FF-Pyar Ka Asar-2 ||EPILOGUE on pg no-68||COMPLETED!! - Page 7

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Posted: 12 years ago
#61

Originally posted by: jerrenkarthi

Sorry for late reply now only i read it and it was nice.

its ok and thank u so much 😊
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Posted: 12 years ago
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arre karongi meri ma...have some patients šŸ˜†
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Chapter-36

Maan Villa

Prem and Heer was sitting together along with their respective families.Blaraj and Lalit were sitting together. Gayatri and Teji were sitting together. Meher and Preet were sitting with Kulraj and Kiran. And little Aryan was roaming here and there with his ball.

Lalit looked at Panditji who was busy in studing Prem and Heer's kundali. Lalit looked at Balraj and then again looked back to Panditji and asked him.

Lalit:- Kya hua Panditji, itni der kyun lag rahi hai..shadi ke liye acha mahurat nikal ne mein.

Panditji:- Lalit bhaisab…ek samasya (problem) hai…

Balraj:- Kaisi samasya Panditji???

Panditji:- Prem ki kundali mein 7th ghar par shani (saturn) baitha hua hai…jo ki neech ka hai…

Prem and Heer confusingly looked at each other and then looked at Panditji

Gayatri:- to iska kya matlab hua Panditji???

Panditji:- iska matlab mein ap sabko samjha ta hun…Kundali mein 7th ghar vaivahik jeevan (married life) ka hota hai or Prem ki kundali mein 7th ghar mein shani (saturn) baitha hua hai..or wo abhi neech ka hai…iska matlab yeh hai ki agle paanch saal tak agar Prem ki shadi hoti hai to uski jaan ko khatra ho sakta hai hai…

Everybody got shocked

Prem's reaction:- kya paanch saal!!!!

Heer's reaction was:- kya Prem ki Jaan ko khatra!!!!!!

Heer looked at Prem with tears and all scared.

Prem:- Heer just calm down…main in sab faltu cheezon mein believe nahi karta..yeh sab bakwas ki baatien hai..Kuch nahi hoga muje…

Panditji:- Beta …yeh sab mein nahi tumhari kundali keh rahi hai…

Prem gave an irritated look to Panditji and then looked at his parents and Heer's parents who were busy in their own thoughts. Then he looked at his siblings for some help but they also nervously looked back to him and at last he looked at Heer who was now sobbing…

Prem:- Ma-bauji…ap log kya soch rahe ho….Don't tell me ki ap sab bhi yeh faltu bakwas pe believe kar rahe ho.

Teji:- Prem, beta yeh koi faltu bakwaas nahi hai…yeh teri zindagi ka sawal hai..

Prem stood up

Prem:- Ma meri zindagi Heer hai….or waise bhi aj ki date mein kon in sab kundali pe vishwas karte hai..

Teji helplessly looked at Balraj. Prem turned towards sobbing Heer. He make her stand by pulling her arm.

Prem:- Heer!!! Heer tum ro kyun rahi ho…maine kaha na…kuch nahi hoga muje

Lalit:- Prem pehle tum shant ho jao beta..itna gussa thik nahi hoga..

Gayatri:- Han tere bauji bilkul thik keh rahe hai…pehle tu shant ho ja….hum koi na koi raasta zarur dhond lenge…

Lalit (to Pandit):- Panditji…apne jo kuch bhi bataya uska koi upaye to hoga na..

Panditji:- Lalit bhaisab…jahan tak mera gyan kehta hai…siwaye intazaar ke iska koi or upaye nahi hai…shani (saturn) ek bohot takatvar (strong) greh (star) hai…to mere khayal se apko paanch saal tak rukna pardega..

Prem (angrily):- Arre bhard mein jaye apka gyan….apko hume gyan dene ki zarurat koi zarurat nahi hai..

Lalit (stern voice):- Premm…yeh kya tarika hai bardo se baat karne ka..

Prem (irritatedly):- I am sorry bauji…lekin yeh sab bakwaas hai..

Heer:- Nahi Prem…tum bhale hi in sab baaton ko na mano lekin…mein aisa kuch nahi karoungi…jisse tumhari jaan ko khartra ho..

Prem:- Heer mein keh raha huna tumse…kuch nahi hoga muje

Heer:- tumhare kehne se sach to nahi badal jayega na…

Prem:- arre kaisa sach!!! Main nahi manta in sab baaton ko…

Heer:- agar tum nahi mante to wo tumhari marzi lekin main manti hun…agar pandit ke mutabik…hume paanch saal tak wait karna chahiye…to hum paanch saal tak wait karenge…

Prem (shocked):- kya!!! Are you out of your mind heer…panch saal!!!

Heer (stubbornly):- han Prem…paanch saal…ab yahi mera faisla hai..

Prem (angrily):- thik hai…jiske mann mein jo aaye wo karo…I don't give a dam to it..

After saying this Prem angrily strom out of Maan Villa..Kulraj tried to stop him

Kulraj:- Prem meri baat to sun…ruk ja

But Prem already left from there

Lalit:- Kulraj rehne de…jaane de usse..abhi wo gusse mein hai…abhi use kuch pata nahi hai ki kya sahi hai or kya galat…thordi der akele rahe ga to..to uska gussa apne ap shant ho jayega..

Heer started sobbing again and left from there..Meher was about to go behind Heer but Teji stop her..

Pandaitji:- Maaf karna lalit bhaisab…lekin..maine jo kuch bhi kaha apke bachon ki bhalai ke liye hi kaha..

Lalit:- Arre nahi Panditji…hum jante hai…ap maafi mang ke hum sharminda mat kijiye..balki main maafi mangta hun apse..ki mere bete ne apse batameezi se baat ki…darsal wo bohot pyar karta hai Heer se isiliye…to paanch saal intazaar ki baat sunke thorda gussa ho gaya wo..

Panditji:- Koi baat nahi lalit bhaisab..acha ab main chalta hun..

Panditji left from there..

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In Juneja office

Prem angrily entered his cabin…he slam his phone on the table…and sat on his chair.

Prem (angrily to himself):- Us pandit ke bache ki to main jaan le lunga…usne meri shadi ek nahi do nahi balki poore paanch saal ke liye delay kardi…or Heer bhi man gai paanch saal wait karne ke liye…I don't believe this…

Just then somebody knocks at the door

Prem:- come in

Mr.sharma (the manager) entered

Mr.Sharma:-Sir Mr.Rishab Rampal ke manager ka call aya they…actually jo deal Rampal's ne Juneja's ko offer ki hai…us deal ke bare mein wo apse meeting karna chahate hai..and that too with rest of our board members…taki yeh deal final ho sake isi meeting mein…to sir apke hisab se kal ke liye meeting fix kardun.

Prem (angrily):- Mr.Sharma..aj kal koi bhi kaam ya koi bhi decision mujhse poochke thordina liye jate hai..(he's indirectly refering to Heer's decision about their marriage) jo ap yeh bhi mujhse pooch rahe ho ki kab meeting fix karen…ap jaake bauji or kiran jiju se poochun…wo batayenge…ki kab meeting karni hai or kab nahi…main kya chahata hun..isse kisi ko koi farak nahi pardta…

Mr.Sharma:- lekin sir yeh project to ap hi ke under..

But Prem cut him

Prem:- Mr.Sharma is waqt mera mood bohot kharab hai…or agar ap yahan thordi der bhi or yahan rahe na to or bhi zyada kharab ho jayega…so its better ki ap yahan se jaye…or koi bhi phone calls ya kisi ko bhi andar na ane dijiye…got it

Mr.Sharma:- ok sir!!

Mr.Sharma left from their. Prem leaned back to his chair comfortably and closed his eyes and try to control his anger.

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Panditji was crossing the main road…after that he saw a black BMW was standing on the side of the road..he went near that car…and knock on the black window of the car..

The person who was sitting in the car rolled down the black window, revealing his face..And that person was none another than RISHAB RAMPAL….

Pandit ji:- apne jaisa kaha maine waisa hi kaha un logo ko..Prem or Heer ki shadi agle Paanch saal tak tal di hai maine

Rishab (smirked):- Good…ab is shub kaam karne ke badle…yeh raha tumhara parsad..

He handed him the briefcase of money to Pandit ji..

Rishab:- or ek baat or agar is bare mein kisi ko bhi kuch pata chala to tum jante ho ki Rishab Rampal tumhara kya haal karega…

Panditji:- ap bilkul fikar mat kijiye…is baare mein kisi ko kuch pata nahi chalega…

Rishab:- good, ab dafa ho jao yahan se or dobara kabhi apni shakal mat dikhana…samjhe

Panditji nodded his head and left from there.

Rishab looked at Heer's pic in his phone..

Rishab (to Heer's pic):- Yeh sirf shuruwat hai Heer…ab age age dekho..tumhe pane ke liye mein kis had tak jata hun…

Rishad gave an evil smile…

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In Maan Villa

Heer's room

Heer was sitting on her bed sobbing..Teji entered her room. She sat near her and caresses her head. Heer looked at his mother with tears and hugged her tightly and started crying like a small baby..

Teji tried to consol her

Teji:- Heer…na meri bachi…aise nahi rote…chup ho ja

Heer looked at her mother

Heer (with tears in her eyes):- Ma..maine jo faisla liya…wo sahi tha na.

Teji:- Han beta tune bilkul sahi faisla liya…or muje tujhse pe garv hai..ki apni khushi se pehle tune Prem ke baare mein socha..or is baat ki bhi tasli ho gai…ki jis tarha se tu ek achi beti, behen or ek achi dost hai..usi tarha se shadi ke baad tu k=ek achi bahu, bhabi, ek ach patni or achi ma bhi zarur banegi…

Heer again hugged her mother and started crying..

Teji:- ab tu rona band kar…lalit bhaisab or gayatri parjaiji or tere papa ne kisi dosre panditji ko tum dono ki kundali dekhne ke baare mein baat kar rahe the…tu chinta mat kar…bhagwan pe bharosa rak…is tarha apna dil chota na kar..

Heer:- Nahi ma…muje is baat ka dukh nahi hai ki meri or Prem ki shadi paanch saal ke tal gai hai..muje is baat se zyada dukh hai ki..mere faisle se Prem bohot hurt hua hai…or mujhse bohot naraz bhi…

Teji:- le..bas itni si baat…muje poora yakeen hai…prem ko bas phone karne ki deri hai…phir to tu usse yun mana legi..

Heer:- baat to usse tab karoungi na ki jab wo mera phone uthayega…kab se uska phone try kar rahi hun..lekin wo phone hi nahi utha raha..or na msg ka reply de raha hai..

Teji:- Hmm to tu ek kaam kyun nahi karti, agar wo tera phone nahi utha raha to tu chali ja na uske paas…or jaake mana apne roothe hue prem ko…or yeh baat tu bhi janti hai or wo bhi ki wo chahake bhi tujhse zyada der tak naraz nahi reh sakta…

Heer:- Han, ma ap thik keh rahe ho…main abhi jati hun prem ke paas or usse manati hun..

Teji:- that's like my good daughter…

Teji kissed her forehead…and left her room…Heer smiled thinking about she's going to pacify her Prem…

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[ok here is the next chapter..hope you'll like it..please don't forget to LIKE and COMMENT. Thank you]😃

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Posted: 11 years ago
#65
U U U..?? Mujhe Choti Ekta Bolti thi... Khud kya HO? Ekta ko tution dene wali TEACHER??

That RISHAB and U ne milke Hayeee bichre prem Ko... .. I WILL JUST

5 SAALll... Have u losted?????? Ek do saal karti toh kya jata 😔 😔


And NOW KHABAR DAAR JO UPDATE KARNE MEIN ek mahina lagaya toh. . m dying to see how will heer manao Prem...
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: luv.Harshiti

U U U..?? Mujhe Choti Ekta Bolti thi... Khud kya HO? Ekta ko tution dene wali TEACHER??

That RISHAB and U ne milke Hayeee bichre prem Ko... .. I WILL JUST

5 SAALll... Have u losted?????? Ek do saal karti toh kya jata 😔 😔


And NOW KHABAR DAAR JO UPDATE KARNE MEIN ek mahina lagaya toh. . m dying to see how will heer manao Prem...

han to ab pata chala na ki jab tum apne ff mein prem or heer pe musibat lati to hume kaisa lagta hai 😈
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: kiran_28

han to ab pata chala na ki jab tum apne ff mein prem or heer pe musibat lati to hume kaisa lagta hai 😈


Please I hvnt brought any musibat on them like u doing 😔 and upar se u update so late...jaldi likhna suru karo next update please
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Originally posted by: luv.Harshiti

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Please I hvnt brought any musibat on them like u doing 😔 and upar se u update so late...jaldi likhna suru karo next update please

dont wry say i said earlier mae premeer ko kabhi alag nhi hone dungi...don't read wen teji was talking to heer ki lalit, gayatri nd balraj doosre pandit kundali dekhane k baare mein baat kar rahe thešŸ˜‰
Edited by kiran_28 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
#69
Waiting for next update but enough of idiot RR between PH
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Posted: 11 years ago
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OMG that rishab he played such a game... hope his truth will come out soon

awesome update

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