os pehla pehla pyaar hain pg 40 updt - Page 17

Originally posted by: vironikajain

Sangs..I loved the way it is now so for my side no need to do any change..
Nd about updates u decide after seeing response..i m ok with both..

Thank u viru for cmnts and moral support 🤗
Thanks a lot for standing by me when am depressed 🤗
Hm yaar ill decide seeing cmnts 😛

Originally posted by: .sangs123.

Thank u viru for cmnts and moral support 🤗
Thanks a lot for standing by me when am depressed 🤗
Hm yaar ill decide seeing cmnts 😛

No need to thank yaar..infact what re frnds for to be with each others side always na... 🤗
Ok.. 😛

Originally posted by: vironikajain

No need to thank yaar..infact what re frnds for to be with each others side always na... 🤗
Ok.. 😛

hm friends forever 🤗

Originally posted by: .sangs123.

hm friends forever 🤗

True.. 😃

No i dnt like thz narrator idea..aise hi normal thik hai..update soon

Like raya narrating is good am liking it.. Something really cool

Originally posted by: leena04

sags i won't mind of bigger version even if u wish to give us... who kya hai na RaYa k bare me jitna padho kam hain...

thank u leena dear for cmnts 😛
ya surely a big one this time 😊
hm raya ke bare main bohut kuch pad sakthe 😃

Originally posted by: vironikajain

True.. 😃

am a good girl or tum😉

a big hi to all my lovable readers 😛😛😛
thank u for sparing ur inestimable time for reading my ff liking it and commenting on it 🤗
love u all ❤️

guys this ff is written mostly in hindi if any one is facing any problem in understanding u can tell me without hesitation will write it in english if it is the case but my mother tongue is nt hindi so what i wrote is a simple hindi hope u dont face any problem in understanding
here is a long wali updt as promised
waiting for ur likes and cmnts 😛😛

Part 2:

crush:

Mainey inn dono bachoo ke paas aapna khadam badaya . Ye dono bache bikul mere tarah dikh rahethe main ek bacha ko aapni kandhoo main leliya . Mujhey bohut khushi mila hai jab main ye bacha ka apne gale ko lagaya .Ek ajeeb tarak ki khushi mainey mehsoos kiya. Isaa lagraa hatha ki ye bacha ko bohut dhin se jaantha hoon . Jab main ek bacha ko aapne kandhoo par leliya tho dusra mera paint ko kinch raha tha aur uska nanha sa haath uppar karke mujhey ishara kar ratha ki main usey bhi aapne haatho main lelu.

Uss chota bacho ko main aligan main leliya . Aab ye dono ko main aapne 2 dono haatho main pakadatha . Mujhey bilkul issa lagraa rahatha jaise priya mujhey mil gaayi . Jitna khushi mujhey priya ko meri zindaagi main anne tab mila hain utni khushi mujhey inn dono milke hui hain .Iss crush ki caretaker inn dono ko mujhsey leraha thaa . Aur ye dono achanak rone lagee bohut zor se . Jab woh care taker mujhsey inn dono ko leraha tha mujhey bohut dukh hui woh bache rothe rahe paar main roo nahi payi .

Mujhey issa lagraa hatha jaise ki jho zindaagi mujhey mila hain woh ek paal main toot jaara ha hain . Main uss care taker ki permission lekhey thode dheer waha paar un dono bachoo se thoda dheer khela .Mainey bohut saare bachoo ke saath khela hain paar jitna khushi mujhey aaj mila woh mujhey nahi mila kuch tho khaas tha in bachoo main jho mujhey inki tarah kinch raha tha.

Main aaj bohut khush tha . Caretaker ne mujhey bataya ki inn dono ka naam prem aur ryan hain . Mujhey ye naam sunthe hi priya aur mera naam yaad agaya . Hum dono ka naam se ye dono ka naam shuru hua hain . Bohut dheer thak ye dono se main kheltha raha . Main ye thak bhool gaya ki mera business meeting hain aur mujhey jaana hai .Main aapni saari dukh bhol gayaa aur ye dono se maasthi kartha raha.

Mujhey driver aake bataya ki car teek hogayi aur mujhey office se bohut saare important calls agaya aur mere paas koi aur option nahi tha siwaye office ko jaana thaa jab main waha se utt raha tha mujhey jitna dukh priya jaane tab hua utna hi dukh aaj hora tha .paar mainey aapne aapko wadah kiya ki ek dhin main priya ko doond ke lekhar avoongi. Aur roj ye crush main akhey inn dono ko milunga.

Paar jab crush se bahar nikhal ra tha tab thak ye dono bacho sogaye the bohut thak gaye mere saath khelthe khelthe.aur main apne office ko nikhal pada. Aur ye Mumbai ke traffic har roj bohut rush hotha hain paar aaj zyada traffic nahi tha.main abb lokhandwala ke paas jaa raha tha.

Priya:

Uff aaj ryan aur prem ki vaccine tha aur main aapni office se thoda waqt permission lekhe aya tha aur main aapni car main bait ke aapni office se ryan prem ki crush ki tarah jaa raha tha. Aur achanak traffic signal paad gayi lokahandwala ke paas.ek tho mujhey dheer hora tha doctor ki appointment ko aur uppar se ye traffic.paar ek paal ke liye mujhey laga ram mere aas paas hain.

Ram:

Jab main lokhanwala ke paas agaya main priya ko mehsoos karne laga isa lagra tha ki woh mere aas paas hain.mera dhadkaan badtha raha main aapne aapko samal nahi paya aur main aapni gadhi se bahar aakhar usey dhoodne laga.

Priya:

Hm main ram ko iss jagah paar mehsoos karne laga main baas mujhey bohut becheni ho rahi thi main teek se car main bait bhi nahi payi aur main aapni car se bahar akhar ek baar aapni maan ki tasali ke liye ram ko dhoodna chaha aur main utne hi wali thi aur signal red se green hogaya aur saare ghaadiya chalne laaga. Aur main kuch nahi kar paya

Ram:

Main dheere dheere ek ek gadi check kar rahatha aur achanak se traffic signal red se green hogaya aur mera gadhi ke peeche bohut saare gadiya horn kar rahatha aur mere driver mujhey zor se bularahatha aur mujhey gadhi main baitke office jaana pada main bohut udaas hogaya tha ek paal ke liye paar mujhey yakin hogaya ki bohut jald main priya ko dhood pavoongi.

Ram office:

Bohut dheer thak main priya ki khayolo main rah gaya bohut dukh hora tha ki main priya ko dhoond nahi para ha hoo.Mujhey ye thak samaj nahi araa tha ki priya mujhey chod ke kyu chali gayi..jitna pyaar main priya se karth hoo utna hi gussa mujhey priya ke uppar araha thaa ki woh mujhey chod ke chali gayi.

Main priya ki photo lekhey usey baat kar rahatha

Priya i love u

Why did u leave me and go

Why did u me an orphan by leaving me

What mistake did i do

I loved u is that the only mistake i made u

Why did u give me this big punishment for loving u

I just loved u i did not do any sin then why the hell did u leave

Am dying thousands time a day without u

I need u priya

I love u

My heart beat beats only for u we were 1 soul then why the hell u made it like 1 soul and 2 bodies

Plz priya once come to me ill never ever make anything that hurts u ill show what is heaven if u come to me

Everyone will tell me to move on

But how should i explain them that we have become soul mates and i cannot move on without u

Plz priya come back to me

Main aapne khayalo se bahaar ayaa jab mera company ke manager ne mera door knock kiya tha

Manager:can i come in sir

Ram:yes mr vikram

Vikram is manager of my company

Ram:yaar vikram kitna baar samjao kit um mujhey sir maat bulavoo

Vikram:teek hain yaar woh kal ka meeting yaad hain naa

Ram:konsa meeting yaar

Vikram:woh singhania wali

Ram:hm woh yaad hain kal 12 ko hain naa

Vikram:hm yaar bohut disturbed lag rahe hoo

Ram:kuch nahi yaar

Vikram:bolo naa kya baat hain

Ram:aaj main ek crush ko gaya thaw aha main bilkhul mera shakal ki tarah 2 chote bachoo ko dekha tha mujhey khush hogay unn dono se milke aur jab woh crush se office arahatha tho mujhey lokhandwala stop mujhey lagra tha jaise main priya mera aas paas hain

I know am sounding weard paar i felt it like that

Vikram:shayad hosaktha hain ram bohut jald mil jayegi priya baas ek smile kardoo yaar

Aur uske baad hum singhania ki file paad rahe the uske claws aur sab kuch main aur vikram discuss kar rahethe.

Main aur mr sighania dono ek joint venture start karne ka plans aur uske silsile main hum main discuss kar rahe the.

Hospital:

Main prem aur ryan ko radha maa kady aur karthick ke saath ayi hoo aur humara appointment ke time hora tha aur next number humara tha .Mujhey achaa nahi lagraa tha ek tho ram ki bohut bohut yaad ari thi aur uppar se aaj prem aur ryan ko injections dene tha .Humara number agaya tha.

Main aur radhama andhaar agaye the doctor ke paas main inn dono ki medical file rakhe the doctor ke paas aur doctor woh files ke hisaab se vaccine dhena tha . aur doctor injections ka wrapper nikhal raha tha .

Aur injection ko dekthe hi ye dono rone laage unhe rothe dekhey mujhey rona arahatha aur main inn dono ko injection dethe nahi sakthi isliye main radhama ko aur kady ko inn dono bacho ko dediye aur bahar agaya. Main doctor room ke bahar room akhar ek chair main bait gayi thi Main aapne bachoo ko dard hothe hue dekh nahi sakthi. Akhir ek maa apne bachoo ko rohte hui nahi dekh sakthi. Iss waqt mujhye ram ki bohut yaad arithi .

Kaash agar woh mere saath hua hotha tho woh mera himmat bada tha main aapni maa papa ko miss kar ratha mere maa papa bhi jab mujhey fever ya kuch health problem agaya tho injection dene waqt woh mera attention injection se divert kar the the.kaash ram aur mere parents mere paas hothe iss waqt.

Main ye bhul gaya ki main hospital main hoo aur mere ankhoo se ansoo behree the Aur radhama ne inn dono ko injection lag waya aur kady aur radhama ye dono ko mere paas lekhar aye the main aapne ansoo jaldi jaldi wipe kiya thaaki radhama ko mere rona ka patha na chale

Radhamaa ne mujhey bilkhul meri maa ki tarah pyaar kiya aur jab bhi mujhey koi problem agayi tho aur toot jaathi tho radhama mujhye samal lethi. Prem aur ryan bohut ro rethe aur mujhey dr radhama ne bataya ki doctor ne kaha ki in dono bacho ko ek ya do dhin bhukar hosaktha hain

Main ye dono ko aapne godhi main leliya ye zor zor se rore the mere ansoo nikhal re the inn dono rothe hue dekhey paar main aapne aapko samal ke . hum sab main kady radhama aur ye dono ko aapne ghar lekhey gaaye.

Hum ghaar pohunch gaye the aur ye dono rothe rahe pura rasthe main aur radhama ne mere liye adhraak ki chai banayi aur mujhey diya paar ye dono ko rothe hue dekhey mujhey kuch kaane ka ya peene ka maan kar ratha

Radhama:priya hothe hain beta chote bache hain sham thak sab teek ho jayega thoo chintaa maat karo

Priya:mujhey inka ronadekha nahi jaara radhama mujhey bohut bura lagraa

Radhama:priya kuch toh khaaloo beta inn dono ko samalne ke liye tujhey tho energy chahiye tho kuch toh khaalo

Aur main aachi baachi ki tarah kuch khaliya aur kady aur karthick ye dono ko haathoo main pakad ke sulane ki koshish karee the. Main inn dono ko aapni doodh pilane ke liye kaa rahi thi

Aur main jaldi jaldi khaliya aapna food aur ye dono ko ryan ko main aapne khandoo paar rakhe sulane ki koshish kar ratha aur prem ko radhamma aur ye doo shaitaan sona ka naam nahi leraa tha aur ye dono mere paas rahne ko roraha tha

Main akhele inhe samal nahi sakthi paar bohut mushkil se inhe mainey sulaya.aur radhama chali gayi

Main aapne office ko phone karke aaj ke liye chutti leli thi paar kaal ek important company ke saath mere company ka meeting thaa.

Puri raat ye dono rothe rahe kyunki ye dono ko bhukaar chad gaya radhama ne mujhsey kaha ki koi problem hotho unhe bula lena paar main un sabko mere wajase takleef nahi desakthi thi aur ram ki bohut bohut yaad arii thi agar woh mere saath hothe the shayad mere madath karthe the inhe samal ne main

Miss u ram

Love u so much

Am sorry to keep ur kids away from u

I know i did nt even tell u that ur father of this 2 cute innocent kids

Am sorry

Plz forgive me plz..

Ye dono ke saar paar ghila kapda rakhey bohut mushkil se unhe suladiya paar jab thak mere office ka time horatha subah

Main ne ek palke bhi nahi jaapki thi raat baar ye dono ko sulane main nipat gayi thi

Main jaldi jaldi office jaana tha kyuki mujhey aaj ek important company se meeting tha aur main woh meetings ke saari file recheck karnaa tha main aaj chuti tho nahi lesakthi aur

Ye dono ko jaldi jaldi thayaar karke crush main chodke office ko chale gayi thi

Main aapni office

priya office:

mr singhania groups main chali gayi aur aab 11 bhaaj raha tha aur main baar baar crush ki care taker ko call kathe rahe ki prem aur ryan kaise hain

Main un dono ko akhela nahi chodna chahti jab woh bimmar hain paar kyaa kaare ye meri majboori thi

Aur main woh meetings ki saari files recheck kit hi aur aab baas kuch dheer main woh company ke ceo humare sir se milne wale the. Aur hum sab humare office ke entrance main khaade hokar wait kar rahe the aur ek bmw akhar kada hogaya tha

Aur uss gadhi se ek dark tall slim handsome guy black tuxedo main akhar khada hogaya aur woh koi aur nahi tha mera ...