*MY INNOCENT SURRENDER* #epilouge pg 126 26/9/2013 - Page 4

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Posted: 11 years ago
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congrats for new thread dear update soon waiting for next chapter
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PART - 18

MAAN seemed worried but he never good in expressing right things on right time. He wants to but words seems short. Moreover Pratham ordered him to came back in office. He showing tantrums but Pratham is his elder brother and his all excuses turn fails. With very heavy hearted he reached to his office. Maan's visit doesnt proves very helpful. His mind only thinking about Geet only. In evening when he return his restless eyes only searching her only. Gauri read his eyes and told him to settle down his anguish.

'she is in ur room and dont worry, now she is fine.',she only told and his feet pacefully moved to their room where she was playing with Parth. Whole room was turn alive with The chimming sound of both's giggles.

'i am worried Gauri',Pratham show his concern. 'he is so careless. Aise kaise chalega?'

'dont worry may be you wont noticed but weather is changing',she smirked and assured to him.

'really?',he asked suspeciously and she nodded with a confidence. 'lets see unth kis karvat baithta hai.',he added in a serious tone.

In his room Geet and Parth were so much busy in their pillow fight that they wont even realize his presence. An unusual smile crept on Maan's sculptured lips. Seeing her happy he too felt light. Both were jumping on bed madly,hitting each other with pillow in their hands. Maan too lost in adoring his innocent wife who laugh whole heartedly after ages. He rejoice her every gesture. At the same time he also noticed that she was came on the edge of the bed. Maan's eyes widened and he alerts soon. As he was fearing off,Geet lost her balance and falls back side.

''GEET'',Parth shout worridly and Geet clenched her eyes tightly in fear of unexpected pain. But less she was aware of tha fact that Maan caught her before she collapsed against floor. She lands safly in his strong arms
Geet scared so much that she wont able to realize the reality and stay her eyes closed with panic. Her soft apetite smoothly fitted with him and he snuggled her more. Maan gaze her pale and paniced face. He loosing himself in her.

'how stupid i am. I have a moon besides me and i am blindly running behind the mere shadows.',Maan thought while adoring her natural beauty. Nothing lasts for long not his gazing as Parth's loud shout both his trance and bring back Geet to her sences. She opened her eyes and found herself in his arms. She glared him and start wriggling.

'chahu leave my girl friend right now.'Parth yelled on Maan and ordered him to leave Geet right now. He is glaring Maan with his innocent eyes,resting his small hands on his tiny waist.

Maan's blood boiled soon hearing his claim over her. He gritted his teeth and snap back.'abe piddi kaan khol k sunn le,khabrdar jo aaj k baad meri biwi ko apni girlfriend bulaya to. Chachi bola kar samjha.'

Both glaring each other furiously. While Geet is still struggling for freedom and when Maan wont leave her she slapped on his arms conti.'Maan put me down right now.',she ordered him bossily. Reluctantly Maan made her stand on her feet and Geet leave the room with Parth. Before leaving room finaly Parth slanted his neck and showing his tongue to Maan,in order to tease him. Maan fumed only and Geet left with him.

Later on when all moved to their room Maan thought of monifying her in alone. Soon his all plans seems shattred when Geet entered with Parth. Maan doesnt like his presence between them.

'Parth its too late now go and sleep in your room',he trying to run him away but ignoring his suggestion Parth jumped on his bed and his eyes widened with anger.

'chachu from now i am going to sleep there only. Hai na gf?',he told confidently,having a wide smile on his lips.

'no not at all. You are definately not going to sleep here understood. Now leave before i throw you out.'Maan shouts on him and he glared him back.

Seeing their querral,Geet intrupts. She poked him on his shoulder and glared him with her almond eyes.'dont shout on him. I gave him permission. From now he is sleeping with us ok?',she said with dominance.

'why?',Maan raised objection.

'meri marzi.',Geet confirmed shortly and straight went to Parth. She made him laid on mid of the bed to avoid the moments again both shared in the morning. Geet too laid beside him and both clenched their eyes. Maan leave with his frustration. He came and laid next to Parth. But he feel hell irritated. He dont give up and again tried to talk to her but she was now not in a mood of talking to him. Maan fumed but she avoid him completely. Maan turn his back to her and she sighed. Maan cribbing and thinking what to do now. He was restless and turned again towards Geet. She is busy in patting Parth's forehead. He was sleeping holding Geet's waist. Maan felt jelous but take the chance and snaked his arm over her waist deliberatly. Geet get angry and slapped his hand. She gave a jerk his hand to remove over her.
Maan is not less. He too determined that he wont let her win and rested his hand again and again on her. In last she give up as she was tired. Soon all three slept peacfuly in each other's embrace. Geet hold Parth and both Maan and Parth holding Geet.

PRECAP:-
MAANEET AND PARTH IN MALL šŸ˜‰
Edited by richa_kapoor - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#33
Kya yaar maan ek chote se bache se jealous ho rha tha
hadd hai aur chilla rha hai uss par
itna possesive ho gya geet ko lekar ki ek bache se jealous ho gya

aur geet apne aur maan ke intimacy se bachne ke liye parth ko apne room mai le aai bt maan bhi kamm nhi hai

wating for nxt
Edited by shalinimg - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#34
UFF YEH MAAN AUR USKA PEA SIZE BRAIN

EK CHOTE BACHE SE JEALOUS HO GAYA šŸ˜† ND

KHUD NE JO KIYA GEET KE SAATH WO TO NAHE DIKHTA

PRATHAM IS TENSED FOR BOTH BT GAURI CONSOLE HIM

MAAN IS SO STUBBORN

PARTH IS CUTE

PRECAP IS INTERESTING
UD SOON DR

Edited by MISHAGOYAL - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Maan is jelouse from parth loved it waiting 4 next
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Posted: 11 years ago
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lovely update loving parth very much he is so cute and maan feeling jealous because of this cute bachhašŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜†
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Posted: 11 years ago
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wow awesome update waiting for next how maan will manofy her n maker her realise his true love
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Posted: 11 years ago
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omggg kya din aa gaye maan is jealous of his nephewšŸ˜†šŸ˜†šŸ˜†

feeling so sorry for maan
poor him and geet is not even giving him chance to talkšŸ˜•šŸ˜•
precap is nice
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Posted: 11 years ago
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maan ka sutan parth . . Hehehe
Geet and parth playing
Maan getting Jealous
Geet is too ziddi .
But maan is not less
Awesome update
Waiting for next
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Posted: 11 years ago
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awesome update šŸ‘maan jealous of a kid šŸ˜† and geet is such a teasešŸ˜‰šŸ˜†...i just loved itšŸ˜›waiting for more šŸ˜›

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