FF: Through The Monsoon #2 - Link to #3 on pg 1 - Page 59

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: goingreen



Haha well, you know how if I'm on a roll, I'm on a roll :p They'll kiss soon, hold your horses!! (:


yippieee *holding my horses* 😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
superbb update dear..actually i dnt hav a habit to check d pages i wait for a pm bt it suddenly struck to me dat u dnt send pm's so i checked d page and i felt vry dissappointd dat u hav updated early and i cudnt read it 😭

KISS KISSko update was amazingg😉😉
u exprssed ver well KISS wala scene 👏

updateee nxt prtt soonnn
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nisha150

superbb update dear..actually i dnt hav a habit to check d pages i wait for a pm bt it suddenly struck to me dat u dnt send pm's so i checked d page and i felt vry dissappointd dat u hav updated early and i cudnt read it 😭

KISS KISSko update was amazingg😉😉
u exprssed ver well KISS wala scene 👏

updateee nxt prtt soonnn



Haha sorry about the PMs thing, but I really don't wanna start sending PMs. I don't even know who on my list actually reads my work and who doesn't haha, so yeah. But anyway, glad you liked this part! (: And as a head's up, I'm about to post the next part in a short while now :p
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: --starstruck--


yippieee *holding my horses* 😆😆



Hahaha damn you're strong :p
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Posted: 11 years ago
Hello everyone! Yes it is true, I am indeed back with the next part hahaha. I was so amused with everyone's replies for the last part, but the reply that amused me the most was this one from webuser7: Wah! Kya kamaal ka KISSa tha! Hum readers bahut KISSmatwale hai ki aapke likhe huve KISSe pad sakte hai!! KISS KISS cheez ki taareef karoon? MA! Masha Allah!

Hahaha and so, for your creativity, this next part is for you webuser7 (:

Through The Monsoon: Part 26

Asad stood in front of his open closet and waited patiently. True to his expectations, he heard his room door swing open a few minutes later, without warning, and of course, without knocking. He immediately reached for his tie and began to carry out his plan.

"Kehte hai khuda ne iss jahaan mein sabhi ke liye KISSi na KISSi ko hai banaaya har KISSi ke liye," Asad half-hummed, half-sang to himself, behaving like as though he had no idea that Zoya was even there. He swung his tie over his neck and busied himself with knotting it.

Zoya mouth hung in a gape, unable to contain her surprise. She had intended to barge in and confront Asad about his stupid kiss-kiss speech at the breakfast table, but here he was singing a song to himself. Which coincidentally also happened to have the repeated use of kiss' in it. Wait a second, maybe it wasn't coincidental! He probably knew she was in the room and was intentionally mocking her. Zoya was about to open her mouth to lash out at Asad when the sound of Asad's voice silenced her again.

"Tera milna hai uss rab ka ishaara maano mujhko banaaya tere jaise hi KISSi ke liye," Asad continued the song, pulling out his waistcoat from the closet and putting it on, taking his own sweet time with the buttons. Zoya found herself distracted as she watched Asad stretch while he put the waistcoat on, the outline of his muscles against his thin white shirt clearly visible. She swallowed hard and tried to find her voice again, when Asad cut her yet again.

"Kuch toh hai tujhse raabta, kuch toh hai tujhse... Miss Farooqui! Aap kab aayi? Aap phirse knock kiye bina hi andar aa gayi na. Aapko kuch chahiye tha?" Asad asked casually, as he turned away from his closet and put his coat on, feigning ignorance to the fact that she'd been standing there all along. Zoya shook her head as she collected her thoughts, caught off-guard yet again.

"Woh, um, aap... Aapko filmi gaane aate hai? Then why did you refuse to play antakshari with me that night during the blackout?" Zoya asked in a genuinely confused manner. She was glad that she had managed to come up with something to say at all. If not, her real answer to aapko kuch chahiye' was actually something else completely...

"Aap yeh puchne aayi thi? Kitni weird ho aap. Theek hai, jhoot bola tha maine. Aur kuch chahiye aapko?" Asad answered, his voice laced with amusement. He watched Zoya's eyes widen as he walked up to her very slowly, stopping right in front of her. He began to lean in very, very slightly, and immediately noted Zoya's suddenly quickened breaths.

"Nahi toh mujhe office jaana hai, mujhe dair ho rahi hai," Asad whispered into Zoya's ear as he leaned into her, reaching for his laptop case that lay on his green settee behind her. He felt Zoya's palm rest on the back of his hand, stopping him from taking the laptop case. He obliged and straightened up, raising an eyebrow at her as she continued to hold his hand.

"Aap... aapko... aapko pata hai na, ke mujhe kya chahiye?" Zoya asked boldly, although her voice came out shaky and unsure. Asad stayed still for a while, holding Zoya's gaze, before giving her a short, slow nod. He took another step towards her closing the gap between their bodies, before closing his free hand over the hand she was holding his other hand with. He pried her fingers free of his hand, one finger at a time, before abruptly moving away from her and walking towards the door.

"Mr Khan?! Aap kahan jaa rahe ho?!" Zoya exclaimed incredulously, unable to control her exasperation. He'd come so close to her, and now he was walking off again! This man was becoming more and more difficult to understand.

"Bread lene! Aapko bread chahiye na?" Asad answered, straining his face to keep it straight and contain his chuckle. He watched Zoya open and close her mouth repeatedly, in a futile attempt to find her voice and answer him. She really did look frazzled, and he was starting to feel bad. He walked back to her and held her by her shoulders, forcing her to make eye contact with him.

"Zoya, tell me what you want from me," Asad demanded seriously, running his palms down her arms slowly, before reaching her hands and closing his hands over them. He raised his and her entwined hands to his chest and then tugged at them, making Zoya take a step forward and stand flush against him.

"I want you to kiss me," Zoya finally whispered, looking down at their joined as she admitted defeat. She felt and watched Asad's hands tighten around hers, sending a tingle right down to her toes. She looked back up to Asad's eyes just to catch a glint of something she couldn't place. Was it mischief, happiness... or maybe shock?

"Kyun," Asad replied breathily, saying the word as a statement more than as a question. Zoya bit her lower lip, trying to control her emotions from showing on her face. It already took her a lot of courage to tell him what she really wanted. So why was he torturing her like this? Maybe he was just going to probe all the answers out of her before cruelly laughing at her about her infatuation with him. If only he knew it ran deeper than infatuation...

"Kyunki I've never been kissed, and I was reading this article about kissing but couldn't relate to it. So I was trying to find someone to experiment with... Then I thought maybe I could kiss you, since I'm leaving on Friday anyway, then it won't even be awkward for too long. What I mean is... basically there are simply no other candidates around, I mean obviously, it's not like I know all that many people here in Bhopal. And so I just wanted to... I mean, I just want to... know... know what it feels like. To be kissed I mean, by you... I mean, by anyone... but in this case, to be kissed by you. But I mean, it's okay if you're not interes..." Zoya's incessant blabbering came to a sudden halt when she felt Asad's warm lips press against hers. She rolled her eyes backwards in pleasure before closing them. He was actually kissing her! Finally!

XXX

Yeh lo kiss hogaya hahaha. Anyway for the uninitiated, raabta means link or connection (:
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Posted: 11 years ago
Res!!
Back to back update?? You are the best!! :)

Unres


And they kissed
I am in La La land for now..will come back with a proper comment😳

Edited-
Loved every alphabet of this update!! From Asad teasingly singing a song😲😆...to...his 'Aapko kuch chahiye' lines...to Zoya's 'aapko pata hai na, ke mujhe kya chahiye' ...to bringing bread in the conversation...to Zoya trying to explain why she wants to be kissed😳😳😆 and FINALLY the most awaited KISS (like you said)...
Shukr hai Allah ka ke you were in the mood to make them kiss today 😆😆...I just love you for your writing...This is so much better than the show😃

p.s- I'm gushing like I have been kissed!!😳😳🤣
Edited by -HoneyBunch- - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG my mouth was wide open when i read the last line...my my jaw is paining now...anyways wow wow wow i mean we finally got the kiss yaay🥳the most awaited moment is finally here
Let me begin by saying that this has to be one of the most funny and hilarious chapter with the most beautiful ending ever...
I just loved how asad kept on teasing zoya first by singing the song,then on the pretext of getting his lapto and then the bread🤣Omg teh last one had me laughing like anything.omg i could totally imagine zoya flushed face and her heavy breathing whenever asad was near her😳
So finally asad asked her what she wanted and she said she wanted him to kiss her😳asad dude you ask why stop torturing the poor girl 😆and zoya's blabber and reasoning why she wanted asad to kiss her was hilarious😆but finally asad took the cue and kissed her 😳beautiful kiss
can't wait to see how they will react after they have kissed and when finally the adrenaline washen off😊
Edited by anushreemishra - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
I feel all mushy like a puddle!
It was sooo romantic!


Writers like you keeping bringing up the expectations of my man! ANd hopefully he'll be able to meet them!


Sorry for going off track!

But AMAZINGLY AWESOME FANTASTIC Update! Thanks for a back to back update!


-Nisha
Edited by DancingDiva. - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
OMG finally he kissed her☺️
soo romantic!!
the update was short😭
loved it though❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
tera kiss se hai pahle ka nata koi
yun kiss se jee nahi lalchata koi .

tune kiss de ke meri zindagi
zindagi badal di

such a kissable update it was
hope to see the continuation of kissa kiss ka .
lots of kisses for you for this mindblowing quick and kissable update .

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