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Posted: 12 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: wow-taarey

yes boss..😆 done on pg 4😊
really sorry for the delay😳

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Posted: 12 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: wow-taarey

res😛

unres😊
OMG!! just saw the dress☺️again
res😆
unres😳
ohhh...it was so cute😃
taarey's meet after 2 yrs and the hug
i totally loved it.
rey's reaction after seeing taani's change😆😆
their convo was also cutie...😳😊
Awww...Taani's blush😳
so...cute...
blushy+shocked taani is always so good.😉
i luv this combo😊😊
punctual Rey😲
i can't believe this🤣
i think it's gone be fun reading them as bff😳
with nok-jhoks😆
It was a lovely update😊😊
update soon...😳
btw...i forgot
m second😆
yipppiieee🥳
tumhare update ne bhula hi diya tha😳😳
it was too good🤗



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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
first ch is superub
loved the taarey scene
continue soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
wow... Nice concept and update!
Loved the changes that gave happened and Rey was described amazingly! :)

Plz update soon... Pm me :)

~Shanae
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Posted: 12 years ago
#45
Wonderful update
Love how Rey can feel Taani present
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Posted: 12 years ago
#46
nice update...
first chapter is awsum...
pls continue soon...
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Posted: 12 years ago
#47
Awesome updatee ..! Do update soon n loved the dress...!!! 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
#48
OMG!! Loved this concept.
Taani is Rey's crush..
This is what is making me love it more..
Plz.. Continue soon..

Edited by Ayesha_Hasan - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
#49
Chapter 1

It was so cute..
Loved it..
OMG!! I am imagining taani in that dress..
And the way Rey could feel her..
He was so shocked..
their hugs..
Rey called her a Hot chick..
Taani's reactions..
She was shocked..
And then she was blushing also..
And Rey!!
He must have cursed himself..lol..
Loved the update..
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Posted: 12 years ago
#50
First of all happy rakshabandhan to everyone enjoy your rakshabandhan with your sis or bro and on this occasion it is one of my longest update so plz like and comment criticism is always allowed chalo bye bye abhi aap log chap padhing and me bhagging chapal na padhe aur timenaikal k update kiya hai na aaj ka din toh mere bhai k liye rehta hai par mere IF k trians and frnzz bhi bahut important hai

CHAP 2

CHAP 2
They reached home tani unlocked the house and they were in hall yani said "rey tum freshen up ho jayo aur mein bhi hoke ati hu phir hum dinner karte hai " rey nodded to her and was leaving for his room when tani stopped him by saying "rey that room needs little maintenance so..." rey replied "tani it's ok we will adjust" tani just smiled and was advancing towards her room when she looked at rey that he was following her tani asked "rey tum kahan aa rahe ho" rey replied "tumhare saath tumhare room mein" with an innocent look on his face while tani exclaimed"tum mere room mein kyun aa rahe ho" rey like a small kid with naughty smirk on his face replied " change karne" tani replied in a shock " tum mere saath mere room mein change karoge aisa nahi hoga " and to this rey replied innocently " par aisa kyun tani " tani replied irritated " tum room mein nahi aa rahe ho its final" to which rey replied " toh phir mein kahan change karunga " tani going towards her room said "hall mein" rey asked " par tani mein nahunga (bath) kahan " till then she had reached her room and before slamming the door she replied " wahan tumhare room k baju mein common washroom hai woh use kar lena" rey replied "par tani " to which she replied loudly as her voice should reach to him " koi par var nahi mein freshen up ho rahi hu tumhe hona hai toh agaar tum ready nahi rahoge toh tumhe dinner nahi milega aur ye mat bolna ki tum akeli kaise khaogi pichle 4 years se akeli hi khati aa rahi hoon"
Rey could her slamming of other door and he had a big grin on his face as he was successful in annoying her and he also moved to washroom to freshen up
After 20 min tani was ready and came in hall to see wether rey is ready or not and the view in front of her could make any girl drool over him she could see his well developed and fine masculine body which she was not just seeing but adoring it he turn backwards to see her he find her lost adoring his bare body which clearly show his well developed body he wore his vest and tani came to real world and stop adoring his bare muscles and said " chalo khana ready hai" rey replied " sure " and they settled on dinning table (both r sitting next to each other) tani was serving food when rey said " tani ek hi plate ready karna hum ek hi plate mein khayenge " tani giggled on the cute demand if his silly freind and make one plate she settled down and was going to start eating when rey said " tani kya tum mujhe khilaogi" tani jus take some rice and feed him and rey smiled while eating it like this they finished their food tani was cleaning kitchen when rey came inside and said " tani chalo humne dessert nahi khaya" tani replied " haan par kya khana hai" both were stealing glances and grinning and both said in a sync "KULFI" and both started laughing then tani said let ne check in fridge she opened fridge but she could not find it there so she close the fridge and turn towards rey and with a pout says "its over" rey replied " chodo hum bahar jake khalenge" and tani replied " nahi rey rehne do kal khalenge aaj mood nahi hai bahut thak gayi hoon " rey stood there for few minutes and tani was looking at him to listen his reply and rey started walking towrds tani and tani started walking backwards now the distance between them was of few cms she could not move from there as she was blocked between rey and kitchen platform now rey was too close to her and because of this proximity tani closed her eyes and started breathing heavily and suddenly she feels herself in air and to figure out what is happening she open her eyes and sees herself in arms of rey she was feeling protected and heavenly as if her all tiredness is out but she was TANI SHEKHAWAT she started beating his shoulder and revolting she said " rey mujhe abhi niche utaro mujhe nahi jana kidhar mujhe chodo meine kahan mujhe chodo" rey with a smirk asked "paka chood doon" tani replied in anger "HAAN REY MUJHE CHOOD DO!!! " rey said " phir mujhe nahi kehna ki meine tumhe pucha nahi tha " qnd with this he leave her and THUD!!! she fell on ground she exclaimed "REEYYY!!!!" Rey came to her level and said "meine kaha tha na baad mein mat kehna kind to meine tumhe pucha nahi tha " tani who was by now red as chilli because of anger left from there rey who was following her asked "tani tum kahan jaa rahi ho" tani didn't replied and was standing in lobby waiting for lift
Lift came and she entered inside lift was going to close but somehow rey managed to get inside she was walking on the road and rey was following her as a loyal dog follows his master every where he goes and was asking same question "tani tum kahan jaa rahi ho" but tani didn't paid any heed to constant questions of rey now they were far away from there house and he could see a KULFIWALA there seeing this a smile came on his face and within fraction of seconds his face turned pale because he knew tani only likes not likes loves to eat kulfi with him but she also eats it when she is angry but now he was confused so as to what tani's mood is she wanna eat with him or she wanna eat coz she is angry while he was thinking about tani's mood tani sat on bench which is on footpath folding her hands and tapping her foot as if waiting for something
Rey gathered some courage and went towards the kulfiwala and said "bhaiya do kulfi dena" to which tani quickly replied while getting up from bench "bhaiya ek hi kulfi dena" now rey was getting strong feeling that she is mad and qas thinking of how to manaofy tani but his thoughts was broken by a bone crushing hug given by tani and rey to responded immediately and his hands were on her back and her hands were on his neck within the hug tani said "thodi toh masti banti hai na 4 saloon k baad jaise tumne mujhe niche giraya waise hi hisab barobar karne k kiye meine ye natak kiya" hearing this a shocked rey broke the hug still keeping his hands on her waist and her hands was still on his neck "tani ye natak tha thank god phirse aisa natak mat karna nahi toh mein mar jau..." before he could say anything further she put her finger on his lips and said "rey plz aise mat kaho" and rey jus smiled and kiss on her forehead a old couple which was passing by said "kitna cute couple hai kash ye humesha isi tarah saath mein rahe" dono k maan mein laddu phuta rey toh pehle se hi tani se pyaar jarta hai aur tani woh toh blush kar karke tomato se bhi jyada laal hogayi thi shayad ye uska rey k liye jo pyaar hai uska realization ho raha hai uska first sign ho par there was a awkward situation which was broken by kulfiwala he said "sahib kulfi aakar lelo nahi toh pighal jayegi" rey answered "ji bhaiya" and went towards him to take the kulfi he took kulfi from him and both settled on the bench and started eating from both the ends while eating kulfi their boths faces came close to each other and their cheeks rub against each other it created its own special feelings which is heavenly and good to experience they complete their kulfi rey pays the kulfiwala and come back to tani and said " chalein" to which tani replied " haan *rey starts moving* rey ruko *he turns back* tum toh mujhe godi mein leke ana chahate the na toh mujhe abhi godi mein leke jao na" rey now started coming towards her which resulted in her breathing becoming heavy she closed her eyes and in next few seconds she could feel his hands on her body and in next minute she was in air in his arm she opened her eyes to see him and ended up in adoring his face and was lost in the heavenly feeling which she never wants to stop
They reached home he put her down to open the door they went inside they were going to sleep in tani's room when rey had some important call to do so they hug each other and wish good night she made her way to her room and was making bed ready to sleep *picking clothes etc* and rey was talking with someone on cel when light goes off it pisses her to sleep without AC but suddenly her mind clicks that rey has fobia of darkness so she comes in hall to rey and see rey sitting and clutching his hair as if nothing is left with him in this world seeing this her heart sank she moved towards him and gathered him in a hug and said "rey idhar mere taraf dekho dekho mein aa gayi hu na kuch nahi hoga tumhe" and started caressing his back and hair to make him feel better and rey dud his head in his chest and hugging her waist ensuring himself that every thing is fine and soon the inverter started and the lights came he was now getting normal tani took him with herself and made him sleep in bed and gave him the blanket she also selpt on other side and gathered him in her embrace to assure herself that he is fine as she cannot afford to lose his best freind and someone special to her and one who makes her feel special and she slept all night taking him in an embrace



TANI'S DRESS

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