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Posted: 12 years ago
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CHAPTER 16

Raji's phone keeps ringing... Karthik, Vishnu and Lakshmi look at each other wondering what to do.

Karthik: Lakshmi.. phone eduthu pesunga..

Lakshmi answers the call... " Appaa... Sollunga paa... naan Lakshmi pesaren... Eppadi irukkeenga? Raji wash room poyirukkaa... sari paa... naan pesa solren... vachidaren paa.. udambu paathukkonga..."

Vishnu: Enna Lakshmi? Enna solraar meesai?

Lakshmi: Raji yai oru thadavai pesa sollumaa nnu kenjuraaru..

Karthik: En ippadi tension aagaraa iva? Avare udambu sariyillaadha aalu...

Lakshmi: Karthik ... pesaama lunch, movie program cancel pannidalaama?

Vishnu: En lakshmi?

Lakshmi: illai.. Raji moode sari illai... ava vandhaalum enjoy panna maattaa... yosichikitte iruppaa... enakkum intha laptop matter mandaiya kudainjitte irukku...

Karthik: illai Lakshmi... polaam... ingeye irundhaa... adhe yosanayaa irukkum.. konjam atmosphere change aana divert aagarathukku chance irukkum..

Vishnu: aamaa Lakshmi... eppadiyum enna vishayam nu naalaikku Madhan partha thaan theriyum... so adhu varaikkum edhukku adhaiye yosikkanum?

Lakshmi: Karthik... ammavukku oru medicine avasaramaa thevai paduthu ... naanum, Vishnu vum poyi adhai vaangittu courier anuppittu varom ... nee Raji kitta amaidhiya pesi avanga appa kitta pesa vai.

Vishnu: aama daa... mukkiyamaa nee tension aagaama pesu daa... naanga poyittu vandhidarom.

Karthik: mmm... sari...

Both Lakshmi and Vishnu leave.

After 10 mins, Raji comes out of the room wiping her wet face with a towel. Her swollen red face shows she has been crying.

Karthik gives her water to drink. She quietly drinks water and gives the empty glass to him. He makes her to sit beside him and holds her hand.

Karthik: enna daa? Edhukku ippo ivvalo tension aagare?

Raji: onnum illai...

Karthik: edhuvaa irunthaalum manasu vittu share pannikkaren nu promise pannadhu summaa thaana?

Raji: appadi illai... karthik... naan padarathu illama unnai edhukku anaavasiyamaa tension pannanum nu thaan...

Karthik: appadi ellaam onnum illai... nee sollale nnaa thaan tension aaguthu... ennannu sollu..

Raji: yaar karthik ippadi panni iruppaanga?

Karthik: antha laptop vishayam enakku vittudu... naan parthukkaren... adhai marakka muyarchi pannu... puriyudhaa?

Raji: adhille... karthik...

Karthik: en mela nambikkai irukkaa illaiyaa?

Raji: niraiya irukku...

Karthik: appo adhai vittu thallu...

Raji: mmm... Sari...

Karthik: appa kitta en appadi pesane? Udambu sari illaathavar kitte poyi konnudunga adhu idhu nnu ... enna prachanai?

Raji: vidu karthik.. thevai illama nee tension aave.

Karthik: illai...naan tension aaga maatten.. ennannu sollu...

Raji: vera enna... innaikku ellaarum kanchipuram ponaanga illaiyaa... ennaiyum pudavai eduthukka solli kooda koottittu poyidalaam nu plan panni irukkaanga..

Karthik: yaaru?

Raji: enga athai thaan...

Karthik: enna plan?

Raji: penn paarkum padalam...

Karthik: pudavai kadaiyilayaa?

Raji: aamaa... naan thaan othukka maattenrene... athukku romba budhisaalithanamaa yosichu ippadi oru plan...

Karthik: appuram?

Raji: enga maama oda sonthathula oru ammaa intha tharagar velai paarkaraanga... nethu oorilirundhu vandha gumballe avangalum irunthaanga... ivanga en vanthirukkaangannu kaettaa... ivanga thaan intha varan mudichu kuduthaanga .. adhanaala koottittu vandhom nu sonnaanga...

Karthik: mmm

Raji: enakkennamo adhu sandhegamaa irundhudhu... adhukulle athai vandhu lakshmi phone panna vishayam sonnaanga... naan un kitte phone le pesittu ... lakshmi office work le help panna varasollirukkaa ... kanchipuram varamudiyaadhunnu sollittu inge vandhutten... inneram athai appaa kitta pottu kuduthittaanga... athaan visaaranai...

Karthik: sari ... naan onnu sonna keppiyaa?

Raji: mm.. enna sonnalum..

Karthik: appa ku phone panni ozhungaa pesu...

Raji: karthik..

Karthik dials and gives the phone to her.

Raji: appaa... sorry paa ... ennai mannichidunga appaa... illai paa... kovam illai... neenga ennai purinjikka maatenreengale nnu varutham thaan.. ennai pathi yosichu udambu keduthukkaadheenga paa... doctor kitta poyittu vandhu enna sonnaangannu sollunga... naan adutha vaaram oorukku varen... vandhu pesaren paa... vachidaren... Udambu parthukkonga paa...

She cuts the phone saying... "podhumaa?" and he smiles, pats on her cheek... and says "nalla ponnu .. ippadi thaan sonna pechu kekkanum..."

Raji: Lakshmi, Vishnu enge?

Karthik: Lakshmi oda ammavukku oru medicine avasaramaa thevai paduthaam ... Lakshmiyum, Vishnu vum poyi adhai vaangittu courier anuppittu vara poyirukkaanga...

Raji: OK...

Karthik: coffee , tea edhaavadhu kudikkiriyaa? Vishnu, Lakshmi vandhadhukappuram lunch ku polaam.

Raji: mmm ... tea kudikkalaam.. naan podavaa?

She gets up but he makes her sit in the sofa.

Karthik: onnum venaa ... nee ingeye ukkaaru.. naan pottuttu varen...

He goes into the kitchen and makes tea.

Raji comes there without making noise and hugs him from behind saying... "thank you .. karthik". He is surprised. He smiles and holds her hand, then turns towards her asking... "edhukku?"

Raji smiles and replies "ellaathukkum thaan".

He hugs her in return saying .. "I love you azhagi" and kisses her forehead...

Both of them go apart, smile and drink the tea.





Chapter 17... coming soon...


CHAPTER 17


Edited by sweety16 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#82
Swweettyyy, your episodes are as sweet as you!! Catched the last 3 episodes today and I'm enjoying everything about it. I really like the idea of the suspense from the laptop as well as the sweet scenes with KR and the 4 friends together.
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Posted: 12 years ago
#83
Since i've got 10 fingers... 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 👍🏼 Kudos to you!
Seriously, i've always looked forward to read your story. Engheeyo poiyetinghe. Pesaame serial ke ninghelam writers aiyerenghele? You guys are so talented. I envy you guys...

Anyways...as usual...eagerly waiting for the next update...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#84
Wow sweety...
Samma part...loved it...keep it up...

Next part ASAP...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#85
Sweety nice nice nice very nice update. 🤗
Padikum bothe itha apadiye visual ah pakanum nu aasai ya iruku pa.
Loved ur writing da. 😳
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Posted: 12 years ago
#86
wow...sweety...wonderful part...👏
cute romance between KR..❤️
so understanding pair...karthik's concern on his future maamanar...lovely...awaiting the next part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#87
Amazing sweety 😃. While reading it i felt like watching a CSI episode 😆😆. Epidiyo karthik kandupuduchitan!! This is really too much.. Office and personal are different and recording videos is really too much 😡😡. Want to know who did this. Vishwanathan ivlo kevalama nadaparunu thonala but will see how much is his work in this???? Meesai is again looking out for Raji's marriage . Raji eppadiyo indha dharava samalichita but next time????? Cont soon eagerly waiting to know if madhan could do anything..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#88

CHAPTER 17

Lakshmi and Vishnu return home and see Karthik busy talking to someone on phone and Raji busy on laptop.

Raji: Enna Lakshmi? Ammaa oda medicine kidaichudaa?

Lakshmi: mmm... kidaichudu... Anuppi aachu...

Raji: mmm

Lakshmi: appa kitta en di appadi pesane?

Raji: vidu Lakshmi, naan thirumbavum phone panni samaadhaanamaa pesitten.

Lakshmi: oh... Appadiya... Appo OK...

Vishnu: Raji... karthik yaar kitta pesittu irukkaan?

Raji: avanga amma kitta..

Vishnu: ennavaam?

Raji: theriyalai ... Phone vandadhu le irundhu anga dining table le ye ukkaandhu pesittu irukkaan

Lakshmi: nee enna panniittu irukke?

Raji: karthik laptop le photos parthittu irukken..

Karthik comes and asks "kilambalaamaa?"

All the four get into Vishnu's car and he drives to a restaurant. They happily chit chat and have lunch. From there they go to the movie. Karthik holds Raji's hand while watching the entire movie.

They return home cracking jokes and discussing about the movie. Vishnu says he'll drop Raji home and then go. Raji agrees. Karthik gets Coffee and all have it. Vishnu and Raji start home saying bye to Karthik and Lakshmi. Vishnu drops Raji at her home and drives away.

IN THE NIGHT:

Karthik calls Raji.

Raji: thoongaama enna panre?

Karthik: thookkam varalai...

Raji: ozhungaa paduthu thoongu Karthik... rendu naala kan muzhichi work panni irukkeenga... Nallaa rest edutha thane... naalaikku marubadiyum office ku poganum illaiyaa...

Karthik: mmm... Raajiii...

Raji: Enna?

Karthik: onnum illai...

Raji: tension aagathe karthik... kaalaiyile Madhan parthittu enna vishayam nu sollida poraaru.. enna pannalaamnu adhukku appuram yosikkalaam.

Karthik: naan edhaavadhu adhai pathi pesinenaa?

Raji: nee pesale nnaalumm enakku theriyum.. nee adhaiye yosichittu irukke nnu... varumbodhu parthukkalaam nu nee thane sonne?... naalaikku vishayam therinjadhukappuram enna pannalaamnu yosikkalaam. Puriyudhaa?

Karthik: mmm... OK...

Raji: sari paduthukko.. Karthik... kaalaiyile 6 manikkellam Madhan veetle irukkanum naa nee innum seekkirama kilambanum illaiyaa...

Karthik: aamaa...

Raji: appo naan vechidavaa?

Karthik: Raajii...

Raji: enna?

Karthik: I love you..

Raji: naanumthaan... goodnight

Karthik: good night... bye.

NEXT DAY MORNING:

AT MADHAN'S HOME:

Madhan checks the laptop brought by karthik. He deletes all the information and recordings.

Karthik: machaan ... eppadi daa delete aachu? Nethu naanga evvalo try panniyum delete aagale...

Madhan: adhellaam techniques... vidu... ippo system Raji kku kudukkumbodhu eppadi irundhucho appadiye irukku... Idhai yaar check pannaalum eduthuttu ponavanga use pannalai nnuu thaan ninaippaanga..

Karthik: appo idha yaar panradhu nnu eppadi daa kandupidikkarathu?

Madhan: simple... daa... Thoondil pottavan... meen sikkalainnaa ... En sikkalainnu thoondilai eduthu parpaan... appo kaiyum kalavumaa pudikka vendiyathu thaan...

Karthik: mmm... Hmmm... Suthamaa puriyalai.

Madhan explains the plan to Karthik. He smiles and pats his back.

Karthik: machaan... pinnitte po...

Madhan: sari vaa... office ku time aaguthu... polaam...

Karthik: OK.

Both of them leave to Office.


Chapter 18... coming soon...


CHAPTER 18


Edited by sweety16 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#89
Wow..nice part sweety...!!
U have nicely merged madhan into the story...!!
Next part ..suha waiting...!! 😉
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Posted: 12 years ago
#90
Hey just read the last two chapters. Amazing. KR hug . Its a big relief that madhan deleted everything . Waiting to know who did that cheap work 😡. Sweety u have an amazing talent in writing do continue it and try new stories too.. Eagerly waiting for the next updates..

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