ARSHI FS-FROM YOU AND ME TILL US UPDATED 26/9

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sreemeera

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Posted: 11 years ago

#571

Awesome.

Perfect confession. Now they really knew the feeling of the other...You have written this well. Every thing has been cleared in between them..

For writing conversations in Hindi, I like them.. I like to read it inHindi which will keep the essence of conversation. The English translation will help those who can't understand Hindi. This is my opinion only..

Please continue soon.

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Prerna

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Posted: 11 years ago

#572

awesome update
liked it
and finally arhi confessed

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pakpearl

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Posted: 11 years ago

#573

I always love Arhi's face to face argument...

The difference in their personalities n their mutual attraction convert a simple situation into a happening scene.. 😃😳

Ankita...

Ur style of writing is impressive n heart-touching...

Keep it up !!!!

And don't forget to update soon !!!!

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hmm.. guess karo :P

@jas0308

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Posted: 11 years ago

#574

loved the update

finally they confessed their love.. such an amazing confession

continue soon

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Mariam

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Posted: 11 years ago

#575

👏beautiful...and this is perfect confession...

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Mbean

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Posted: 11 years ago

#576

I am so glad that the confession turned out satisfactory and I didn't disappoint you all.There is so much that Arnav and Khushi has to confess to each other,I hope it continues to turns out as it was wanted .😳

There is a question for you all at the end of the update,dont miss it.!!!!!

PART 5 (C)

"Nomatter how strong are the walls surrounding your heart,when love is in sight,everything melts away".

Time has seemed to stop as two lovers finally named the emotion that has been in their heart since so long.They have fought it for such a long time,masked it in name of hatred and indifference,tried to shut their heart out of it but heart follows its own path.Love happens without any reason,without giving any hint of its arrival and the love that they shared was unconditional,pure,the truest of true love which passed every hurdle and came out stronger than ever.

Standing in each others embrace after god knows how long,they finally moved apart as they stared into each others eyes,deep and soulful.,the emotion that they have seen numerous times in them has now finally been laid out in open.Khushi snuggled herself more in his arms not wanting to bereft of his touch so soon,as she mumbled "Arnavji ab hum khaana khaley"(Arnavji,shall we eat now) as she tightened her hold on him even more.

Arnav chuckled at her contrary action and muttering an "Unbelievable",they made their way downstairs.As Khushi went toward the kitchen to get the food Arnav sat at the dining table looking at her adoringly,driving those barren streets he has never thought that when he would come home things will turn up like the way they had but now since they have he couldn't be more thankful about it.Khushi came with a plate of food in her hands and sitting down placed the food tray in front of him.Seeing only one plate Arnav asked her eyeing his eyebrows up.

"Tum nahi khaoogi"(You wont eat).

"Khaayenge naa,aap khilaynge,abhi thodi der pehle bhi to khila rahe the,to ab kya hua ,fikar mat kijiye Arnavji aas paas koi nahi hai,koi aapko is baat ko lekar kuch nahi kahega".(Ofcourse,I will eat you will feed me,you did this sometime ago upstairs right then what happened now,Don't worry Arnavji there is no one around,you wont get teased about it).Khushi answered him her tone full of playfulness ladened with the right she felt on her husband.

He looked at her face,the eyes holding nothing back now,twinkling with the happiness love outshoning from them.He reminisced from the day he has come back,Khushi was more demonstrative in her actions towards him,not that she wasn't before,but now she did with it full conviction,there was no hesitancy or doubt involved in her actions,with the authority that she has over him,from making him drink the bitter concoction or the way their sleeping positions has change wordlessly,things have taken a major leap between them.

The separation has been so painful but has led to the realisation of what they meant to each other.His confession on the phone and their unexpected meet that has been a blessing in disguise has been a testimony of how far they could go to make sure the other was safe,their heart that has united so long ago has now finally found its peace.

"Tumhein sach mein lagta hai main kisi se darta hoon Khushi"(You really think I am scared of anyone Khushi).He asked smirking,reminding her of all the times,he has cornered her,invaded her personal space,doing and saying what he has too without caring of what anyone thinks about it.For him he has always held that right with Khushi,seeing her flushed face and downcast eyes he murumured a slow "Comeon Eat Now".

He fed her and himself ,no words were spoken as a comfortable silence surrounded them.When something you have longed for so long finally come alive into your life,you want to hold onto it forever and same was the case with Arnav and Khushi as their eyes remain locked.Holding onto each other they reached the thresholN of their room when Khushi admobnoshing herself for forgetting the jug of water rushed towards the kitchen to get it.

Smiling Arnav entered the room,he was just strolling in the room when his eyes sought some thing familiar on the ground.he walked there and picked up the things that were scattered on the corner of the room,he gathered the things putting them in the box where he has stored them as the realisation of them being here hit to him,Khushi has found it and after the way he has left earlier she would have taken them out again.

Khushi entered the room to find Arnav standing at the corner of the room,the same place she has been sitting bundled up not so long ago,since his back was facing her she kept the water jug on the table andcalled out to him softy "Arnavji".

Arnav went stiff for a second and then turned towards her,Khushi saw the box in his hands,she has been so relieved seeing him that all the thoughts about that box has fled away from her mind.He didn't said anything in response but Khushi understood his unvoiced question and answered automatically.

"Arnavji,who yeh humein.Jab aap nahi the yahan,to us din hum cupboard mein kuch doondh rahe the tab humein yeh mila"(Arnavji,this when you weren't here,I found this in cupboard while I was searching for something).

He quietly moved towards the poolside.Khushi stood there giving time to him to grasp it,surely the way it was hid he had never imagined for someone to find it especially her.She moved out where he was standing,struggling to form a word and apprehensive that unknowingly she has hurt him.

"Arnavji,aap woh hum"(Arnavji,this you me--).Khushi struggled to form words as her eyes glistened with tears,Arnav immediately turned around hearing her choked voice.as he cupped her face and wiped away the tear before it could spill off and said comfortingly and honestly.

"Shh,Khushi aisa kuch nahi,its just maine expect nahi kiya tha ki tumhe yeh milega"(Shh Khushi,there is nothing like that,its just I never expected that you will come to know about it).

She encased her hands with his that was holding her face and told him earnestly.

"Par acha hi hua na Arnavji,ki humein yeh mil gaya,humne kabhi socha bhi nahi tha ki aapke paas yeh sab hoga lekin aapne jab phone pe humse kaha tha uske baad kisi sawaal ki koi goonjiash hi nahi thi"(But its good that I came to know about it Arnavji,I never thought that you will have these things,but seeing them and what you have confessed on phone,there was no room for any questions or doubts).

She finished and Arnav nodded in response and quickly averted his gaze away from hers as if caught in the amidst of something,he knew her enough to know what was about to come net and therefore before she could say anything further he announced.

"Its fine Khushi,one day or the other you would have come to know about it".

Khushi noticed the change in his demenaor and not wanting to let go of the chance she did what was Arnav already knew she will.

"Ab humein pata lag hi gaya toh, aap humein bata dijiye naa ki aapne yeh sab kyun sambhal ke rakha hai?"(Now that I know about it,why don't you tell me why have you kept away all these things so safely?).

Arnav Singh Raizada didn't knew to relent so easily as he questioned back to her.

"Kyun Khushi tumhe ab bhi nahi pata ki yeh sab maine kis wajah se in sabko apne paas rakha tha?"(Why Khushi,you still don't know why I have kept away all these things?).

For a moment she was stunned as she realised what he was playing at but recovering herself she just told him."Humein pata hai,par phir bhi humein jana hai,aapko humein bata na hoga"(That I am aware of but still I want to know and you have to tell me).

"Excuse me! batana hoga,yeh tum bol rahi hai yaa hamesha tumhare sir pe chada hua pagalpan"(Excuse me!,I have to tell,you are saying this or the madness running in your head).Arnav retorted at her.

Seeing nothing working Khushi resented to the last resort calling him in that tone that always worked on him "Arnavji".

She surely know how to get her way Arnav thought but he was not going to give in too as he told her his decision firmly.

"Khushi this is not the time for these things,I am going to sleep".

Seeing his stubbornness she too acted accordingly and told him off "Thik hai lekin hum bhi tab tak andar nahi aayengey jab tak aap humein nahin batyenge"(Fine,but I am not coming inside too till you tell me all about it).

Assuming she would come inside in five or ten minutes he muttered a "Fine Suit Yourself"and stroded towards his room laying down on the bed as he waited for her to come inside.While Khushi just sat there gazing at the stars knowing it wont be long since he would come to look out for her again,he always has she smiled to herself.

Ten minutes passed as he tossed in the bed waiting for the poolside to open and her to come inside,but nothing happened finally after five more minutes as his patience gave away he walked forward,seeing her sitting there,and people called him stubborn,he mused to himself. Before he could call her,Khushi upturned her face staring at him lovingly she spoke out knowing the answer already.

"Ab batayenge?"(Will you tell now?).

He let out a fond smile at just how well they knew each other,seeing her expectant eyes he knew he was fighting a lost battle,taking her arm in response and sat her down at the corner of the poolside while he took his place besides her.Gesturing her to go ahead he waited as Khushi opened the box and pulled out the piece of dupatta from it.

"Yeh dupatta,yeh to wahi hai us din car park mein"(This is that dupatta only that day in the car park).Khushi spoke but he wont let her off so easily as he spoke teasingly.

"Haan yeh wahi dupatta jo meri car mein phas gaya tha,waise Khushi tumhara dupatta hamesha mere aas paas hi aakar kyun atakta hai"(Yes,this is that dupatta only that got stucked in my car,by the way Khushi,why your dupatta always gets tangled whenever I am around).

Khushi flushed at his open teasing and hit his arm in mock anger as Arnav thought about what to tell her about it,what should he tell her when he himself hasn't known what trigerred him to keep it that time,so he told her honestly.

"Khushi,mujhe bhi nahi pata ki us waqt maine isse apne paas kyun rakha tab,par I cldnt throw it out,I wanted too but I couldn't and that is why it is here"(Khushi I myself don't know why I kept it that time but I couldn't throw it out,its not that I didn't wanted too,I did but I couldn't).

She heard him but even she couldn't fandom what to say in response,so she pulled out the piece of broken bangle,she had no idea how he has found it so she just took it out and put him in his hands.

Arnav saw the piece of bangle he has come across when he has entered the guesthouse,seeing it again the entire scene got flashed in his eyes,the dread he has felt knowing she was in danger,how fearful he had felt as he has come to be aware of the condition of that place,his breath have been caught in when he hadn't found her at first,the relief that has rushed through his veins seeing her safe and sound,only he has known what he has went through at that time.

Khushi noticed him going stiff and could feel the tension in his stance as he missed her calling out to him,she shook him slightly and when his eyes met hers Khushi saw the same emotion she could easily name as fear,being faced it herself she knew what that meant,she put her head on his shoulders waiting for him to speak and he did as he told her what he has so earnestly tried to tell her even then but hasn't been able to.

"Khushi,mujhe sach mein koi andaza nahi tha ki us gueshouse ki condition itni kharaab thi,agar mujhe pata hota toh main tumhe wahaan kahin nahi bhejta"(Khushi,I seriously had no idea that the condition of the guesthouse was so critical,had I known I would have never sent you there ever).

She heard him say those words,the guilt ladened tone,she couldn't bare him to say this as she spoke rushingly to tell him she has never ever thought like that,she made him face her so that he can see the convicition and truth in her eyes as she told him.

"Arnavji,humne toh aisa kabhi socha bhi nahi ki aap yeh sab jaante hue aisa karengey,haan hum gussa the aur gusse mein to aap aur main kya bol jaate hai yeh humein khud bhi nahi pata chalta ,par hamara yakeen maaniye aisa khyaal aapke liye hamare mann mein kabhi nahi aaya aur aap hi to apni jaan khatre mein daalkar humein bachane aaye the "(Arnavji,I never ever thought like this,that you would do something like this knowingly,I was angry and you and me are both aware of that we don't know half of things we say in anger,but trust me Arnavji this thought never came into my mind and wasn't it you who came to rescue me putting your own life in danger).

He could clearly see she was telling the truth,there was no hidden meaning,he kissed her forehead lovingly as he told holding nothing back from her.

"Jab mujhe pata chala ki tum wahan ho,phir wahaan yeh mila"(When I came to know that you are there and I find this).He said holding the broken bangle continuing."Main kitna dar gaya tha Khushi agar tumhein kuch ho jaata toh"(I was so scared Khushi,what if something happened to you).

The words he spoke reminding her of the night when he has actually confessed those to her aloud,the night of the havan when he has assumed she has met with an accident,he has been so worried,his panicked stance,the concern oozing out of his eyes as he has her that day reviberating loud in her ears.

"Agar us ambulance mein tum hoti toh,what if I lost you"(If you had been in that ambulance,what if I lost you).

Only if she had realised and understood the reason behind his fear that time, but what has happened couldn't be altered,even after all the lies and deceptions they are here with each other where they belonged safe and embraced in the cocoon of their love so when she told him this she was just stating a profound fact.

"Kuch hua to nahi naa Arnavji,jab tak aap hamare saath hai tab tak humein kuch bhi nahi hoga"(But nothing happened Arnavji and till the time youa re there with me nothing will ever happen to me).She told what she believed with her heart and soul.With him by her side she would always be safe.

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TO BE CONTINUED

QUESTION TO READERS-

This was supposed to be the series where Arnav and Khushi confess their feelings and the reasons why Arnav kept her belongings is revealed to Khushi.This would end in the next update.

If interested to read,it can continue with Shyam making a very short appearance,the contract marriage and how it goes further with Arnav and Khushi.

Do mention in your replies,if you would like me to write about it.

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ANKITA!!!!!!!!

Edited by togetherforever - 11 years ago

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MystifiedBean

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Posted: 11 years ago

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