*completed*Arhi FF-'Miley Jab Hum Tum' UPDT epi#29,30&EP - Page 5

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Posted: 12 years ago
#41
amazing update❤️❤️..continue soon..and thanks for the pm😃
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Posted: 12 years ago
#42
very nice update dear...!
loved it!
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Posted: 12 years ago
#43
LoL The Update was so Funny

Amazing Update,I Totally Loved it.

Arshi are starting to develop feeling for each other


Update Soon

I'll be Waiting

Love Ya

Marrie x
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Posted: 12 years ago
#44
Hey !! i am in love with your story .. read it 1 time and will read it is superb !! I hope you see my comment !! !!

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Posted: 12 years ago
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Originally posted by: Arshi_56

Hey !! i am in love with your story .. read it 1 time and will read it is superb !! I hope you see my comment !! !!




OFCOURSE I DID IT darling..twice to be exacted!😳

and yeah i will update soon sometime after eid...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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EPISODE#19


She reached near the bridge not breaking the eye contact with him...

She thought she was hallucinating...but she was shocked taht he was real when he flicked his finger on her nose!

Khushi "What the ..what are you doing here?"

Arnav "Came here to see you!"

Khushi just looked at him wide eyed!

Arnav "Hehe chill ok just kidding and by the way why are you so nervous at our dance?"

Khushi "What who is nervous I am not!"

Arnav took a step closer "Really?"

Khushi "ye..yes!"

Arnav came more closer and kissed her cheek and said "I - "

The ringing of the alarm in her room brought her out of her dreamin her sleep to sit upright on her bed!

What the...a dream!??

She till remebered her dance with him last night and with tose wild thoughts she went to sleep only to see a more wild dream!

Hastily they got ready at it was ..

DAY 4-

When they assembled for the breakfast khushi somehow calmed herslef and was now her usual self even with arnav!

So it was no more akward between them!

They got to know that today and the enxt following 3 days they will be going to spent on a cruise which will also drop us to the spot from where they had boarded to a ship for coming here!

All were excited as they were going to stay on a cruise!

But the teacher warned them as they need to behave themselves as the students from different schools and also there will be a performance or something in the cruise itself!

As soon as they saw the size and the beauty of the cruise the students exclaimed all the ohoos and ahaas in one go!

When the students got to see their rooms their jaw literally dropped seeing the rooms and plus added beauty that was the bathroom which had all the mushy mushy facilities!

Karishma :I promise main apne future honeymoon ke liye rahul ko yahin laungi!

Khushi: ohooo toh baat honeymoon tak pohoch gayi!

As they giggled and got ready to take a tour of the cruise!
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It was evening now as the sun was setting ...

In the huge open terrace above... all the students were talking casually as it was a free time!

Rahul was flirting with karishma...

KAran left no opportunity to talk to geet...

Payal was gazing at the sun missing aakash!

ANd with no option left of company...

she was standing alone..

Arnav and khsuhi were together watching the sun set and admiring about its beauty!

Just then khushi exclaimed "Guys lets play hide and seek!"

All her friends were now with her and blasting her with questions!

Geet : What? here in this cruise? are you crazy khushi where we will hide excpet the reception areas?

Khushi: In some empty room! She giggled!

Payal : No ways the teacher told us to not do any mischief!

Khushi :Ya right as if hum log bohot shareef bache hai! COme one guys aisa mauka phir nahi aayega!

Karan : Ok I agree but not the whole cruise we will decide a specific floor ok?

Khushi : Ok lets take this floor itself! It is the last floor and plus here all the rooms are empty as all are honeymoon suits here!

Everybody agreed but arnav!

All of them looked at him with puppy eyes and had a goofy grins on their face!

Arnav rolled his eyes and said "okk I am in!" and smirked!

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All of them played their chance of searching their hiding friends and now it was geet's turn to seek for the hiders!

As geet was counting upto hundred...

Khushi was getting no place to hide as in all the good place some of her friends were hiding...

She was standingin front of a huge room when she bumped into arnav!

Khushi :What the Arnav singh raizada...tum mera peecha kab chodoge?

Arnav : Khushi tum yahan kya kar rahi ho? Aur kya..maine tumhara peecha kiya! WOh tum ho jo yaha aai ho mere-

they heard that geet was coming near..

Scared to get caught first ..

Arnav was about to continue his rant went khushi put a hand on his mouth and dragged him in the suit which was open and pushed him in a walk in closet..

Khushi :Shhh!! Stop shouting yaar!Chalo we both will hide here okk!aur waise bhi itna bada closet toh hai! aur koi rehta bhi nahi hai iss room mein! so all chill ok!

as they closed the door of the closet and sat there waiting!

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After about 5 minutes..they heard the clicking of the door!

Arnav :Yeh aawaz kaisi?

Khushi : let me check!

But arnav and khushi both went near the closet door and opened the door slightly to peep outside only to pop their eyes out of their sockets!

There it was... a couple so madly in love kissing each other and coming towards the BED!

Arnav and khushi exclaimed "OH NO!"

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TO be continued...

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Posted: 11 years ago
#47
lovely updates
for last scene😆🤣
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Posted: 11 years ago
#48
Lovely update last scene was wow
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update😊😊..loved it❤️
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Posted: 11 years ago
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EPISODE#20
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Arnav and khushi exclaimed "Oh no!"

Khushi :Ab kya karenge arnav!

Arnav :Khushi chill okk ...I think these guys will not come near the closet so they will not able to catch us!

Khushi : But iss couple ko toh dekhke lag raha hai jaise 18 hours tak bahar nahi jayenge!

Arnav :I guess hamein aaj raat yahin sona hoga! Dont worry mauka dekhke hum kal yahan se nikal jayenge!

Just then they heard weird noises from the couple!

Arnav smirked and adviced khushi : khushi close your ears and sleep!

Khushi said sarcatically :hhaha very funny laad governer!

With that they both slept in the closet!

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Next morning arnav got up first!

He saw that the couple was not in the room..Just them he heard some noises of people and the flowing of the shower from the bathroom...

He thought that the couple are having their *ahem* time in the bathroom so thought of sneaking out!

he woke up khushi and said :khushi chal lagta ahi couple bathroom mein hai..good time to sneak out!

Khushi :What the donon ek saath?

Arnav :Ab tujeh kya invitation card pe likhke du bahar nikalne ke liye! chal nahi toh donon bahar aa jayenge!

As they quietly sneaked out of the room on their toes!

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At the reception area..

Geet : where the heel is khushi? kal rata bhi anhi mili mujhe laga jab usse ehsaas ho jayega ki game over ho chuka hai toh aa jeyegi apne aap!

KAran :DOnt worry yaar we will find them!

Rahul :Ya i wonder is arnav with her? as he is also not seen anywhere!

Payal :I guess we should tell miss about it!

Just then khushi came running to them

Khushi "Nahi nahii miss ko nahi bolna yaar I am here now!

Followed by arnav!

They were all shocked as they came suddenly and were acting so chill pill!

Payal :Khushi tu thi kahan! Atleast you could have told us yaar! I am katti with you now!

Khushi and arnav told them all that happened except the kisisng part they just said that there were some people in the room thats why the couldnt sneak out ...

But payal was still sulking!

Khushi :Ohoo ab gudda chod bhi do yaaro!Tum log toh aise bol rahe ho jaise titanic ko dubane mein mera haath tha!lol!

They giggled and soon got into their chatting about various stuffs!

The night came and everyone was retarted to their rooms to sleep!

Khsuhi was very sleepy due to the hide and seek incident and now her sleep got distured with a phone call on the intercom!

Before she could pick it up payal took the phone and answered "Hello?"

After some time she exclaimed :Khu..khushi..bho...bhooot!!

Khuhsi got up and took the phone from her hands "What bhoot?"

She started talking "yes?"

She just heard a stupid laugh as if the person was trying to make it sound like a ghost is laughing on his victory!

Khushi got that hint taht it was indeed a person so she thought o play with it!

Khushi :hasna band kar..aur jaldi bata kaam kya hai..mere paas zyaada time nahi hai!

The pretend ghost : TUm mujhse aise baat nahi kar sakti ladki...tum jaanti nahi ho main koun hu!

Khushi :TOh batane ki takhalluf(takleef) karne ke liye card chapwau kya?

The pretend ghost :CArd chapwane ki koi zaroorat nahi hai...mujhe toh sirf aur sirf tumhara KHOON chahiye!

Khushi :Khoon ..ewekh!! Tera taste toh bilkul hi kharab hai...ek kaam kar neeche bar mein ja ek shot vodka maar aur chup chaap soja!SHUBHRATRI!

Khushi kept the phone and started giggling..payal who was listening to this conversation as it was on loudspeaker started laughing "Woh that was hilarious!Zaroor koi dusre school ka natkhat balak(Naughty child) hoga!lolz!

On the other side a boy with his two friends who were planning to scare the girls of the otehr school failed miserably at the first attempt itself!
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TO BE CONTINUED...

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