MG FF ~The Love Birds~Ch-2 pg-13 - Page 2

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Posted: 11 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: CavingIn

Surrooo!

Tumhari entry tho aisi hain jaise Mahabali humaare Kerala mein Onam ke liye aathe hain.
FF ke saath entry matlab ab humein aapki zyada darshan hogi.
Missing you my Surro.
Nice intro especially liked The Rustics yaar, awesome.
Love you my dear



Nidhu ...how r u yaar ... Where r u ...long time yaar ...n u changed ur I'd ...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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congratulations dear on the new story 😊 interesting CS 😊
continue sson
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: kamiya

hi dear

nice cs
would love to read further bcs in ur story maaneet r totally different than the show
plz do continue soon

good luck for ur ss


Thanks dear...
hope will be able to generate the interest 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: sukklover

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4 pming me dear...😃
updates dear...👏
dear...😃

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u r done really a
tons of to u...dear...😛
lov,❤️
Tama









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i said u guys ealier if u don't like plz tell me...but it really hurts a lot...me try to reply each of u...many serials i don't watch but i read ur ff's ...checking out ur updated stuff's...n try to make a sweet comment which u guys liked...but u never check my any stuff...i really busy wid my studies...but also don't want to hurt my frndz...i try to comment ecah of u woh Pmed me...but only few of u ans my Pms...if don't want me to bother u...plz tell me...i never pm u.4 my any update...
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NOTE: SOMEONE ASKED ME WHOM FAN I AM...THAT ANS IS ONLY SUMIT KUMKUM & HUSSAIN JUHI..NONE OTHER ANY OF RESENT ON TV..






Thanks dear 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: Craziest_MG

interesting
Do continue

Thanks Dear 😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Thanks dear 😊
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Chapter-1

College had reopened and that was the first class of freshers...Maan and his gang was sitting at the stairs and looking at every new face especially the girls

Yash who was busy in numbering the girls according to their looks hit Maan on his shoulder and said"See the one in red top ,bro she is just a bombshell."

Adi who was giving looks to a newbie turned around immediately and was just awed by the beauty.Maan also turned that side but again went back to his chatting giving a whatever look.Saumya,a classmate of Maan approached him for some talk and they went to library leaving the other two in their so called important work.

Saumya gave a look to both of them and said,"Why don't you stop them...what the girls will think about them?"

Maan replied giving a smile,"Let them enjoy ...they waited a whole year for this day."

The College had started for a week and the juniors also started interacting with seniors.That day a car stopped infront of the main entrance and a girl in blue colour suit came out with her family.She could be rated as cute in her appearance and nervous in her looks.Her eyes roamed everywhere and it was looking as if she has come in some sort of forest where she would be left alone.As guessed by all she was a new admission.After completing all the formalities her family left and she also went to the room to take rest which her warden had shown in the hostel.
In evening her room mate came and welcomed her warmly getting a small nervous smile in return.

The girl Pari understood the nervousness and tried to break the ice.She sat on bed and casually started the conversation while offering chocolate cookies to her roomie"Hey I am Pari your roommate .You know I have not slept in this room since has come to the college all because of you as I am afraid to sleep alone and you came so late Geet ...right???"

Geet politely refused the cookie and replied in a low tone without getting surprised on hearing her name from a stranger as the warden had also told her room mate's name,"Its Geet and you are Pari."

Geet went back to settle the left over luggage which was asking for a place leaving Pari with her cookie when a knock was heard and a girl emerged in ornage shorts...Geet's eyes stuck to the length of the shorts but she ignored thinking it to be common in big cities.The girl gave a friendly look to Geet which Geet cutshort by getting ingulfed in her work.

Pari introduced the two,"This is my all new room mate Geet and Geet she is Pinky just like her name lively."

Pinky gave a big smile and waved a hi to Geet after that she got indulged in conversation with Pari .Geet sat on her bed and logged in to FB.

Geet started going to college and it was not that bad but she was always sitting in a corner not talking to anyone .she was not even coming out of class without work and talking to boys was just like a dream as she was not even able to converse properly with girls.Amidst of this all she was really liking the sweet nature of Pari and started getting along with her and her group but when they were not around she was feeling like running away as no one was bad but their looks were really not so friendly.

She was scared as she was very slow in making friends and always was in a tongue-tied state when some one was coming to talk to her.They all came back after lunch when the peon made an announcement that there will be special class taken by seniors.Pari left for the hostel not being interested in the class but Geet had to attend as she did not want to miss any class.The class started and three handsome guys enetred the class.One of the them introduced the class to each of them.Hey guys I am Maan and these two are my seniors Mahendra sir and Mahesh sir.Geet who was looking in her notebook got awestruck by the voice and when she saw the owner of the personality ,she could feel a pull towards him. After that throught the class she could remember one thing that she only looked at the guy and when the lecture got boaring the way he entertained the whole class.

A week passed by and Geet was unable to stop thinking about thst senior.Whenever he was passing in front of her she could not stop herself from looking at him.On day Pari was playing game on her lappy .Geet sat on her bed and asked Pari in a casual manner trying not to give her any hint what she really wants to know"Do you know the seniors who had come to take our class that day?"

Pari replied"I was not in the class that day sweetie and there are so many seniors in our college,What's so special about them"

Geet replied in order to make her roomie believe that she was not talking about anyone,"But you know they are famous and so talented and that one whose voice is just a way too sexy that you cannot control yourself but feel like listening to him all day long."
Geet stopped realizing what she actually said and there she gave the devil a chance.

Pari was next to Geet at the very next moment,"So sexy voice ...haannn...interesting and what's his name?"

Geet blushed and replied,"I dont know.I forgot but I can remember once I will see him."

Pari pulled Geet to her bed , took a random senior's profile on FB and searched his entire friendlist and Geet finally told her to stop on a profile named Maan Singh Khurana and there he was.They found him after the hard work of half an hour.Pari forced Geet to send him a friend request and next day Geet saw a notification Maan accepted your friend request.She was so happy .She informed Pari about this, her order was to message him a hi but Geet refused due to her nature .She just said in a sad tone,"I know I wont be able to talk.Let it end here."

Precap-Maan starting the convrsation with Geet.

Edited by sur001 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: tehzeeb25

Sur yaar ... How r u gal ... It's been sooo long ... U remember me na ...
It looks a cute love story ...
Write something on our gunjun also na plezzz yaar ... Hope to c u more regularly ...


Hey Thezu, I am fine yaar and ofcourse i remember you.It is indeed been so long and I am feeling really happy to hear from you.Missed you .😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
#19
congrats on new ff dear
nice start
waiting for updates
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome part
geet started liking maan and send him friend request too
maan too accepted
precap is really intersting
do cont soon
Edited by preeti555 - 11 years ago

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