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OMG.. where r kids? i think Maan has taken them with him.. but he shld inform her then..

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nice part
feeling bad for geet but where are kids

Poor geet...
Wonder where r the kids...maybe maan took them...
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part 7
nice part...
OMG is that Maan's work?
poor Geet...
if its really Maan, then how could he be so insensitive?
damn him...
cont soon dear...

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Part 8

Geet and Amy reached home but there was not even a sign of kids.

Now every cell in get's body becomes numb and she felt as someone just dug her heart out of her body. Amy tried to calm her down but it was not possible for him as mother's heart is can never beat in absence of her kids. And in geet case it was worse because she has already have lost her Parents then Brother hate hers then her husband didn't even think her as his wife and have an affair with someone she only had her kids with her. SHE WANTED THEM BACK AT ANY COST.

Amy tried to calm her down but nothing was helping.

After few minutes of crying geet heard a sound

Then what she saw was the sight she would die for, a sight which has even more worth than world's treasure. It was the sight of her kids.

Jeh come running into her arms while Kajal hugged her from back. Geet felt like she got her soul back in form of her kids. She kissed and hugged them until she was satisfied. She was happy more than anyone else in the world. She was smiling but tears were continuously flowing out of her eyes. Being mother is a heavenly feeling while in being pain you can smile after watching your kids safe.

Amy felt relief that geet got her kids back, in this merely 1 hour Amy got to know the importance of kids in her life. He prayed that geet and kids always live together happily. But he decided to ask where the kids were? Because he felt that kids can't come this far alone and they had already search the route to home because going to police station.

Where were you buddies? Your cry baby mom was making my life hell?

We were with daddy Amy you know he bought so many toys for us right Jeh. (Kajal replied in an excited tone)

DAD? (Geet murmured)

Geet looked at the entrance of her apartment there was her husband standing in his typical attitude.

Ma. A. .n ji?

Ma.an. you a.re he.re?

Maan ji?..

Maan didn't reply her instead of it he was lost somewhere.

Geet mistook his not replying as arrogance as he never replied her she never has the right to ask questions right.

Geet smiled at the irony of her fate. But she felt good after seeing HER Maan in front of her.

Mommy dad also took us for ice-cream and it was so yum you know I ate chocolate flavor (Kajal said in an excited tune)

Amy was the mute specter of this scene. He felt something in Maan's eyes and geet silent tears but preferred to stay quite because he didn't want to be a misunderstanding here. He knew that their matter is very complicated.

Jeh was still hugging her because somewhere he was scared of his dad. It was not that he didn't loved his dad but he was very scare of him that is why he was mute now here he didn't wanted to be scolded by his father. From the starting Jeh was an naughty boy not at all like his sister geet understood him as she only sometimes scolded him when he was out of control but Maan was different he always wanted silence in the house when he is in there but somehow naughtiness in Jeh was always dislike by Maan which always result in scolding by him all the time.

Geet was still teary but didn't asked more question from him because she thought he will not answer her.

Why I don't have right to question my own husband. Why? (Statement)

Here Amy thought to leave the house because he though that Maan was come to take geet with him.

Maan was lost in his own thoughts.

Here Maan was drift to past when he came to know that geet left the house ... KM

**************** FLASHBACK AFTER GEET LEFT THE HOUSE AND Maan COME BACK FROM BAR***

Maan didn't knew that geet has left the house *

Its Maan's POV so sorry if I have done mistake I have tried hard to show his inner tumoil but if I fail so please don't be annoyed with me.

If you have confusion so please read part 1 again because there was Maan's POV in last.

If you have questions so u can ask me.

Maan was continuously drinking and thinking about Her. How dare she cheated on him?

That b*t*h!

No ! I will not think about her. I will live my life as I want.

She nothing to me, nothing other then my lawfully wedded wife.

She is nothing to me he just kept murmuring and went in unconsciousness .

********

*Here Maan doesn't remember the night as he drank alcohol* (sweetgirls1 note)

*******The next day******88

Maan woke up with heavy head. Just somehow manage to get into the mansion KM.

Maan- geet! Geeet!

Servant come running to him.

Is your name geet?

Sii..sirrr.. Geet madam is not at home.

Grrhhh... just grab the phone and call her home I want lemonade now.

Ye.yes sir...

After few hours...

Geet...!!!

Nakul- she is not at home sir...

What the...!!!! Didn't you call her?

Sir her phone is unreachable.

Bring me my coffee then!

After few mins...

You Nakul don't even know how to make a coffee... I want a perfect cup.

Sir. It is how I used to make coffee for you before your wedding...

Where does my wedding come in between this?

Sir Geet madam always made your coffee...

Fine just get lost...

That geet where is she lost now...?

Grhhh... That girl is always upto something.

I tried calling here from my cell but her cell was unreachable.

Precap- more of past and present Maan ka POV

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