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Another Lovely update hari! Liked the interaction between characters. Keep coming lovely updates :)
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Thanks for the lovely update.
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lovely update...thanks 😊
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Wow Hari awesome updates so dono ko ehsaas ho raha bte Deeno ka
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loved it,thanks for a lovely update.waiting for the interaction between the family and Radev.
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wow hari di nice one loved it mrinalini and radev uhmmm waiting for the rest please update soon
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Part 34-Kehte hain pyar mein

"Kehta hain Pyaar mein, Sahi ya galat kuch nahi hota,
sirf pyaar hi hota hain
Intezaar kiya tha do maheena, jeete marte
Kaise kiya mujhe hi maloom nahi,
Lekin aaj se mera intezaar khatam hone waali hain
Aur aaj jaakar mein apni par se baat karne waali hoon. "

Radhika smiled to her self writing this and then also continued to write

"I know I am hitting a dead rock,
There are rumours in whole campus about some thing going on between Bharka and him
Is it true?
If its true? Will my best friend hide it from me ?
Nope?
And Bharka will never lie me!!
I believe her a lot...
But Kanha, mein ne already ek baar Abhay ke roop mein, ek pathar ko pyar karne ki kosish kiya,
Phir se, mera dil ko pathar ban ne ki himmat nahi hain Kanha mujh pe...
Please mera help karo Kanha"

As Radhika closed her diary she ran out and went to Sumithra happily...

"Kya hua grantie, u are happy"

Radhika:Guess Granee

"Are u going to meet ur friend, finally completing ur that stupid wish"

Radhika: Haan, his exams are over, I can meet him, talk to him, and also beat him if I wish

" Hope some one save him"

Radhika smiled and rushed out... before that Sumitra call her back and ask her " Radhika, kya tumhe ye lagta ki, vo rumours sahi hain"

Radhika:If they are true, Bharka would have told me by now, they aren't true. I believe my friend

" Do u think, after all this is it gud for u to talk to him in college"

Radhika: He wasn't my friend after I joined this college, he was my friend, even before I think of joining this college. So I don't care

"Radhika! Take care "

Radhika nodded and left out, when she saw Mrinalini in the other house "Hi Mrinu aunty"

Mrinalini: Hey Radhs, Whats up, aaj kuch jyaada hi kush lag rahi ho

Radhika:Sh Secret aunt... any way mohini maa'm kaha hain

Mohini; I am here Radhs, any way I hate u

Radhika making a baby face "Why"

Mohini: Mom will be serious on me, when I call her Mrinu, but she won't tell u a word, even if u call her that way, why?

Mrinu was about to answer some thing when Radhika bent forward and said "Do u want the answer"

Mohini:Haan

Radhika: Isse kehte hain face value... saying that she laughed out loud, when Mohini made her baby face

Mrinalini to joined in laughing with Radhika... and Radhika came near Mohini and said " Di, I am just joking. "

Mohini:Lyt, chal re, lets go to college

Radhika smiled and they left to college...

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Mrinalini was in call with Vishaka ...

Vishaka;Kya di, aapko lagta hain ki , vo humaara Radhu hi hain

Mrinalini: Thats why I said u to come here once, yes she was our Radhika for sure... but she was more out spoken

Vishaka:But how can u say she carries the same values like her


Mrinalini:The behaviour may be different, but the underlying mind set remains same...

Vishaka:Thats a great thing, Now only I will tell to Dad, and baavuji

Mrinalini:Nope, not now. because we can't go to her straight and say, u are our sister in last janam, we want u back there. Think, she will not even be ready to believe


Vishaka:Par, vo kisi na kisi din yaha aana chahiye na

Mrinalini: haan Vishaka, lekin, hum vusse force nahi kar sakte hain, aur vunhe all of a sudden ye sab bata bhi nahi sakte hain

Vishaka:Par didi

Mrinalini: Destiny made our Radhika and Dev come on earth again, the very destiny will bring them to us again.

Vishaka:Then why are u there

Mrinalini:To watch my sister, Staying with her, I can't express u Vishaka, its like reliving my age 20 years back, vo bachpana, vo haseena, its really incredible.

Vishaka:U are happy, I forgot, when I saw u this happy last time

Mrinalini: Jaanti ho, I really wish that I can go to her and hug her saying I am ur sister, I just wanna share every single thing with her, the small quarrels I have with Vivek, and aaj bhi mujhe yaad hain, kaise vo humesha tere baare mein mera ghussa kam karne ka prayaas karti thi, aur kaise vo humesha, tera support karti rehti thi... those are just incredibledays

Vishaka:But mohini might be getting lot of anger, as u are allowing Radh to call u Mrinu

Mrinalini:Haan, but when she calls me Mrinu na... I just remember all those days, and the times when she comes running to me shouting "mrinu... di..". I can never forget it

Vishaka:Aur Dev, vo kaise hhain

Mrinalini:Vo humari Dev se bahut alag hain... But he was unpredictable to me. I need to get more on him,. par abhi vunka exams hal raha hain

Vishaka: Radhika and Dev

Mrinalini:They doesn't even talk to each other properly, and also u know there are some rumours in campus

Vushaka: I remember, some Bh.. Bharka right

Mrialini:Haan, but Radhika always says its Rubbish, Bharka was Radhika's friend

Vishaka:I wish to see Dev once.

Mrinalini:Check on ur self, that Arjun won;t be offended by this

Vushaka:Thats just a crush dear.

Mrinalini: I still remember ur hatred looks for Radhika that day

Vishaka:Di, thats nothing. some crushes will be like that only

Mrinalini: Hey Vivek's getting ready for office, I am leaving

Vishaka:I too have some work in Mutt, see u

Mrinalini:See u

Vishaka : acha dadimaa was asking for u

Mrinalini:kyun

Vishaka: Arey yaar, u returned from US to India permanently last month leaving aunty-uncle and mom-dad there only... And Dadima wish to see u, she was missing u

Mrinalini:What does Physio therapist said .

Vishaka:there were some sings of betterment with her legs.. but we gotta listen the same since 24 years

Mrinalini:Haan, acha... kya tum dad se poocha ki Ammaji kaisi hain

Vishaka: As usual normal. no signs of improvement... even the doctors there were vexed

Mrinalini: I hope they will be fine very soon

Vishaka: Di, its 24 years, from 24 years we are trying every best effort to make them both fine, every janmashtami we bring them here, but no use.

Mrinalini: They will ... very soon

vishaka:Idea!!! Kyun na hum, Radhika ko vun logon ko dikhaiye, I am sure, they will be back from normal

Mrinalini:Its not in our hands yaar any way, Vivek's getting late, call u later see u

Vishaka:See u di

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Radhika: Hello...

Dev:I doesn't wanna talk with u

Radhika:Kyun kya hua?

Dev: When u doesn't wanna talk to me, then u didn't tell me a word

Radhika: Sorry... but at that time in tension I wished like that. And u know I can't play with god

Dev:If ever next time, u did some stupid thing like this, I will just kill u

Radhika:Kyun...

Dev: Because, u are my friend

Radhika:Lolzzz so sweet

Dev: Sweet mat bolo, I am not sweet

Radhika:Thats what u are sweet

Dev:Then eat

Radhika:I am a vegetarian, I am not like u\

Dev: U are speaking with ur senior, and for ur kind info, I am a pure veggie

Radhika:haan maan liya, toh then u won't talk of killing others

Dev: I will and I can, when it comes to u

Radhika:Ye kab se

Dev:Don't know

Radhika:Acha now, I am having class, let me go

Dev:See u

Radhika"Bye

Dev :See U

Radhika:Why did u always ask me to tell u see u

Dev: don't know why but tell "See u"
"
Dev was remembering some words " Jo apni friends hain vus se bye nahi kehna hain, see you kehna hain" and subconsciously uttered those words.

Radhika: I heard these words already some where

Dev: Go u have class...

Radhika:haan

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Bharka:Kaisa laga Radhu, talking to ur friend after a long time

Radhika:Its just great u know, talking to my best friend after ages

Bharka:Its just 2 months yaar
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Radhika: I can't stay with out talking to my friends, even for 2 days, then 2 months was ages for me

Bharka:Kya keh raha hain wo

Radhika:Bas yahi ki, vo kitna Non vegetarian hain

Bharka:Non vegetarian

Radika:Haan u won't understand leave it...

Bharka:Batao na

Radhika:Lyt le lo na

Bharka:U friends, I can never understand u both

Radhika:Thats what friendship is, a relation where a third person can never come in;

Bharka: Hmm... what if a third person come in

Radhika:It never happens, if it happens, then that relation is no more a relation

Bharka: But u get him in our relation na

Radhika:Means

Bharka:U say every thing to him na

Radhika:Vo mere sab se acha dost hain vo mujhe apni maa ki yaad dilata hain, and I never hide any thing to my mom, same applies here too

bharka: Every small thing

Radhika: Not much, but I say some things, and leave some things


Bharka:Hmmm

Radhika:Hmmm

Bharka:Hmmm

Radhika:Hmmm

Bharka:Hmmm

Radhika:Hmmm

Bharka:Hmmm ... I failed rey

Radhika: Don't try to defeat me in some things, u can't


Bharka;One day I will for sure

Radhika: Any way... U know what, kal mera maa bahar jaayegi, can u accompany to home, I will be alone

Bharka:Nope, I need to read

Radhika: Okay,,, lyt

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Rohan: Hey bro...

Dev:Kaise chala aaj

Rohan:Just casual

Dev: Okay

Rohan:Bhai, aaj aap thoda kush lag rahe ho, kya baat hain

Dev: Why I will be happy?

Rohan: U know what bhai, u face always differs from ur words, batao kya baatt hain

Dev: Nothing Rohan truly

Rohan: Miss.Bharadwaj, aap se baat kiya

Dev:Kya...

Rohan: Actually u came on that purpose only na, other wise.. ur exams are complete and u came to college

Dev:No rey, tis final year na,, so literally I am going to be a dr. after this, so came to college to visit all the places once, because from next I will be completely in hospital, when will I come to college don't know

Rohan: But then, why did u spend much time in dissection lab,. talking to Miss. Bharadwaj

Dev: I went there, and then got to meet her

Rohan:So she finally spoke to u, hence u are happy

Dev:She spoke to me, but I amn't happy

Rohan:Bhai, atleast be truth ful to me

Dev: Arey sach mein...

Rohan:Bhai...

Dev: Hmm.. I am happy because, my friend spoke to me back. after three months and also I got to take my anger on her

Rohan: Why are u angry on her?

Dev:She stopped speaking to me

Rohan: its her wish

Dev: But she doesn't have any right to stop speaking to me like that

Rohan:Hold on... wo aapki biwi nahi hain, jis par aap itna junoon kar rahe ho. Wo sirf aapki dost hain, kahi... wo pyaar toh nahi bana na

Dev:Shut up Rohan, she's my best friend and I already told u I love some one else

RohanL Some one else

Dev;haan

RohanL So whose this 5th girl

Dev:Batane ki jaroorat nahi, its also a failure

Rohan:Then I won't even ask, by the way if u don't love Radhika, then does I have any chance

Dev: Tum aur chance... lolzzz wo teri naam sunte hi bhaagti hain, vus se tanga mat lo

Rohan: I amn't any demon, pata hain, main vusko aaj tak rag bhi nahi kiya tha


Dev: I don't know why, but she fears for u a lot...

Rohan :Hmm...

Dev:Any way chill, wo baki ladki ki tarah time pass karne wali nahi hain, vo kisi ko pyaar kiya toh, poori man se karti hain, wo tera type ka nahi hain yaar

Rohan:Mera type matlab

Dev:If u make her love, and then leave her, lyk u always do, after completing ur time pass, still she will wait for for the whole life. and never play with such girl Rohan

Rohan:Lagta hain, kuch jyaada hi jaante ho vuske baarein mein

Dev:Dost hain mera, itna toh jaan na hi padega

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Radhika was saying about her day and was happily laughing and Sumitra was noticing all this, all the way she was having only one thought in her mind , "She believes Bharka a lot, what if her belief comes wrong"

Sumitra:Acha kal, who is coming to stay with u

Radhika:Koi nahi aa raha hain maa...

Sumithra:Aise kaise, toh tum bhi mere saath aao

Radhika: Maa, u know I hate functions

Sumithra:Then give me ur phone

Radhika:Maa

Sumithra:Give

As Radhika handed her phone to her, Sumithra dialed a number and asked them is they can accompany Radhika tomorrow, as she will be alone in house since Sumi was leaving for a relatives marriage, and she hopefully got a positive response

Radhika:maa, kisko call kiya

Sumithra:Dev ko

Radhika:Sir ko>?? Are u mad? why u need to call him?

Sumithra:Dost ho tera, itna to nahi kar sakte

Radhika:can I ask u a thing?

Sumithra: Haan

Radhika:Don't u fear to leave me with a guy and go

Sumithra:Its because I believe u.. Any way, now I am getting sleep...

Radhhika nodded and continued to watch at her as she left to her room

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Next day morning...

Mrinalini came out to bid bye to Vivek, when she heard some voices from Radhika's house, and looked over when she found Radhika playing by throwing water on some one, Mrinalini got curious to know who is it and looked over to find it to be Dev... He was very much laughing and playing with Radhika. Mrinalini was shocked to see it and went to the other house, just then Dev got hold of Radhika and was trying to get the water pipe from her... Seeing Mrinalini Dev left Radhika and Radhika smiled "Aunty"


Mrinalini:Dev ! aap yaha

Dev:Aunty, Radhika ki daadi maa, baahar jaa rahi toh, vo mujhe Radhika ke saath rehne ko kaha

Mrinalini:Lekin, tum Radhika ko kaise jaante ho

Radhika;Aunty, wo mere dost hain.. best friend

Mrinalini: What??

Radhika seeing Mrinalini reacting strangely asked "Kya hua"

Dev: Madam, u gave aunty a shock

Radhika:What did I do

Dev: Arey duffer, in all these two months aunty never saw me speaking to u, how she think that I will be ur friend

Radhika;Oh!! Aunty is that ur doubt?

Mrinalini nodded and Radhika smiled and said " Aunty, actually,maine mannat maangi , is ke exams hone tak is se baat nahi karungi, is liye aise hua"

Mrinalini:but why

Dev: I will tell u, at that time I am suffering detention because of low attendance,and that made her do this stupid wish

Radhika:What shall I do, he was very tensed that day

Dev: Hmm that's why only na, u listened to my voice overs every day

Radhika:Who told u

Dev: Kisi aur ko kehne ki jaroorat hain, can't I understand u

Radhika looked at Dev for a minute and there were many thoughts going on in her brain " Kyun Dev, u are attracting me a lot. I don't know u will love me or not, But why does I see love in ur eyes"

Dev:Kaha kho gayi ho

Radhika:Nothing

Dev: I will stay life long with u, u can see my face as much time as u want

Radhika was just shocked for what he said and doesn't understand what he meant by this, but she felt nice hearing it. At the other side, mrinalini was shocked to the core, at first she was surprised to know Dev and Radhika are best friends and now she got the biggest shock when she heard that words from Dev, she doesn't know why but questioned to her self "If Dev loves Radhika"

Radhika: Aunty, aaoge andar

Mrinalini:Nahi yaar, I have some work to do, I need to go to site, there's some meeting

Dev:U are truly great aunty, u are managing household work despite of being a CEO

Mrinalini looking at Radhika said "My sister thought me"

Dev:Can I ask u a thing

Mrinalini:Haan

Dev: Mohini always says me that u love ur sister a lot, and always speak of her, just wanna know about her

Mrinalini: I will tell u, after returning from office, but yes, she's my darling, I will lost my self, If I start saying about her

Radhika:No worry, we have a full day to listen

Mrinalini thought to herself " Hey Kanha, ye kya problem hain, iske baarein mein, isko hi bataana pad raha tha"

Radhika:Aunty see u

Mrinalini:See u

As she left Radhika and Dev came in and sat in the comfy... and Dev asked " Hey, kya hua tere dost ko"

Radhika: As usual, she was in hostel studying

Dev:I now that, but why she was sounding a bit stressed now a days

Radhika: actually wo thodi problem mein hain

Dev:Problem??

Radhika:Leave it

Dev:Tell me

Radhika : vo... people are thinking that there's some thing between u and her.

Dev: I thought of it, toh vo kya keh rahi hain

Radhika: what she will sya, deny it.

Dev: Hmm... i feared for this, these people na, every year when ever i come to the first years block, link me with one or other

Radhika:Hmm.. chodiye sir, aisa hota rehta hain, when there's no truth in it, why should we fear

Dev:Thats also right, any way, if ever such thing happen, my bro would know of it

Radhika: Please, u know I fear for ur bro, leave it

dev:Why do u fear for him

Radhika:Don't know, will u stop this topic

Dev:Hmmm k

Radhika:So what would u like to have

Dev:water

Radhika:Okay

Dev:Do u know how to cook

Radhika laughed and said "No, I doesn't know. Mr.DevPurohith I have very less qualities of a girl in me"

Dev:I know it

Radhika smiled and looked at Dev as if to read his thoughts, but as usual she hit a blank face, when the storm of thoughts was running in her mind Radhika left in

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Ps: I ask sorry from u guys, for making it a bit too long and a bit broign wiht convos
but to proceed with my story I need u guys to know of their minds, for which I need convos than monologues. and haan I am already telling u, nect two updates are going to be a bit sad and worse. hope u guys don't throw chappals on me. and yes I am fasting it a bit because, I need to complete it in 50 parts and I have so muhc to write, in 16 updates. Please hope u understand

Edited by harianjana - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
Wonderful update. Loved Dev ,Radhika & Mrinalini conversation. And,have a doubt about Barkha. I guess she'll come in between Dev & Radhika.Hope Dev doesn't break Radhika's heart.Waiting for more.
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: fatssrilanka

Wonderful update. Loved Dev ,Radhika & Mrinalini conversation. And,have a doubt about Barkha. I guess she'll come in between Dev & Radhika.Hope Dev doesn't break Radhika's heart.Waiting for more.

Thanks for the comment Fathema
and yes for me Radev-mrinalini combo is a super combo.
I love their trio a lot
and ur doubt abt Bharka, may be she will...
and Dev may also...
its a bit omplicated story,
adn I hope u will like it, every thign will be clear in next update 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago

Originally posted by: harianjana

Thanks for the comment Fathema

and yes for me Radev-mrinalini combo is a super combo.
I love their trio a lot
and ur doubt abt Bharka, may be she will...
and Dev may also...
its a bit omplicated story,
adn I hope u will like it, every thign will be clear in next update 😊


Now you have made me impatient.But,I hope in the end Dev realises his true feelings for Radhika.

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