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Cherishh thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
wowww...what a way to start, Maan likes Geet, so sweet yaar
Awww...Maan such a gentleman and a sweetheart, the way he cleared things about their relationship yet diverted Geet's mind about couch and bed thing was tricky and nice😉 and now they are friends too, cool yaar...you made it so simple and soon, great way of writing dear

Me toh still trying to digest Geet as ACP/in police, its so rare naa...only I saw her in that in role in one of muski's FF and here again, looking forward to it a lot dear

Aww glad that she at least stood strong to complete her dream

She got transfered😲...arre wasn't I just happy, not fair yaar😡...ab kya hoga, such a cliffhanger dear


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Posted: 11 years ago
Updating again 😊 anyone want update ??????
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Posted: 11 years ago
SO MAAN AND GEET ARE ON THE WAY TO BEING FRIENDS
AND GEET IS AN ACP
WHY DID SHE GET ANGRY ON BEING TRANSFERRED TO DELHI
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
Acp geet n doctor maan!!!
Maaneet became frndz
They understands eachother so well
Geet is tensed about her job :\
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Posted: 11 years ago
Part 3




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"Are you fine?" asked maan which made geet to come out of her thoughts. "Umm... yes... I mean... Woo" she is fumbling. "Geet, I am not a devil that you are being so scared off" teased maan so that she comes back to normalcy. First of all she is tensed and his damn comments are making her anger rise. She just wants to hit him with something. Seeing her annoyed face, maan let out a small giggle and asked again "Is there any problem?" geet nodded for a yes this time. "And what is that?" asked maan seeing her tensed face. Actually maan is smiling from inside, she is looking so cute in her tensed state. As if she wants to hide herself from telling her parents that she has failed in the exam. Geet's position is also not less than that. "Actually I have to report day after tomorrow" told geet without looking at maan, she is tensed of his reaction. Geet is not the type of girl who will be tensed or worried for such a small thing. But this is her in-laws house and she is just married. What happens if they come to know, will they think that her job is important than family and tell her to resign the job. "Then what is the problem geet?" asked maan. "You are asking what the problem is. You are having no problem if I go to office day after tomorrow?" asked geet, she is getting irritated with his non-sense questions. Maan nodded in a no all confused. This time geet pinched maan to confirm he is saying true and he is for real. When maan yelped in pain, she confirmed that she is not dreaming. "Really???" shouted geet in excitement. But soon her face fell. "What happened now?" asked maan. "Will your parents allow me?" asked geet sadly. Maan laughed off at her comment.

"Oh come on geet, don't get tensed. You don't know one thing. My mom went to KC with dad the second day of her marriage. My dadimaa used to this whenever mom helps dad in his office work. And will be happy thinking that her DIL is also same as her" told maan smiling at geet's innocence. Geet smiled widely at him. "But geet you have to be careful with one person" told maan seriously and geet looked at him with wide eyes thinking other than mom and dad who will object her. suddenly her thoughts went to dadimaa, will she not allow her. "Zoya, she will eat you up if you tell her that you are going to office. Now she will start taunting you along with us" told maan. Geet sighed, he is really a tease. He never tells anything normally. Unfortunately he is a doctor if he is a director of any serial or movie then people will die out of curiosity. Geet giggled at her own thought. "Why you are laughing?" asked maan. Geet nodded for a no and wished him good night. Maan shrugged off and he too slept on the bed.

Next day morning geet is the first one to wake up as usual. It's still 6am and today there are no rituals to get ready fast. She is staying in this room for 2 nights and 1 day, but didn't get a chance to explore the room. She looked around, each and everything in the room is so beautiful and perfect, the dcor of the room shows how simple he and how much he loves his family as there is a portrait of maan and his family. And on the table there is a photo frame of geet too, it is the same photo which geet gave before marriage to her chachaji. A small smile formed on her lips thinking maan is a responsible person. He doesn't know what kind of a person she is? But their marriage is fixed and her photo on the table shows he is ready to take her responsibility. Unknowingly a small layer of tears formed in her eyes, she is feeling overwhelmed with emotions and the love this family is showing on her. She wished to have such family from her childhood, seems like her wish is coming true. She opened the cupboard and looked at his dresses, all of them are scattered here and there. The cupboard is just like dustbin. And there is a small rag in it and something is pasted on it. Geet looked at it keenly and let out a small giggle. "PRINCE MAAN'S PERSONALS - DARE ANYONE TRY TO OPEN IT" written on it. Geet being naughty opened the rag and her eyes widened in shock. She is really shocked to see the items in it. It took some time to come out of her shock and not able to control she laughed out loud holding her stomach. There are few toys of maan which he played in his childhood. Her eyes caught a particular toy, she smiled seeing it. It's the same toy which her dad gave to maan and the same he brought for geet too. She too has that toy with her as the memory of her dad. "Hahaha, these are his personals. Really very childish. Is he really a doctor, that too one of the world's best doctor" thought geet and smiled. In all this she didn't understand one thing and that is very big problem too and that is, in this entire messy cupboard where she should keep her cloths. But one thing she must say, he is very child at nature. When he was taunting and teasing yesterday she thought he is doing all this to irritate her, but no its his nature to be friendly and make others smile around him.

Keeping aside the thought of arranging her things, she opened the other door of the room, she got the view of garden. Its as usual beautiful with different colors of flowers and few trees and a bench of 4. She saw maan's dad is sipping his coffee/tea reading news paper. Soon mom too joined him, after their morning routine mom asked to dad something and he denied. But mom didn't leave him, she ordered him and dad got up having no other option. They are going out of mansion, geet giggled as she understood dad is denying for morning walk and mom is adamant. "How sweet" thought geet and stood there for sometime enjoying the morning breeze which is so soothing. "Hey geet, good morning. Not finding you in the room I thought you were missing and thought to inform the same for rest of family members" commented maan. "I think his brain doesn't stop working for a second on these silly things" thought geet. "Hello madam, where are you lost?" asked maan getting no answer from her. But his mobile rang, maan went inside and answered the call. "Hey geet, emergency in hospital. I have to rush immediately" told maan. "Ok, I will prepare breakfast for you" told geet. "No geet it will be late, I will just fresh up and go" told maan and left to washroom. If he is maan then she is geet, he can't go with empty stomach. By the time he came down, geet is ready with bread-jam and juice. Maan sighed at her stubborn nature and had the juice in one go. "I will eat this in car" told maan. "Ok, you should complete it" ordered geet. "Sure madam, babye" rushed maan outside. Geet smiled again at him and went to their to fresh up.

Precap: Reception party and geet's duty.



Here is the part 3, Pen down your views and dont forget to hit like.

Waiting for your response.😊


Love you all

Chinni


Edited by chinni10 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow...lovely story,..
read pro,part 1 and 2..

geet is ACP and maan DOc...nice combination...

and geet has to join duty soon..and she is worried now...waiting to know what maan does...

cont soon..

thanks for the pm...
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Posted: 11 years ago
very cute part...
loved the teasing maan...

geet dnt allow maan to go empty stomach...how caring...

waiting to read geet's 1st day duty in delhi office...

and maaneet's reception...surely maan would be more naughty...

cont soon...

oops...

time for treat to comment first..
Edited by kingofme - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
It was a sweet update
Nice to see Geet knowing more about Maan

Awww maan is such a sweetheart yaar...cute, childish, naughty...love him so very much

Good to see Geet feeling happy with the warmth and love she receiving from Maan and his family, though much isn't shown about them😛😆

Waiting to know more about his family too and of course the precap is making me more excited
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow.. Awesome update... very unique combination of ACP and a doctor!
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Posted: 11 years ago
Nice update geet is joining her office loved this maan very much

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