay bacho.. mein agai tu teri aur nupur ki privacy k kya hoga...

Mayank: tension maat lo maa apka hi beta hoon... 3500 sq yards k apartment dekha hai ..woh bhi duplex... tu privacy hi privacy..

Shilpa: tu pagal hogaya hai kya... itna bara... mayank janti ho k tu aj acha kamany laga hai per asay ura maat..

Mayank: maa ap yeah tension k kaha karach kerna hai aur kitna kerna hai tum mjhy per chordo.. ap aur nupur bus enoy kero... behorsa rukho ura nhi raha hoon..i can really afford... apk betay ko employee of the year k award mila hai... tu us k bonus se ghar tu lay sakta hoon na... baqi kuch installment chaly jay ga...

Shilpa: aray wah congrats... nupur nhi aai hai ap tak lagta hai...

Mayank: nhi .. abhi tak tu nhi ..

Shilpa: hay hay mera majnu... kasi awaz low hogai... ati hoi gi.. achy se kayal rekhna us ko samjhy...

Mayank: ji bulkily...

Shilpa: mein rekhti hoon...

Mayank: love ya... aur ap bus foran aaooo pls maa

Shilpa: love ya too beta... han han mein ati hoon..

Uff... yeah 2 hrs nhi guzar rahy... I feel like this clock is not moving ..and donot laugh at me I have actually checked it ..its working... and now I m laughing...

" hum keray gay kya"

" acha tu tumahin tv dekhna hai"

And I cant stop laughing now... OMG.. this can be done just my nupur.. making already nervous me hell nervous... but her question now when I think was hilarious... God how can sumone be so innocent and cute... a girl who was actually seducing me infornt of those tv man..was not getting wht I was saying... but ya the tv people part...uff... tht was so god embarrassing.. more than for me... it was dam embarrassing for her... it give me so much fun evrytime I pull her leg on this...

God nupur yeah flight kab land hogi apki...

And here cums my adhi garwali's call

Mayak: hello Sali sahiba... how r u...

Gunjan: heloo... good jiju sirrr.. ek min rukhy mera cell

She put it on speaker...

Gunjan: han ji ab bolaein aksay hain app

Mayank: jab mei poch raha tha kya chaiy tu bataya kyun nhi cell karab hogaya hai..

Gunjan: jiju yeah acha kasha tha woh samrat hai nah.. us ny...

Mayank: us ny kya... agay k part tu zayda interesting sound ker raha hai...

Gunjan: jiju ap bhi nah.. kasay hain ...aur kya horaha hai

Mayank: mein bulkily thik hoon aur intezar horaha hai...

Gunjan was in morena this moment.. she will b cuming back tomorrow as per strick instruction of samrat .. so that they will have a day with eachother... bauji who has heard about mayank' arrival was actually feeling strange to be happy tht finally his daughter will have wht she wants or to be still feel little scared .. is this man is right for her.. who just consider his ambitions more.. not worry about his wife...

He was passing by when he heard gunjan talking to him and stop to listen wht they are upto

Gunjan: di ati hi hogi.. samrat k msg aya tha di ny land kerliya hai...

Mayank: hmm.. 3 saal guzar gay.. 3 ghante nhi guzar rahy..

Gunjan: wah jiju yeah tu mjhy record kerna chaiy tha.. by god ap tu bulkily di k raj ki tarah baat ker rahy ho...

Mayank: chukled.. ya ya.. acha yeah bato bauji aur bui kasay hain...

Gunjan: bulkily thik hai .. bauji ko jo doctor apny abtaya tha un se consultant kiya hai.. kafi better hai..

Mayank: good... kcuh medicine mein ny waha baat ki thi tu unhony di hain .. mein laya hoon tum aao gi tu tum lay jana thik hai... was doctor se meri baat hoi thi kafi detail mein .. koi problem nhi hai .. buss stress hai..

Gunjan: thanks jiju... bauji jasay bhi keray ap

Mayank: gunjan... bauji hai ..aur hum ny jo kiya us per naraz hai .. bus.. aur mera yun bahar asay chaly jana .. kisi bhi parent ko dara sakta hai..

He was really shocked listening to this talk... is he pretending to be nice.. but than why he will take the pain of talking to doctors in America and consultant about his health .. maybe nupur forced him.. he shrugged it all..

Mayank: gunjan I think they are here.. I will talk to u later..

Gunjan: oky bye .. have fun jiju...

Mayank: tum kal aao saali... mein achy se bata ta hoon..

...

The car horn made me look out th window and I can see her back..gosh I m feeling myself going weak... Feels so like a dream...