ADDICTED!! SEASON 2 - PART 4 - Page 14

agony aunty congrats ❤️🤗
addicted 2..the transitions from present to past & back again to present..loving it all, though enjoying & more excited for the FB- the flow & pace everything is just perfect..every scene written so effectively...anu u r so brilliant , creating magic with "mere" words & able to engage the emotions of readers(can't praise u more :p)..loving the way uve portrayed manvi's pov & now want virat's views too..she did proved , that she was more excited to see him than going to work.. " I wonder if he is just walking into the cafe or into my life - my heart? " .. i just love this line...so impressive ..mannu is so in "awe" of virat...dnt want other office people with them, want virman alone...awesome update..waiting for next!!

Originally posted by: roshreb

agony aunty congrats ❤️🤗

Wow awsum... Manvi is a blush girl, m praying dey should b alone for the club it will b fun. Waiting.

Superb.. am addicted to addicted and I want the next updt asap... Loved how yo described manvis feelings and pov when her eyes met virats... every line had the magic of ur hands... keep writing... and Congrats !!

Awesome updt...okkk f9 ill catch u there on wattpad soon...i hv to make an acct fr that 1st...cont soon

a Vry nice update

update soon

amazing update
loved their meeting at coffee shop

Hawww! Manvi is head over heals on Virat! Totally loving this Manvi! Lol! So shy and Girly! Her reaction to everything he does/says is EPIC!!! Totally loving this!! :D Cant wait for the next update! :D

Awesome update yaar..