*MY INNOCENT SURRENDER* #epilouge pg 126 26/9/2013 - Page 26

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: maanshi

<font size="3"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">awesome</font></font>👏<font size="3"><font face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif"> update

geet is deeply hurt n maan still didn't understand this
maan is still in his care free life
geet went to wake maan up n he take this as opportunity to show his love
like maaneet close moments which parth spoiled ... hehehe

ohh again maan burst in anger ...

maan saved parth n geet was nice

maan asked parth to do as he says n innocent child accept it for his GF
maan irritated geet with parth n she went leave both
ohhh ... waiting for next

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Thanx dear 😉
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Posted: 11 years ago
part 19
awesome...
OMG Parth was excellent...
loved it so much...
cont soon dear...
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Posted: 11 years ago
wow amazing update
parth ne kya maza chakhaya
n now maan ne b wada liya so parth ko ab dur he rehna pade ga
lovely update
muahhh...
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Posted: 11 years ago
nice update
i uv the way parth behave with maan
i luv parth's and geet's bonding
ye maan ne kya kya
ab parth geet ko gf nai bole ga
i luv when he call heer gf
luved the way maan made those people believe tht parth is their son
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Posted: 11 years ago
fantastic updtae dear :)

superb :)

loved it:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
PART - 20

GEET was hell angry on both. She doesnt even want to see them in front of her eyes. Both Parth and Maan say sorry several times but no use. She was stick to her anger and threw both out of the room.

'chachu apki wajhse Geet(Maan glared him againn) chachi mujhse b gussa ho gai hai.',he cribbed innocently.

'ha ho to gai.upar se kamre me b nai aane de rai. Lagta aaj tere room me hi sona padega.',Maan said meakly.

Parth was gloomed but Maan's words recharged him again.'chachu idea. Come with me.',Parth hold his hands in his small fist and dragged him along with himself.

'par tu kaha le ja raha hai?',Maan asked conti.

'aap aao to',Parth dragged him to his room.

'ye to tera room hai. Isme kya idea hai?',Maan cribbed too in a childish manner.

'chachu just follow me.',Parth took him to his room's balcony,which is attached with Maan's room balcony. In few sec Parth jumped and he was in his room's balcony. 'chachu aa jao aap bhi.',he commands him.

'wah beta sai ja raha hai. Bada hoke khoob gul khilayega.',Maan whispered. 'ye idea kaise aaya tujhe?',he asked curiously.

'chachu har saal aap holi pe apna darwaja lock rakhte ho firr b main or Geet... I mean chachi apko apke jagne se pehle bander bana dete the na wo aise hi hota tha. Main or chachi mere room ki balcony se jump karke apke room me enter kar lete the.',Parth revealed proudly how they both made him coloured monkey every year.

Maan fumed and slapped his butt.'now i got ruk tu',he gritted.

'chachu stopit abi to main apki team me hu na',he cribbed for freedom.

Maan leave him and both silently entered in his room. Geet was laying facing other side of the room. Both signled each other and in a swift moment laid on bed with her. Both encircled her waist and her eyes opened wide with a shock sencing both in room again. She glance door,which was locked. She got it now how they came inside. Geet jerkly removed both's arm without glancing to their side. These two are not less. they again encirled her waist. Geet give up and get up from the bed. She went to couch but both followed her there too. She leave couch also and laid on floor but less she aware that they both are determined. They laid next to her even on floor and again grabbed her. This process is going and going on until she sat back and shout on both.

'stopit both of u',She yelled on both.

Parth is little afraid of her this demanor. His innocent eyes turn blank for a moment. He held his both ears and asked for sorry meakly.

'chachi i am sorry. Pls forgive me.',he apolozise in a meak voice,having no idea how she will react now.

'Geet pls.why u punishing him when he is not at fault. Parth ki koi galti nai hai. Mere force karne par usne wo sab kia. Tume mujhse narazgi hai wo apni jagah hai but dont involved him with our issues.',Maan pleads strongly.

Parth put his small hand on hers scaredly.'i m sorry pls dont get angry with me.',his innocent plead touched her. She cant ignored it. Geet held his both hands and freed his ears. Geet opened her arms for Parth and he quickly absorbed in her embrace.

She kissed him on his forhead and he wrapped his arms around her. Maan too trying to grab a chance and get cozy with her but Geet push him away.

'maine Parth ki sorry accept ki hai tumhari nahi so stay away.',Geet told her decision strongly,glaring him with her hazled eyes.

Maan twisted her lips and fumed furiously. Less she bothers. Soon Parth slept in her arms. Geet made him laid comfortably on bed and laid next to him. She encircled him and Maan encircled both of them. Geet wants to push his hand away but if she do Parth will wake again so she decided not to make any moment right now. All 3 slept calmly after such a hetic and stressful day.

Few more days passed and Geet totally stop talking to him. She wants to leave KM as soon as her father get alright. Everytime she feels helpless under his proxcimity. His touch his moments made her vulunerable and she feels detest on herself more then him. She knows he effects her badly. She was badly clenched in between her feelings for him and memories his past behaviour. She never ever thought in her worst dreams that Maan called her curse of his life. She scared of getting close to him this time. Trust is delicate like glass once broke then never mends. Geet is going through the same.

Meanwhile Armaan and Riddhima invite both to their farmhouse again,as both gave party to their all friends on the ocassion of their official engagement. Because on engagement ceramony they wont invite any friend. Only their family members were present. So both decided to celebrate their happiness with thier friends by giving an rocking party to all of them.

Geet wants to avoid but Riddzi insist her. she wont denied and promised her. On the definate day,Geet dressed so gracefully wearing a simple satin elegant blue coloured, knee length off shoulder dress. Carrying matching acessories Geet moved to their party alone.
She dont want to go with him. Avoiding their proxcimity she drove alone to the venue,where loud music welcomed her first. With her entrance she found herself in a same atmosphere,the day their life changed completly. Same loud music,same enjoyment,ppl dancing madly, cheering their drinks. Whole dark night turn alive there. Many unforgettable memories start swimming in her mind and make her uncomfortable. Armaan noticed her and dragged her to the dance floor. He made her dance with him and trying to calm her disturbed mind. After a while both take a break and leave the dance floor for few moments. Maan arrived furiously there. Lefting him behid is not bearable for him. He was burning in anger till his eyes not got the view of his extremly gorgeous wife. She looks damn hot even in her simple attire. Her natural beauty wont need artifical sources to look stunning. She is a born beauty. Maan felt his arousals just on her mere look. He moved towards her but his way obstruct by few of his collage friends. They made him involved with their chat and unwillingly Maan get trapped with them.

Party going on and on but both Maan and Geet wont come acrooss each other till now. Anyhow if he tries the mob and music intrupt their convo and he left unexpressed.

Saari raat aahein bharta,
Pal pal yaadon mein marta,
Maane na meri mann mera,
Thode thode hosh madhoshi si hai,
Neend behosheein si hai,
Jaane kuch bhi na mann mera,
Kabhi mera tha par ab begaana hai yeh,
Deewana deewana samjhe na ho,
Kabhi chup chup rahe kabhi gaaya ye kare,
Bin pooche tere tariffein sunaya ye karen,
Hai koi haqeeqat tu ya koi fasana hai,
Kuch jaane agar toh itna ki yeh tera deewana hai,
Re mann mera..,
Maane na mann mera..,
Rag rag woh samaaya mere,
Dil par woh chaaya mere,
Mujh mein woh aise jaise jaan,
Gire barsaat me paani jaise,
Koi kahaani jaiseDil se ho dil tak jo bayaan,
Aashiq dil tera purana hai yeh,
Deewana deewana samjhe na ho,
Kabhi chup chup rahe kabhi gaaya ye kare,
Bin pooche tere tariffein sunaya ye karen,
Hai koi haqeeqat tu ya koi fasana hai,
Kuch jaane agar toh itna ki yeh tera deewana hai,
Re mann mera..
Maane na mann mera..


(Listen that song to feel Maan's feeling,then you all connected better)

Maan's thurst eyes only looking for her one glimpse. He wants to talk to her,less he aware her state of mind. She felt as time period reverse and put her again on that day. After taking some snacks again Armaan dragged het to dance floor with Riddhima on his another side. He made a dance moves with both ladies besides him. Geet try to lost in this moment. Armaan danced with both. Maan now loosing his patience and wants to talk with her at any cost. He went to dance floor and snatch her from Armaan's grip. Both Armaan and Ridzi stop in a swift moment. Maan is aware of everything so without making any scene he politely told her to come with him.

'Geet come with me we need to talk right now.',his voice is is low and tone is polite.

Armaan and Ridzi turn their gaze and let them talk. Maan dragged her from there but Geet not in a mood of discusion. She weltered for freedom and successded getting it too. Geet moved ahead towards bar and in frustration she drank a two glass of alchohal in one shot,back to back. She dont even enquire. Just went and gulp ready drinks of someone else. Maan came behind her and firmly grabbed her wrist. Geet dragging herself but Maan's grip is so tighten. He dragged her upstairs and take her in one empty room. First he locked it then he leave her hand. Geet stared him furiously and trying to open the door. Maan again pulled her onto him. He locked her in his embrace. Geet weltered and with her full force she trying to shove him away. Maan's grip was firm butnot hurting her. He only waiting for her to give up. Due to the effect of hard drink her head start spinning and slowly slowly she stop her weltring moments. But the pain in her eyes is visible to him. Maan raise his another hand and put her all flicks behind her ear. By this his tips caress sensitive spot of hers. She trembled like dry leaf,feeling his soft touch,which proves very soothing this very moment. She clenched his shirt in her small fists,taking his strength to stands properly. Maan remove his hand leaving her giving space for free moments.

'Geet pls just for once forgive me. I love you and need you back in my life. Pls Geet.',he pleads cupping her face in both hands.

Geet's eyes turn heavy intoxidetly,which made him more wild.'and what u think,that i wont love you? I love to mr. MSK,but you ruined everything between us. You said wrong that you love me. You hates me bolo kaha tha na tumne',her voice is husky,throat is chocked and her dizzy eyes poured many tears sharply. The pain she buried deep inside is all ready to come out in form of words. Maan felt guilty. seeing her crying he realized how much he tourtured her in just few days.
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Edited by richa_kapoor - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Me first o balle balle

To geet ne parth ko maaf kar diya
aur kare bhi kyun na aakir usne jo kiya maan ke kehne par kiya

ab maan ko pta chal gya ki holi par uska monkey kaise banta tha

maan geet phir ek room mai
ab maan kaise mayega geet ko
agr wo maan bhi jati hai bt wo to nashe ki halat mai hai

usse to kuch yaad bhi nhi rahega

waise eb dono ek room mai hai toh...
Kuch to romantic hona chahiye na

wating for nxt
plz update soon
i no jaldi to milega nhi bt keh to sakti hun na
plz update soon
Edited by shalinimg - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Its vgood chap
Startingwith fun and end with pain
I am also not able to forget maan behivor in past
He deserved this kind of puniahment
To tread his friend badly
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Posted: 11 years ago
poor geet i feel sorry for her... even though maan is trying but he did hurt geet badly hmm..
waiting for more😊
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Posted: 11 years ago
fantastic update dear :)

superb :)

i hope geet told him his pain ...and maan just rot in hell after seeing geet's pain

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