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Posted: 11 years ago


Thank you so much for your support guys..
schedule as usual hectic and am getting busier but still i got a small break and tried to updt
pls let me know if the updt was up to the mark for am writing after a long time

this phase of the story is quite fast paced later half shall become slower.
Do leave me honest feedback
Will try to update once my lab submissions are done..they r due this week
may be after that I will get into the flow😉

PART 20

She sat up straight, hearing his words and looked at him carefully, "if you can't go up...then bring others down?"

"Absolutely correct... now will you please let me enjoy my morning...", he spoke lazily, trying to hold her closer but Geet's mind was stuck at one point. He was right"if you can't go up...bring others down!!! She stood up, ignoring his touch completely and went back to their room, freeing herself. He sat there for a while...wondering what happened. he felt that coldness again...after a long time perhaps..but he hated her going away like that!! she just went away? He shook his head"he was over thinking about it perhaps. He sighed and waited for her. but one thing was clear as of now"Geet Handa was back and she'd do anything to bring him down.


She was taking a long time now. He went and peeped into the room, worried about her. he stopped right by the door, surprised to see a very cold person sitting at the edge of the bed. She probably had some kind of a smile on her face which seemed very cruel. She was slowly taking off that bandage from her hands. It hadn't even healed a bit and he knew it might be hurting her. but then that sudden coldness was way too much surprising for him. he ran to her and held her hands.

"ye kya kar rahi ho?"

[what are you doing?]

She looked up at him.. there was no emotion on her face...not even a bit. She didn't even feel the pain it felt. She slowly stood up and took a step back, "I have to leave..."

He kind of guessed she was thinking about arjun..that was fine but then this coldness towards him... he was getting confused now... which was a very dangerous thing, especially after such a wonderful time they had spent with each other.

"Geet... are you okay?"

"yes I am...i have to finish what I had left midway..."

"relax baby.. I will drop you... lets have breakfast."

He was surprised to see her agree to this but she remain quiet the whole time... lost in her thoughts. He prepared breakfast for both of them and served them in two bowls. They sat on the dining table, eating their food quietly. She remained lost in her thoughts while he kept on observing her. he told Geet about her work because he knew her quite well by now.. she would never take help from anyone. In fact, even he followed the same rule. Someone had rightly said--"Revenge is Bliss whereas Gratitude is a Burden."


Geet was one shrewd business woman...just that someone has to awaken that demon in her. but her coldness was something that somewhere bothered him in the corner of his mind. the drive was even more silent. She had no emotion on her face. He was even surprised when she insisted him to drop her in her office rather than home. She ran into her building without even looking back at him. For once...he felt bad... not that he expected too much but then he at least expected her to reciprocate his feelings. He was in love with her..Madly perhaps but this little thing scared him a bit. But then he ignored it thinking she might be disturbed. Any girl would, especially after what arjun did to her. he wanted her to fight her own battle... and he will take care of arjun in his own sweet way.

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It was the end of the week and he looked at his phone sadly. Neither did she call him once.. nor did she take a single call of his. He was suddenly feeling so detached from her. he so wanted to meet her but then he had a lot of traveling to do this week... but she could have at least taken his call. He did keep a track of her through nisha who seemed to get worried for Geet more every passing day. He made her understand that she was trying to get things right, of course not mentioning arjun fiasco. But one week without even speaking to her... it was definitely making him angrier each passing day and he hated that. he even chided himself for being so silly and stupidly possessive..it was just one week only.. she was as much of a busy person as he is... but he just couldn't make himself understand. By the end of the week, he admitted to himself that he was damn possessive about her and he was mad at her for not even returning his calls...not even a message!!! He was hell busy with his work but he never missed to give her a call or leave a message every single day without fail. Somewhere that night with her was etched in his mind... he had come to a conclusion that even she loved him...or else why would a girl like Geet Handa give in so easily?? She did it of her own free will and her eyes reflected that. that one night meant so much for him... he wanted to hold her tight and keep her with him forever and ever and never let her go.


Geet finally finished with her work and headed towards home with arrogance and pride written all over her face. Maan's words actually had awakened that shwerd woman inside her. with her sharp wits and mind, she had finally been able to break through theat vicious circle that she had been pulled into and now it was the time to face her dad. She walked into the main hall ignoring nisha and Ana who seemed to be so delighted to see her home. She walked straight away to her dad's room and knocked.

"come in..."

Mohinder watched his princess stand in front of him with pride..her head soaring high. He hadn't even seen her properly for the past whole week and his health was slowly giving up on him. he had decided so many things but waited for Geet.

"I have done my job dad..."

He straightened himself and shot back, "but I need results..."

(Taking Writer's liberty... any problem pls pm😆)

She was his daughter after all. She didn't falter, rather stood straight and spoke back confidently, "the land that have laid their eyes on has been leased illegally and I think the police will be reaching there anytime soon..."

"how can you be so sure of it? Just don't think it to be a child's play Geet..."

"I have made all the arrangements... it was simple but it took a long time to get to the roots. They had covered it pretty well..."


Mohinder looked at is proud daughter... she was his princess but it was him who had made her this cold. He felt choked and tried to stand. The doctors had warned him to get an operation, though his chances of survival was very less and he had flatly refused, saying he had to die anyways...sooner or later. The massive blockage in one of his major renal arteries was succeeding in their mission. He stumbled a bit and Geet ran to hold him, "dad...are you okay?"

She helped him sit comfortably and sat beside him. Mohinder looked at her face, which did show some kind of emotion.. though it was minimal but yes it did.

"how many times do I have to tell you to be careful?"

He smiled at her bossing around..it was her who had taken the whole office charge after he took to bed and kept a strict eye on him too and what he did? Shoved her away when she needed him the most? He held her hand and placed it on his heart, "am sorry beta..."

She looked up at him, surprised to see his teary eyes, "dad?"

"am so sorry... I just shouldn't have forced you into all these... for my reasons I pulled you into this world.. I ruined everything..."


She immediately wiped his tears and hugged him, breaking through that egoistic her, "its not like that dad...this world is mine as much as it is yours and I love working for your' company...its just the best place I could have ever imagined."

He smiled, hearing his daughter try to comfort him...and that was enough.

"Geet... just promise me one thing beta...will you?"

She sat straight, holding his hands, looking straight into his eyes.

"if ever you feel that its enough or if it becomes unbearable, please step down..."

Her eyes widened hearing that, "step down? But dad...its yours... how can i..."

"am not saying do it now... but don't hesitate to step down if you think its enough. No business is more important than my princess..."

He softly caressed her hair while she hugged him tightly. Nisha smiled, standing beside the door... only Mohinder was the one who can make Geet do things which she'd never have done otherwise. She walked out before Geet noticed her and went to her room, smiling to herself. After a while, Geet went to her room and Ana followed.


"how come princess is home for so long today?". Ana passed a comment.

"shut up Ana...", Geet threw the towel playfully on her, "am tired...i want to take a bath now.."

Ana jumped on her bed and fell flat on it, taking Geet's cell, while Geet went to get her clothes.

"di... lets party since you are in such a good mood..."

Nisha entered with a wide smile, "but no going out today... we'll celebrate at home since madam has graced this house with her arrival today..."

"Chachi..you too? Can you guys just let me shower in peace..."

Just then Ana noticed a message on Geet's cell and smirked, showing it to nisha. Geet was busy in her work while nisha and Ana smiled, seeing it from maan. Ana opened the message and smiled naughtily reading the content. Geet watched the duo get themselves buried into her cell, "what are you guys doing?"

"I miss you a lot sweetheart...I so wish to have you in my arms right now and..."


Ana read aloud, making nisha gasp at the continuity of his sentence. Geet's eyes widened in surprise... it had been yesterday that he had sent this message and she was too busy to even notice it. Ana looked at her naughtily, "I think he deliberately let this sentence at continuity...di... what are you guys cooking??"

It was then she realized she hadn't seen him for the past one week...and then there was this sudden urge to go and give him one tight hug. They haven't even spoken... she missed her hotshot. It was nisha's words that brought her back reality, "what are you guys upto?"

"di... don't tell me you are pregnant..." Ana was in splits with her own joke.

Nisha knew what could all this mean but she was a broadminded woman. It wasn't a taboo in the world they belong to...but she was really concerned.

"Parkati... whats going on??"

Geet sighed and snatched her phone from Ana, "nothing Chachi...just don't listen to Ana..she is mad...now will you two please let me take a bath peacefully?"

"not until you confess how much have you tortured that poor guy.."

Ana couldn't stop laughing at nisha's words. Geet glared at them, locked her phone with password and went to take a bath. Nisha knocked her door, "don't forget that you have to be with us' tonight... ask your maan to wait..."


Geet fumed hearing their laughter from outside. She took a quick bath and came out in her towel. She stood in front of the mirror, looking at her bare skin... almost losing herself into the memories of that night. it had been a weak since she had even seen him... or even heard him the whole night flashed in front of her eyes and a smile teased her lips... Geet handa was for the first time wishing to be with a guy rather than the other way round. She changed and fell on her bed, thinking what arjun's reaction might be now when the police investigated the case. They had covered this small issue really well.


Arjun blasted as the police got him arrest warrant for illegal acquisition of land. He knew this was Geet's doing...he just knew it. he didn't have to even think. That bi*** was more than what he had thought. He was mad... how could he just underestimate that woman!! Well... since she had stepped into the lion's den, she might face the consequences of it as well. he just had to wait for a few hours till he was bailed out by his lawyers.


She was slowly drifting off to sleep when Ana's sudden voice disturbed her. she looked around..it was getting darker. She frowned but Ana heard none. They wanted her downstairs for their so-called small party. She got up from the bed when her eyes fell on her silent phone. She didn't know what happened but she felt like checking it.. and she did. But he heart sunk seeing n call or message from him. its been almost 24 hours since he had even called and she was suddenly feeling so low and sad. She chided herself"she was Geet handa...and she shouldn't be worried for such stupid things. Her rational mind reasoned with her on grounds of work yet somewhere deep within, that she never realised, were the will and crave to feel those unknown feelings again. she sighed and went down the stairs to see the whole family wait for her. she was seeing her whole family together after a long time..her dad, Chachi and Ana. She smiled... never realising so many new emotions emerging within her. may be the spur of the moment...or that thing' she felt with maan...but it felt so nice and overwhelming"her family'.


She joined them with Ana cracking some stupid jokes. They had ordered dinner from outside and decided to sit for a game of cards. The four of them sat around the table while Geet shuffled the cards and distributed them. the round started with nisha taking away the cake, while the next set was taken away by Geet. there was an ease in each of them but Geet wasn't. Her mind went back to her phone again and again to see of he had called or texted her...but her face fell when she found none. Yet her big fat ego didn't let her text/call him from her side. Why should she go after a guy?? It should be the other way round.


The clock struck 11pm and they realized how long they had played and even managed to take their dinner in between. But Geet's mind was somewhere else.. it was hitting her ego that he wasn't even texting her once when he had did the same for whole of the week. Cant he just do that for another one time? Nisha and Ana watched her naughtily after mohinder retired to bed.

"Geet... just go to sleep...or are you waiting for someone's call?", nisha teased.

Geet didn't even understand what she meant. She was lost in her own words. She meekly replied in some random monosyllable and went to her room.

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It struck 12 and she was hell irritated. Madam had finally put aside her ego for once and called him but he had rejected it. that was it. she just couldn't take it. she changed into her shorts and a tank top and sneaked out...well she didn't had to technically, in case you forget she was the Geet Handa but she made sure she made no noise. She took out her car and drove towards the farmhouse angrily. She didn't know if he'd be at the farm house or at his home but that didn't bother. She did what she felt was correct. She just somehow knew he might be there..and she just dashed iin without even noticing the door was open.


Maan had been really really mad at her and decided to spend some time in the farmhouse where he could just feel her around. And it just broke that damn self control and he angrily rejected her call. He stood looking out of the huge floor to ceiling window when he heard the door banging open. He turned around, only to be surprised seeing her march towards him furiously. Before he could even put up his stand, she hauled herself into his arms smacked her lips right on his. He stumbled backwards with the force, fighting her lips, trying to understand what she was upto. But Geet was nowhere near leaving him this easily...she pressed herself closer, wrapping her legs around his waist, almost making him fall on the couch.


He had been so waiting for this time with her... and here she was throwing herself at him. he kissed her back, ferociously, taking out his anger on her. his hand rubbed her back feverishly while his lips took in those soft petals into his mouth, devouring them... quenching his thirst with her taste and he had to admit, she tasted heavenly sinful. Probably the distance had made him feel the same but he just couldn't resist. He didn't even wait to intensify the kiss, rather just pushed his tongue inside, reaching the corners of her mouth.


She clutched his hair tighter, pushing herself further on to him.. trying to as close to him as possible. She had come to shout at him for ignoring her but here she was being pulled into a spiral of desire and lust. She opened her mouth wide enough to welcome his warm tongue in. Her lips closed over his tongue as she let out a deliberate sexy moan, feeling that warm fluid playing between their mouths. They were definitely angry on each other... they were in a mood to fight.. but the passion burning between them left no space for words. Their anger was felt in every kiss that led to another kiss, deeper than ever. She bit his lip and he chewed her up as his reply. But she was no less. Their tongues marched into a ferocious battle, making the kiss ever so erotic than before.


Unable to take it anymore, they just left each other, panting furiously for air. She parted a bit and rested her forehead over his. Their breaths mingled, and so did the warmth of their bodies.

"how dare you reject my call?", she spoke breathlessly.

"..and how dare you ignore me all this while...one whole week damn it. did you realize that someone might be waiting for your one call... or even a tiny text?", he shouted back at her, still not letting go of each other.

"I was held up... but that doesn't mean you reject Geet handa's call...", she snapped back. She made a face and got off him and walked straight up stairs to their bedroom. He sighed and looked at her angrily... what the hell does she think of herself? He followed her to the room, already planning to get back at her. he pushed the door shut with his leg and slipped his hands around her waist, pulling her closer in a jerk.


"I am not some who'd go after an egoistic proud kid like you...", he spat it right on her face. Ohh she just hated that rude arrogant attitude of his. She gritted her teeth and shouted back, "then let me burst your bubble hotshot... you are one rude haughty arrogant man..."

"oh you bet I am sweetheart...", he retorted angrily and ripped off her top. And they knew what was to follow next. He cupped her br**** while his lips went back to her, devouring it carnally. Her hands glided up his toned bare body, feeling each and every muscle with her palms. In a sudden sweift moment, he yanked her hair backwards and trailed his wet tongue down her neck line and dipping it into her cleavage.

"maan... ", she gasped, feeling her bra being unclasped. He pulled out that flimsy fabric, revealing her full round globes, all to his eyes' delight. She stood there watching him so lost... if possible, she'd just pull him close and make love to him wildly. But then she suddenly realized her body's reaction... her entire being throbbed just by that one look of his...to an extent that she felt that wetness down her core. She saw him move a bit and lift her up in his arms, "do you realize how beautiful you are?"


His voice was so soft, loving and sweet..that she couldn't help but look up at him. he had always complimented her as beautiful...", she felt something within her once again...like millions of butterflies zooming in her tummy, as he lowered her on the bed, ever so softly. There was nothing called anger than crossed his face. She felt touched... something new for her again. probably love' is the one doing all the wonders. His care, concern, love for her had made it possible for her to feel such things... though it was a very slow process, she was feeling things. He hovered over her lips for a while... and then trailed down to her valley, placing wet smooches on her exposed skin. She went blank for a while and clutched the sheets tighter... she was wavering... faltering... she was getting moved. This was so not happening... her hold became tighter, as he slowly came atop her, setting his lips on her in a slow sensual deep kiss. Her hands automatically wrapped around his taut chest, hugging him while he dipped lower, slowly, sleekly, placing wet kisses everywhere he could.

He looked at those tempting curved that puckered their buds just by his one gaze. He leaned over and took in that entire mound of flesh into his mouth, flickering his tongue over her hardened buds. She hissed his ecstasy.. that satisfaction she was feeling within. He was slow and deliberately lingered longer, making her feel the bliss while she just waited to expect what might his next target be.

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next:...and that passionate night☺️

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Edited by kawaii_geet - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
yeah me first
it was beautiful and thank god you are back 😊

i am glad that stupid arjun was sent to jail 😡

hmmm wow geet n maan one passionate soul 😊 waiting for next 😊😉
Edited by zaara2212 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow! What a beautiful update! 2 ppl in love getting mad and see how it ends! Hahaha update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
badi badi EGO

Geet did it ... Maan's mantra worked
Lol

Nice update
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Posted: 11 years ago
Arjun to ab gaya...
Nd geet's big fat ego...but atlast they were together. .
loved the update... 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
He has irrecoverably fallen for her.
Deeply and Madly in love.
Their egos are as big as Eiffel tower.
awesome part
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Posted: 11 years ago
am the 19th for the first time
and ash it was hot...or should i say pure bliss from geet's pov
btw does she acknowledge that what she feels is love

am very happy about arjun
wish him ruin to shit

continue soon
cant wait for the night (that you mentioned as next☺️)
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Posted: 11 years ago
luvly update as usual dear... thanx 4 d pm :-)
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"how dare you reject my call?", she spoke breathlessly.

"..and how dare you ignore me all this while...one whole week damn it. did you realize that someone might be waiting for your one call... or even a tiny text?

best line




loved it so so much
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Posted: 11 years ago
very good move by geet for that b...Arjuna and first time mohinder realized he has put lots of pressure on his tiny daughter, and now she is feeling love for maan is good sign for their relationship.
I think mohinder should now let her know about his sickness as it is not good to hide when his life is in such danger.

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