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4 pming me dear...😃

u r done really a

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Thanks for all comments😊Here comes the next part...

PART- 19

Next morning,

Priya is waiting for her parents...

Ram:- kisi ka intezaar kar rahi ho kya

Priya:- Haan...Maa-Papa aane wale hai..unhone kaha tha...first flight pakadkar aa rahe hai

Ram:- kuch socha hai kya karna hai...

Priya:- Matlab?????

Ram:- (irritated)Matlab ki Mrs.Priya Rajat Kapoor...kuch toh socha hoga na maa-papa ke aane ke baad unke saat jaaogi ya phir yahi rahogi...

Priya hold his both hands and looked into his eye. She can see pain in her eyes.

Priya:- meine sirf ek insaan se pyar kiya hai aur woh aap hai...mere zindagi mein agar kisi ki jagah hai woh sirf aap hai...haalat eise the ki muje Rajat se shaadi karni padi...agar mere saat woh haadsa nahi hota toh shayad mein aapse kabhi milti bhi nahi...lekin sachhayi yahi hai ki I love you...aur kuch bhi ho jaaye mein aapko chodkar kabhi nahi jaaungi...

Ram hugs her in possessive.

Priya:- mein hamesha Mrs. Priya Ram Kapoor banker rehna chahti hoon.

Raya broke the hug.

Ram:- I am sorry Priya...tum janti ho Priya mein tumhara naam kisi aur ke saat nahi dekh sakta...

Priya call gopal kaka...

Priya:- kaka...please yahan lekar aayiye na...

Ram:- kya hai????

Priya:- ek minute...

Kaka bought a small cake and kept it on the table...Priya lit the candle..

Priya:- sorry Ram kal aapne hamare anniversary par cake laaya aur meine kal aapke saat celebrate bhi nahi kiya..

Ram:- It's ok Priya...kal tum bahut kush thi apne maa-papa se baat karke toh isse badi baat aur kya ho sakta hai..

Priya:- achha chaliye...cake kaathe hai...

Both blew up the candle, cut the cake and feed each other...by then pihu and Dhruv also came and Raya feed them also...

While they enjoying, when they hear the footstep..Priya turns back and saw her dada and mama, karthik were coming.

Priya runs towards them and hug them very tightly. Priya started crying and her parents also crying and consoling her. She takes the blessing fom her parent. Priya caresses karthik cheeks and hugs him...

Priya call them inside. Shipra looks around the place...

Priya:- Papa...and hugs him again..

Sudhir:- Kahan chali gayi thi beta tum...itne saat se hamari yaad takk nahi aayi...

Priya is crying and said "I am sorry papa...aap eise matt kahiye, mein aapko sab batati hoon"

Shipra:- Beta tu itne bade ghar mein rehti hai...

Priya turns towards and said "Haan yeh Ram ka ghar hai"

Priya then turns to karthik and said "kitna bada ho gaya hai re tu"

Karthik:- di..aap kahan chali gayi thi...

Ram goes near them and take blessing..

Sudhir folded his hands and said thank u

Sudhir:- aapko pata nahi beta aapne hame kya diya hai...

Ram:- Nahi Papa..aap thanks kyun keh rahe hai...aapki Beti mere liye jo kuch kiya uske liye muje aapko shukriya kehna chahiye...aur yeh ghar mera nahi aapki beti ka hai...

Ram calls them inside...

Priya:- maa..aap sab thoda aaram kar lijiye...mein aapke liye naaste ka intezaam karti hoon...uske baad hum baad mein baate karte hai...she turns towards Karthik and said "bahut bada ho gaya hai...muje tujse bahut saare baate karni hai...

Karthik smiles and gave her a side hug.

Priya took them to the guest room.

Priya:- Ram aapko aaj office nahi jana

Ram:- no Priya..mein kahi nahi jaa raha...tumhe kya lagta hai ki mein office mein jaakar kaam kar paaunga...aur tum maa-papa ko hamare baare mein kab sab bata rahi ho...

Priya:- abhi toh aaye hai..mein bata dungi...

Ram:- tek hai...tum apne maa ke paas jao mein bachho ko khelne ke liye bahar lekar jata hoon...

karthik also join with Ram

After having breakfast everybody is sitting in the room. Priya entered.

Sudhir:- beta abb tumhe hame sab kuch bataogi...tum yahan kaise aayi aur itse saalo tak tumne hamse contact kyun nahi kiya...

Shipra:- haan beta..tum yahan Ram ke saat kya kar rahi hai, aur yeh bachhe tumhe maa kyun bula rahe the...

Priya looks at her mother taking a deep breath and said "papa...shaadi ke baad mein aur Rajat Mumbai pahuchne hi wale the ki hamare gaadi ka accident ho gaya...uske baad muje kuch bhi yaad nahi...muje kisne hospital pahuchaya...muje kon lekar aaya kuch bhi ...jab meri aakhen khuli meine apne aap ko ek hospital bed mein paaya...mein wahan kisi ko nahi pehchaanti thi...muje sirf apna naam yaad tha...mein sab kuch bhool gayi thi"

Sudhir gets tensed and said "beta"

Priya continued "muje kuch bhi yaad nahi aa raha tha...mein apni pehchan bhool gayi thi...muje yeh samaj nahi aa raha tha ki aage kya karna hai...kiske paas madat ke liye jaau...mein police ke paas madat ke liye gayi bhi thi...lekin muje hi kuch yaad nahi tha woh meri kya madat karte...mein iss shehar mein bilkul akeli pad gayi thi...mere saat kuch bhi ho sakta tha...and then she told them everything how she met Ram, what he did, how she fall in love, how they get married and about her kids...

Priya continue:- uss waqt agar meri madat ke liye Dr. Amar aur Ram nahi rehte toh shayad aapki beti aaj aapke saamne nahi rehti...

Sudhir becomes emotional and hugs her and said" Meri beti ke saat itna sab kuch ho gaya aur mein kuch bhi nahi kar paaya...

Shipra caresses her hair...

Shipra:- Lekin abb hum aa gaye hai..abb tumhare saat kuch bhi galat nahi hone denge

Priya:- Maa..mere saat aaj tak kuch galat nahi hua...

Shipra:- No Priya...galat hi toh ho raha hai...tum shayad bhool rahi ho...Ram nahi Rajat tumhara pati hai...

Priya broke the hug...

Priya:- mein kuch nahi bhooli hoon..lekin shayad aap bhool rahe hai ki meri kismat mein Rajat ke saat rehna likha nahi tha ...Abb Ram mere pati hai...mere do bachhe bhi hai...abb kuch bhi ho yahi meri zindagi hai...

Shipra:- yeh kaisi baat kar rahi hai...aaj bhi legally tum rajat ki biwi ho..aur itne saalo tak tum dohri zindagi jee rahi thi...tumne Ram se pyar, shaadi sab tumne apne yaaddashth jaane ke baad ki hai...isme tumhari galti nahi hai...Ram se tumhara rishta illegal hai

Priya(In shock):- what????

Sudhir:- Shipra..tum yeh sab kya keh rahi hoo...

Shipra:- Mein isse iski sachhayi bata rahi hoon...Priya...Rajat aaj bhi tumhara intezaar kar raha hai...aur Nandini...usse tum kaise bhool sakti ho...

Priya:- mein kisi ko nahi bhooli hoon...mein janti hoon nandini mera intezaar kar rahi hai...lekin aap yeh kaise bhool sakti hai ki Dhruv aur Pihu bhi mere apne bachhe hai...mera khoon hai

Shipra:- Oh!!!!Priya toh tu yeh kehna chah rahi ho..ki Nandini tera apna khoon nahi hai toh tuje uski parvaah nahi hai...

Priya:- mein yeh nahi keh rahi...muje Nandini ki bhi utni fikr hai..

Shipra:- mein kahan keh rahi hoon beta ki tum apne bachho ko chodkar aane ko..unhe bhi saat le chalenge...aur jo bhi maintenance ka karcha hoga woh hum Ram se maangenge...

Priya:- aur Ram????

Shipra:- mein janti hoon beta Ram ne teri bahut madat ki hai...lekin usne yeh madat apne matlab ke liye kiya hai...usne tumhe apne pyar mein fasaya hai...tumhare akele hone ka faida uthaya hai...

Priya:- Enough Maa...mein Ram se bahut pyar karti hoon...I love him..aur woh bhi mujse uthna hi pyar karte hai...

Shipra:- aur Rajat????kya tum Rajat se pyar nahi karti...agar Ram sach mein tumse itna pyar karta hai toh woh tumhe Rajat ke paas jaane ke liye nahi rokega

Priya:- bass maa...mein sirf Ram se pyar karti hoon...Rajat se shaadi meine Nandini ke liye kit hi aur agar hame milna hota toh hu kabka mill chuke hote. Mein sirf Ram se pyar karti hoon.

Priya left the room without waiting any answer from her mother...

Sudhir:- Shipra..tum yeh sab kya lekar baiti ho...itne saalo ke baad hame hamari Priya wapas mili hai aur tum ho ki..

Shipra:- Mein kya sudhi...mein kya uski dushman hoon...

Sudhir:- mein yeh nahi keh raha...mein yeh chahta hoon ki tum usse pyar se samjao...eisi chillkar tum usse samja nahi sakti...hame batana hoga Rajat ke baare mein...aur woh zaroor hamre baat ko samjegi..mein ram se bhi baat karta hoon..

Shipra:- baat kya karna hai...hum Priya aur bachho ko apne saat lekar jaayenge.

Raya bedroom

Priys is sitting on the bed and crying. Ram entered and goes near her and sits beside her.

Ram:- What happen Priya?????? Tum ro kyun rahi ho??????? Maa ne kuch kaha kya.

Priya hugs him and embraces him tightly.

Ram:- kya hua Priya..kuch toh bolo...mein tumhare maa-papa se baat karu kya????

Priya broke the hug wipes her tears and said "Nahi." Aap kuch nahi kahenge...

Ram:- tum muje bataongi kya hua???kya kaha maa-papa ne...

Priya (stammering):- Maa...Maa chahti hai ki mein wapas unke saat chalu...

Ram:- haan toh usme kya problem hai...itne dino ke baad mile hai...wahan par bhi log tumhara intezaar kar rahe honge...chali jao kuch dino ke liye...

Priya:- Maa...muje aapko chodkar Rajat ke paas jaane ke liye keh rahi hai..

Ram(shock):- what?????tumhe pata bhi ai ki tum kya keh rahi ho...

Priya:- meine maa ko bahut samjane ki bahut koshish ki lekin maa kuch bhi sunna nahi chahti...

Ram:- aur tumne kya kaha!!!!!!!!

Priya:- aapko kya lagta hai Ram mein aapke bagair reh paaungi...and hugs him.

Ram:-bass...tum apna faisla unko bata do...

They remain like this for some time...

During Lunch,

There is hardly any talk between Raya and Priya's parents.

Sudhir tries to make bonding with kids whereas Shipra is still angry with Priya...

After having lunch...everybody retire to their room.

Sudhir:- shipra..hame ek baar phir hamare faisle par sochna chahiye...hame jald se jald Rajat ke gharwalo ko sab sach bata dena chahiye...

Shipra:- koi zaroorat nahi hai...meine faisla kar liya hai Priya hamare saat chalegi...Ram se divorce ke baad usse Ram ki property ka aadha hissa toh mill hi jaayega...uske baad socho..hamari saari pareshani dur ho jaaygi...Priya apne bachho ki achhi parvarish kar paayegi...itna sara karz jo hamare upar hai woh uthar jaayega...uske baad Karthik ko achhe se settle kar sakte hai...aur aap yeh kaise bhool gaye ki Rajat ki family ne hamari kitni madat ki hai...aur aaj bhi kar rahe hai...Priya ko apna faisla badalna hi hoga...

In the evening,

Ram and Sudhir were sitting in the lawn and have their tea whereas Priya and Shipra in the terrace. Karthik is playing with the kids.

Sudhir:- Ram...Priya ne tumhe bata hi diya hoga ki Rajat se uski shaadi ho chuki hai

Ram:- ji

Sudhir:- Beta...kanoon ke hisab se aaj bhi priya Rajat ki biwi hai.

Ram remain silent...

Sudhir:- mein yeh nahi keh raha ki tumne jo kuch kiya galat kiya...agar tum mere bachhe ki madat nahi karte toh aaj hamari beti hamare saat nahi rehti.

Ram:- aap kya kehna chahte hai...

Sudhir:- Ram..hum Priya ko wapas le jane aaye hai...beta tum bacho ki chinta matt karo...hum unka achha khayal rakenge...

Ram:- oh!!!so aap yeh kehna chahte hai ki aap Priya ke saat saat bachho ko bhi mujse dur le jane aaye hai...

Sudhir:- Beta ...tum galat samaj rahe ho...Rajat ko Priya ki zaroorat hai...

Ram stands and said very angrily "Enough..pap...Sir, Agar muje pehle pata hota ki Priya ki shaadi ho chuki hai..toh mein sabse pehle aapko aapki beti wapas lauta deta. But now, she is my wife mere bachho ki maa hai mein Priya ko aapke saat nahi jaane de sakta."...saying this he left from there.

When Ram turns he saw Vikram is coming towards him. Vikram first gets shocked to see Priya's father there and another shock when Ram said that priya remembers everything...

Vikram:- Ram..yeh!!!!!!

Ram:- haan Priya ke father hai

Vikram smiles at sudhir and said Namaste

Sudhir:- meine aapko pehle bhi kahi dekha hai...aap wahi hai na jo saat saal pehle mere paas aaye the...Rajat ke baare mein, Priya ke baare mein pooch rahe the...aapne bataya ki aap Rajat ke dosth hai...

Ram gets shocked to hear all this...Vikram doesn't know how to react.

Ram:- (still not believing) Tu inse mila hai...aur tu pehle se hi janta tha ki Priya aur Rajat ki shaadi...he could not complete his sentence.

Vikram:- Ram..tu galat mat samaj..mein batata hoon ki kya hua tha..

Ram:- mera dosth mujse itni badi baat chupata hai sab jankar tune...

Vikam:- Ram please listen to me...

Ram:- Shut up Vikram...muje tuj se koi safai nahi sunna hai...just leave...

Ram left from there and vikram followed him...Ram..please meri baat toh sunn...Ram

To be continue...very soon

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Edited by sandhyasn - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
wonderful...priya dont want to go but shipra is forcing her to do so😕
yay cake waste nhi hua, u hv utilised it 😆
poor vikram...ram toh uski baat bhi nhi sun raha hai😕
i hv read b4 u pmed me😆 superfast nhi😆
advance mai thanks for pm😛 and continue soon😛
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: peeyara

wonderful...priya dont want to go but shipra is forcing her to do so😕

yay cake waste nhi hua, u hv utilised it 😆
poor vikram...ram toh uski baat bhi nhi sun raha hai😕
i hv read b4 u pmed me😆 superfast nhi😆
advance mai thanks for pm😛 and continue soon😛

woh wala cake waste ho gaya..yeh naya hai chotta saTongue
haan bilkul superfast ho...abb mein PM nahi karne waliTongue
thanks for comments🤗.will continue soon😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: sandhyasn

woh wala cake waste ho gaya..yeh naya hai chotta sa😛
haan bilkul superfast ho...abb mein PM nahi karne wali😛
thanks for comments🤗.will continue soon😊

toh mai apna thank you wapas le leti hoon😆
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Posted: 12 years ago
Nice update...
haila cake waste nhi gya 😆😆
Raya ne cake ka use kark use dhanya kr diya😆
uhu uhu uhu 😭
ye kya ho rha hai yaar ...
shipra aise kaise kr skti hai priya ke sath...
hmesa khud ke baare mein sochti hai...
kabhi bhi priya ke baare mein nhi sochti😡
sudhir ji bhi shipra ki side le rhe hai😭
bechare ram priya 😭😭😭
yaar raya ko alag mat kro ...
continue soon !!!!
thanks for pm🤗
Edited by Mini1991 - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
ab 😕priya nahi chahti ki jane ko but how it will turnd but love the update waiting for next one
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Posted: 12 years ago
raya love each other so much so why shipra is creating the problem and separating them i hate her want to know how shipra manage to take priya with her pls continue soon waiting for next part and thanx for the pm
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: Mini1991

Nice update...
haila cake waste nhi gya 😆😆
Raya ne cake ka use kark use dhanya kr diya😆
uhu uhu uhu 😭
ye kya ho rha hai yaar ...
shipra aise kaise kr skti hai priya ke sath...
hmesa khud ke baare mein sochti hai...
kabhi bhi priya ke baare mein nhi sochti😡
sudhir ji bhi shipra ki side le rhe hai😭
bechare ram priya 😭😭😭
yaar raya ko alag mat kro ...
continue soon !!!!
thanks for pm🤗

tum abhi tak cake ke peeche padi ho...don't worry tumhe kuch nahi milega 😆
shipra ke saamne sudhir kuch nahi kahene...
Raya toh alag honge because abb vikram ki galti bhi saamne aa gaya😕
thanks for comments🤗
will continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
Cake scene was good sandy...pls update evn ths soon dear and felt bad for vik..overall nice update ...continue soon

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