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Posted: 12 years ago
aaj wed hai...
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u know what i read this ff today again
n it felt so new
i am in love with this ff again
i cried at rey's accident n kria loving him so much
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Aj Wednesday hai , will we get an update today? 😳
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adi tune toh mujhe dhoka hi de diya
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Originally posted by: crazysky

adi tune toh mujhe dhoka hi de diya

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bas isse jyada hindi ni aati mujhe

OMG! Itni sare bhari bharkam words!😆 I deserve them! 😡Sowie re! i fell ill! So couldn't complete my update! Updating now! All the gaalis accepted! 🤗
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Thank you all my lovely dovely readers for all your feedback and time to last update and to this story! You are blood which keeps this story alive! Love you for being so patient and amazing! Muhaaazz!🤗

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Update-44

She in mint colored sweet short skirt dispersed her slightly wet hairs! The wet look was perfectly suiting her! She decided to leave her hair like that! Camel colored wedge heels made her look even more beautiful. Rey has left her several text messages about getting ready quick. She gave a look to them and smiled. "Not that easily Mr. Reyansh Singhania" she murmured!

She walked to the lobby where he was waiting for her. He in white shirt which was a see through and white bottoms looked even more charming to her. His slightly opened mouth made Kria chuckle a bit. She got compliment on how she was looking tonight. Though he was a tough nut these days but his stupefying expression was familiar to Kria. Rey asked in his rugged tone," so shall we?"

"Not now Rey! We have got company for tonight." She said in jaunty way. Rey rolled his eyes and asked, "Don't tell me that he is stupid Kevon?" he twitched his neck while saying that. Kria kept looking at him smilingly and answered," yeah! He is my good friend Kevon." Rey was fuming by moment she completed her part. "Since when he has became your good friend? You just met him twice or maybe thrice." He showed a little inadvertence while saying so.

When he took me shopping, when he showed me the place around, when you were out of reach, when you were little busy in being arrogant, then! She answered in one breath!

"Oh! I see! Old record is still playing! I thought we were cool after race." He looked into her eyes.

"We aren't cool Mr. Khadus! It's just I was doing my job!" She ended all of it!

Kevon was walking towards them. "Boy! He is better dressed than me! Oh! Mint colored shirt! She is wearing the same color na! Jeez! Why she needed to wear a deep neck dress tonight! Look at him! He is freak, a monkey! Why can't you see it Kria? Look how he check you out! I wanna punch him in face!" He vented all this in his mind!

"Shall we?" She asked Rey to proceed!

Party venue was high on volume. From parking itself, vibes were coming so clear. Neha and Vicky were already waiting for them. Rey met his buddies Ali and Vicky. Neha hastily grabbed Kria's arm and said, " We are late Kria! Party is already started and I don't wanna miss it."

"wohhoo! What is the harum-scarum girl?" Rey asked! "Kevon is gonna show us'.." Nothing! Kria slashed Neha in between!

She grabbed her arm and headed towards venue in hurry! Kevon tried to get gelled up with boys but except Ali, nobody responded! Kevon proceeded without giving any heed.

"I don't like this man anymore." Vicky said! "Me too" Rey joined! "I don't have a girl friend" Ali added!

Three followed the girls to party.

Music was loud, sand was soft, and cocktail has been served. Rey's eyes tried to keep track of Kria but she disappeared somewhere in mass. Boys moved towards drink corner. Congratulation was the word heard throughout their way to bar. Everyone was congratulating Rey on win!

"I can't see that Kevon" Vicky said while gulping the drink! "Me too" Rey added! "Me three!" Ali butted in!

Both Rey and Vicky looked at him fiercely. "You don't have a girl friend dude" Vicky answered!

Ali couldn't control giggle and said, "Look at you Loonies. Cheer up idiots!"

Rey walked into the mob to find Kria and saw her jumping in grapes. It was a wine press! She was happy. Rey's lips found smile in seconds seeing her enjoying but smile disappeared as soon as he saw Kevon's hand on her waist supporting her and preventing her from tripping.

She was jumping in joy carefree and unknown of every eye which was relishing her enigma. "This Kevon guy is big time player" He murmured!

He walked towards wine press and let off his slippers. Grapes were mushy at first, difficult to balance on! Rey reached his girl and grabbed her tight in his muscular arms. She was astounded at first. He certainly surprised her. She being clutched in his biceps couldn't even move a bit. "Doing something without me?" He asked while gazing into her big eyes. "hmmm! I thought why to bother you?" She answered while trying to escape his gaze.

"Some things you can't do alone. " He said while tweaking her wrist a bit. "Sure I can!" She said while raising her eyebrows!

"Bother me next time when your waist needs hands around it" he whispered in her ear.

She didn't even realize when her hands were containing him equally. Chills trough her spine were making her unable to carry on wits anymore.

"You know what! I guess I should give you some space in a while" she slightly shoved him away with hands. Rey was completely failed in wooing her out. "You are a tough nut" he said while making that failed face. "I am a wild rose" she said while stepping back from his electric field. "Kevon said so" she added! Mischief in her eyes was saying the story. Rey got it that this is gonna be hard to reach out this wild rose.

He backed off and walked out of grape pool. In no time he was disappeared.

"Any luck?" Ali asked when he got back to drink corner. "You are in good mood today. Aren't you?" Rey asked. "I ought to. I don't have a girl friend!" Ali laughed out loud.

"By the way, you have got some attention from the moment you entered this place." Ali told him!

Rey looked at him with a question mark. "Elena! She has got her eyes on you man! Once again!" Ali told him.

Rey flew the thing in carelessness.

"My one shot with her was so over in that year only! So don't add 'once again' as P.S.!" Rey warned Ali!

"Man! She is heading towards you!" Ali told. In no moment, her warm lips marked a tight kiss on his cheek. It's the way she always greets him. Rey passed a friendly smile. He had nothing against her now or before. She claimed to love him always. The big crush of her on Rey was always so manifest. Rey knew it, Elena knew it and even Leo knew it.

"Hey Elena!" Rey greeted her. "Where's the big man?" he added!

"He is busy. But I am here." She said while running her fingers over Rey's temple.

Rey twitched a bit. "I was wondering about Leo's absence from all the scenes. Shall I be worried?" Rey asked with a wink.

"Elena with her stylish laughter answered, "You need not to till the moment I am here, happy and satisfied."

Rey didn't get a thing she said. But this always happens when she talks to him.

"I was wondering if we could revive of some old moments" She added while imbibing chocolate coated strawberry.

Rey played being thinking for few moments and then grabbed her hand and said, "Why old? Let's make some new ones."

Rey took her to wine press and removed her stilettos gently. Sweating and giggling Kria's eyes wandered over the scenario and then jammed there. His hands softly touching Elena's feet and leg. It was indeed unexpected. Rey gently put her hand on her lower back to support Elena in mushy pool. Her sleek body was evident through ultra revealing dress. Kria's eyes were seized on the scene. Rey's hands were touching Elena's bare flesh wherever he put them.

Kria was fuming. If there'd be some thermometer, it might blast off. She wiped her sweat and tried to gain Rey's attention. But he on purpose didn't look at her for a moment.

"Look at her dress. Look at the way Rey is holding her. Look at the way she is so close to him. oh God! Why this girl even exists? Why she is always fluttering around Rey? Why? Why? Why?" She self talked in her mind. Her face was worth capturing.

"What should I do? What? What? What? Oh Jeez! All the ideas must be on day off." Kria thought!

She grabbed Kevon from his shirt tearing his shirt's button apart. She literally dragged him to the site where Rey could see them. Kevon was horrified.

"Lady! I am sexy and I know it but that desperation?!" He asked while looking at his bare chest which was peeping through shirt.

Kria made him mum by putting finger on his lips! "Shhh! Quiet! Just dance to the rhythm!" She told Kevon!

Rey could clearly see them. He didn't pay any heed! They kept rustling in each others' ears and constant giggling! Kria was fuming! She left Kevon alone and got out of wine pool with a dripped face.

"I think I dragged this too much!" she said to Neha who was sitting with Vicky!

"He did come to me but I kept vexing him." Kria deplored.

"awww! Kria! It's okay! Go grab your boy!" Neha consoled.

And a familiar voice butted in. "Old sparks! Seems like things are falling in place!" Sharon kindled.

"Excuse me? " Kria asked!

"Oops! Did I say anything? Chill babe! Nothing a old bedtime fantasy!" She answered.

"I am not interested to hear your blabbering". Kria elucidated.

Kria gulped a shot of mock tail and took a long breath. Kria was walking towards Rey. "Go girl! Get my daddy back!" Neha cheered. "And can you keep your wily mouth shut! Bitch please!" Neha said to Sharon.

Kria gently asked Elena, "Can I get my man back?" Elena's smile flew away as soon as she saw Kria standing there. Rey's face had ultimate content. Elena answered, " sure!"

Kria clutched his shirt making her nails scratch his skin. Rey groaned of pain. "What the hell! Kria!" He uttered.

"I thought someone's hands were willing to support my waist as someone told me the same." She asked.

"Yeah! Yeah! I guess I got the space of mine tonight as someone gave it to me. Actually forced it on me!" Rey taunted.

Kria made peccant face as she knew it was her own seeded.

"Well! Enough of flying in space! Time to get back!" She said in his ear loud as song was playing so loud.

"na na! Birdie is liking this open space. Why should birdie get back to mamma? Mamma has to make it up to him" He threw the tantrum.

"Tell me how?" She asked. Rey held her hand and took her away from the crowd near the big sea waves.

Before Kria could ask anything, Rey started running holding her hand between the waves. They were far away from the noise and people. It was dark and alone. Sounds of sea were only presence.

"What Rey?" She asked! Rey grabbed her in arms and passionately put his lips over hers. She was finally mum away from her questions sinking in ocean of his abundant passion. Knees were jammed to place; spine was unable to bear the body weight. She kept melting in his arms, caressing his back with her long fingers.

Rey brushed every single alley of her soft hairs. He nipped her lower lip mildly making her hold him even tighter.

Skin pores of hers have this unique fragrance which was working as scent of arousal. Tiny sweat drops on her cervix were all gone in no moment with stroke of his lips over it.

A big water wave made them fall in water covered in sand and water. Rey took off his shirt and dripped his face in her neck making her moan in pleasure. His scent, aroma of nature was enough to make her all ready to take him tonight. He kept doing his doing and she kept taking every installment of love he has to give her.

His deep necked dress seemed perfect to him now. "You are mine. Only mine!" He whispered in her ear introducing words for the first time in last few moments. Kria answered while making him lay down, "And you are mine!" Kria's Rey!" And both went into pool of passion and love in between an endless pool of water and sand. Nobody, Nothing and nowhere! The status for the moment!

Sea waves kept making sounds along with their moans!

That's it for now!😳

Please leave your feedback fellas! It's important and always welcome!😃

Love🤗

Aditi

Edited by Nxt_rockstar - 12 years ago
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that was scintillating an delectable update..

Just loved it all...

I mean it was amazing...

I just loved the way you showed the emotions b/w them..

jealousy... anger... love.. and everything..

the way you showed how they were trying to make each other jealous...

that wajjjhh lovely...

I really love the my cutu se KR.. adorable aren't they...

and then elena... -_____- gandi hai oh...

fir finally beach pe.. haaye.. that was beautiful.. th way you showed it and wrote it...

amazing that was...

waiting for next
Edited by -Vaish- - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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Adiii... 🤗

tujhe yaad bhi hai tune last time kab update kiya tha... 😡

y sooo late updating yarrr...

nywaz.. coming to ur Chappy... i just loved it... as always... heheee... 😆

it was like..typical teenagers type chapter who r jealous of seeing der partner with som1 else..and r trying to make them jealous... as in Tit for Tat... 😆


it was sweet...and honestly when sharon said that old Relation wali baat to Kria... i was like.. ahahaaa.. ye mast hai... coz it made Kria fume even more... 😛


and then last mei that beach wala part... eepppsss... 😳

i loved it...

but... beach pe..kisi ne unhe dekha nahi kya..??? 🤣

Lovelyyy Chappy... 😃


Edited by akanksha_arsha - 12 years ago
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Posted: 12 years ago
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unres
Aditi
u know m in love with this story
it is amazing
and update OMg osam
i can imagine Kriya and Rey both looking hot
then in party hahahah my god
bichara Ali usko b gf dila do kab sey bol rha hey meri gf nahi hey
then dedy and muma haha
Neha to much hey samey for kriyaansh
and last scene was amazing
osam update
update soon
Aroma/-

Edited by aroma.arsha - 12 years ago

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