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Posted: 11 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: SShreShthA

nice promo sounds interesting... will b waiting for ur update

continue soon

thank u ...

will continue ...😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: Karkit

Awesum story...
Nice concept...
Pardhi rajat hav reborn in 21 century n they hv past birth connection ws interasting sound
love it...

Do pm me nxt time n update soon

thank u ..

yes it is an rebirth concept..

for pm's added me..and will update tomorrow...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
Disclaimer:
The place,name ,characters ,scenes,facts and things used in this FF are purely imaginary..and this ff doesn't have any connections with show or to the history.this ff is totally my imagination.. I do not intend to hurt any one's beliefs..


so here i present the banner of my FF..this is made by anju(anjori)..all credits goes to her
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CH1:MR.ARCHAEOLOGIST MEETS HIS GREEK GODDESS
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A guy who was in his formal suit was rushing in to the office dashing the doors as he was late for his meeting.as he was passing by a group of gals everyone eyes went automatically on to him...he was handsome dashing ..soon his face reveal and it was none other than our Rajat Tokas the world famous archaeologist..he soon reached the hall where the meeting was gng on .."excuse me sir,can i come in?"said rajat taking the whole attention on to him . "thank god he is here at last " though vicky to himself."yes MR.Tokas u can"said the person who was talking to the people there

"so people..The search for mughal artifacts well being from tomorrow so the team leaders will be Mr.Rajat Tokas(the world famous archaeologist),Miss. Paridhi Sharma(renowned zoologist & botanist and a cryptographer too ),Mr.Vicky Batra (head geologist of geology department).so ,guys get ready for your next mission, we are gng leave tomorrow.. "ordered MR.DESAI (ex archaeologist & head of all govt museum )
soon everyone made there exit from there ..he turnd to the boys and said ."well u guys to get ready as we have to started tomorrow..i think u people should rush now.."
"yes sir but can i know who this Paridhi Sharma?is she new ?"vicky asked
"well she is an renowned zoologist , botanist and a cryptographer too.she wrks for NSA(National security agency ) and yes she is new to our group and this is her frst adventure project.."replyd mr.desai.
"okay sir fine i think we should leave now "said rajat pulling his best friend frm there..both of them left frm there and mr.desai resumed into his wrk..outside the hall
"abey tuje us gal key aberey me sir ko kyu puch ratha??"ask rajat with an irritated face..
"kyu tuje kya prob hey?kya wo teri behan lagthihey?"said vicky.
"what rubbish wo meri behan immposible"said rajat more irritatedly..
"chale chod na ..Jab si Jodha Akbar flim dheka hey i fell in love with that mughals specially for akbar yaar..i so wanted to know about them and there culture but at last i got an mission on them am so happy about this.." said vicky with a wide smile on his face .

"Excuse me mughals ka matalab only AKBAR akela hi nahi hey,there are lots of people in the mugals... " said rajat.

"i knw there are lots of mughal emperors but who cares yaar har koi akbar ki tara handsome,famous aur wise thodina hey .."said vicky giving rajat a who cares look.

"oh acha handsome,famous aur wise right ?tumey kesi pathahey ki wo handsome tha?wise tha?tum kya us kaal me jakara research karakey ayaho?u knw what he was the most cruelest emperor among all the mughals..he was a person without heart .wo movie me uska charctr ko positive bandiya hey kyuki agar hero ki character negative hey tho film nahi chalaga hey na?.aur vesi bhi famous tho salim bhi tha na?then why only akbar?"asked rajat

" mera baap pls apani history ki paravachan band karo yaar ..i knw you have unraveled many secrets of past & have discovered many artifacts..i also knw that you have a great knowledge of our ancient history "said vicky .

"that like a good boy ...but you knw what? jab bhi mughal ka bat athe hi i feel like am some were related to them."said rajat looking at one of the mughal portraites on the wall...
"really but kyu esa?"asked vicky.
"pata nahi ..chal lets go to our room package bhi karanhey na?"said rajat moving form there
"yup lets go."said vicky following him...

The next morning
"all set for the strt ? "asked mr.desai looking at the team and their team leaders..
"but sir where are we gng ?"ask rajat with doubtful expression.
"well rajat we are gng to azmer a place near agar which is not know to much people we will strt our expolration for there as it was one of place which was very famous in akbar's rule "said mr.desai
"okay sir"said rajat
"AND yes Paridhi said she join us straight at the place we are gng to as she some urgent wrk to deal with.."said mr.desai
They all got started and soon they reached the place and they settled their tents there..and every one went to there respective tents and slept
the next mrng ..the searching begins but still pari was missing...soon a cool breeze strt to flow as she entered the air was filled with a sweet rose sent smell..and as she strt to walk every men out there was staring at her.her rajat was walking opposite to her lost in train of his thoughts ..he did not see a young beautiful girl standing there.(she was busy talking on phone).and he bumps into he..both hit each other n DHAM!!!.
both of them lost there balance and fell on the ground .rajat was on the top and the gals was below him , he was lost in her beauty n innocence..she looked like some greek goddess straight out from some ancient painting standing in front of him her pink lips had formed a smile..her eyes were hazel he felt like drowning in them ..the wind was playing with her hair which were felt loose , the girl was saying something but to him her voice sounded like a sweet song.. .he cant hear anything apart from her voice..seeing rajat lost like this the girl shakes him..bring him back to sense.
"hmm excuse me zara utengey pls?"said the grl
"hmm ya sorry"said rajat and got up from there...and help her to get up..soon vicky came into the scene
"well hello am paridhi .. Paridhi Sharma an renowned of zoologist & botanist and a cryptographer too "said paridhi giving her hand to hand shake but rajat was still lost in her..

"hmm am here to join u guys for your next mission"said paridhi

vicky (whispers to rajat n pinches him):ab dhek tha rahega? ..ya per hand shake bhi dega?

"oh hie am rajat ..rajat tokas am an archaeologist aur ye vicky hey and he is a geologist " said rajat coming back to his sense and giving paridhi a handshake..the moment his hand touch her hand he felt like some current passing through his body and some pictures were flashing in his mind ..as if they want to make him remember some thing about this past..he had touched many gals hand but this was the frst time he is experience some thing like this. he then back off his hand with jerk.pari felt strange and give him a "what happen" wala look.rajat nodded his head to denoting "nothing".later pari was introduce t o evry one and the search was gong on and soon the trio became good friend specially PariJat.Aftr few days they found an chest in a cave at that place..the trio started exterminating the chest.
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so bolo how was dat? acha tha ya bura tha ya wrst? ...pls gve ur feedback plz do like and comment, it only takes a few seconds to like and a couple of minutes to comment...ignore typos ,criticism and suggestions are most welcomed do comment what ever you feel about my ff ..i don't mind about it.. please ignore typos...

love,
renu
Edited by 123renudrlng - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54
nice update- liked how rajat did not care about knowing about paridhi day before and then next day he ot lost in her...
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55
hey!
awesome update dear
u have written it beautifully
please do continue soon
& thanks for the pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
Nice update...
Love the way u writte the update...
Thankx fr pm n update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
#57

Originally posted by: Shehenshah_RT

Update soon yaar!! Renuka...

the update will be give on 12 or 13 dear...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
That was an Amazing Update Renu!! 👏 👏 ⭐️ Really loved it alot.❤️ 😛 😳
This Vicky aka Suryabhan of History looks more interested in Pari than Rajat!! 😆 Isko Pari ke baare me jitni excitement thi Untni toh Rajat ne bhi nahi dikhayi! 😆
But RT ne Paridhi ko dekha nahi and The wind also seems to be moving with Joy of their Epic Meeting. 😳 Uff Their meeting,Rajat mesmerized by Pari just reminds of the Show's mesmerized Jalal.Bass ek cheez hai,Don't Paridhi feel anything like Usko Aisa kuch feel nahi hota when Rajat is around?!Or Handshake?!Don't Paridhi feel connected to Mughals,Akbar or Anyone in History?!I just want their memory back soon 😳 😆 But I know what a Love story is without troubles and problems!! 😭 😆

But So Happy to see that PariJat Especially became Good Friends!! 😛 😉 😆 Pls Uss Suryabhan ko Meri Jodha se dur hi rakho yaar!! 😆

Now what is in that chest?! 😕Can't wait to know!! 😳 My guess Maybe Something that can help Rajat or Paridhi or both to realize about their past-birth. 😉 😃 😳

Pls Continue Soon Renu. 😊 And I'm really sorry for late comment also. 😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59

Originally posted by: shivalkar

😭Please update soon

hey pls don't cry i will update but it will take time dear..becoz i have tones of ff to be updated...hope u understnd..😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
#60
😊Weekends me to ff ka hi sahara hai plus serial mein to romantic track ka namonishan nahi hai so I keep waiting for FF updates

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