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Posted: 12 years ago
#71
Sorry sorry gudiya ji for comenting so late!!!

You can bash me for that:p(golden chance hai! Go on;))

COMING TO THE UPDATE...

It again left me in confusion!:|

But i am leaving to you for solving all the puzzles as the story unfolds coz all the story dont unfolds in Chappy 1..:p

It was Amazing though...!

Loved reading it!

Khushi and Avi bonding was sweet!!:)

When Arnav ji-your Hotwa is coming to picture???:p



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Posted: 12 years ago
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appu, kill me for commenting this late, but in my defence my net connection sucked!

The update:

atharav.., can i get himm..? He is soo cute! Just so adorable..

A mumma's boy, always inquisitive, shy and playful.. A kid who's scared of police and can read her mother's feelings, but can't understand the reason behind it..

A bundle of joy he is!

For once, if Khushi was married before and Atharav is her real son, though their bond is no less, then how come Khushi has the cutody..? It gets difficult.. If ASR was daddy..

But seeing atharav all shy and sweet, it looks to me as if he is Payal's son.. And garima and shashi married her off to some wrong guy..

Mere guesses chalte rahenge..
Update was awesome..
Truly, Khushi as a mother is delightful to read.. Garima the mother, as always, worried about society, her daughter's marriage and everything!


Jaldi update kariyo..:p
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Posted: 12 years ago
#73
interesting, please pm me when u update
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Posted: 12 years ago
#74
My 800th post apke naam!!!:*

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Posted: 12 years ago
#75

Note - Thanks for all likes and comments. I feel happy when you all share your thoughts. this part is small but I can't help it because this part should be posted like this.

then let me pinch the balloon, next is Arnav and Khushi meet!! Next part will be posted in next 2 days, if anyone want then she can keep a watchout otherwise I will be sending PMs as always.

Part 2


Stop reading newspaper. Garima told Shashi and snatched the paper from him. You should use this and handed him laptop. What is this? Seriously, I don't want to repeat last mistake. Do you? So it's better if we do find someone from known. He tried to make her understand the importance of situation because he too didn't wanted to go through all that again. You are right. She agreed. Erm... you can call Payal. Shashi suggested her which made her smile. She get up and picked up the phone with enthusiasm.

Yeah Payal. Are you free? I just want to talk to you about... about Khushi. Yeah. No No She agreed. Yeah, to our choice. It's okay. Actually that is absolutely fine.

Then she cut the call.

Phew! I told her everything. Hope for fine. Aakash is so much sincere and understanding. She told him in a voice that was filled with longing for her daughter's happiness.

It's okay. Payal's mother in law is so nice. That's why I told you to tell her. She was already eager to know about her marriage. We can trust them.He tried to console her and put her head on his shoulder to take her in a side hug.

Everything will be fine Garima. May be Atharav is lucky for Khushi. After Atharav, she is so much changed. May be Avi will help in this change too. Garima was near to crying. She felt suffocated sometime after seeing Khushi's hidden grief.

I do not hate Avi. He is so small and fragile. I also care for him. It is just that she is a single mother. Society will never let her live with peace.

She just could not able to control herself anymore and broke down on Shashi's shoulders. He too let her cry.

In office, a mobile phone rang. A boy in his mid20's picked up the phone after seeing the caller.

Hey Bhai. Boy answered in a cheerful voice.

It is not time to say Hi Arnav. May be I am sounding rude but you need to come back Arnav. It is urgent. Other person replied him in tensed voice.

What happen Aakash Bhai? I talked to Ma today. She and Papa both are fine. Is everything okay? He got tensed with his brother voice. His brother was always cheerful and naughty types. That's why they both love each other's company, always teasing each other but stand with each other in any problem. They never behaved like cousins, they are.

Khushi... Arnav Khushi agreed to marry to choice of Massa and Massiji. This is the time. You should come back now. Call me after reaching Pune. Okay then see you soon.

Arnav was in a daze. He didn't know what he should do now? Will he be happy or sad? Then there comes the urge to Khushi then and there. He opened his left drawer and caressed her framed photo. She was smiling, a bright and innocent smile. He got that photo from Payal and Aakash's wedding album.

Few days after their wedding when he was informed about album, He left every work and reached his Bhai's home to get her photo. He had already told his brother for Khushi's photo.

Then he had to go through so many teasing from his brother. But he didn't mind, anything for her one photo.

When he left Pune, he also wanted to leave her too there because he left for never coming back. But he couldn't able to control, so took it with him as a memory at least.

It was not like that he hide that photo, No he didn't. He showed her photo to his parents. They agreed and loved her too but what happened next no one had thought about that? That happened which changed two innocent lives to the core, both suffered emotionally and mentally.

Arnav was caressing Khushi's photo like it was a feather. If he will put some pressure, it will be ruined. Khushi. A whisper full of love, craving and longing...

I am coming Khushi. This time I will not let you go. Right Ma Papa, we will not let her go this time after once... He said to his parent's photo on his desk.


Thanks for reading. 😊 Please BUDDY me for PMs.

Edited by starsarun - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#76
Loved d update
cant wait to read more
nd know wat exactly happened
nd y dey seperated
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Posted: 12 years ago
#77
So Arnav already loves Khushi...And how he is coming back to her...WOW...but still to know what happened in Khushi's life...I know I know its only two chapters and still a lot to unfold...but kya karoon wait karna mushkil hai...continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#78
Ok so one mystery is solved! That the pic in the drawer was of khushi and on the desk was of Arnav's parents.
What happened with khushi in the past?
If Arnav has showed the pic to his parents and they agreed too than y isnt he married to khushi?
Atharv..who is he?
Khushi was married before??

Hehe i m asking tooo many Qs:p

Bas you have to update soon!!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#79
Nice update.
A part of mystery solved.
Waiting for next part eagerly:)
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Tumhe Hotwa ki Kasam Update soon:D:p;)!!!!

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