SwaRon FF : Kahi Ankahi [JDM S2] Chap 11 : 111 - 25/10/2013 [Updated] - Page 26

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Oye, thandh rakh! 😆
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It's really nice.
The title is superb..



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yesterday was tuesday.. today is wednesday.. Im still waitg for an update...😛😳




bai sharmooo.. bai sabraoo... karrahi hoon.. kuch busy thi main kal! 😛
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Thank you everyone who liked my update! 🤗

I know i was late in updating but when i was updating right now i saw that the demand of likes have not ye reached to 60 then i thought that no i won't update, but then i thought let it be but from next time make sure that before you all request for update on Tuesday the demand of 60 likes for each update is already completed or else no updates! 😈

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Edited by -Marium- - 12 years ago
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Chapter # 5





Sharon was popping her eyes off in front of Swayam's laptop from past 2 hours trying to figure out the best dish she can prepare without burning or without getting the house on fire or without killing her sweet little nugget and Swayam by making them eat that. She scratched her head and messed her already messed up hairs. She was very pissed on Deepy because she convinced her for making super and more over it was Swayam who was top most kill list of Sharon's because he provoke Deepy more to convince her and afterward he was the one who dared to teased the already angry Sharon.

Swayam wanted to take a nap after lunch so he slept and Deepy was looking at Sharon's laptop with full concentration trying to figure out what her sister was doing so that her hairs were getting messier and messier with each passing minute. Suddenly Sharon felt a little wait on her lap and she saw Swayam's head on it. She gasped looking that he rested his head over her lap in his sleep. He nuzzled his head on her lap to make himself a little room and smiled contently what he found. Soon again, his snored could be heard lightly. Sharon always hated such men, who snores but she found his snores sort of cute and innocent so she never got disturbed due to those or changed her room where as Deepy snores quiet loudly which was also very cute for a child but sometimes she used to sleep talk and that was funny.

Sharon didn't shooed Swayam or tried to wake him up a bit so that he would change his sleeping position instead he looked at Deepy who was pouting at her and made a fake yawn. Sharon pinched her cheek lightly and made little space for her too, soon enough both Swayam and Deepy were laying on her lap. Swayam was on right side because he slept on right of the bed and Deepy took the left over space of her lap and folded knees. Sharon rested her back from bed spot and kept looking at them till her eyes also dozed off because of the soft and almost no light in the room. Sharon had played a soft Paul Mariat's music when she was using laptop so it also helped her taking nap with both of them.

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Deepy yawned catching flies in her mouth and jumped out of the bed and from Sharon's lap when she heard few sounded knocks on the door. She looked at Sharon and jumped a little to turn the knob of the door. After that she saw Sarah standing outside the door holding tea trolley in her hand and smiling and Deepy. "Baby, where is ma'am and sir?" Sarah asked quiet politely to Deepy on which she frowned finding it rather very fake and snobbish. Before answering she saw few chocolates, cookies and milkshake in tea trolley in smiled widely, "Sarah, they are inside but they are sleeping, wait I wake Sharon didi and jiju." Saying so she ran into the room and shut the door at Sarah pissed face. She sat on the bed in front of Sharon and shook her quiet strongly; after all it was her chocolates, cookies and milkshake which were at stake. Sharon woke up quietly scaring with the fact that someone is killing or something rather she saw her little sister shaking her like no earth quake can.

Soon after Sharon's hilariously funny woke up session, Swayam woke up too rubbing his face with his palms to wash over any sleep left. Sharon saw a very exciting glint in Deepy's eyes, "Don't tell me you again did something horrifying?" Sharon asked her suspecting, "No, I did not." She replied while resting her fisted hands on her hips, "then why do you suddenly look like a small kid on his birthday when he knows everything belong to his and other kid will get jealous and he is happy about them being jealous?" Sharon asked raising her eye brows, "Sharon," Swayam interrupted, "What, I am just asking?" She tried to justify her behavior, "No, if this is called asking, then don't ask. Look, she isn't any bad kid or something, besides she is obedient, sweet and lovely kid, right Deepy?" He ended while picking a gloomy faced Deepy and settling her in his lap. "Yeah, may be. If you think so," She said looking at her knees sadly while Swayam glared lightly at Sharon who looked sorry. "Sorry, please?" Sharon said raising Deepy's face and kissing her cheek tightly which made her smile widely.

"Oh, Sarah now you can come in, didi and jiju are awake!" Deepy suddenly yelled after slapping her forehead lightly. After few second Sarah walked inside the room while trailing the trolley with her. "Good, evening ma'am and sir," She said looking at them, "Evening," both of them replied. "Wait, Sarah what is this chocolate and cookies?" Sharon asked looking at Deepy who had closed her eyes and was looking at Sharon with one slight opened eye and Swayam chuckled at her cuteness. "This is for me, didi. I want to eat, please didi?" Deepy said so cutely that Sharon just couldn't deny and nodded Sarah to leave. "Whoa, your didi already has warmed up towards you Deepy; I wonder what magic you do on her, girl. Let's race?" He asked showing off his tongue to Deepy.

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Sharron and Swayam were in kitchen while Deepy was doing her school work in her room. They both argued up tenth time over what is better chicken biryani or chicken chow mien. Sharon being under confident about her cooking skills wanted to go for continental as she thought that it is easy then swallowing her hand directly for the first time in traditional Indian food which could turn up as a big time disaster in Shekhawat mansion's history. After a lot of tug of war, Swayam finally announced that he wants to eat Indian and especially biryani and if Sharon will make anything except it then he won't touch the food whereas Sharon denied his words and started cooking chow mien. Swayam growled in his throat and without thinking for another second turned her around and Sharon bumped into his hard chest.

"Deepy will be on my side, I can make sure of it and I want to eat biryani!" Swayam said while cutely challenging Sharon. Sharon looked at him and realized the al-most no space between them as she was absolutely pinned into his chest with her entire body. "Swayam?" Sharon said looking deep into his eyes to make him leave her but due to her husky tone Swayam could only stare back into her deep and innocent eyes. He never felt like starring in someone's eyes before but he didn't feel the need to think about anyone else as Sharon's eyes captive him, like they are pretty little ocean within it. In which he could only find himself drowning second by second, like he couldn't see anything near him except the blue and glittering deep ocean in her eyes which was calling him. Sharon drowning in the same pool of passion took a step towards him, coming closer if it could be possible, closed her eyes for second and looked at the floor.

Before they could do anything which they would regret afterwards, Sharon smelled a burning smell and came out of her dreamy trance. By that even Swayam jerked back slightly and rubbed his face with his palms while Sharon looked at the oil which was burning due to be kept on stove for long time. Sharon immediately grabbed a cotton cloth and fanned it over the utensil and turned off the stove, sighing back she looked at Swayam who smiled at her and they both burst into laughter not realizing what could have happened if this great full oil hadn't burn at the right moment.

Swayam towards Sharon as if he is concentrating on something, "Was there something in your eyes?: He asked looking deep in his eyes trying to find what exactly caught his attention into her eyes, "Err, no, is it?" Sharon replied while rubbing her eyes as if something is inside, "No, don't do that nothing is there," Swayam stopped her, "But you just asked" She said making a confuse face. "Yeah, I just felt like" He said, "Oh!" and then there was a complete silence for few minutes in the kitchen, they both looked at each other and smiled lightly to lessen the awkwardness but it increased. Swayam finally cough, "Well, I am still sticking to biryani so now your sweet little sister will decide that what are we going to eat in dinner,: He said walking out of the kitchen taking direction to Deepy's room, "And you know how much she adores me!" Sharon was drinking water and suddenly listening this statement, she spit it out hilariously and next second she was running for Deepy's room.

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"No, Deepy look here," "No, listen to me, I will get you more ice-creams, "No, ice-creams for her!" "LOOK! I told you that I am better than her, I will get you ice-creams now listen to me!" "NO, Deepy remember I let you eat chocolates and cookies in the morning?" "What difference does it make, I was the one who asked Sarah to get you those every day," Swayam said and immediately bit his tongue and covered his mouth with his palm while Sharon's mouth was wide open and Deepy smirk making a sign like someone is cutting her throat! God, such a sweet devil she is. "What the hell, Swayam! I told you to not get her so much sweet and such junkies but still you made Sarah bring her all these garbage and that too every day? I never expected this!" Sharon said totally scolding Swayam like a true wife would her child's daddy would have been on a mission to spoil rotten her princess. "I thought that she will like it," He said stammering a bit and suddenly he realized what is he stammering, God he is scared of a woman.

"Sit down there, now." He pointed towards Deepy's bed and her voice was so shout that it scared hell out of Swayam, poor soul! "Huh?" He asked looking at the bed, "I said sit down next to Deepy now," He said glaring at him. "Oh, Ok," He said and immediately Deepy pulled his hand making him fall down on the bed. "Now, listen both of that if I ever see you both doing anything like this again, if you, Swayam, get her garbage more than necessary then I will make sure that you won't get food to eat and Deepy if I will ever see you supporting your jiju unnecessary then again he will starve." She ordered both of the scared puppies sitting on the bed, "OK, but I want to eat biryani and chow mien both." Deepy said while shutting her eyes, "Argh, OK!" Sharon walked out of the room and both Swayam and Deepy hi-fived.

*

"Perfect," Swayam said after tasting the biryani Sharon was trying to make and on other hand he was helping her a bit on both dishes, or rather giving out his expert advices and opinions. "You really think so?" she asked smelling the aroma of the food. "Definitely, it isn't the best of all worlds but it is indeed eatable and it tastes good, what do we want more?" He asked smiling at her. "Huh, I hope so freak!" She immediately turns off the stove of chow mien and sighed resting her palm on her heart. Swayam muffled his laughter and turned his back on her so she won't see him, "Do you even realize how difficult this cooking thingy is for me? Stop laughing or whatever you are doing!" Sharon yelled at him and stormed out of the kitchen glaring at him. Swayam could help but burst into laughter after she went away.


NOTE BELOW


Edited by -Marium- - 11 years ago
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NOTE


Add --mystery.me-- to get PM's of this FF!


Firstly, most important this FF will be updated every Tuesday!
But updates can be delayed for some issues if comes.

All you wanted to see some Swayam-Sharon scene and that too some light and sweet once so here i presented what i manageable could taking the plot as well in mind, do you all like it? I couldn't give more of open and romantic scene as of yet, so hopefully you guys weren't bored. 😳

And i already have told that i won't update until i get 60 likes on every update. I am not demanding for any pages spamming or this or that but 60 likes are must. 😳
And please comment as it encourages me to write more and more and faster! 😉


-Marium


Edited by -Marium- - 12 years ago
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*Un-Reserved*

I was about to comment on chapter 4 when i saw you updated chapter 5 too! 😛
So yes comments for both the updates marium my friend!
And i know you are angry because i always comment so late, i dun noe what has gone wrong with my timing
Anyways here is my view on both the chapters.

Swayam's mom was such a ruthless, freak or whatever posssible!
No limits, jeez man.
But but, thanks for giving that letter as after that i can suspect things closely in this FF 😉
So i can clearly perceive this story getting more and more appealing as the letter unfolded many upcoming twists and turns.
Deepy part was super cute, even i want an ice cream 😛
Then swayam and sharon small talk over the letter was precise and i liked it that way.
Glad how they are open with all the things and circumstances.

Then the dinner chaos!
Deepy is soo cutee mahn, i want to pull her cheeks!
Poor sharon too stressed, she really doesn't know how to cook! 😆
And the cutest part came, swayam sleeping on sharon's lap!
Then the family nap time disturbed by that sarah, i already suspected her in the last to last update 😎
And deepy thinks that she is fake and snobbish, lol kiddo's expression would be
🤣 Pissed sarah! 😆
Swayam and deepy are growing closer to each other in every update of yours. They share such a precious and selfless bond. Adorable indeed.
Swayam and sharon fight in the kitchen. 😳
The scene turned so cute and awkward. I loved it.
I found the glimpse of my passionate writer in that para ☺️
The aftermath of that scene was more than adorable! Lol.
Then sharon scolding swayam and deepy, true wife traits! 👍🏼
Deepy is so smart, she indirectly made sharon to make both the dishes! 😆


Banner--It is super hawt. Brilliant job aaisha. 😊
Note--You perfectly showed SwaRon bits here, i am super contented!

Waiting to read!


Edited by surbhimathur - 12 years ago
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Reserved for few people i miss most on my stories. Hopefully, they will comment.


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amazing update marium
really superb...
loved it so much..

you nailed it
it was simply PERFECT!!!

loved deepika's antics.. 😳
they were cute
and strict sharon was amazing 👏👏
and frightened swayam 😆😆😆

superb
really amazing chapter...
thanks for the PM
update soon and do PM me
Edited by -spongy- - 12 years ago
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i am so glad you updated
coming to the chapter it
you nailed it babe
was simply amazing
i loved
1) deepy's cute antics
2) strict sharon
3) frightened swayam
4) the bond these three share
you are an inspiration for me,
just love all your works
nidhi


Edited by nidhi1998 - 12 years ago

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