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Posted: 11 years ago
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4 pming me dear...😃
updates dear...👏
dear...😃

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u r done really a
tons of to u...dear...😛
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i said u guys ealier if u don't like plz tell me...but it really hurts a lot...me try to reply each of u...many serials i don't watch but i read ur ff's ...checking out ur updated stuff's...n try to make a sweet comment which u guys liked...but u never check my any stuff...i really busy wid my studies...but also don't want to hurt my frndz...i try to comment ecah of u woh Pmed me...but only few of u ans my Pms...if don't want me to bother u...plz tell me...i never pm u.4 my any update...
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Posted: 11 years ago
gr8 parts..
cont.sooon

thanks for pm dear..
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Posted: 11 years ago
gr8 part..
cont.soon

thanks for pm dear..
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice n emotional update
sia bahut cute lekin wo apni mom ko miss kar rahi h
i hope jaldi geet unki life me aa jaye
but ye kya geet ja rahi h wapis or aakhri baar maan se milne aayi h
nooo but i know tumne kuch acha hi soacha hoga geet ko rokne ke liye
or ye meera ki sachayi kya h jaldi saamne lao i m waiting nxt update
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Posted: 11 years ago
thnx fr pm
i read the all pt amazing
meera was his friend i think but its ur story whatever
waiting fr nxt update sooon
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome lovely update dear still not understand is maan married or not who is siya yar ?
n why geet is away from maan cause they are not same region thats y may be hena
but want see maaneet toghthere soon yar love convo b/w siya n maan
thanks for update and for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: chavvi16

good question maan

why did she come here
well why dont we tell him
though what was the need to come to his house
poor sia misses her mother
will she get her mother
guess only time shall tell


time give all answers

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: jasminerahul

poor sia.She wants her mom.hop Geet becomes her mom.Meera was maan's best friend.I think Meera must've been preg,she died during delivery & maan took Sia 2 take care of her.Waiting 4 maaneet conversation.thx 4 updating d ff i wanted 2 read


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Posted: 11 years ago

Part 21

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Maan : tum yaha kyun aayi ho geet

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Geet : wo

Maan : bolo geet

.

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Mein intzaar kr raha hu

He held her by shoulders and pinned to the wall.

Geet : wo mujhe pata nhi tha

Aaj mera ki barsi hai

.

Nhi to mein

Maan : tum kya

Yaha nhi aati

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Pr ye mere sawal ka jwab nhi hai

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She not meets his eyes.

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Tum yaha aayi ho toh koi karan to honga na

Geet : wo aapne

Maan : maine kya

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Aankho me dekh ke jwab do geet

She sees in his eyes.

Geet : wo aaj meeting thi hmari

Maan : toh

Geet : apne cancel kr di

Maan : hmm

Geet : kyun cancel krdi

Bs isliye mein

Maan : ye jaanane tum yaha gyi

Geet : hmm

Maan : aaj meri 5 meetings thi

Jo maine cancel ki hai

Baki sb toh jaanane nhi aaye

.

Geet : wo mujhe sb kuch jaldi final krna hai

Taki mein

Maan : taki tum mujhse durr bhag sako

.

Yhi baat hai na geet

Geet : jb sb jaante hai

Toh swal kyun krte hai

Maan : geet tum swalo ke jwab kaha deti ho

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Geet : ab mujhe chalna chaiye

.

Chodiye mujhe

Maan : kyun darr lagta hai na tumhe

Mere karib rhi

He caressed her face.

Maan : toh apne jazbatto pe kabu nhi kr payongi

Nhi rok payongi khud ko

Geet : stop it

She pushed him.

Geet : aaj aapki wife ki barsi hai

Aur aap yaha mujhse kh rhe hai.

.

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Ek taraf aap usse pyaar krne ka dawaa krte hai

Aur dusri taraf yu mere karib aane ki koshish

.

Mujhe yakin nhi hota khud pe

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Kbhi maine aapko

He came near to her and cupped her face.

She removed his hand and goes out.

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Maan sit on bed and think about geet words.

aaj aapki wife ki barsi hai

Aur aap yaha mujhse kh rhe hai.

.

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Ek taraf aap usse pyaar krne ka dawaa krte hai

Aur dusri taraf yu mere karib aane ki koshish

.

Mujhe yakin nhi hota khud pe

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Kbhi maine aapko

He smiles.

*************

Zaara : geet

Geet : zaara

Both are happy to see each other and hugged each other tightly.

***********

After two days

Geet threw the phone on floor.

Zaara came running to see what happen.

Zaara : geet kya huya

Geet : kuch nhi yaar

Zaara : chl ab sch bol

Geet : yaar mein do din se appointment ka wait kr rhi hu

Pr she is not giving appointment.

Phle humari meeting cancel krdi

Aur ab ye sb

Zaara : geet relax

Itni chooti si baat

Aaj nhi milli toh kya huya

Meeting do din baad ho jaayengi

Waise tujhe itni jaldi kyun hai

Jaane ki india se

Geet :zaara yaha rhke bhi kya fayda

.

Abbu ammi...sbhi toh aapne whi hai

Yaha kaun hai

Zaara : sch mein yaha koi nhi hai

Geet : zaara jo waqt bit gya

Uske baare mein hum baat na kare toh acha hai

Zaara : geet kyun

Dekh itne saalo ke baad yu india aana

Firse ussi ke sath kaam krna

Geet : tujhe kaise pata

Mein ussi ke sath kaam kr rhi hu

Zaara : wo

.

Wo ha

.

Mujhe asad ne contract ki file dikhayi thi na

Usme uska naam tha

Geet : duniya mein ek hi maan nhi hai

Zaara : I know

Par tumhara face ne bin kahe sb bata diya

.

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Geet ek koshish to kar

In khamoshiyo ko ab hta de apne bich mein se.

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Geet turn the face.

Zaara came in front of her.

Zaara : geet tuh smjhne ki koshish kr

Zindagi baar baar mauka nhi deta hai

.

Dekh kismat ne tujhe aur maan ko

Firse aamne saamne isliye leke aayi hai

Tum dono ek ho sako

Geet : bs zaara

Mera nikah Asad ke sath teh ho chukka hai

Aur maan

Zaara : maan kya

Geet : unki bhi shaadi meera ke sath ho chuki hai

.

Hum dono apni zindagi mein aage bd chuke hai

.

Ab piche mudke dekhna mumkin nhi hai

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Zaara : tumne mujhse itni badi baat chupayi

Asad : tu kis baat pe itna over react kr rhi hai

Zaara : maan ki shaadi ho chuki hai

Jenny :- so what

Uski toh ek pyaari si beti bhi hai

Zaara : beti

Jenny : ha

She is so sweet & cute.

Zaara : asad

Asad : toh kya huya

Zaara : toh kya huya...

.

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Uski wife hai yaar

Asad : wo ab is duniya mein nhi hai

Zaara : oh

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Pr fir bhi

Asad : isse kya pyaar kam ho jaayenga

Nhi na

.

Zaara : pr maan ne shaadi

Asad : ho sakta hai

Halaat kuch ase ho

Jisse dekhke usse ye faisla lena pda

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Zaara : pr abbu toh bikul nhi maanege

Asad : phle geet maan jaaye

Baki sb dekhne ke liye ...Hum sb hai na

Jenny : aur maan

Asad : uski aankho mein geet ke liye pyaar dikhta hai

Uski ha ki chinta nhi hai mujhe

Zaara : hmm

***********

Precap : sach ka saamna

Edited by priya_21 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing ud dr
maan bata kyun nahe deta ke mera is nt hs wife nd geet wana go back early
precp is gud
hope sach sabko pata chal jaye

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