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Posted: 11 years ago

MILAN- The Final Destination
PART- 120

I had thought that the target won't be met until 1-2 more days but thnx to all the spammers specially Shoba n Shru di... I had to update today... I typed today only n the part wasn't ready before at ol. Anyways, you guys completed the target so I love u veryyy much. Muaaahhh..❤️ Shoba, shru di n every spammer.. an xtra hug for u🤗. And after this for your-n more than that-my benefit no target for coming updates...😛


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Faster Maan. She commanded n this seemed to be the only time she blabbered whatever came to her mind. Why are you laughing? Nothing Jaan. He told giving another mighty thrust in which she flood back n after two more similar thrust he came n she followed, squeezing him. But he still wasn't done neither was she, drained yet too much overwhelmed with passion both went for another round n finally exhausted gave up to sleep bundled together.




Next morning when she woke up it was to the sweet ache in her body that spoke of his love, their passion n togetherness. With a smile as bright as the fresh morning sun she noticed that she was in his-their-room n her hands were bandaged. She looked at the empty side of the bed but before fear could stain her glowing happiness she spotted a folded paper tucked under the pillow.
Had to leave for an important meeting. Will be back soon.
A noticeable dot was there on the next line as if he wanted to write more but gave up on that idea.
She made a baby face then kissed the letter childishly. As if on their own accord her feet carried her towards her room where she had ran havoc last night. She opened the door only to see it fully clean and made as if last night never happened... there was no blood, all things were at their right place, no bloodied sheets either, probably gone in laundry for cleaning. Geet knew Maan would never let anyone else come into the room so he must have cleaned it himself. Tears of absolute fondness came into her eyes.
Maan in his office was desperate to finish all work as fast as he could so that he could go back home for obvious reasons. He had come because of a very important meeting and also he wanted to take leave for coming 2-3 days n thus was arranging everything for that. There were certain plans in his mind regarding his wife.
Irritated he stared at the phone screen when it rang.
Rohan' firstly you don't come to office n on top of that you are disturbing me.
Maan, I just want to know if Geet is there?
His strained voice alerted Maan. What you mean? Is she not at home?
I don't know. She is not here, so I thought maybe she has gone to KC. She didn't tell anyone where she is going I was just worried because she was so sick yesterday.
Thanks for informing Rohan. I am coming.

Where were you? Maan asked just as she entered the main hall. Stilled n shocked, she looked at his stressed, angry face n lowered her gaze instantly down to the floor. Maan too noticed her tired stance but she left for somewhere without even taking car just pained his heart. What possibly could she have gone to do without taking the car? Probably she wanted to keep her destination a secret? Maan had an idea that again there must be something in her mind troubling her. But what could have prompted her to go out of the mansion all alone when he knew she didn't like going out at all. N if there was something that big why she didn't tell him? Why?
He had thought last night they had come beyond that. No secrets, lies n misunderstanding he wished to be in between them. He wouldn't let that happen.
Geet you should have informed before going somewhere. Rohan piped in when she didn't answer.
I' am sorry. I had told one of the servants that I was going out.
But you didn't tell where you were going. Maan blasted and walked ahead to take her hand in his shackle like grip.
Maan don't be bad to her. Rohan said n Maan glared at him. I know how to behave with my wife.
As Maan dragged Geet upstairs she glanced back with an apologetic face. Rohan was rolling his eyes n waved his hand in dismissal of Geet's concern. He didn't take his cousin's words at heart. They were both used to each other's snide remarks.
Do you have any idea how worried I was? Maan questioned inside the room. I called Rajendra uncle n Neeraj, also Shanaya. Where did you go that too without taking the car? N why didn't you tell me?
Now I can't go anywhere without taking your permission. She countered her voice meek n far off. Maan turned incredulous eyes on her; she cowered back under his intense gaze yet held her grounds. I am not asking you to take my permission but just inform me.
Mai khud apna khayal rakh sakti hu Maan. Choti bacchi nai hu mai. I had some important work.
What important work did you have all of a sudden?
Mana mai apki tarah koi company nai chalati par mujhe bhi zaroori kaam ho sakte hai. Maan rubbed his temple; she was taking him all wrong. Mera matlab wo nai tha. I too had meeting but I left a note for you. Why didn't you tell me?
I thought you would remain in office until I came back, toh maine nai bataya.
Shit Geet!! It's not about having you home when I come back it's about knowing where you are even in my absence.
Aapko kyu jaanna hai k mai har waqt kaha rehti hu? Am I not my own person anymore?
No you are not. Maan just screamed losing all patience and Geet flinched visibly. You are mine. If I can tell you where I am you have inform me too. I won't live in fear of losing you again. Tumhari har saas ki khabar chahiye mujhe, samjhi tum. He held her shoulder n she gasped meeting his fiery gaze. Now tell me where were you?
Mai aapko batana zaroori nai samjhiti. Gritting his teeth in extreme anger, Maan snatched her purse n emptied all the contents on the bed. Maan aap yeh kya kar rahe hai? She tried to come in his way but he pushed her back. Nothing much of substance was there in her purse apart from a list of meds. He held it in his hand, his eyes skimming over the thin sheet. Yeh kya hai? He asked his voice hard n demanding n Geet knew she was caught.
She squeezed her eyes n tears finally poured out while her chin trembled. I ran out of the meds. Maan couldn't believe his ears. That's why you didn't take meds yesterday. She nodded. Mai wahi lene gait thi. Where are the meds? Paise kam pad gaye n mai ATM le jana bhul gai thi. She cried more at her stupidity. Mai kal phir jaogi.
Why didn't you just tell me?
Mai kya kehti? She asked wiping her tears her voice again increasing in volume. Humari shadi hone pe aapne kaha tha ke maine aapse paiso k lie shadi ki hai.
Is it about that? He too shouted n by now he was shaking with anger while sharp pain stabbed his heart. God! He had thought after finishing work n coming home they would celebrate the news of their coming baby. He didn't get the chance to tell her how happy n excited he was... his own child, their child. He had planned after coming he would love her n thank her for giving him this happiness. Maan felt his vision getting blurred. Tumhe ho kya gaya hai Geet. You were not like this last night?
Isiliye Maan, mai nai chahti ke aap phirse mujhse nafrat kare. Mai dard seh sakti hu par aapki berukhi nai. I don't want you to think wrong about me. Mujhe paisa nai chahiye, mujhe kuch nai chaiye. Mujhe- He couldn't hear anymore. She still didn't trust him was enough to break Maan. He called Nakul n gave him the list of the medicines to bring then got on a call to someone. After that she didn't see him until night when he asked her to sign some papers.
You will hold joint account with me n have your own card. He told her n feeling lost Geet signed them without any further arguments. She wasn't sure anymore, if him hating her was bad or that pained look on his face.

That night she was sitting on the bed her heart just wanting for him to be beside her so that she could somehow rectify what she did. It felt like what she ever accomplished was to make him sad. Everything just went wrong; he wasn't supposed to come home at noon n she shouldn't have shouted at him. And there shouldn't be tears in his eyes. Restlessly she gnawed at the inner side of her lower lip n on hearing his footsteps closed the lamp n pretended to sleep.
Maan knew she was awake yet he slipped into the covers on the far side of bed. He could have taken her into his arms, could have explained, probed her for answers but that would have had little upshot. She herself would have to bridge the gap n he was ready to wait all his life for that time. He wanted their relation to be so strong that not even the mightiest of storms could break it.
As if god was signaling him, he felt her tentative hand on his arm. It moved down to his waist n her form pressed closer to his. Maan couldn't stop his bodily reactions to her proximity. His muscles twitched n he went stiff. Her mounds pressing on his back made his heart race. And to his utter dismay the member between his legs stirred in a clear sign of instant arousal to her heat. Maan cursed under his breath when her hands moved over to his stomach n up on his chest, soft fingers feeling up his bare skin. She shyly kissed the nape of his neck, her petal like lips tenderly compressing against him.
Maan stood up. His tall frame towered over hers. He thanked the darkness otherwise she would have seen the wanton look in his eyes n the persistent erection down south yearning for her. Giving her his back he left the room n Geet waited for a total of 10 seconds to go after her heated husband. Just the heat she was referring to was different from the heat he was feeling.
As expected she found him in the gym. From past experience n with some idea of how they would end up she closed the door. Maan... Her soft voice soothed him n she stared at his bare back, proof of the thunderous agony she had caused him. Some marks were nearly faded, some were more recent. Geet ran to him, wrapped her hands around his waist n kissed every single blemish on his perfect skin. She wished to erase all those marks, take all his pain but unluckily her own scars ran too deep to overcome his.
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Edited by OsheenDGr8 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Me first again 🥳

But wats this... i was waiting for a happy shapy update par yaha tho pura pain..

How long they will have to suffer.. is Geet forgetting tat she is pregnant or is he thinking too much now tat she is healing..

cant get geet wat she thinks and does.. for few minutes she is all happy and next she goes to her shell forgetting everything and does something ta brings the distance between them

They have come so close but yet so far.

Maan's pain and his anger is making him do such things tat it fears Geet..

why cant she for once speak her heart and fears to him.. just giving your love and love making wont solve their problem..

I wish this time Maan gets tough and takes everything in hand to bring her back... break her to such tat she says every past tat is haunting her..

Its time she comes out as she is not alone anymore.. she has a life inside her now...

Ans Osheen dont worry will make you update fast.. after all its milan... and congo for getting triple century.
Edited by sdlife19 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Update jaldi khatam hogayi...😭
coming to the update, ofcourse expected the unexpected from milan...
but i guess this was a much needed one... Just by speaking out like the previous update, the trust doesnt grow or the comfort level never gets back...
The separation of 6 yrs and the wound is so deep.. and geet being a patient of depression, maan needs to do this extra effort to get her out of the shell and out of the things that have gone bad between them...
after knowing his love for her and the previous night confession, her still pondering over the money issue that came into matter during the initial days of marriage was stupid.. but she is stupid right now coz of her depression and sensitivity.. she knows that he loves her, but still she is not able to think straight...
And their fight over her missing was completely crazy.. she left for getting meds and no one is asking her not to go out, but just that in her condition, she going out without informing is ofcourse scary.. and in her restlessness she is just venting out her frustration on him... and maan is also right in getting scared and angry...
yet again, just shouting on her is not going to bring any result.. and his way of trying to deal with her will surely make her situation better..
now that she is taking initiatives and he is trying to ignore, am waiting to know if this will make more good to her..
Lovely update, but mujhe aur bhi lamba part chahiye..
Edited by Shruthe - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
heart touching update
love it
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lovly bt vry emotional updt.. Maan wld hav to put more efforts to bring d trust nd geet to old self.. Felt bad 4maan nd at d same tm cant blame geet.. Owesome writn.. Cont soon
Edited by Desire6 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
its lvely...


so Geet is going to take some serious 😉😉😉steps now...😉
Edited by CuteTommy - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Geet is still in depression & with that now she is burdened with guilt also so she assumes things about Maan...Maan needs to deal with her patiently

Awesome part
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Posted: 11 years ago
oh god
i was just feeling like banging my or both their head
gosh
geet b na
maanu was worried n geet was not ready to tell him where she went for seconds me was also worried where she has gone
bt nikla kya medicine
n she didnt asked maanu cause she think he will again call her gold digger jeeez🤣
there is lot more to b improved in their relation
hpe maanu's ideas work
waiting 4 next
lvd it
Edited by tiakashyap - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Amazing update full of emotions n concern , why not geet think once before doing ..
maan need to buck up for making her normal which is needed
waiting for next update
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
geet still is in her shell nd again hurt him wid her distrust to him
poor maan is trying his best but y wont she come out
hope thr matter solve soon
do cont soon

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