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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: supreet_dmg

read the first 3 parts
really good!
ill catch up the rest in the morning
goodnight


So good to see you,Reet!😃 How have you been?

Thanks for reading & commenting.Waiting for ya to catch up!😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: shona14

vampu tu choti si khoon peeti bachchi🤣

aww innocent chotu si vampire😆😆


You didnt know? Uski khoon ki baby bottle bhi hai😆
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Posted: 12 years ago

What an update dido!!!! I enjoyed it throughly! And sorry for commenting so late. I was down with flu and mera laptop bhi cancer pirit hoo gaya hai! I might not be able to comment on your analysis today! But I throughly enjoyed it all. The tension is all but visible. Aayesha, Arshad and Dutta all are entangled so pathetically that it is now bound to end in a blood bath. The family time that both are spending is beautiful and I'm looking forward to the further proceedings!

So Aayesha is getting involved. Well that's bad news for I can see a massive Twilight triangle in embryonic stage! Cool!
Ab baaki comment later on! When I'll possible be bhali changi!
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Posted: 12 years ago

@Shivani

I knew something was wrong when you didnt log on for so long Hope you are better now.

Thanks for the lovely comment & get well soon.🤗

Hmmm...Dekhte jao! Aage aage kaise kaise bombs phat te hai😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Edited by -Carrie- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
res

me first???😲 buhahahhahaha😆😆😆

long update...me likey😃

hmm...so dutta and baji are discussing over the matter in "sammar ghar"😆 aww dutta is so sad, of course he would be...but the thing is none is supporting him. now i am smelling smthing fishy...is there any hand of apparao behind arshad's transfer in kolhapur?😉 so that damn wont be made, no benefit of people, and dutta dead? ek teer de 2 sikaar?

then, aisha came there to meet him. aww he was behaving like so cute, love sick guy...lagan nahi hain tera😆😆 loved baji's lines and about that alcohol. then aisha entered...and their talks. dutta's dilemma about his work and how aisha feel about it is logical, but the thing is aisha accept him who is he, as a whole. nawab sahab dont accept...as a father how could he? interesting...😉 and from the convo we come to know smthing very big must hv happen with dutta, thats why he is in this line...who wants to become a gangstar willingly?😳 waiting for that to unveil...maybe this is time for full dutta only update, i know u will love to write it😉😆 there is mutual feelings between dutta aisha...i really dont see how arshad will fit in this situation, and hope its nt one sided attraction


then...virkar bhai came to know about the meeting, and next plan of action. the precap is interesting. i think the people they caught smone died/ sick in jail, right? thats why human rights board...i wonder if dutta did it, which is nt logical, he blamed himself so much for bloodshed, how can he do that? so then baji?

waiting for update...and loved it as usual...and pls if possible update this week😳


ps did i miss something?
Edited by riyasarkar007 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Aww Datta hua jawan ree!!
bechaar ki hava tite ho gai item ko aate dekh...lol
kya baat hai getup change uske aate hi😉
thik hi kaha h kisi ne aaurat ki kabiliyat par kabi shaq ni karna chahiye...lol
kisi se kuch bi karva sakti h ye aaurat naam ki cheez!!😳 😆
Bazzi said lagan ni h abi...usko kya pata Datta ke dil me utthe h kaise-kaise toofan...🤣
nice song and their convey ...good understanding into between both!
bahar tak company bi dene aa gaya...lol
ar Arshad ke bando ne use dekh bi liya...aage ke epis me aisa kuch ni dikha ye jaanane ke baad ki vo vaha usse milne gai thi , Arshad ka kuch reaction to dikhati...ki dikhaya tha ya m bhool gai??😳
Edited by lizadavidmm - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
right frm th morning i ws gettng hell bored..due to a back injury..nd the stupid doc's idiotic adive of 2 weeks rest...bt thn came th QH update...nd trust me...it was sooo LOVELY...

aww..Dutta is very sad abt his loss...nd enraged too...

bt thn came Aisha...like a soothing air for him...nd i loved the convo betn the two...so understanding nd heart to heart...

Dutta becomes a teen lover boy in front of Aisha..lolz...nd aisha too is feeling something smthing...

Duttalicious.

continue soon

love
Aisha
Edited by Aisha.Vashishth - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
zuby ji 🤗
awesome update
bt chotu one 😡
lov d convo btw baji n bhau 😳
i was amazed too dat wen he himself don't want bloodshed den why he involve
a huge responsibility 😲
again baji n bhau teasing 😆
sammar ghar 😛
oye hoye ayesha ko bhau sse pyaar hua 😉
well written convo 👏
so new josh in bhau wow ⭐️
takkar ka maja ab ayega
so someone told abt ayesha to virkar wow
precap very interesting n scary
may be baji do something 🤢
well death never justified
huh agar muje friday ko update ni mila i wil not comment
sys 😉
hmm abi tak mera kal ka hangover ni hua
lovely work
thanks for d pm dear
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: riyasarkar007

res


me first???😲 buhahahhahaha😆😆😆

long update...me likey😃

hmm...so dutta and baji are discussing over the matter in "sammar ghar"😆 aww dutta is so sad, of course he would be...but the thing is none is supporting him. now i am smelling smthing fishy...is there any hand of apparao behind arshad's transfer in kolhapur?😉 so that damn wont be made, no benefit of people, and dutta dead? ek teer de 2 sikaar?

Haan!That guy Khare who was talking to Coelo in the first episode is Apparao's khaas aadmi😉 Actually ek teer se bahut saare sikaar hoga acc to him😆

then, aisha came there to meet him. aww he was behaving like so cute, love sick guy...lagan nahi hain tera😆😆 loved baji's lines and about that alcohol. then aisha entered...and their talks. dutta's dilemma about his work and how aisha feel about it is logical, but the thing is aisha accept him who is he, as a whole. nawab sahab dont accept...as a father how could he? interesting...😉 and from the convo we come to know smthing very big must hv happen with dutta, thats why he is in this line...who wants to become a gangstar willingly?😳 waiting for that to unveil...maybe this is time for full dutta only update, i know u will love to write it😉😆 there is mutual feelings between dutta aisha...i really dont see how arshad will fit in this situation, and hope its nt one sided attraction

Massive heartbreak hoga!Kiska? Jaan ne ke liye jheltey rahiye Qubool Hai!😛


then...virkar bhai came to know about the meeting, and next plan of action. the precap is interesting. i think the people they caught smone died/ sick in jail, right? thats why human rights board...i wonder if dutta did it, which is nt logical, he blamed himself so much for bloodshed, how can he do that? so then baji?

Some koot neeti (back door method) has been applied😉 Next one will be racy!Working on it!

waiting for update...and loved it as usual...and pls if possible update this week😳

Travelling this week.In fact have a plane to catch in a few hours but will try my best😊


ps did i miss something? Riya & miss anything???? Not a chance!😎

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