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Posted: 12 years ago
awesome update
is it vicky????
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Inteha ho Gayi Intezaar Ki...

Aayi na kuch khabar mere Yaar Ki...

When are u updating?

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Posted: 12 years ago
omg !! super duper awesome update ...someone is trying to kill maan
i guess vicky is back to take revenge aur geet ko paane k liye ...
i hope geet is danger ko samjh jaaye aur maan ko bachca le

maan ko geet ka truth bhi pata lag jayega ese ...plz plz next part jaldi do ..


extreamly sorry late comment kaiya mere fav ff par ..but i was out of town isliye pata nahi laga k update kiya he ...loved it sachchi
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Posted: 12 years ago

PART- 32

The man who stood behind him once again he checked him with his left foot…once he confirmed maan is really unconscious….he smiled widely….slowly he started to laugh …then he started burst laugh holding his stomach…even in the rain….he started to laugh like a syco….suddenly he stopped…. His eyes were red charcoals…..they are spitting fire on maan….who is laying life less….

"this is your end MAAN SINGH KHURANA….." again he kicked maan abs from his left foot….maan rolled in mud and hit on rock..its again hurt him…blood oozed from his forehead….he taken fresh blood in his forefinger…and tasted once…its tasted heavenly …."you are tasting so good…."he just pouted like a cute kid….he sat in knees near the body…."hello, the great maan singh khurana….how are you finally your life is ending in my hands what can you do… already faith written geet name in my life she is mine….let what ever happen….but she is mine…."his eyes rolled now…again the cuteness vanished and its turn to cruel…he is almost looking like a animal….people are really scare to come near him…don't know at what time he taken bath…he is smelling like a hell…..he is not wearing cloths….he is wearing some animals skin which is smelling badly….leave about human bee even any animal can not be with him….

He is hold his hais tightly and started to drag near the thorn bushes…..maan is not in conscious….but when he is dragging on rocky floor its hurt him …the hurt brought him little senses….maan open his eyes painfully…yes some two leg janvar is taking him some cave…not even bothering about maan….when full moon light fell on that creature face…maan breath stuck in his lungs…"is it dream…"but no its not a dream…the pain proved its not a dream…how its possible…."Vicky…."he gasped…not believing his own eyes….he is already dead..but how come now…how its possible…..maan voice drained in his throat…next what will happen…...again he lost his conscious.

Geet ran to temple….."kyu maa…kyu…maa…bar bar muje ise tarah pariksha deti hu…kya galath kiya maine….kyu mere such ko maan ki samne lane keliye koshish kathi hu…tag gayi mey maa…mujse nahi hoga…pls…maa sirf eki prarthna pls maan ko ye sach nahi bathana…"she sat on stone out side of the temple engulfing her knees…its heavy rain…don't know how long she cried….her tears mingled in rain water…morning sweet memories were vanishing slowly…..she hold her throat with her palm…nerves her swelling…don't know some un known pain killing her from inside. What is happening…there is unknown feeling in her mind…when she try to stand her mangal suthra just slipped from her neck…immediately geet hold it tightly not letting it to reach ground.

What is happening…her eyes widen…now what's coming next…mangalsuthra slipping from neck its not a good sign…is everything is ok or destiny wrote something more….she turn to devima…what is less in my faith…what next in my life…god…her heart thumped as it is coming out. She couldn't hold her fear she hold her heart in left hand as if she can control her feelings manually….she came out….her mind is not even peace …she is sure something will happen…but what not sure where is maan…may be he reach home….she ran to home….

Ranu shocked looking at geet…."what happened geet why you are coming in this heavy rain…can't you stand any where till rain stop…and where is maan…."

Geet stood at entrance….it means maan still didn't return home…where is he…is everything is ok….or he is angry on me that I refused ware payal….again I hurt him…why maan you are back of me after happening so much. I know I am hurting you lot…I couldn't hurt you more . pls devima madath karo….she murmured her self .she try to return…pammi stopped her…."where you are going geet…maan may be come after rain off….in this heavy rain pls don't go any where…in this time river cavery will be flowing forcefully…its not safe to go there and search…"

"no bhabi, don't stop me…I should search him…"geet told in shivering…already her body becoming cold…she can faint any time…looking her condition pummy dragged her room…"geet mere bath suno…nothing will happen…first you change your cloth…I think in another few minutes rain will be stop…may be he can return…."

Geet sat on bed…even she is not having strength in her body….just she sat there it self….pummi went back to bring coffee….geet changed her dress and she wore dried cloths…when she is rubbing her long hairs by towel pummy back with coffee. Hot liquid given some strength to her body…same time her phone started to ring…its maan…how much she tried….now he him self calling…thank god…pummy is right…nothing is happen to maan….

Immediately she is taken the phone " maan where are you….you know how much I worried…."

Other side there is no response it self. Some one is breathing hardly….its not a natural…."maan…what happened…"she is getting panic not hearing maan voice…..still no response…..geet sensed something wrong …"maan or you ok….maan speak to me…where are you…why you are not speaking to me." Still no response….still someone listening her voice patently…now geet had a doubt is it really maan…she is becoming panic…again her heart beat raising… she stood numb….

"geet what happen…who is on line…"pummy touched her shoulder…but geet didn't replay….

"geet….."the tone itself she recognized …. Which is her nightmare…just hearing his voice even today her blood become cold…the same person who is the reason for many deaths….

"how are you jaan….muje bhulgayi tum….nahi na…..mey hu…tumari…vicky…." He confirmed him self….but he is already dead. Geet started to shiver from the core….any one can easily recognize her shivering. Her eyes widened….how its possible, he is already dead that day…how….my self I confirmed when he slipped from hill…

"geet kuch tho bolo…..kya huva….dar gayi no baby….no…"the same tune which is irritating her…..

Pummi now just watching her panic state…she is sure something wrong…..

"kya mujse bath nahi karogi jaan….i am waiting for you from so many years…last year bcoz of maan you slipped from my hand…now again the same maan bring you here jaan…"

Hearing maan name she came sense….what happened to maan…

"kya kiya tume ne mere maan ko…agar mere maan ko kuch huva mey tume zinda nahi choudungi…" don't know from where she got so much anger she screamed at a time…..

"don't be exited baby….this is not the right time to scream….its my time….tumari maan kuthe ki tarah mere samne kade hai….tum mere samne uskeliye beek mangana padega…."still he laughing like a syco….

"Vicky…" geet screamed in horror……she is loosing her normal sense…..the fear engulfed her that he may kill maan…that thought making her mad…

"no Vicky maan ko kuch nahikarogi…. "even pummy stunned hearing Vicky name from her mouth….

"then come to me….i am waiting for you…until I claim you I can not die peace fully…..at least just once you become mine…I will not force you again ….please…"he is almost begging her….her whole body burning in anger….

Geet calm downed her self ..its a very high time to decide that before taking decision think twice.

"teeke mey arahi hu…kaha ho tum…"

"vaha tum maan ko chodker ayi na waha ana baki rastha tume kudh se patha chalega….and don't dare to call police are inform to anybody…then don't ask me about maan dead body….."he laughed cruelly…

Geet closed her eyes with frustration…it's a really disgusting..the problems seems never end…this Vicky how again he is alive…that day itself he dead….but now again…shayad he is right until he make me his he will not die…let see….is the solution to keep maan alive I am ready to do anything…he need my body that's it…but for maan..i am ready to give my self to him…I have already submitted my heart and sole to my maan…now this useless body …she left a deep breath….if this body is useful to keep maan alive that's ok…a last tear dripped from her eyes….

She taken the torch and went out …same time pummy watching everything like a numb…hearing Vicky name…she stood like paralyzed….

Geet reached the area which she left maan , her eyes searched for maan….but no ware found….river cavery is flowing forcefully….she can hear only insects strange sound and watersound…..once again she turn to river side and prayed…."ma aaj tum mere shakthi banegi…till today I came to here to share my feelings with you….but today bless your child save maan from that cruel animal …"she on the torch and started to search maan…her eyes widened looking blood stains on rocky surface. Bcoz of rain blood is already washed…but some stains are remained under the tree…geet slowly walked…she found peace of cloth which is longing to thorn, geet taken in her hand…she confirmed its maan's shirt torn piece… she moved step by step…moving further it's a totally rocky surface….geet walked slowly….the way full giving glimpse of maan sometime blood and some torn pieces of cloths…its given clear idea that how Vicky dragged maan in this rocky and thron area. Her throat chocked thinkng about maan…why maan why you want to be with me….i told you to go away from my life…now see the result….your life is in danger , don't know in what range he damaged you….

In that darkness some how geet reach the cave…..where maan lying down without any cloths expect his under garment…his body socked fully with blood…he is not moving at all...his hands and legs were tied with ropes where he couldn't shake his body…"maan …"a small whimper slipped from her mouth….she went and hug him tightly…"maan kya hua…aap theek hai..ye sab kya hain…."she is taken his head on her lap…..

Her heart is aching looking at maan state…..where is that monster. She try to locate Vicky…but he is no where found. She kissed his forehead…"maan anke kolo na …"she kissed on his face madly…she try to take blood stains from her sari pallu….after trying so much maan open his eyes….he is very tired…his whole body is paining….vicky dragged him like a animal in middle of the forest…he didn't even bother about maan condition. While dragging him many of sharp stones and thrones were just ripped his skin without any mercy…his body aching like a hell…he couldn't move even for a second….geet try to remove the rope…same time some one dragged her away from maan…maan head again fell on rocky surface…again its hurt him…geet screamed loudly….

Geet kept her palm on her mouth and screamed loudly….don't know how he is living in this forest….he is turn to a complete cave man staying inside the forest hiding him self from society. His hairs grown till his shoulder and without combing its become a knout…don't know when he taken bath or when he brush his teeth…his teeth become chocolate brown , its giving him horror look….his nails were grown long and he sharpen it like a knife…using his nail she can kill them with bare hands…..he covered his main part by some animal skin …..his eye were red like burning charcoal…don't know how he is living in this forest….without anybody support…don't know what he will eat…

Geet eyes fell one side of corner she is about scream some how controlled her self…it's a some animal flesh which he already ate and left in half…her nostrils were not adjusted for that horrible smell…and she felt like her intestines are rolling in her stomach, suddenly she throw everything.

"what happened geet…you are hesitating to touch me…you are hesitating to stay here just one minute….you are hesitating to look at me…but think about me geet…just think how can I am living from past some years….tell me geet…what's wrong I have done. I love you from childhood…tum mere zindagi bangayi bachpan se….mere jaan se jada tume pyar kiya tha….lekhin tum…"he tightened his fist…"yes I have done mistake using other girls to fulfill my physical desires…in my view its not a big mistake geet….i am human bee even I had my own desires…But I loved you more then my life…that's the reason I am here still waiting for you…I know I am looking agley…that it is also bcoz of you …pls geet sirf ek baar mere pass aajav….sirf ek baar….Kya karu geet…mere pass koi rastha nahi hain geet….tume pane keliye "

"just shut your dirty mouth…vicky…patha nahikis janam ka paap you are behind of me…I didn't love you any day…I agreed to marry you only bcoz of our elders fixed our marriage. But after words knowing about your deeds dadaji stop the marriage…in this what is my fault…now past is past…now maan is my husband leave him"

"muje kyamilegi geet…."his cruel eyes scanned her body from top to bottom…bearing her body with his hungry eyes. geet closed her self by sari pallu…she don't want to be a prey for his hungry eyes….but he is busted laugh…. ……"nothing is there to hide from me geet…." His cruel smile made her to shiver from the core…. suddenly he turned to dead silent….within a second he pulled her sari pallu.

"maan…." Geet screamed loudly which made maan gain some conscious…..

PRECAP….WHO SAVES WHOM……

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hi friends,

how are you all, I am fine…here is next part to you all…let me know your response with long comments….ill tell you why I brought Vicky character again In next update. Till then pls be bear with me.

Pls pls pls give long comment and pls press like button.

Thanks,

Your varsha.

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Posted: 12 years ago
vicky back😲
he turned into a complete animal😡
poor maaneet
hope maan gets his conscious soon and saves geet
me really scared
eagerly waiting for the next part...
update soon
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Posted: 12 years ago
oh god ab ye vicky kaha se aya hai dear
poor maan
w8 fr next part dear
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Posted: 12 years ago
he turned into a complete animal😡
poor maaneet
hope maan gets his conscious soon and saves geet
plzzz this time dnt wait us muchhh
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Posted: 12 years ago
poor maneet in vicky's trap hope maan saves geet soon



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Posted: 12 years ago
Waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 12 years ago
OMG I M SO SCARED
POOR MAANEET😭
HOPE MAAN GET CONCIOUS AND BEAT THAT CHEAP,PHYSCO BLACK N BLUE😡
PLS THIS TIME DO UPDATE SOON

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