virman ss bad boy CHAP 19 pg 93 (9 may) - Page 54

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: abbay

interesting!!!! but I hope u will keep the fun element intact!!! lolllzzz

hope so
JESNIA thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome precap.
waiting for update.
plz pm me
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awsm precap ...egrly waiting for update ,..,,,,,, do cntnue !!!!!!!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
first of all i want to apologise for this short update... actually i got struck up in something damn important... but i promise i will update next part tomorrow...😊
PART 16
virat : you cannot leave me like that...
manvi : virat i have to...
virat : no... no manvi... you cannot...
shabbir : paani... manvi...
virat : ab nahi chahie... tu kaan band kar shabbir...
shabbir : pagal hai kya...??
virat : manvi mujhe chod ke jaa rahi hai... tu humari baat nahi sunn sakta...
manvi : virattt...
virat : kya virattt...???
shabbir : ho kya raha hai...??? kahan jaa rahi ho bhabhi...??
manvi : shut up both of you...
virat : mujhe shut up keh rahi ho... kya izzat rahi meri shabbu ke saamne...???
shabbir : ek kaam karo tum dono baatein karo, i am going...
manvi : stop stop stop... take my boyfriend along... i have to go...
virat : par jaana kahan hai...???
manvi : ghar...
virat : ghar... abhi...??? its 12'o clock only...
manvi : virat meri jaan... aaj meri beeji aa rahi hai... i need to go to the railway station to pick her up...
virat : beeji...??? kyun...??? ek buddha kam tha kya...???
manvi : virat shut up...
seeing this shabbir like an intelligent person went away from there quietly...
virat : ye beeji sadu toh nahi hai na... ya phir sadu ki sach mein mummy hai...
manvi : my beeji is just too adorable, loving and way to understanding...
virat : are you sure wo tumhare oldie ki hi mummy hai...???
manvi : arghhh... stop it.. i am going...
virat : main saath chalun...???
manvi : no ways... beeji kya sochengi...?? no...
virat : yahi toh chance hai... beeji humari side ho gayi toh tumhare buddha kuch nahi kar payega...
manvi : forget it... i am going home for now...
virat : railway station chalte hain manvi... abhi... lets go...
manvi : i have to change...
virat : you are looking pretty... whats the need to change...???
manvi : i cant go in this denims... salwar kameez suit you see...
virat : how will i see in salwar kameez...???
manvi : ohh god... that was so cheap...
virat : haha... llets go manna...
virat dragged manvi out of the college and then went to her place...
at manvi's house
manvi : virat you wait here... i will be back in 10 minutes...
virat : ohh honey take your time...
manvi : feel at home...
virat : yeah... mera sasural hai hone wala... i am very much comfortable...
manvi smiled and ran to her room to get ready...
on the way
virat : aaj dekhna mera naya roop...
manvi : thats what i am scared of...
virat : hain...??? what are you trying to say...???
manvi : you accompaning me and that too you will be meeting beeji for the first time... gosh i am so nervous and scared...
virat : i will handle everything... dont worry... trust me...
manvi : toh hi toh darr lag raha hai...
virat : tumhari beeji ko na main chutki mein handle kar lunga... you know me n my charm...
manvi : itna bhi set mat kar lena ke baad mein main third angle ban jaun...
virat : haha... and now tell me ke tumhari beeji ko kya pasand hai aur kya nahi...
manvi : unko dad ka jyada gussa karna pasand nahi hai...
virat : wait as econd... matlab tumhare oldie aur beeji ki itni tuning nahi hai...
manvi : dad never speaks a word in front of beeji... so tuning ka toh sa-
virat : sawaal hi nahi uthta... hai na...???
manvi : yeah...
virat : great... dushman ka dushman dost...
manvi : what...??? kya kaha...???
virat : beeji humari supporter hogi... mark my words manna...
manvi : mark my words...?? how are you so confident...??? and most importantly why are you that confident...???
virat : because i have your love...
manvi : very smart...
virat : chalo now meet the new member in town...
at railway station
manvi : namaste beeji...
beeji : jeeti reh... kaisi hai...??
manvi : bilkul theek... aur aap...???
beeji : main toh A-1... mujhe ki hona hai... yeh munda kaun hai...?? (looking at manvi)
virat : aapka hona wala jawai (son-in-law)...
beeji : ki...??? (kya...??)
manvi : woh woh woh... be.. beeji..
virat : ji main manvi ka dost... virat... (touching beeji's feet)
beeji : majak kar raha tha... badha hasmukh hai... (you were joking... very joyful and funny boy)
manvi : beeji safar theek rha...??
beeji : haan par ye madan kyun ni aaya...???
manvi : woh dad... mera matlab papa ko kaam tha kuch...
virat : isiliye toh maine socha ke main manvi ke saath apko lene aa jaun... akeli kaise aati manvi... jamana bhi toh theek nahi hai na...
beeji : tu bda samajhdar hai puttar... accha ladka hai... (you are very intelligent... you are a good boy)
virat winked at manvi and manvi got nervous what if beeji sees this...
virat : aao na beeji... main aapko beeji bol sakta hoon na...
beeji : haan haan...
virat : toh main bol raha tha... ab aap aa gye ho toh achha hi hai... kyun manvi...???
manvi : haan...
virat : pehle ab beeji aapko bahar lunch karwata hoon... aaie na... cmon manvi...
manvi : hmm...
manvi (herself) : ye marwaege mujhe... bad boy suddenly into good boy avatar... ohh god...!!!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Loved the Update..!!
I Lile jealous vIrat..Apne dost ko hi side karne pe tula hai...But its nice that these two can take shabbirs class..he keeps laughing ryt so in this way they get their pay back..Like it..!

Beeji...intersting..so they have some 1 on their side as Virat says..lekin u can nevr say..elders have sharp sight...bad boy ko pehchanlegi...But then u never know...n u cn also surpise us by bhuddha accepting and Beeji against😆Waiting for next Naina..!!
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Syed695

Loved the Update..!!

I Lile jealous vIrat..Apne dost ko hi side karne pe tula hai...But its nice that these two can take shabbirs class..he keeps laughing ryt so in this way they get their pay back..Like it..!

Beeji...intersting..so they have some 1 on their side as Virat says..lekin u can nevr say..elders have sharp sight...bad boy ko pehchanlegi...But then u never know...n u cn also surpise us by bhuddha accepting and Beeji against😆Waiting for next Naina..!!




Thank u soo much... 😃 shabbir bechara phas jaata h 😛
Beeji kya h...?? Kaisi h wo kal ke update mein dekhna... 😉
Stay tuned...
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Posted: 11 years ago
hahaha this was fun update naina maza agaya 😆 👏
virat khudke dost se hi itna jealousss uff jealousy 😛
nd shabbir bhi nikal liya peeche se 😆 😆
nd the bad boy becoming good boy to impress beeji is sooo kool maza aaying ...
update next part sooon
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
loved it
poor shabir
loved virman convo
plz cont soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing update.
our bad boy turns to good boy infront of beeji.
continue soon.
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lmfaooo fab update.. Love der nokh jhok.. hahaha.. 😃

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