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Posted: 11 years ago
#81

Originally posted by: angel_luvkreya

kriya is back wid neha and vishaka

nd shivam also wid them

reyansh pov ws nice
update soon nd plz pm me


thnk u..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: K.R_ackraal

Abhii that wass... amzingg

HMM im happy hayeee teeno girlsss back..
Hmm nYC bt teeno narazzz 😭...
Plzzz sabka patch up jaldiii... jaldiii..
cant wait... :) uPdatee sooon..


thnk u di..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#83
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Posted: 11 years ago
#84

Originally posted by: smileysmi

Wonderful start...
Complete it fast ..


thnk u..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#85

Originally posted by: aroma.arsha

amazing

keep it up
i don't believe its ur 1st work
i loved it
can't wait for update
update soon


aro dii this is not ma 1st work bt 1st os
btw thnk u..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: sweetydiyafrien

the three girls who left are back in college with that shivam
and the whole gang came to know from other students and
are shocked to see them with that shivam and three girls left to locker room
and try to console neha and rey angry on kriya that why she is back
and sharon is busted out her angty in rh and swayan is in no state to speak...
it really different and interest... do continue soon and pm me


thnk u soo much..😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#87
LAST PART


Next day in college
All lousian(expect rey) were present in canteen with confusion cleary written on there face
All where quite no one was saying anything
Suddenly swayam spoke up "REY..?? guyzz rey kaha hai..??
"pata nhi swayam kal se kriya ke aane ke baat mujhe wo dikha hi nhi hai"
Said Vicky sadly
"guyzz I hope ki wo thik ho.."
Sharon said with full cxoncern visible on her face for her best frnd
"koun thik ho..??"
Said rey entering the canteen all smiling smiling as if nothing happened yesterday
"rey kidhar that u..??"
Swayam asked
"me idhar hi tha..wo chod guyzz aaj rehearsal nhi karni kya..??
Rey change the topic
All were shocked to see the sudden change in reys behavior but swayam understood that rey was doing this perpously as he don't want to be weak in front of everyone
At that time kriya and shivam entered the canteen
They both were fighting like 5 year old children
"Shivam me ne kaha na mujhe de.."
Said kriya
"nhi donga kya karegi tu"
Shivam replied back
"koi nhi dega me ne kaha na mujhe chaiye"
Kriya spoked
"nhi-"
Shivam was going to speak but was interrupted by vishakha
"kya guyzz tum dono bhi baacho ki tarah lad rahe ho grow up guyzz"
This all was seen by the lousian
Rey was in ful of anger seeing shivam nd kriya together
Rey went out of the canteen and all the other gang followed him
They went to rehearsal hall
~*~*~
IN REHARSAL HALL
"I cant beleave kriya move on and that with that jerk shivam"
Said Sharon in anger
"I seriously I cant believe it"
Said swayam
"guyzz leave it na humlog uske bare me kyu baat kar rahe hai..??"
Said rey suddenly
All looked at rey with confusion he was angry a miniute before and now so cool
"guyzz I mean we all know how is baat- I mean kriya she used me and now may be she must be using shivam It must be ussaly for her"
This all was listened by shivam, vishakha & neha
"Stop it guyzz"
Shivam yelled at them in anger
"Shivam inn pe chilake kuch nhi hoga.."
Said neha
"ya she is right shivam leave it..wese bhi they don't deserve friend like kriya"
"haan vishakha tumne sach bola we don't deserve friend like kriya joh itne eiasly move on hogyi wo bhi iss shivam ke saat"
Said Sharon
"Sharon I nd kriya r not in relation"
Said shivam clearing the misunderstanding
"shivam let it be yaar..thier is no need to say anything to them"
Said vishakha
"u saying right vishakha"
Neha also supported vishakha
"guyzz I don't beleave u both u both r taking said of kriya nd shivam"
Said swayam
"no swayam I don't beleave u nd rey..swayam tum toh kriya ko apna best frnd mante the na..?? and rey tum toh use pyaar karte the na..?? toh kidhar gya tumhara pyaar..?? kidhar gyi tumhari frndship..??"
Vishakha shouted in anger
"me toh use sach me pyaar karta tha..magar use mujhe use kiya"
Rey said in anger
"nhi rey use tujhe use nhi kiya wo tujhe se pyaar karti hai..this problems are all because of me only"
Said shivam
Rey was shocked to here this he asked
"wht do u mean by shivam..??"
Shivam told everything wht happened frm the day before elemation till the pre-valentine nite
All were having tears in their eye and this truth affected rey & swayam too the core.
this all was heard by taani who was standing behind shivam
"kriya ne ye sab humare liye kiya..??"
Swayam spoked out
Rey was highly shocked after learning the truth to react
"haan swayam kriya doing this all fr us"
Said neha
"kriya ne itna sab kuch humareliye kiya aur me use hi galat samjh raha tha..me uska best frnd hona deserve nhi karta hoo.."
Said swayam
"bhai aap esa kyu bol rahe ho..?? isme apki koi galti nhi hai"
All were shocked to see taani over here
"taani tum yaha..??"
Said swayam
"haan bhai me yaha..aur mene sab sun liya hai bhai..kriya sach me bohot achi ladki hai (she turn and moved towards rey) rey aap keliye mujhese jada kriya achi ladki hai shayad me aap se itna pyaar nhi karsakti hoo jitna unhone kiya aapse door rehe kar"
Said taani smiling
"magar me baatcutter ka pyaar deserve nhi karta"
Said rey and went away frm there
"taani ye tum kya bol rahi ho..?? tum rey se pyaar karti ho na..??"
Asked swayam in shocked
"haan bhai me rey se pyaar karti ho magar kriya jitna nhi"
Taani said
Swayam just smiled at his sister
"magar taani wo tumhara promise..??"
Asked Sharon suddenly
"bha- I mean Sharon mene rey se promise liya tha ki wo kisi aur ladki se pyaar nhi karenge magar kriya toh unka dil hai wo aapne dil se pyaar karna kese chod sakte hai..??"
Said taani
All where happy to see taani's this guester
~*~*~
Rey after leaving the rehearsal hall straight away went to fire exit
But there was kriya already present over there in her deep thoughts
Rey went inside and took hold of kriyas arms and said
"kyu baatcutter kyu bola tumne itna bada jhoot..??
Kriya was shocked to see rey this much angered
"ko- koun sa jh-jhoot..??"
Kriya stammered due to fear
"ki tumne mujhe use kiya"
Said rey rather than shouted
Rey gripped kriya's amrs more tightly it was paining her tears came out of her eye
As soon as rey saw the tears he loosen the grip and wipped away the tear
"baatcutter kyu tum mujhse itna pyaar karti ho ki saar pain khud hi sehen kar rahi ho..??"
Kriya was silent she was not uttering a word & this was killing rey frm inside
"baatcutter..??"
Rey said cupping her face with both hands
Kriya was looking down
"baatcuter plzz look aat me"
Rey agn spoke agn this time kriya looked up
And they were looked in the beautiful eye lock
Rey pinned the hair behind the near lobe which were disturbing their eye lock
"m sorry rey"
Said kriya breaking their eye lock
"no baatcutter I m sorry me pagal ho joh mene tumhari wo baat sach manli..m sorry I knw I don't deserve ur forgiveness nd ur lov-"
Kriya put her finger on his lips and said
"rey its not ur mistake I only wanted to u to move on and don't ever dare to say that u don't deserve ma love"
Rey smiled at this baatcutter and said
"I love u baatcutter"
"I love u too linecutter"
And they both hugged each other passionately
They were hugging each other fr god knws how much time
They both broked the hug rey kissed on kriya's forehead and they both left fire exit hand in hand and went towards rehersal hall"
~*~*~
Rey and kriya enter the rehearsal hall together all smiling smiling
Swayam came forward and hugged his best friend and said
"m sorry kriya m realy sorry"
"Its ohk swayam now everything is back to normal right"
Neha went towards Vicky and said
"babu m sorry fr behaving rude with u.."
Vicky hugged her tightly and said
"its ohk kaggu"
Shivam went towards taani and said
"taani m sorry fr wht I did last time but I some where realy started liking you can u give me ane more chance..??"
All were looking at taani for the answer
"taani shivam is saying truth I can grantee u"
Said kriya
Taani smiled at her and said "yes" to shivam
They also hugged eachother
Then the hole gang hugged each other shouting "DIL DOSTI DANCE"

~*~*~

THE END

~*~*~
Hope u guyzz like it
Do hit like tab & leave ur reviews back
guyzz i knw bohot faltu ending hai magar mujhe kuch aur socha nhi
PM later

Edited by Abhilashaarsha - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#88
res
unres!!!!
yay me third officially and second unofficially!!!
yyaaayyy
waise cuming to the updat finally u updated it!;!;
nice loved it!!;!!
Shivam kria ki fight lol nice
and Rey ka behaviour different and finally truth is out and kriyaansh ka sweet Sa confession!!!!
swayam and his bestie!!! Happy to see,them!!!
^and Taani Shivam nice pair!!!
Edited by krishaluv - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#89
Nice part ..
Great ending ..
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Posted: 11 years ago
#90
Awesome

Amazing

Superb

Fab

Splendid

I always loved Shivam-taani together :)

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