MG FF- Waqt ...badalte rishton ki dastaan. /th#2 added - Page 6

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Posted: 11 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: chavvi16

wait dooriyan aanewaali hai

ya already aa chuki hain
well i guess we shall know and soon huh
hmmm so far so good
they are married
have kids
and all is well
but seems not for long
cheers for pm


thanks dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: Sri_Radha

Congrats for new ff👏

Interesting concept⭐️ ⭐️
Awesome updates👏 👏
Continue soon
Thanks for pm😊


thanks dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
#53
Sorry for being late
Congratzz 4 new story
Loved part 1 & 2
fantastic updates
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Posted: 11 years ago
#54

thanks dear
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Posted: 11 years ago
#55

Part 3

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Aap sb se baaton ke chakkar mein

Mein sbse shaitaan ko aapse milwana to bhul hi gyi

Iski boli shakaal pe mt jaana

Badmaashi mein no. 1 hai ye

Hamara beta Aryan

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Yaha mein kbse wait kr rha hu geet ka

Do pal apni wife ke sath bita saku

Par madam bacho ke sath busy hongi as usual

Khaskar Aryan ke sath

Bilkul apni maa pe gya hai

5 saal ka hai...par Shararati No. 1 hai

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.

But now I am missing naughtiness of geet.

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Wo chulbula pan, wo shararate khi kho si gyi hai

.

His phone buzzed.

Maan : meeting aaj hi hongi

Tum tyaari start kro

Mein bs abhi aata hu

.

.

Ye lo...aaj to hamra coffee session bhi miss ho gya

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Geet : shaitaan

Mom ko gila kr diya

Aryan playing in water ...

Geet : chlo bhut huya

Bahar niklo

Aryan : mom

Geet : bs

She takes out Aryan from water.

Geet : badmaash

Ab mom ko firse ready hona padenga

*******

Maan stand in front of mirror and wearing his tie.

Geet enter into room.

Maan : tyaar ho gye dono

Geet : hmm

Pr aap itni jaldi kaha jaa rhe ho

Maan : office

Ek important meeting aa gyi hai

Geet : hmm

Aapki coffee

Mein breakfast lagavati hu

Maan : hmm

Ek minute

Geet : ji

Maan : phle tum kapde change krlo

Nhi to bimar pd jaayongi

Fir se Aryan ne tumhe gila kr diya na

Geet : ha

She opens the wardrobe and selecting her cloth. He came near to her and picks one sari and gives it to her.

Maan : fatafat ready ho jaaye

Mein niche intzaar krta hu

Geet : hmm

***********

Dekha, Maine bs ek baar kaha , meeting aa gyi hai

Aur ye maan gyi

Waqt ne meri geet ko badal diya

Phle chotti chotti baaton pe ladti thi

Pr ab nhi

.

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Hamari shaadi ko bs kuch mahine huye the

Aur maine geet ko promise kiya tha

Hum dinner ke liye bahar jaayenge

.

Pr suddenly ek meeting pre pon krni padi...

.

Fir kya tha

Madam ne mujhse pure ek din baat nhi ki

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Geet : mujhe dheere sunayi deta hai

Maan : geet mein jbse ghar aaya hu

Tum mujhe ignore kyun kr rhi ho

Geet : ab ye bhi mujhe btana padenga

Wadda nibhana nhi aata

Toh krte kyun ho

Maan : jaan smjhne ki koshish kro

Wo ek meeting

Geet : meeting mujhse jyada important hai na

Maan : geet

Geet : mujhe daadi bula rhi hai

Maan : geet

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Suno toh

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Ye haal hota tha mera

Pr ab lagta hai

.

Kya humare bich mein itni understanding aa gyi hai

Kya hume in chotti chotti baaton pe react krne ki jaroorat nhi hai

.

Ya waqt ne duriya laa di hai

Jo hume dikhayi nhi deti

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Mehak : papa

He takes her princess in his arms and kissed on her cheek.

Mehak : papa aap kb aaye

Maan : kal raat ko

Mehak : mere liye kya laaye

Maan : aapko kya chaiye princess

Aryan came near to maan and pulled his pant.

Aryan : mujhe bhi

He also want papa take him in his arms.

Geet : Aryan , mehak chlo phle fatafat breakfast kro

Aryan : papa

Geet take mehak from him. And maan take Aryan into his arm.

Now, he happy.

Aryan : papa aap mere liye bat laaye hai na

Maan : wo toh mein bhul gya

Aryan : mom

Geet : who waha kaam se gye the

Mein la dungi

Aryan : nhi

Mujhe papa laake denge

Geet : Aryan

Maan : geet mein laa dunga

Aur princess tumhe kya chaiye

Mehak : hmm

Kuch nhi

Geet : kyun

Maan : abhi to tum puch rhi thi na

Mehak : hmm

Pr mujhe abhi kuch smjh nhi aa raha

Maan : hum khud apni princess ke liye kuch le aayenge

Geet : chlo sb ab breakfast kro

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Geet : maan

Maan : hmm

Geet : wo mujhe aapse

His phone buzzed.

Maan : ha adi

Bs mein abhi aa rha hu

.

.

Geet mujhe abhi jaana honga

Geet : pr

Maan : bye

Bye Aryan, mehak

Aryan,mehak : bye papa

Geet : Deepak , kavita

Deepak , kavita : ji

Geet : kavita bacho ko breakfast kra dena

Aur tum deapak bacho ko school bus tk chod aana

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Geet go outside for seeing maan.

Geet : maan

He turn.

Maan : kya huya

Geet :- wo aapki file rh gyi thi

Maan : thanks

Geet : aur wo mujhe

Maan : geet jaldi bolo

Mujhe late ho rha hai

Geet : aap kuch kha lena office mein

Maan : hmm

Geet : bye

She turns for going, but he stops her.

Maan : ruko

Aur tum bhi breakfast kr lena

She smiled and nodded to him. He kissed on her forehead and leave for office.

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Note: -1) @tiakasyap: - dear you aksed me, why geet said about duriya in last line in last update (part 2)

Dear geet ki us line ka answer tumhe future updates mein mil jaayenga

2) duriya sirf distance ko nhi khte

Ya fir misunderstanding ki wajh se jo duriya aati hai...

In this ff, I want to show how time create distances, two people so much close to each other, have a good relation... no misunderstanding...but time play a major role.

Na chahate huye bhi rishte waqt ke sath badal jaate hai

Na chahte huye bhi kuch sbd hamesha unkahe rh jaate hai

Na chahte huye bhi waqt duriyo ka karan bn jaata hai

I hope you all liked this ff...

And don't forget to see banner...😉

previous update :- part 2 on page 4

and see below updates too


MG FF- jaane dil mein kbse hai tu - part 22 on page 91 (sangeet continue)
& part 23 on page 94

MG ff - Khawaish...pyaar ki- part 30 on page 37

and anyone miss any ff so see summary (see full page)
Edited by priya_21 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#56
wow this onr part i really sweet
well thx clearing my confusion litle
ya dooriyan sirf mu ko nhi khte time really plays n major role
n in this update u have showed it beautifulle
how at start we expect little little things to b completed n time ke saath we start understand each other n small things didnt matter bt who known its understanding or little dooriyan which came wit time n responsibilities
lvd it

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Posted: 11 years ago
#57
n wow in all this i forget that me FIRST😆😆
N SECOND TOO WOOAAA😆😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
#58
too good update
waiting for more
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Posted: 11 years ago
#59
so distance in relationships
they arent what they used to be
with family and other responsibilities they have changed
which was bound to happen
but so much so that they hardly spend time with one another

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Posted: 11 years ago
#60
awesome
liked a lot dear
continue soon
waiting
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