ARSHi SS: DEAL?#2|| **COMPLETED**- Page 15

awww...its beautiful writing dear...
read all the chapters in one go n enjoyed reading every bit of it...
plxxx continue writing on arhi...

Hey di,

i kno i'm extremely late and duh. I''m the one to be blamed.. But usually i'm like this on Last chaps.. I can't find the words good enough and its always a lost battle to think something.. Anything that'll show how much it meant to me..

Writing all this ryt now, is super difficult as at each word, i halt and think.. Think of any word.. Any damn thing dat'll say i don't want it! I don't want it to end.. I just don't!


How can i not read it before..? I read it the day you posted it! Atleast 2 times more after that, knowing that u'll want to read what i think, par main kya karun?


I found you through this deal.. I talked you frst becuz of this deal and now we hav a 'Rishtaa' 😉 all becuz of this deal!

So Deal is soo close to me, that evrytym i've commented here, i've tried.. Tried hard to let you know how elated your words have made me feel..

This time i wanted No less! But this stupid Brain of mine, can't think of anythng good.. So here i write all my heart says.. Usually these sort of things ppl write in Epilogue, lekin i'm different!

This song is ringing in my mind, as i write this commnt:

aankhein band kar lun jo main..
Dekhun bas tumhe..

Khawbon mein hi keh sakta hun..
Apna tujhe..
Rehne de..
Mera ye veham..
Na ja abhi..
Pyaar ki ye raat hai..
Ab Na Jaa

if for a moment you felt i care..
Then similar feelings we share..

If i evr made u feel any less..
Then surely i've created a big mess..

Di, this chp for me, isn't abt arshi..
Its abt u and me.. 😊


as for Arnav and Khushi..
Its a start for more fun, more smiles..
More kisses, more blushes..
More anger and much for fights..
More Love, and much more of Arshi..

With all the happiness its revealed..
Deal proposed, is finally Sealed..

With a kiss of promise..
A Hug of Love..
A rain of blessing..
A ring of togetherness..
A forever of Happiness..


P.S: does it says what i feel? 😲
That

mee...


Unres:

i found this chpater, extremely.. Like till the core entertaining! Which makes me realise that i like this Arnav, who is helpless because of his wife! Although a romantic Arnav is heart warming and *blushworthy* but whenever i read this side of Arnav, when its Khushi yielding power on him, taunting him, and ignoring him.. While Arnav is following her like a lost puppy, a whole new world comes to life!!!


But needless to say, Mr. Raizada is at fault! I mean to pure Crime to promise Khushi Salman Khan's delight and then leave her unquenched! Ye to bahut nainsaafi hai! Ab kya clients biwi se pehle aayenge..??

But the tale doesn't ends here, Arnav went ahead by praising a Kheer that Payal made, and the whole effort goes down to drain!!

Matlab seriously Arnav doesn't even remembers the taste of Khushi's badaam Kheer?? 😲 its not necessary to addsome mirchi to make a kheer different, its just the personal touch- that makes the difference!!


Here i think, since the whole thing started off on a Deal, Arnav should try and strike a heat to heart deal this time.. Promising Khushi a forevr of Happiness and Love and in turn asking her presence and smile!! :)

matlab all in all, i think arnav would strike a Deal!

awesome part..
i enjoyed reading it..

oh ho you are back
and we shall have more than one epilogue
what a way to ruin things arnie
he is still hopeless and clueless aint he
seriously does he still ask his jiju for advice on how to woo khushi
what do we do with this man
he shall be the death of khushi
and he kept making things hard for himself
awww so nk is coming
well something got her laughing again
wonder what he has though of now
well what ever it is shall be fun for sure

awesome