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Posted: 12 years ago
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Interesting update sweety. Eagerly waiting for our four stars to prove komban wrong.. The way u highlighted Raji's talent was apt and smart one. Do update soon.
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CHAPTER 12

Karthik, Vishnu and Lakshmi work through out the night..

They decide to take rest for some time and then continue to work.

After two hours they start to work again.

In between karthik makes some sandwiches and all the three have breakfast.

Again they continue to work.

Vishnu: Lakshmi... inneram namma kooda Raji yum irunthirunthaa nallaa irukkum ille?

Lakshmi: mmm ...

Karthik says that he'll be back in two minutes and goes upstairs..

Lakshmi: summa irukka maattiyaa nee?

Vishnu: naan enna lakshmi pannen?

Lakshmi: naanum Rajiya romba miss panren... Namakke ippadi irunthaa avanukku eppadi irukkum? Yosikkave maattiyaa?

Vishnu: naan adhukku sollalai... podhuvaa sonnen...

Lakshmi: sari... naan tea pottuttu varen...

Karthik comes to the terrace and calls Raji.. he gets engaged tone...

He tries again... And it is still engaged...

He comes downstairs and starts to work. Lakshmi brings tea and gives to them.

Karthik calls Raji again and her phone is still engaged. Lakshmi notices this.

All of them work silently... Karthik keeps trying Raji's phone in between.

After some time seeing him so desparate, lakshmi asks him..."ennachu karthik? en ivvalo restless aah irukke?"

Karthik: raji phone continuous aa engage varudhu...

Lakshmi: adhukku en tension aagare? Ava veettukku pesittu irukkaalo ennavo?

Karthik: illai Lakshmi... Almost 2 -- 3 hours aaguthu... Ivvalo neram yaar kitta pesaraa? Enakku ennamo something wrong nu thonudhu.

Lakshmi: Iru naan try panren... she tries and same ...it's engaged.

Vishnu: vidu daa.. innaikku free ya iruppaanga illa, appa, amma, thatha, paatti, friends nu ellaar kittaiyum arattai adichittu irukkaangalo ennavo? Mudinjadhum missed call paatha avangale pannuvaanga... illenna nee Sayanthramaa try pannu...

Karthik: sari... OK... Lakshmi enna maid varalai?

Lakshmi: avanga oorukku poyirukkaanga ... rendu naal leave...

Karthik: appo lunch order pannidalaamaa?

Vishnu: enna venum lakshmi?

Lakshmi: edhai yaavadhu light aa sollunga... heavy yaa saappittaa thookkam varum .. work panna muiyadhu..

Vishnu orders for some pizza and burgers... They keep working... have lunch and continue to work. Karthik keeps trying Raji's phone in between.

Lakshmi: iru karthik.. naan ava veettu landline ku try panren...

Lakshmi: helloo... aunty naan Raji friend Lakshmi pesaren... Raji enna panraa? Oh.. appadiya... OK .. illa aunty office vishayamaa romba mukkiyamaa pesanum.. avalai enakku phone panna solreengalaa? ... Ok aunty... bye...

Vishnu: ennaachu Lakshmi?

Lakshmi:Raji kooda work pannittu thaan irukka..

Karthik: enna work pannaraa?

Vishnu: avanga kitta laptop illaiye...

Lakshmi: nethu evening office le irundu varumbodhu laptop oda vandirukkaa... Kaalaile ezhundhadhilirundhu work pannittu irukkaalam... mostly phone le viswanathan sir aah irukkanum... avanga athai" kaalaile irundhu soru, thanni kooda illaame velai seyyaraa... phone la yaaro periya officer pola... moochukku muppadhu sir sollittu irukkkaa... Enna office oh... Sani, Nyaayiru la kooda nimmadhiyaa irukka vidaame.." appadinnu sonnaanga.

Karthik: enna Lakshmi idhu? Appadi enna velai seyyaraa? Adhuvum Viswanathan office hours thaandi work panna maattaare?

Vishnu: ore suspense aah irukke...

Lakshmi: Raji kitta pesinaa dhaan theriyum...

Karthik's phone rings...

Karthik: helloo.. sollu Raji...

Raji:enna karthik... edhukku phone panne?

Karthik: summa thaan pannen... thalai vali kuranjudhaa... nethu avvalo tension aa irundiye... konjam aavadhu relax aayittiyyannu therinjukka thaan..

Raji: enge? innum kurainja paadillai...

Karthik: ozhungaa rest edukkaame enna panre?

Raji: enge rest edukkaradhu? Nethu evening reception le intha laptop HR le kudukka sonnaangannu koduthaanga. Adhukulla viswanathan sir phone panni "Thevai pattaa naalaikku konjam enakku help panna vendi irukkum... laptop marakkaama vaangittu po nnu sonnaaru."

Karthik: nee en idha nethe sollale?

Raji: marandhutten karthik.. adhuvum illaame avar thevai pattaa nnu thane sonnaru.. adhanaale naan serious aah eduthukkalai..

Karthik: mmm..

Raji: aana avar enna daa nna kaalaile 7 mani kke phone panni velaya aarambikka sollittaaru...

Karthik: enna velai?

Raji: vera oru team odadhu.. andha project manager nethu thideernu resign pannittaaraam... naalaikku client visit aam... adhanaale full presentation avar phone le instruct pannitte irundhaa.. naan pannitte irundhen... ippo dhaan mudinjudhu...

Karthik: romba strain aayiduchaa?

Raji: aamaa karthik... idhaan first time ... ore bayamaa vera irundhudhu... aana viswanathan sir romba porumaiyaa solli koduthaaru...

Karthik: avarukku velai aaganum ille... adhaan..

Raji: mmm.. oru nimisham... athai neenga kilambunga.. naan seidhu vaikkaren nu sonnen illa.. neenga tension aagaama kilambunga.. rendu mani nerathula ellaam ready aa irukkum.. sonna kelunga... sari... sari ... naan parthukkaren... mmm... sollu Karthik.

Karthik: enna prachanai?

Raji: onnum illai... maama oda sonthakkaaranga oorile irundhu varaanga... samaikkanum.. adhaan..

Karthik: adhaan athai irukkaanga ille...

Raji: athaiyum , maamavum avangaloda kadaikku poraanga..

Karthik: puriyalai...

Raji: enga maama oda akka ponnukku adutha maasam kalyaanam... adhukku pattu selai edukka ellaarum chennaikku varaanga... athaiyum, maamavum avangala receive pannittu, kadaikku poyittu ellaam onnaa thirumbi varuvaanga.. adhaan night sappattukku ellaarum varuvaanga.. samaikkanum...

Karthik: adhukku?

Raji: nethu night athai naalaikku enakku help pannu nnu sonnaanga... ippo kaalaile irundhu naan work pannitte irundhenaa... adhaan avanga tension aayittaanga.

Karthik: unakku thaan tired aa irukke.. eppadiyum veliya thane poranga .. shopping mudichittu edhaavadhu hotel le saaptittu vandhuralaam ille..

Raji: varadhu maama oda veettu aalunga... shopping mudichittu, night stay pannittu kaalaile kilambiduvaanga, oru velai kooda veettula saappadu podalainna eppadi?

Karthik: athai veetileye irundha OK.. avangalum shopping poraanga ille...

Raji: adhu appadi illai... karthik... unakku theriyaadhu... upasarippu nnu onnu irukku.. athaiyum kadaikku vandhaanga appadingarathellaam kandukka maattanga.. inge irundhu kilambi ponaa.. kesavan pondaatti oru vela kooda saappaadu podalai nnu ... solluvaanga.. athaan athai tension aayittaanga.

Karthik: sari konja neram nallaa rest eduthittu appuramaa sei.

Raji: illai karthik.. ippove aarambicha dhaan correct aa irukkum..

Karthik: onnum paravaa illai..rest eduthittu appuram pannu... oru 10 perukku samaikkanum naa oru mani neram podhum..

Raji: 10 peru illai... motham 40 peru varaanga oorilirundhu...

Karthik: 40 peraaa aaah!!!!!!!!!

Raji laughs the other side and says : ippo nee edhukku tension aagare?

Karthik: ey.. avvalo perukku nee oruthiye eppadi samaippe?

Raji: adhellaam oru vishayame kidaiyaadhu... pannidalaam..

Karthik: cha..

Raji: enna..

Karthik: en pondaattiya ippadi ellaaruma serndhu paadaa paduthuraangappaa..

Raji smiles and asks "nee enna panre?"

Karthik: guess pannu paappom...

Raji:mmm.. kaalaiyile irundhu jolly yaa tv paarthuttu appappo enakku phone try pannittu irukke.. correct aah?

Karthik: adippaavi... solradhellaam sollittu... jolly yaa vera iruppennu ninaikkiriyaa...?

Raji: exclaims... karthik appo neenga POC ready pannittu irukkeengala?

Karthik: mmm... naan, Lakshmi, Vishnu ... Night le irundhu work pannittu irukkom... naalaikku kandippa ready aayidum nu ninaikkiren.

Raji: all the best...

Karthik: thank you ...

Raji: lakshmi kitta phone kodu..

Karthik: lakshmi ... indhaanga Raji line le irukkaa...

Lakshmi: hi raji...

Raji: enna lakshmi... ellaam jolly yaa work panreengalaa?

Lakshmi: aama di ippadi work panrathu jolly yaa thaan irukku... nee thaan missing... neeyum inga iruntha nalla irukkum nu naanga moonu perume feel panrom...

Raji: neenga solradhu kaetta enakkum appadi thaan thonudhu...

Lakshmi: mmm...

Raji: ok lakshmi... all the best... bye

Lakshmi: thank you... bye...

Lakshmi gives the phone to karthik..

Karthik: sollu Raji..

Raji: ok karthik naan vechidaren... poyittu samaikkanum..

Karthik: seekkiram velaiya mudichittu rest eduthukko...

Raji: mmm... OK.. naan appurama pesaren... bye..

Karthik:bye..

Lakshmi: ennachu karthik? Raji enna sonna?

Karthik tells about raji's work..

Vishnu: ennadaa intha komban .. divide and rule nu try panraano?

Karthik: puriyalai...

Vishnu: modhalle Lakshmi yai TL pannaan... ippo Rajikku thaniyyaa velai kudukkuraan... ennamo sari illaiye...

Lakshmi: hey.. Vishnu... unnala mattum thaanda ippadi edakku madakkaa yosikka mudiyum...

Karthik: theriyalaiye... daa... doubt aa irukkae...

Karthik calls Raji..

Raji: enna karthik?

Karthik: raji office le kudutha laptop le personal mails edhuvum paakkaadhe..

Raji: en ... ennachu?

Karthik: theriyalai... enakke clear aa illai... nee work mudinjirundaa ... net disconnect pannittu ..adhai power off pannidu... naan appuramaa solren

Raji:ok ...

Karthik: OK.. naan night pesaren ... bye...

Raji:bye..

All of them continue their work...



Chapter 13... coming soon...


CHAPTER 13



Edited by sweety16 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#63
Hmmm...suspense ah iruke? Ineva irukum?
Hurry and update the next chapter, Sweety. We are eagerly waiting 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Interesting sweety. Even i doubt vishwanathan.. Raji paavam orutharku samaikradhunale enaku kashtam idhula 40 peruku na appada enaku moochu muttudhu... Karthik'ku edho idea thonirku'nu ninaikren... What is his plan'nu therinjika waiting. Story is moving well and u r balancing love and work well in this story. Great dear keep it up.
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CHAPTER 13

AT RAJI'S HOME:

Raji calls karthik.

Karthik: helloo..

Raji: enna panre karthik?

Karthik: work panrom..

Raji: saaptaacha?

Karthik: illai... nee ?

Raji: mmm... aachu ...

Karthik: ellaarum vanduttaangalaa?

Raji: mmm... saaptittu irukkaanga... appuram pesa mudiyadhu nnu thaan phone pannen... Work eppadi poyittu irukku?... continuous aah work panradhu kashtamaa irukkaa?

Karthik: adhellaam onnum illai... konjam strain aaguthu thaan.. aana naama ennannu prove panna kidaichirukka arumayaana chance illaiyaa... andha ENTHU le work smooth aah thaan poguthu...

Raji: ok... karthik ... naan naalaikku pesaren... bye...

Karthik: bye.. nallaa rest eduthukko... Good night...

Raji: good night.

AT KARTHIK'S HOUSE:

Karthik, Vishnu and Lakshmi are working seriously...

Lakshmi: edhukku Vishnu unakku appadi thonuchi?

Vishnu: enna Lakshmi?

Lakshmi: viswanathan edaavadhu trick play panraaro nnu..

Vishnu: theriyalai... Ennamo oru second antha maathiri oru thought vandhuchi.. may be thappaa kooda irukkalaam...

Karthik: illai daa... nee sonnadhu le irundhu enakkum yosanaiyaave irukku... Monday morning Raji yai seekkiram varasollittu antha laptop check pannittu appuram thaan HR le thiruppi kudukka sollanum... adhile edhaavadhu clue kidaikkudaannu paarkanum...

Lakshmi: oru vela naama konjam overaa excite aagaromaa...?

Karthik: illai .. lakshmi.. doubt vandhaa clear pannikkarathu thaan better.

Lakshmi: raji kitte pesittiyaa?

Karthik: mmm ... veetle guest vandhirukkanga... naalaikku pesaren nu sonnaa...

Vishnu: guest aah?

Karthik: mmm... Avanga maama oda akka ponnukku adutha maasam kalyaanamaa... adhukku oorile irundhu pattu podavai edukkarudhukke 40 peru vandhirukkaanga daa...

Lakshmi & Vishnu chorusly ask..."40 peraah?"

Karthik laughs and says ...aaamaa daa...

Vishnu: machaan paathu daa... unakku kalyaanam aanathukku appuram kovilpatti le yaarukku kalyaanam naalum chennaikku pattu pudavai edukkaren nu sollittu lorry le makkal vandhu un veetle iranga poraanga...

Lakshmi: appo nee Rajiya kandippa velaikku anuppiye aaganum...

Karthik: en lakshmi?

Lakshmi: oorla irundhu varavangalukku samaichi podave orutharoda sambalam sariyaa poyidum..

Karthik: adhu sari..

All the three laugh...

They work till early hours and decide to take rest for couple of hours and then continue...

SUNDAY MORNING:

Karthik and Vishnu are working... Lakshmi brings them coffee...

All of them have coffee together.

Karthik: lakshmi almost 80% mudinjudhu illai... max evening ku ready pannidalaam illaiyaa...?

Lakshmi: amaa Karthik... Aanaa POC ready aanadhukku appuram naan oru briefing kudukkanum...

Vishnu: athu romba kashtamaa lakshmi?

Lakshmi: illai... Vishnu... oru one hour work irukkum avvalavu thaan...

Karthik: OK...

Lakshmi: no problem karthik... POC ready aayiduchi nnaa ... briefing easy thaan..

Karthik: OK... lakshmi...

Lakshmi: Karthik...Vishnu..., nethu full aah bread, sandwich, burger, pizza nnu saaptu bore adikkudhu... bayangaramaa pasikkudhu veraaa... suda suda idly yo... idiyaappamo saapidanum pola irukku... one hour break eduthukittu hotel ku poyittu saappittu varalaamaa?

Both Vishnu & Karthik laugh and say ... OK Lakshmi... Kilambunga polaam...

Door bell rings...

Lakshmi opens the door and is surprised...

Vishnu: enna lakshmi.. yaaru vandhadhu...

Raji enters saying naan thaan Vishnu...

Karthik and Vishnu also are surprised to see her...

Karthik: hey... Raji enna surprise idhu?

Raji: (smiles) neenga mattum jolly yaa irundaa .. ennaala thaniyaa irukka mudiyalai .. athaan vanthutten...

Lakshmi: athai edhuvum sollaliyaa?

Vishnu: veettukku guest vandirukkaangannu karthik sonnaan.

Raji: aamaa ellaarum kanchipuram poyirukkanga... naan inge vandhutten...

Lakshmi: puriyalai..

Vishnu: adhaane... chennaile pattu pudavai edhuvum pudikkalaiyaa avangalukku... kanchipuram poyirukkaanga..

Raji: (smiles) Chennai le nagai ellaam vaangiyirukkaanga... Pattu pudavainga edukka ippo kanchipuram poyirukkanga... anga vela mudinjadhum avanga ellaam appadiye oorukku kilambiduvaanga... athaiyum, maamavum veettukku vandhiduvaanga. Ennaiyum vara sonnaanga... nethu Lakshmi phone panni athai kitta pesinadhu vechi... ennoda velai mudinjirundhaa... Lakshmi avaloda velaile help panradhukku vara sonnaa nnu sollittu avangalodaye kilambi inge vanthutten. Purinjidichaa?

Lakshmi: nalla velai... nee oru 10 mins kazhichu vandhirundhaa ... one hour wait panni irukkanum

Raji: En?

Lakshmi: naanga hotel poyittu saapptu varalaam nu kilambittu irundhom ... nee vandhu bell adikkare...

Raji: sari ... appo engeyum poga venaa... naan tiffen kondu vandirukken .. saappidalaam vaanga..

Vishnu: enna tiffen?

Raji: idly , idiyaappam..

Lakshmi(hugs raji and pinches her cheeks saying): haiyyoo... nee en chellam Raji... vaanga saappidalaam...

Raji: apppaa... valikkudhu Lakshmi... ennaachu?

Karthik: adhu onnum illai Raji... Lakshmi ippa thaan.. "nethu full aah bread, sandwich, burger, pizza nnu saaptu bore adikkudhu... bayangaramaa pasikkudhu veraaa... suda suda idly yo... idiyaappamo saapidanum pola irukku... one hour break eduthukittu hotel ku poyittu saappittu varalaamaa" nnu kettaanga... nee athaiye kondu vanden nu sonne... athaan..

Raji: oh... appadiyaa...

AT THE DINING TABLE:

Karthik, Vishnu, Raji and Lakshmi are having their breakfast.

Raji: work eppadi poguthu?

Lakshmi: almost 80% complete aayiduchi.

Raji: naanum join pannalaama?

Lakshmi: dhaaraalamaa... saaptu mudichadhum nee enna pannanum nu solren..

Raji: OK...

Lakshmi: ivvalo kaalaile eppadi ithanai variety panne?

Raji: nethu nightu enga maama oda akka enga athaiyai kooppittu, naalaikku madhiyam eppadiyum hotel le saappidara maathiri irukkum, adhanaale kaalaile veettileye tiffen saappittu kilambalaam nu sonnaanga. Kaalaile naanum athai koodave ezhundittu avangalukku tiffen seiradhukku help pannen... seyyum bodhe namma naalu perkkum suda suda thaniyaa hot box le eduthu vachittu, varumbodhu kondu vandhitten... simple...

Vishnu: rajii.. neenga periya aalu thaan ponga...

Raji: tiffen nallaa irukkaa illaiyaa?

Karthik, Vishnu and Lakshmi say "Pramaadham" in chorus.

Raji smiles and says.. "karthik... Enakku office la kodutha laptop konduvanthirukken.. namma work mudinjadhum adhai oru vaatti check panriya... edho doubt aa irukku nnu sonniye? Ennaa naalaikku kaalaile office ponadhum laptop HR la thiruppi kodukkanum."

Karthik, Vishnu and Lakshmi look at each other and look surprisingly altogether at Raji.


Chapter 14 ... coming soon...


CHAPTER 14


Edited by sweety16 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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sweety sammya iruku...


ithula raji character rombha nalla irruku...
next chapter Asap

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Sweety, Suha is right. Story semmaya poikette iruke. Love R's characterization in here. Rombe nalla iruke.
Waiting for the next chapter. 😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#68
Story super ah pogudhu sweety...👏

This raji is too smart...love this raji...Vichu enna game plan podraru...😕

eagerly waiting for the next part...

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Sweety sema interesting -a pohudhu unga story
good one ..
awaitin the next part..
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For a change Raji here is sharp and i love it.. Paravala pasanga theeya vellai seiranga!!!!. Would our guys get any clue in that laptop?? Waiting eagerly. Sema interesting'ah iruku sweety.. As lakshmi said before raji planning'la super'ah panra...

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