FF ~~THE UNTOLD CUTE LOVE STORY~~ PRECAP PG 106 - Page 11

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very nice update sweety...👏
...story moves so practically...👏 👏
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Nice update sweety. 👏
Vichu leave kuduthathula entha plan um illaye. Project ah ivanga kita kudukra mari kuduthu ethavathu plan pannrara?
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Waiting waiting waiting for the next parts!!
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CHAPTER 20

AT KARTHIK'S HOME (BANGALORE):

Karthik's parents are very happy to see him. They welcome him and Vishnu with more anxiety. Since they have met after a long time, they keep chatting till late in the night.

NEXT DAY:

After lunch, Karthik and Vishnu go and hang out, do some shopping and all and have fun together. At a shopping mall, they meet their college friend Chandru who says that he is working in Bangalore. He insists that Vishnu should stay with him as long as he is there in Bangalore. Vishnu tries to convince him that he would visit him next time, but Chandru doesn't listen. All the three hang out and return to karthik's home in the night. After dinner Vishnu leaves with Chandru saying Karthik that he'll meet him directly at the airport on Tuesday evening.

Before going to bed, Karthik tries Raji's phone, she doesn't answer. He then notices that she had messaged him "Good Night" an hour ago. He thinks of calling her the next day and goes to sleep.

SATURDAY:

In the afternoon:

Karthik's mother comes to him and says..."kannaa... appo oda branch manager ku innaikku retirement function. Ellaaraiyum family oda vara solli irukkaanga. Evening 4 ku bank le irukkanum, neeyum variyaa?"

Karthik: illai maa... Neenga poyittu vaanga.

Mom: appo ... naan appa vukku phone panni naan varalai nnu sollidaren.

Karthik: en maa? Ellaarum family oda varuvaanga. Appa mattum thaniyaa irundhaa nallaa irukkaathumma...

Mom: veetle nee thaniyaa iruppiye...

Karthik: maaa... naan enna chinna kozhandhaiyaa... Neenga poyittu vandhidunga ... Night naama dinner ku velile polaam.

Mom: sari daa...

She gets ready and leaves for the function.

Karthik calls Raji...

AT RAJI'S HOME:

Raji's father is sleeping on his bed and Raji is reading some magazine sitting in a chair beside the cot. He wakes up and asks for water. She goes to the kitchen to bring water. Her phone rings...

He stretches his hand and tries to take the phone ringing on the table beside his cot, but it slides, he tries again but could only touch it and the answer key gets pressed.

Karthik was about to say "hello", but stops hearing Raji saying "appaa naan varathukulla enna avasaram... enna panreenga?"

He realizes that she is with her father and thinks to cut the call... but as he was so desparate to hear her voice he continues to hear their conversation...

Raji: naan thanni konduvarathukulla enna avasaram? Table le enna thedareenga?

Appa: un phone adichuthu Raji maa... athaan edukkalaam nu parthen. Yaaru nnu paarumaa...

Raji: irukkattum paa.. naan appuramaa pesikkaren...

Appa: edhaavadhu mukkiyamaana vishayamaa irukkapothu maa... Yaarunnu parthu pesidu maa...

Raji: paravaa illai paa... naa appuramaa pesikkaren...

Appa: Raji maa... nee kochikka le nna oru vishayam pesanum...

Raji: naaan en paa unga kitta kochikka poren? Enna vishayam nu sollunga paa..

Appa: ellaam un kalyaana vishayam thaan maa...

Raji: adhukku enna paa ippo avasaram? Modhalle ungalukku operation nallabadiyaa mudinji udambu sari aagattum... appuramaa pesikkalaam.

Appa: adille Raji maaa...

Raji: enna paa bayam ungalukku? Unga viruppam illaame naan kalyaanam pannikka maatten paa...

Appa: Raji maa... Enakku unna pathi bayam illai daa... kavalai thaan...

Raji: enna kavalai?

Appa: enakku edhaavadhu aayiduchinna ... Nee enna pannuve nnu thaan maa..

Raji: appa ungalukku onnum aagaathu paa...

Appa: oru velai aayiduchi nna?

Raji: adhukku?

Appa: adhille daa... annaikku naan ICU le irunthappo... Enakku udambu sari aaganum nu kooda ninaikkaama, un periappa, athai ellarum en uyir porathukulla un kazhuthula thaali eridanum nu evvalo amarkalam pannaanga... nee azhuthukitte irundhe... adhaan ennoda bayam...

Raji: puriyumbadiyaa sollunga paa...

Appa: Raji maa... nee sandai podarathum, kova padarathum en kitta mattum thaana daa... mathavanga kitte ellaam edhirthu kooda pesa maatte... appa unnai appadi mariyathai solli kuduthu valarthutten daa... ippo adhuve unakku kashtamaa mudiyumo nnu thaan bayappadaren...

(he takes a deep breath and continues...)

Annaikku... appa pozhaichu varanume nnu nee azhudhittu irukke... un periappa vum athaiyum unakku kalyaanam pannidanum nu thudikkaraanga... Un amma vukku avangalai ethirkura dhairiyam illai... Naalaikku naan sethupoyittaa kooda adhe nilamai thane daa... en kavalai ellaam kazhuthula thaali yerinaa pothum nu kandavanukku unnaiya katti vachu un vaazhkaiyai veenaakkida poraanga nnu thaan...

Raji: appadi ellaam neenga bayappadaatheenga paa... ungalukku onnum aagaathu... neenga gunamaagi oore viyandhupora maathiri enakku kalyaanam pannuveenga... sariyaa?

Appa: oruvelai appa pohaichu varalennaa?

Raji: naan ammaavai parthukittu kadaisi varaikkum unga ponna ve vaazhnthudaren paa...

Appa: enna maa... neee... otha pulla ... kalyanam, kudumbam nu illaame ... patta maramaa ninnuduven nu solre? Un vaayaalai appadi ellaam sollathe daa...

Raji: sari paa... naan kalyaanam pannikkaren... aanaa modhalle ungalukku udambu sari aaganum.

Appa: enakku naan aaspathiri le irundhu uyiroda thirumbi varuven nu nambikkai ille daa...

Raji: appadi ellaam pesadheenga paa... summa irunga.

He keeps quiet.

Raji: appaa... neenga kova pada maatten na ... naan unga kitta oru vishayam sollanum...

Appa: sollu daa... appa kitta solla ethukku thayangare?

Raji: enakku ... adhu vanthu...

(karthik gets tensed... he thinks..."enna panraa iva... Pattunnu solliduvaalo")

Appa: enna Raji maa?

Raji: enakku yaarai yaavathu pidichirukku nnu sonnaaa...

Appa: yaaraiyaavathu kalyaanam kattikkanum nu aasai padariyaa daa?

Raji: orutharai pidichirukku... aana unga sammatham illaame edhuvum nadakkathu paaa...

Appa: Yaaru maa? Namma sonthathulaiyaa? Illai nna Office le kooda velai parkuraangalaa?

Raji: solren paa... enakku pidichirukku... oru velai ungalukku pidikkalainnaa?

Appa: unakku pidichirukku ille? Indha ulagathula un santhoshathai vida mukkiyam vera edhuvum illai daa...

Raji: jaathi, matham, anthasthu nnu veraya irundhaa?

Appa: Paiyyan nallavanaa irunthu unnai anbaa parthukitta podhum daa enakku...

Raji: periappa othukkalai nnaa?

Appa: adhellaam oru prachanai yaa? Unnai padikka vaikkarathe yaarukkum viruppam illai... pathaavadhu mudicha udane katti kudukkanum nu sonnanga le... appa thane sandai pottu padikka vachu velaikkum poga vachen... appadiye idhuvum pannidalaam... Ippo sollu... yaarumaa?

Raji: adhu unga udambu sari aanathukappuram thaan solluven... idhukku mele edhuvum kekkaatheenga... naan solla maatten...

Appa: sari ... intha maasa kadaisiyile namma kaaliyamman kovil thiruvizha varudhu illai... appo un office le kooda velai seyyaravangalai namma oorukku vara sollu... avangaloda antha paiyyanaiyum koottittu vaa... naan parthu pesaren... appuram mudivu pannalaam...

Raji: appaa..

Appa: sari... raji maa... oru velai enakku antha paiyanai pidikkale nna ?

Raji: neenga sammathicha thaan paa kalyaanam...

Appa: naan venaa nnu sonnaa..

Raji: naan kalyaaname pannikka maatten paa... antha paiyyane ye illai... vera yaaraiyume..

Appa: en Raji maa?

Raji: manasula oruthanai sumanthukittu innoruthanoda kudumbam nadathurathu paavam paa... thaali kattinavanukku seyyara dhrogam ... adhu ennaale oru podhum panna mudiyaadhu paa... Neenga othukitta naan viruppa pattavanaiye kalyaanam pannikkaren... illennaa... kadaisi varaikkum unga ponnaa ve irunthuttu poyidaren... Ennoda intha mudivula entha maatram illai paa...

Appa: sari daa... naan konja neram thoongaren...

Raji: neenga edhaiyum kozhaippikkaatheenga paa ... ellaam nalla badiyaa nadakkum... neenga thoongunga.

He closes his eyes. Her mother comes in.

Amma: enna paappa idhellaam?

Raji: enna?

Amma: appa vukku pidikkalai nna?

Raji: ammmaaa... Raji maa kku pidichadhu edhu innai varaikkum appavukku pidikkaama poyirukku?

Amma: adhu sari... nee poyi konja neram Aachi kitta pesittiru ... naan appa kitte irukken.

She takes her phone and goes out. Her father opens his eyes, looks at his wife and smiles.

Karthik cuts the call and thinks..."en raasathi...ennamaa pesure neee!!!"

He recollects Raji's conversation with her father and thinks he should not have heard it..." Pesaame phone cut panni irundha nimmadhiyaa irundhirukkalaam... ippo meesai nammala parthu enna react pannu vaar nu theriyaliye... irukkura tension pathaadhu nnu ...unakku thevaiyaa daa karthi idhu ippo?" he questions himself.


Chapter 21 ... coming soon...


CHAPTER 21


Edited by sweety16 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Thats a nice update sweety./..love it..
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Posted: 12 years ago
very nice part sweety...👏

loved the way raji talked to her dad...this raji is too smart...👏
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Posted: 12 years ago
awesum plz update d nxt part tody itself
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice one Sweety ..
Meesai romba nallavara iurkare..ponnu sonna yosikiraare..😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wow Raji informed her dad that she is in love 😲😃. Her dad is really a pasakara appa.. Story romba interesting and thrill'ah iruku sweety. U are a talented writer. Eagerly waiting for the next update.
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Posted: 12 years ago
Raji telling her dad everything and Meesai agreeing wow super!

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