Mere Papa Maan-2 Th#7/Last part 57 pge 87 n 89/epilogue pge 89 /17 Aug - Page 29

waiting 4 next pt eagerly conti soon plz...

i got the thread yipieee

Haii sonia ji I am here yaar communication gap horaha hum dono ko

Sorry if I hurted you really sorry ok

The concept was really interesting and I am curious to read more

Both maaneet were totally opposite at sailing on same boat

The title attracted me soo much I like it

And the start uff maan the angry young man and stubborn also uff babji help me

The reason of his behaviour was there parents only

I have seen cases like this if you believe me or not

Maan borught baby from where uff I know it is mystery will read all parts now

I love kids soo much Rehaan bangaya Rehmaan and Mannat was same like maan

Rehaan was like geet and 1^st meeting they had fight rolf

Mannat is making fun of all where Rehaan is totally diff from her

Love mannat attitude and her way of talking all

Read upto this only will comment after reading all parts

pooja

so excited for the update

Chapter 53

Before nurse could bring wheel chair Geet was already on her feet.

'Geet what are you doing .Let nurse bring wheel chair ' Maan forcibly made Geet to be back on bed

'Don waste time.I am fine Maan .I can be on my feet.See...Lets go'Like a stubborn child Geet again got up from bed and tried to take few steps but her legs were not supporting her body properly. She was about to fall when Maan grabbed her in his arms.

'Geet I told you wait for a while'

'No I can't'

'No one can dare to mess with you.Lets go' he nodded head and in a jiffy lifted her up in his arms 'okey no wheel chair my arms r enough for you' slight smile came to his lips after long finding Geet bit better than before.

While passing through corridor every eye was on this couple. But away from this world in their own thoughts they were just thinking about kids.

But this was really a pleasant surprise for Daddi .She could understand in which manner Geet was in his arms whether she is recovering or still in same condition 'I am so happy to find my child in good health' Daddi had tears of satisfaction in her eyes looking at Geet who was still in Maan's arms

Daddi asked Maan to take her inside in kids room.Even this was a moment to cheer for Rano too

'Geet meri bacchi ..r u alrite ? ' wiping her overflowed eyes Rano came toward them.

'Ur daughter is fine but what about mine ..mine kids..Maa ?' before Geet could say more Rehaan scrammed seeing his mother ' Mommi ...Mommi...where was you ..Promise me momi u ll never leave me alone ' he was about to cry.When Maan made Geet sit nxt to him.

She hugged him tightly .Her son was in her arms but her eyes were on Mannat 'Never son ll never let you alone' she placed soft kiss on his forehead.

'Momi dekho ...Mannat ko dekho...she is doing tantrums...some times starts to cry..than yells and rub her legs...not opening eyes even when Papa promised her that he will never stop her to say him Mere Papa Maan' he regretted in one go 'Ask her Momi to open her eyes...plz Momi' poor child begged taking his mother's face in tiny hands.

'She is just like Papa ...As stubborn. But I will try ...Mom will try'she forcibly made Rehaan lay down back and tried to get up from bed to reach her little girl

Maan the silent spectator who was standing behind them wiped his tears hearing Mother Son's emotion outburst. Suddenly he moved forward and encircled his arms around Geet's shoulder to support her.

'Maan Mannat ' she pointed her finger toward her unfortunate child and than looked back at Maan with her blank eyes in search of some ray of hop in his eyes.

'Geet doctor said she will be alrite but will take some time.' If the percentage of truth in his statement was bit higher it was not a perfect truth .His lips were shivering saying this first time.But even after so much ups and downs in their relation .His each word is a truth for Geet.Slight smile on Geet's lips giv him little satisfaction. .In the same way he helped her to sit next to Mannat

She stroked little girl's hair calmly...'Mannat dekho beta..Every one wanna talk to you open your eyes baby...Nani ..Daddi Maa...Rehaan...Momi ...aur dekho Mannat k pass unke Mere Papa Maanbhi hai...dekho' she lost her control bursting in tears.

Not just Geet but everyone was in same mental condition .Savitri Devi Rano...who were watching them standing at door.Maan who was standing behind Geet .But it was surprising for Rehaan what was going on.

'Why you all are crying.' Looking at every family member's face Rehaan questioned. Then they realized not just Mannat but Rehaan is also in bad health even if he is recovering but any kind of mental stress not good for him.

'No beta we are not crying. But we are happy that you are fine now and doctor said Mannat gonna be alrite soon .Jab koi happy hota hai na kabhi kabhi fir bhi tears aa jaate hai...When u will grow up then you will understand ' Rano tried to console him.

'Really Naani aisa bhi hota hai ' surprisingly he said rolling his eyes.It was not hard to convince little child but reality was something else. Rano nodded her head assuring him.

'Sir its not good for Mrs Khuraana to get up from bed much.She is in earlier stage of her pregnancy and not in good health' Nurse came inside dragging wheel chair toward bed 'Actually Doctor asked to take Mrs Khuraana to her room .So I came here.'

'Sister ask doctor to shift me here.I can't stay away from my kids.'Like a stubborn child she resisted to go

'Sister I'll talk to doctor .Aap jaaea' Maan second Geet

'Ji Mr Khuraana'

Keeping delicacy of case in mind Doctor at last permitted to shift Geet in same room.Room was big enough so to shift Geet was not a problem. She asked to keep her bed in between both kids.

One more day,one more nite had been passed.But no...there was no improvement in Mannat.Even no one could express their worries in front of Rehaan. Somehow consoling him when ever he questions about her.

Next Afternoon

When Maan was not ready to leave kids and Geet alone.Geet forcibly sent him to KC to attend meeting regarding his most ambitious project. Rehaan he was sleeping.But Geet she had no rest .She was in her thoughts when a feeble cry keep her out of her thinking

'huuu...huuu...' yeh it was Mannat in her restlessness nodding her head.She was regaining her senses back .The parts of her body those can feel had unbearable pain.Geet quickly pressed bell getting up from bed.

Disturbance broke Rehaan's sleep too.Looking at his mother he also got up.

'Momi kya hua...' He jumped from his bed and ran toward Mannat's bed

'Rehaan Rehaan c baby Mannat is going to be alrite' Holding Rehaan's arm with her hand dragged him near.Rolling other hand over Mannat's cheek.

Doctor Khanna who had stopped going home due to this case came in fraction of seconds.

'Mrs Khuraana plz relex let me check her 'he consoled much terrified mother .

She got up from Mannat's side to let doctor check her.Nurse gave a stool to her to sit near and she took Rehaan in her lap worryingly looking toward examining doctor.

Mannat again cried. Tried to open her eyes.Rano who was out for a while to call back home as it was not permitted to use phone inside ICU area.Nurse informed her too and before going back to room she called Daddi Maa asking her come as soon as possible

'Doctor why u r not telling any thing ?' Geet lost her control and She got up from stool making Rehaan sit on it.

'Mrs Khuraana I told you plz relex' He repeated.

'How could I ...? ' she yelled

'Mannat get up now..its too much...get up now' she jerked Mannat holding her from shoulders

'Geet kya kar rahi ho' Rano freed Mannat from Geet's grip ' R u mad...not just Mannat u have to keep Rehaan's condition in mind too...agar tum he aise karogi fir hamara kya hoga?' Rano whispered near Geet's ear

'Maa per ...' she had no other words ...hugged Rano back tightly

'Momi c Mannat is opening eyes' Rehaan scrammed in excitement diverting both ladies attention toward his sister.

Even after days there was a slight smile on Dr Khanna's face.He took a deep breath.' Mrs Khuraana Mannat is coming out of her unconsciousness.'

'Maa...Mannat theek ho jaaegi aab haina Maa' Rano nodded her head in same assurance which Geet expected from her.Even when she herself had some doubts.

The moment they waited like from ages had arrived. Little girl blinked her eyes.Was trying to open completely but with hardship.Dr Khanna guessed the inner conflict of worried mother 'Mrs. Khuraana u have to wait .Atleast she regained her senses back.This was our first priority .Now I m sure she gonna respond to our treatment in fast way.'

'Yes Doctor this should be your priority. My daughter's fast recovery should be your only aim.' Entering room Maan said hearing doctor's words .Daddi was also with him.

'I am trying my best Mr Khuraana' scared Dr. reassured him. 'Mrs Khuraana is alright now .Her discharge papers are ready and in a day or two you can take Rehaan back home also' Dr tried to calm Maan down bit with this .

'I know her gynecologist phoned me about her discharge.' taking Rehaan up in his arms Maan said.

'Papa Mannat ko hosh aa gaya .Aab mere sath wo bhi ghar jaaegi na'Rehaan questioned Maan with hope filled eyes

'She will go back home soon Baby...but will take little time...aap chahte ho na wo completely theek ho jaaye' Maan answered

'Yes Papa..than I will also go home when doctor uncle gonna permit her 'Pouting his lips Rehaan said 'she is my sister I can't leave her.Just for few days hum sath nahi thay we both became ill.'

Both Maan and Geet had no answer for this. Even if their son had his own logic regarding his relation with his sister.His grown parents even not thought about the outcomes when they separated both kids due to their silly conflict. It was also true their conflict had nothing to do with Rehaan's cancer and Mannat's this condition but they were at mistake some where

'Yes son she is your sister no one can separate you both .No one has this rite.Even not that almighty who sent you both along wise in this world. Circumstances may be any it was your parents who kept you both apart .Not now.Both my kids proved me wrong ' Maan thought kissed Rehaan twice.

Taking heavy steps Maan joined Geet near Mannat's bedside.First he looked at Geet like silently trying to assure her that every thing gonna be alrite.Than looked at Mannat.

It was strange .Was really little girl waiting for him to open her eyes first after days.At last she opened her eyes looked at Maan blankly without blink.

'Geet c Mannat opened her eyes' overwhelmed he said trying to hide his inner grief

' plz don gather such around her .She needs open space 'Dr requested.

'Yes Dr is rite.In our excitement don forget she needs rest.' Daddi second Doctor. All of them took their seats on Geet's bed side toward Mannat looking at her.Rano took Rehaan from Maan and Maan he was following Doctor .

'Mannat why are you not speaking anything' Geet she was a mother atlast how could she resist herself

How could she keep herself away from her.She came near to Mannat

'Doctor Geet is right if she is back to her senses why we are still waiting for a single word of her ? ' Maan questioned slowly to doctor.

'Mr Khuraana I told you don expect everything such soon.'

'What you mean don expect. She is our child not a thing or any competition for which we have to wait for results' irritatingly he said

But this time doctor gave no answer.He examined Mannat .She was responding well .But her silence was a thing to worry.Giving instructions to nurse Doctor Khanna left room to discuss latest reports of Mannat with his team of specialists .Forcibly Maan made Geet ready to take some rest and Rehaan he was also sleeping under effect of medicine. He sent Daddi and Rano back home .Sitting beside Mannat he continuously glared his innocent daughter .It was hard for him to control himself more now.

'Mannat beta aab uth jayo.Dekho apke Papa..I mean Mannat k Mere Papa Maan ..apse sorry hain...pulling my ears' pulling his ears he begged to Mannat.

Even if she was not speaking but she was smelling things around her.She felt what he said.She opened her eyes .But no reaction from her side.Just a blank look without blink starring him .

'Mannat aap sun rahe ho beta..fir bolte kyo nahi...Bolo beta...you are angry with me..But not with Momi and your bother' taking her face in hands he said

Even a man like Maan was on the verge to give up when he felt a soft touch on his hand.Yeh it was Mannat's hand .She was trying to raise her tiny fingers and in this way touched his hand.

'My baby you r responding to papa beta bollo' he took her hand in his but no motion in it.

'Why she is not responding .I can't bear any thing wrong more now with you. Aab apke paas apke 'Mere Papa Maan'hai ' Maan thought grabbing her tightly in his arms

Finally updated after weeks hope up to ur expectations.Nothing to say more plz read this like this and comment. Positve criticism welcome

Sonia

Tense Liberties according to rules of contemporary writing

Haiii Sonia,
I cant express my happiness to see d update aur read karne ki toh baat hi kya hai😃I dont even know how to post pics here,otherwise I wud've filled your thread with all the happiest wala faces and pics.I m so so so happy that U updated.Muuaaah to You.

Huhhh,
Now d update.Rula diya yaar.To see the condition of Geet,helplessness of Maan,cute innocent questions of Rehan and unconcsiousness of Mannat,I was feeling like when will these souls get happiness???

How much Geet is suffering to see the unmoving Mannat and when she gained consciousness she cant talk.Her lil lil movements when Maan was talking to her,moved me.And I was in tears to see Maan crying and requesting his Mannat to respone to her 'Mere Papa Maan'.

I really really wish that she gets well soon.

You've given an outstanding update.So dare U say anything negative about Ur writing capabilities in any of Ur posts,as U keep on doing.

You are fantastic and U know that.

Thanx for d update.

awsem update maan taking care of geet and rehan and rehan worried for mannat geet shifting to there room and mannat slowly getting consciousness but not speaking doctor hoping mannat will respond well maan trying to make mannat respond