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- Meredith Sapp


Prologue...


She was there to make her identity , and to fulfil her Mom's dream .

He was there to enjoy his dreams. His identity is his father.

They have attitude bigger than them .

They collide , they shattered.

She gathered herself and come again with an aim . He gathered himself .. but lost and restless ..

She is eager to punish . He is eager to get himself punished..

They are poll apart ...

But there is One thing which is binding them together...

The Punishment

What will happen if they'll collide again...?


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Part - 37



They took their dinner silently and went back to their respective rooms. Maan said to Dev that he was going to talk to Geet to help her in Walias' case. Dev looked at him in disbelief and asked ...


Dev: are you sure bro it was Sam?


Maan: Yes, now i will show her the real world. Do u want any help from me?


Dev: No, you go i'll sit in lobby for some time then sleep. U don't worry about me. I am fine.


Maan nodded and went out , he knocked at Geet's door but didn't get any reply, he peeped in and found room empty. He entered looking around for Geet , looked in study but she was not there too. Where is she? He moved back to go out and bumped to someone ..,, ouch ,,, aahhh ... G e e t .. a cry came out from her mouth and was going to fall but Maan held her immediately from her waist . She was swinging in his arms , the clothes which she was holding scattered there and she was holding his fore arm in one hand and with other hand she was holding his neck. Her eyes were closed due to sudden fall. Maan was looking at her face which was so close to him , he was inhaling a sweet floral fragrance coming from her. She was looking so soft and fresh like a flower, her rosy petals were slightly opened like inviting him to capture them, some curly strands were blocking his view of her face ,he was waiting for opening her hazel, he was feeling her rapid breaths and then she full filled his wish opening her eyes. He looked in to them they were so deep, pure and calm. He wanted to lose himself in this depth. Mr. Khurana ... Mr. Khurana ... Let me stand . ... Mr. Khurana. She spoke in little loud voice.


He came in sense, made her stand and turned his face side way to avoid the awkwardness. Geet too was feeling shy with this closeness. They took few seconds to compose themselves and Maan finally Maan broke the silence.


Maan: Wo tumne bulaya tha ,, after dinner ... isliye mai aaya tha baat karne. I'll come later and moved to go but Geet stopped him .. ruko..


He stopped and looked at her, she was in her night suit, a sleeveless short white shirt and grey pajama, her hair tied in a loose bun. " Cute" the word came in his mind.


Geet: tum study mei baitho mai aati hoon. (She started to collect d clothes from d floor)


Maan went to study. He was surprised with his feeling , his mind was scolding him .. this is wrong, why i was looking at her like this? Idiot, control yourself and behaved decently. You r here for punishment not to drool over her, you have to prove yourself and don't do anything wrong which hurt her ,,, but it was so sweet to have her so close. Maan be careful .. tujhe hua kya hai?


Geet too was very surprised with his look. Why he was looking at her like this? Ya ye mera waham hai? Kya tha un aankhon mei? Geet avoid it and concentrate on ur work. She jerk her head and came in d study to talk over d Walia matter with him. She was curious to know why she cheated him.


She took her seat and asked why he wanted to hide this matter? Maan told her...


Maan: Last year she told me that she was in prob and didn't have any proper place to live, so i rented a flat which i got easily in a day and gave her to live there. Sometime we all met there for parties/ get together. ( it pained him deep to talk about that selfish people) But few days back i hand over that and warned her to shift. She tried to trap me but couldn't.

Geet, Dad ko iss bare mei kuch pata nahi hai ... Aur mai nahi chahata ki unhe kuch pata chale. Plzz


Geet: Tunhare paas kuch solid proofs hei uske against?


Maan: haan. Uski tun chinta mat karo.

Geet: hmmm.. to Walia se tum Baat karo aur kaho ki tum uski help karna chahaty ho, mai tumhe walia ka number deti hu abhi mere samne baat karo. ... Kal uska khel hi khatam ker detey hai.


She gave him d number and Maan talked to Walias for half an hour and assured them that he would help them. After that Geet talked to them and suggested to make a FIR very next morning and told them how to put everything in an order and be very careful about Media and Press. Wo kisi se koi contact na ker paye. They discussed some more time and cut d call.


Geet: OK Mr. Khurana kal dekhtey hai kya scene hota hai? It's very late now you go and sleep coz u have ur office TM.


Maan stood up to go but Geet's voice halted him s and he looked back at her... Jaroorat padi to aapko ek baar PS aana pad sakta hai. ... I'll ring u. So be prepared. Hmmm.. GN.


Maan nodded and smiled ... GN. He walk out from her room with contentment, came in his room and found Dev in deep sleep, he lay down on d other side of bed to sleep. His heart and mind was in peace he slept with a sweet smile after long.



Every moment counts. Every second matters. Whatever is given is a gift. Right now life isn't perfect, but it sure is good. Acknowledging this is the foundation for all the happiness and abundance you seek.

- Melchor Lim




Part - 38




Edited by singh24 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: LILY111144

hi babie mona sona laks priya ,hw r u all missing u 🤗me bsy ,ok bye...


Hey lily... 😊
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main bhi hoon yahaan

hai lils
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Loved the update. This is just the first step for maan to prove to geet his changed behavior is for real and get her to start trusting him as a good person. I want him to prove himself to her so that he does not hurt her in any way due to him.
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😆 😆 Ikra
Pura GHSP tumhari sign per...😛
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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely update dear
maan is helping geet in walias case. in this way he can prove that he is changing and also that sam will get her deserved punishment
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Aaja lakshu ... ye tere liye..


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net slow hai

main yahaan hoo

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